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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Unlike other days today I'm sitting by the window pane and enjoying the scenic and exotic beauty of nature contemplating how there was a time when I freely twirled and swirled in the rains and soaked my soul and was the most boisterous girl in the locality but now I just admire and enjoy the beauty silently taking in every thing silently !

Fatima..How can u be so perfect with every update of urs. The way you penn down things..makes anyone to baffle and think on the terms , u want.

I am feeling connected to Nupur...i dont know why?..But yes !

Awww...Mayank !..Wel , i am still confused with his side of story.. but seems equally painful ..

U rock gurl....Aamzin !

-Ruchi

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

hey dear
really nice update👏
i could feel the situation
update next part really soon

love
tasfia

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

God, you write beautifully Fatima!

This was an amazing part! Wonderful update!

Loved it <3<3

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Hey Fatima,

I am so sorry I just read your story and its first three chapters. I absolutely loved the way you told us the story and made us feel what Mayank and Nupur were undergoing. I loved the way you showed the emotional turmoil and your quotes at the beginning of each chapter, added more intensity to the story. Very well done! Keep it up!

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

That was a really nice update and I am now happy to see that the length of the update has increased... Good..

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Fatima:- The third update was really beautfiul...the scenic beauty of rain and then the snow.. was a bliss.. i was totally lost in my imagination for some time.. and now coming to MN, I really loved the way you are portraying the emotions.. nice update..

and about our complaints for longer updates.. we keep saying them coz how much ever we write on MN, we feel its too less... don't let our complaints affect the regular updates that we get.

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Amazing part...Seems the sky is also crying to see someone alone in this beautiful weather...But update more yaar...its way too short...
Continue soon...