Mayank&Nupur SS-Hum Jo Na Keh Paye[Last Part PG23] - Page 14

Originally posted by: -Mansi-

Oh god..this was a superb part Sajjal! I LOVED it!!

The first kiss..and the Raj chapter! Eww..god such guys really erk me I swear! But the emotions she felt..and her running away...

And Mayank breaking down was so cute! awww =[

So early its ending?! :( Cant wait for final chapter! I know its gonna be AMAZING :):)

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Hey Mansi, I'm very glad you liked it =), I loved writing M's Part the most, we rarely get see guys breakdown...its the girl who split into tears...So i treasure that scene alot.

Yes its ending, But i have another SS in mind, "Small Happiness" on MN....Hopefully will start it soon enough after i finish this. Final Chapter Yepp it will be Amzing,atleast i'll try to make it amzing

Thank You Dear.

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

OH GOD Sajjal.. Do you even think of giving us an unhappy ending.. it was a very nice update and the poem was damn good.

..Warning taken and uhmm...i had warned earlier it will be very sad but lessons will be learned also. I'm glad you liked the update =)

Last Part Coming up Tommorrow

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

Hey Mansi, I'm very glad you liked it =), I loved writing M's Part the most, we rarely get see guys breakdown...its the girl who split into tears...So i treasure that scene alot.

Yes its ending, But i have another SS in mind, "Small Happiness" on MN....Hopefully will start it soon enough after i finish this. Final Chapter Yepp it will be Amzing,atleast i'll try to make it amzing

Thank You Dear.

Originally posted by: Mou.

sajjal! i loved this update..........uff! they missed each other again & again ...hope nothing bad happen to Nupur. last part...i so want a happy ending sajjal..c they got their punishment ...they beard enough pain...now it is time to give them one chance to correct that mistake na! plz.............well though i know at the end u r their writer of their fate here so whatever u will choose i will be okk with it!!!!!!!!
waiting eagerly!!!!

Hey Mou.

Fate is like that if it can conspire to bring two together then it can keep them apart also na? Uhmm...one thing i can promise you is that Nupur won't die. I'm still very confused about the end...there are so many options that i'm alittle confused?..😆

Thank You for liking it =)

Originally posted by: amyluvsmayur

Gosh Sajjal😃😃

What an AMAZING chap😃😃

I loved the poem at the start😃 Such beautiful lines😃

Even i loved the way Mayank broke down and admitted he loves Nupur...and the flashback of the kiss was sooooo sweet😃😃

I just hope Mayank finds her soon and confesses to her......And please don't let Nupur die okay...please😃😃

Otherwise i loved this chapter the most...i am sure i will love the next chapter even more😳😳 Confessions...i just love them😃😃

Hey Amy

Yes the lines in the Poem are so meaningful, the credit goes to the writer. Same here i loved his break down also, my favorite part in this update. I promise Nupur will not die....but will they get together? i'm not sure! Yepp Confessions and Revelations of the Heart😉

Thank You Dear for liking it

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

Sajjal superp update hun

i so hope last part could be happy ending

thanks 4 d pm

Thank You Samira, another bidder for the happy ending. Looks like i have some rewriting to do!