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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Res
edited
seriously i forgot to update 🤣
awesome
wonderful update
well written

Edited by .rumki. - 14 years ago

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@Jenny..

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

edited on pg 11😛

Edited by jainypatel - 14 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

wow

fantastic

awesome

amazing

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

heyyyy fatima

awesome update yaar

loved it

mindblowing

cant wait 4 more

plz con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

fantastic update

thx for the pm

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

that was a wonderful part dear.................................

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Hey! i just went and read ur story....

i must say its beautiful....but TOO short...

i mean r u serious? i wonder why people aren't forcing you to update longer, considering they always do this to my 6 pages long updates!!!!1

And i loved the way u had started....with nature...

and i must say that Nupur's pain was beautifully depicted....i was lost in that....

Oh.....so mayank doesn't loves her.....maybe doesnt realizes this.....

She even confessed....poor her.....

do update soon.

love,
Mahak