Mayank&Nupur SS-Hum Jo Na Keh Paye[Last Part PG23] - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ruexangel



exactly the same here!
nice writing, i was also like 😲
and i rlly can't see themseparateeither

just like coming together is a part of life...Separation is a part of it also. But lets see what i can do about this particular separation....

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update
luved mayur ......n their stupid n funny fight
cont soooon.....n tnx fr pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sajjal!!
I read ur ff for the 1st time......
I loved the concept...
Plzzz add me to ur pm list ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all, CONGRATS Sajjal😃😃 You got the job😃😃

The chapter...i felt really bad when Mayank's dad was acting like that...I felt like shouting at him "Duhh just look at what you have done to your son, you nincompoop!!"

Anyways the dinner date was cute...and the way Mayank got hold of Nupur's hand and then their cute debate...lols...when Nupur said the 'dad hates you' line, i went like "Oh Freak!! Now what?!!"

Okay so does that mean that they know each other's pasts?? If they do then they should not have any trouble with the 3 words because they love each other so much that I am sure they can overlook their pasts and in fact help the other get over the pain the past has given them....unless it is like, maybe Nupur does not know why exactly Mayank's dad hates him....Okay I am confused Sajjal...please help me sort out my confusion😃😃

Otherwise, i don't even need to say it was an overall brilliant part....i loved the debate and the hand holding and the Nupur trying to manao Mayank parts the most😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

brilliant update

luved mayur ......n their stupid n funny fight
cont soooon.....n tnx fr pm

Thank You Dear =)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: reema_arti

hey sajjal!!
I read ur ff for the 1st time......
I loved the concept...

Plzzz add me to ur pm list ...

Hey Reema

Welcome to the FF and I'm glad you like it

Sure i shall Pm You.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: amyluvsmayur

First of all, CONGRATS Sajjal😃😃 You got the job😃😃

The chapter...i felt really bad when Mayank's dad was acting like that...I felt like shouting at him "Duhh just look at what you have done to your son, you nincompoop!!"

Anyways the dinner date was cute...and the way Mayank got hold of Nupur's hand and then their cute debate...lols...when Nupur said the 'dad hates you' line, i went like "Oh Freak!! Now what?!!"

Okay so does that mean that they know each other's pasts?? If they do then they should not have any trouble with the 3 words because they love each other so much that I am sure they can overlook their pasts and in fact help the other get over the pain the past has given them....unless it is like, maybe Nupur does not know why exactly Mayank's dad hates him....Okay I am confused Sajjal...please help me sort out my confusion😃😃

Otherwise, i don't even need to say it was an overall brilliant part....i loved the debate and the hand holding and the Nupur trying to manao Mayank parts the most😃😃

Hey Amy,

Thank You Dear for the Congrats =)

I agree his Dad is selfish....but just like Mayank he can't let go. This story is alot about letting go of what you have been holding on to. Ego tends to built on because expriences. No actually they don't know about each others Pasts....Though Nupur has had the Pleasure of meeting Mr Sharma and Knows about his behaviour towards Mayank. And is unknown to the reason behind that hatered.... But then again it was wrong of her to blurt it out infront of everyone.

I'm Very Very Glad you liked it. Hoping to see more writings from a wonderful writer as you.

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats Teacher... and that was indeed a very nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey sajjal congrats for ur new job...Want a party...
For the update feeling worst for mayank...What an unlucky child...How could a father hate his own son...
The restaurant part wz nice though nupur wz a bit rude...She shouldnt tell the words dat could hurt mayank a lot...
All in all dat wz a touchy update...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woww Sajjal! u always amaze me 🤗 your last 4 parts were awesome and kept me eager enough to know what happens next..
Part 5 was brilliant, gosh i felt so sorry for Mayank 😔 who loves his dad so much but his dad hates him and accuses him for his wife's death...this part really touched..i could totally feel the pain..
Coming to Nupur & Mayank's complicated relationship, Nupur was so mean when she said that to Mayank, but they both know that they love each other so much that they just cant let go off each other! 😍
Pleasssseee update the next part really soon..cant wait to know what happens next! u write so well Sajjal, im so hooked on to this SS of MN!
CONGO on becoming the elementary school teacher, have loadss of fun with you new job! 🤗
Edited by Yamini.Arjun - 14 years ago

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