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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: tasfia123
sorry for the late reply
but the update was very lovely
really very heart touching
continue soon

love
tasfia

hey tafsia,

It's alrite dear...glad you found it touching...
hope you like the further parts too :)

-Fatima

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: -sam-
I just love your writing!
Its really beautiful!

awee sami,

I'm elated by ur short and sweet comment :)

-Fatima

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
heyyy Fatima🤗

Awesom update...i loved it

Try to write long update....waiting for next part

do continue soon

thnx maria,

yep i'll try writing a longer one soon !

-Fatima

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Jake-neil
Great read fatima.. Keep it up.. Continue son

thnx jake !

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Fatima

i dont want the story to rush

short updates are enough but regular rahogi to no one feel ki they need a lone update

Thanks dear

Aruna

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

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Please read note at the beginning !!!

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Jaee Dev Rathore

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Oh this was just amazing ... simply beautiful ....

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Ruhani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

It is Beautiful,simply beautiful! :)

Your way of writing, the flow, the purity of the scenes... allextremely captivating👏👏👏

this is the first time i read ur piece and am elated!

Just a little thing though..im not much of a writer,so dont mind me saying this...but a friend once said to me writing is all about writing..

I found no flaws in Maynk's part but if u read Nupur's one there are tiny little flaws,which break the flow..

Thank you sooo much..LOVED It!