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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

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Hey everyone....I know you guys want a long update and I ain't giving rite but I'll update longer but for that I'll have to connect myself to the characters completely to give a longer update....and don't worry I'll give a longer update....but all I want at the moment is that you guys should connect to these characters...see thy r chalked out in a diff manner from the way mayur are actually....maybe mayank is same but nupur is not.....and its not easy na to delve into them complete at this fast pace....I wanna take it slow this tym....hope I'm not annoying you readers...if yes I'm so sorry dear........ 😊

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Kanky-
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Man, this is SO beautiful! 😳 You're an awesome writer.

Alright, so Nupur confessed. Eesh, I respect women with such a spirit a lot. I liked what she said and I loved Mayank, all throughout. You've penned down his pain remarkably well. And by far, I find both the characters drawn pretty nicely. =)

Waiting for you to update us with longer chapters, keep writing! Continue soon. 😃

-Kanks

hey dear Kankshita,

Thnx once again...I'm elated yaar...I'm a normal writer who has a long way to cover !!

Yeah nupur confessed....liked the fact you like these kind of women coz many-a-time people don't like them I meant consider them mad and immature....good to see a different view 😊

I have to think before writing you see....and imagine myself in both their places to do justice and make it look real !

Hopefully you'll get long updates....but you'll have to wait ! Keep reading :)

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: .rumki.
Res
edited
seriously i forgot to update 🤣
awesome
wonderful update
well written

hey it's alrite dear....
but thankfully you commented 😉

and thnk u for liking the update !!!

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
wow

fantastic

awesome

amazing

thnx a lot mahima dear !!

Hope you love further parts too :)

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
heyyyy fatima
awesome update yaar

loved it

mindblowing

cant wait 4 more

plz con soon

thanks 4 da pm

thnx a lot....
I'll be updating in a while...so hoping you like tht part too....

ur welcome for the pm :)
btw wats ur name ??

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
Hey! i just went and read ur story....

i must say its beautiful....but TOO short...

i mean r u serious? i wonder why people aren't forcing you to update longer, considering they always do this to my 6 pages long updates!!!!1

And i loved the way u had started....with nature...

and i must say that Nupur's pain was beautifully depicted....i was lost in that....

Oh.....so mayank doesn't loves her.....maybe doesnt realizes this.....

She even confessed....poor her.....

do update soon.

love,
Mahak

hey mahak,

thnx a lot dear...you took out time and read this FF !

thnx for the compliment as well as the criticism 😊
Don't worry I'll give long updates as I said to you earlier !!

I'm touched that I could bring out the emotions so very well....both of mayank and nupur...
and too be true I really have to become them to connect to their emotions...otherwise it's very difficult for me to even pen down a line !!

Do keep reading and giving ur valuable comments :)

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: arunabehere
Fatima Sorry
late hu

but kam se kam tumhare reserved se to kam hu 😉

sab res kar chukeh ai comment kisi ne nahi kiya

see i am so good

I loved both the chapter

mayank is fighting with his own emotions and nupur confessed her feelings

written very nicely

and do write soon

hey it's alrite aruna....

at least tumne comment toh kiya 😉
Awwee....I'm touched k you loved the chaps...

Do keep reading and giving your valuable comments 😊

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Wow.this is dreammyyy stuff....the starting quotes u put are perfect..! Very very well written..!! Luvd it a lot...👏

thnx a lot tanu....dreammyy stuff...hmm 😉
thnx for the quotes....!st chap one was written by me and 2nd chap one was a msg !

thnx for liking my story !! :)

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Amazing update fatima...
The nupur confession wz too heart touching...She loves him blindly but expect nothing from mayank...
Mayank also feeling bad for her as she is his close friend
Really very touchy..continue soon

hey auroni,

thanks for reading the updates as well as liking it too :)
I'm elated that you found it touching and it's a compliment for me that you could connect to them beautifully !!!

-Fatima