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wow Muskan! congrats on the new thread! 🤗
i've been reading from Part 11-19 today - i finally got a chance to catch up on all the brilliant parts u'v written!!! 😳 😆
I just have to tell u that Maneet are sooo adorable here! You've done a wonderful job in describing their restlessness, their confusion, their care for eachother and of course the desire + love too. Although they still dont seem to know for sure what exactly it is between them, whatever they know and whatever they do is just absolutely adorable. I just wanna give u a big cuddle for creating sucha sweet bond between them and.... I cant forget to mention my superstar of the entire story - that award goes to... the baby!!! lol apne papa ka chamcha!! lol i love the little dialogues that pass between the baby + geet - thats a lot of fun to read.
Also alllll the moments between Maneet just make me go.. ☺️ 😍
In the previous part for a moment I felt that Geet was actually gonna spill the fact that she's having a baby! I wonder how maan will react to this!! 😕 It's a little scary to think about because at first Geet wasn't ready, but now she's attached to it - even though she says she hasnt changed her mind. Maan hasnt felt that attachment, its probably gonna be a little hard hitting for him.. but til the time u decide for that little secret to come out.. I wanna enjoy all the cuuute cuuute super hot + really lovely scenes between Maneet!!!
I love love lovvvvvvvvvved the way Maan (in this part) was accepting all of Geet's choices for the / her engagement - he'll definitely be adding whatever she selected and liked, in their own wedding for sure! 😉
geet - wow...I have never seen anything so beautiful..meri liya yehi cake order karna
maan - umm!!! aur kuch!!
^^^ I really liked the way u wrote it as if it slipped naturally from both of them.. It's a really awesome moment!
Muski it felt greatttt coming back to the ff and reading all the updates, ur doing a wonnnderful job with it, and i love it a lot! Cant wait for ur next update!!!
Once again, thanx sooo much for ur pm's!
Keep up ur fabulous work!!
Lotttttttts of love,
Saz
xxxxx
i've been reading from Part 11-19 today - i finally got a chance to catch up on all the brilliant parts u'v written!!! 😳 😆
I just have to tell u that Maneet are sooo adorable here! You've done a wonderful job in describing their restlessness, their confusion, their care for eachother and of course the desire + love too. Although they still dont seem to know for sure what exactly it is between them, whatever they know and whatever they do is just absolutely adorable. I just wanna give u a big cuddle for creating sucha sweet bond between them and.... I cant forget to mention my superstar of the entire story - that award goes to... the baby!!! lol apne papa ka chamcha!! lol i love the little dialogues that pass between the baby + geet - thats a lot of fun to read.
Also alllll the moments between Maneet just make me go.. ☺️ 😍
In the previous part for a moment I felt that Geet was actually gonna spill the fact that she's having a baby! I wonder how maan will react to this!! 😕 It's a little scary to think about because at first Geet wasn't ready, but now she's attached to it - even though she says she hasnt changed her mind. Maan hasnt felt that attachment, its probably gonna be a little hard hitting for him.. but til the time u decide for that little secret to come out.. I wanna enjoy all the cuuute cuuute super hot + really lovely scenes between Maneet!!!
I love love lovvvvvvvvvved the way Maan (in this part) was accepting all of Geet's choices for the / her engagement - he'll definitely be adding whatever she selected and liked, in their own wedding for sure! 😉
geet - wow...I have never seen anything so beautiful..meri liya yehi cake order karna
maan - umm!!! aur kuch!!
^^^ I really liked the way u wrote it as if it slipped naturally from both of them.. It's a really awesome moment!
Muski it felt greatttt coming back to the ff and reading all the updates, ur doing a wonnnderful job with it, and i love it a lot! Cant wait for ur next update!!!
Once again, thanx sooo much for ur pm's!
Keep up ur fabulous work!!
Lotttttttts of love,
Saz
xxxxx
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