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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

Hey! i just went and read ur story....

i must say its beautiful....but TOO short...

i mean r u serious? i wonder why people aren't forcing you to update longer, considering they always do this to my 6 pages long updates!!!!1

And i loved the way u had started....with nature...

and i must say that Nupur's pain was beautifully depicted....i was lost in that....

Oh.....so mayank doesn't loves her.....maybe doesnt realizes this.....

She even confessed....poor her.....

do update soon.

love,
Mahak

Sorry Fama to spam your thread -but mahi deserves an answer from me atleast...
mahi beta - Its because you update only after loooooooong breaks.. See - the last time you updated was on independence day and I am sure you are waiting for republic day for next one... 😡 WIll you please consider Gandhi Jayanti atleast??😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fama - I know Im late to comment..Sorry - but I was out of town ,You know.. I am happy that your updates are getting bigger 😉 ,compared to the previous one ofcourse..
I liked that confession - It was really unique.. My heart goes out to Mayank here- Don't be angry to me for that..But I mean it. LSee- He is so confused - hope he can get it cleared...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry for being late in my comments, was a bit tied up. Liked your work.. Brilliant! Keep me posted
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Posted: 14 years ago
NOTE:

@ Everyone ...thanx a lot for your wonderful comments and I know I'm not replying individually but it's only due to time constrains ...anyway I'm touched by your comments and words are falling short for a thank you !! Hope you like my further parts too !! :)

Take care,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please read note at the beginning !!!
Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update fatima plzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely Fatima!

I loved their first meet!

I love this ff more than others bcoz u write short parts!
I get time to read them!

I m selfish in this, keep parts small and beautiful 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sami - you are browsing IF during college hrs? Very bad.😡
Fama - Tum bhi...Aaj college nahi hain kya?🤔
lagta hain mera mood ab bhi theek nahi hain... 😕
Coming to update - Even I dont mind short updates , as long as I get those frequently 😊 Baaki comments tho as usual...U know ,right? 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fatima ji meri team ne jo kaha sab sahi kaha
as long as you do it on regular basis i am fine
short and sweet as usual re
And as you need to progess the story take ur own time
It was lovely update
AT - Take care dont be so angry re ,karnataka me to no college
Sami ke exams hai na next week se
Sami - aaj to teri wat lag gayi hai *dancing*
Edited by arunabehere - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Sorry Fama to spam your thread -but mahi deserves an answer from me atleast...
mahi beta - Its because you update only after loooooooong breaks.. See - the last time you updated was on independence day and I am sure you are waiting for republic day for next one... 😡 WIll you please consider Gandhi Jayanti atleast??😕



lol....🤣 God! i have burst out laughing by reading this from you.....🤣
i didnt knew that u read comments too otherwise meri itni majaal nahi hai....lol....
are...not republic day.....i am waiting for next independence day......🤣
ya, i m updating a os on gandhi jayanti.....😳


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