Mayank&Nupur SS-Hum Jo Na Keh Paye[Last Part PG23] - Page 11

Originally posted by: -Mehak

OMG mayank....😭😭😭...

what a cruel dad..😡😡...and i loved the lovely restrauant date...beautiful and even my mouth was left open when i read that "atleast my dad doesnt hates me"...

brilliant piece of writing..adn now my perspective is changed...i CANNOT bear these two seperate...😭

Originally posted by: arunabehere

Hey Sajjal

I started and ended today only

and i must say thank god i am in b4 u update many parts

this was also beautiful update

and what is stopping them

mayank is too much sad bcoz his dad's behaviour

so sad

now i m looking for the next update re

TC

Aruna

Hey Aruna,

I'm very happy that you like the story, its brings me many smiles. See its easier to say you love someone when you don't expectations but these two ...their pasts..and presents are compromised with expectations. Those expectations are stopping them...

Yes His father is very selfish but then love makes people selfish na?

Originally posted by: -Mansi-

Wow! Loved the chapter!😃Sajjal!

The fight was so cute! Hehe!😆

But when Nups said about the father thing..I felt an 'ouch'!

Im totally loving this story!! <3<3

And congrats Ms. TEACHER!🤗

-Mansi

Hey Mansi, Thank You for the congrats means alott.

Yes it was hurtful no one likes to show their dirty laundry in public?...I'm very happy you are entertained by the story.

Glad you Like It =)

Originally posted by: -Mehak

OMG mayank....😭😭😭...

what a cruel dad..😡😡...and i loved the lovely restrauant date...beautiful and even my mouth was left open when i read that "atleast my dad doesnt hates me"...

brilliant piece of writing..adn now my perspective is changed...i CANNOT bear these two seperate...😭

Hey Mehak,

Love makes people selfish....but than Mayank is his son and its been years! Its time to let go,,,Now do you see where the ego comes from?😆....Nupur was truly wrong with those words...

Aww man, I had one supporter and now you even changed sides!...I will see how i feel when the story comes near its end.

Thank You Dear

Originally posted by: kirti123

congrats for ur job

loved the part

😊

the fight was cute

beautifully written

thanks for the pm😊

Thank You for the congrats =)

I'm very happy that i'm writing up to your expectations

Originally posted by: ruexangel

it was gr8 to read the update, veryyy good! i love how you have focused on their fragility and significance of i love you here, especially mayanks

congrats on the job!

now eagerly waiting for the next update!!! plz let it be soon😳

Hey Rue,

Thanks for the Congrats =)

Many were questioning his intentions its very hard to say I Love You when you have grown up being hated by the one person who you considered you own. ...

Very happy you like the story, I shall update Tommorrow.

Originally posted by: maloo19

🤗hey sajjal

wonderful update

its such a beautiful ff

n congrats teacher ji🤗👍🏼

Marium

Thank You For the Congrats Marium=)

Thank You for liking the update

Originally posted by: -Daania-

Gosh, I just can't tell you how sad I feel for Mayank =((

The poor guy. And these two really need to come together. I just won't be able to bear them apart. And you've explained it beautifully in the beginning, as to why they're not confessing.

Amazingly well written Sajjal. Love it <3

Hey Daania. Pleasure to see you here Always :)

Yes its painful to see Mayank like that but you have to see this is where he gets his ego from. Uhmm...About coming together not sure!😆..Still debating....I told you in the begining it will hurt to read. You see people think its easy to say I Love You when you know that a person is your special someone...but its alot more than that...you have to see the meaning behind the I LOVE YOU then only you'll understand

Thank You