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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Wow.this is dreammyyy stuff....the starting quotes u put are perfect..! Very very well written..!! Luvd it a lot...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Amazing update fatima...
The nupur confession wz too heart touching...She loves him blindly but expect nothing from mayank...
Mayank also feeling bad for her as she is his close friend
Really very touchy..continue soon

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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

very interesting

loved this part

update soon

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@Jenny..

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

sorry for the late reply

it was amazing

it was very heart touching part

loved nupurs confession

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

sorry for the late reply
but the update was very lovely
really very heart touching
continue soon

love
tasfia

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

I just love your writing!

Its really beautiful!

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

heyyy Fatima🤗

Awesom update...i loved it

Try to write long update....waiting for next part

do continue soon

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Rafeal

@Rafeal.

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Great read fatima.. Keep it up.. Continue son

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Reserved !

*Edited*

I dont know how to react to this update !!..

Ok....wel, bit nostalgic..I never thought, something like this wil pop-up in this update of urs ..

But..i loveeeeddd it .

I know, it was more of a Mayank's POV ...But somewhere i was imagining the pain Nupur went throu when she spoke those lines [wel..Remember, Unsaid words]...

Mayank is totally in a dazed condition !....and evn i am confused about his state and storyy.. !

Wel, i know one thing , one cant remain normal as a frnds after a confession..N maybe Mayank is thoroughly affected by that.

Wel...i LOVEEEDDD this update Fatima.. !

A bigggg tight hug for you !

Edited by ruchimayur - 14 years ago