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Jaee Dev Rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

And that person was none other than Mayank Sharma .. oh i love the way you write ... it's awesome ...

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

I just loved nupur's character...peppy, bubbly, extrovert, fun loving and a little shy...mixture of a dream girl of any guy and offcourse the guy is mayank sharma...
I love ur updates...small and quick so i can recall everything...
Cont soon...

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Fatima... That was a lovely update.. and finally they met and that too in the traditional way.... Gr88

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

I am lovin it !! :)

WEl , ryt now..i am really pissed off coz of other reasons..so no long comment from my side.. But u know..i LOveeeee your story and dont even think in ur wildest dreams to suspend it .

Love

-Ruchi

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: -sam-

Lovely Fatima!

I loved their first meet!

I love this ff more than others bcoz u write short parts!
I get time to read them!

I m selfish in this, keep parts small and beautiful 😆

thnx sami,

glad you liked their first meet...
I really din want it to look like it's taken from a movie....

thnx goodness people don't have any qualms about short parts !

hopefully I'll continue soon :)

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi
Sami - you are browsing IF during college hrs? Very bad.😡

Fama - Tum bhi...Aaj college nahi hain kya?🤔

lagta hain mera mood ab bhi theek nahi hain... 😕

Coming to update - Even I dont mind short updates , as long as I get those frequently 😊 Baaki comments tho as usual...U know ,right? 😉

waise nivi di I have holiday 😉

good you don't mind short updates .....
yeah yeah I knw !

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: arunabehere
Fatima ji meri team ne jo kaha sab sahi kaha
as long as you do it on regular basis i am fine

short and sweet as usual re

And as you need to progess the story take ur own time

It was lovely update

AT - Take care dont be so angry re ,karnataka me to no college

Sami ke exams hai na next week se

Sami - aaj to teri wat lag gayi hai *dancing*

awwe thnx aru di,

and only one thing from my side " 😊"

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: tasfia123
oh god!! you write so well
really nice update
update next part soon

love
tasfia

thnx a lot...

next part might take time...due to exams :)

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
this time, just two words- amazingly beautiful.......👏👏👏

literally speechless.....

👏

oye mahi....tu speechless kyun hai yaar/...

aisa kya keh diya meine 😉

waise thank u aapne comment kiya :)

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: crazilycrazy
Hi Fatima,

I love your writing style....it has a novelish flow to it.When I first read your post it was because of its title...Transparent yet Obscure...which fanned my curiosity. :D.... Keep them coming n longer ones next time 😉

Thanks for the PM

cR

Hey Ankita,

thnx a lot for reading my FF
It's my pleasure you read it and even loved it....
I just can't express my gratitude !

Awe it's a big compliment from your side to say that you love my writing style...coz you write brilliant !

hmm....about the title...no comments on it !

Hopefully I'll give longer updates but eventually after my exams :)

Keep reading :)

-Fatima

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