Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
Hey! i just went and read ur story....
i must say its beautiful....but TOO short...
i mean r u serious? i wonder why people aren't forcing you to update longer, considering they always do this to my 6 pages long updates!!!!1
And i loved the way u had started....with nature...
and i must say that Nupur's pain was beautifully depicted....i was lost in that....
Oh.....so mayank doesn't loves her.....maybe doesnt realizes this.....
She even confessed....poor her.....
do update soon.
love,
Mahak