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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

loved the way u r describing their feelings.........its like reading a poetry.......

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

sorry 4 d late comment Fatima it was amazing update hun
loved nupur

n thanks 4 d pm

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

i loved the lines....i mean somehow they connected me to the characters.....

the entire part was soft and subtle...

the setting was beautiful and i loved its essence.....amazing and charming....

wonderfully written.....too much depth....

continue sooner....

love,
Mahak

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Hey

Sorry for late comment

Cumin to FF updates

Liked all parts

All three were senti

Jus their Flashbacks were cool

Looks lik both hurted each other knwingly or unknwningly

Lets c how u unfold the stry

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

*Edited*

B E A U T I F U L ! 😳

I have no more words to describe it. You've no idea how much I loved it, especially the verses. Man, Fatima! 😃 You are just sooo good. I am at short of words.

I am loving it so far. Just that, I would like it to pace up. Take as much time as you want, but get this moving now. Just a suggestion, don't mind. =)

-Kanky

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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-Blossy-

@-Blossy-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Fatima,

Wow...I love your writing style...it has a touch of elevation...as in your words seem to just flow out....

This was a lovely update.Do continue soon

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

beautiful.........

luved the lines

cont soon n tnx fr pm

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Words......girl...words...!! U hv a way wit it... which is so amazing and out of the world fantastic 😍 ...the poems u quote just make my heart skip several beats..!!

Great work dear..👏