(Mayur FF) Transparent yet Obscure !

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

oh god!! you write so well
really nice update
update next part soon

love
tasfia

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

this time, just two words- amazingly beautiful.......👏👏👏

literally speechless.....

👏

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-Blossy-

@-Blossy-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Hi Fatima,

I love your writing style....it has a novelish flow to it.When I first read your post it was because of its title...Transparent yet Obscure...which fanned my curiosity. :D.... Keep them coming n longer ones next time 😉

Thanks for the PM

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Great update dear......luvd it a lot..😛 cant wait to see nups in college.. n thanks a ton for the PM 🤗

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

update soon

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Hi Fatima
How r u
Awesome update
Loved it
Short and sweet
Can't wait 2 read more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

*Edited*

As per my promise, I edit this. I am sorry to have taken so much time. 😳

Fatima, like always I loved the update. You are fabulous writer! 👏 Your writings are always very subtle and beautiful, and again - you did an amazing job.

And that stranger was Mayank no? Quite predictable. 😆 Seems like you're pacing it up. Great. =]

Continue soon!

Kanky =)

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago