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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
hi...ok so next weeks episodes!!! heres my part.......(do naam ek jaan)...i am not posting the link as it is already been posted by choco!

tulsi tells kashish breifly about her mother.........
......tulsi and kashish both have tears rolling down their cheeks.
kashish: (holding tulsi's hand) mama, i ......i am sorry.......
tulsi looks at her with questioning eyes
kashish: kahin na kahin......mein bhi to aapke dhuk ka karaan hoon.......aur apni mama ki taraf se bhi i m really.....ss....
tulsi: kashish, tum sirf meri beti ho, aur tumhari ma khelane ka haq sirf mujhe hai! aur ma beti keh rsihte mein yeh maafi kaisi!
itne saalon mein jo kuch bhi huwa woh humari kismat thi.........likin ab.........ab mein apni kismat ko tumpe nahi thupon gi.........tumhe sari khushiyan dil waon gi!! (they hug each other)..............just then the phone rings....cell phone!
kashish sees its sujal's number and holds onto the mobile in a hurry.......
tulsi: kya huwa....kiska phone hai....
kahish: (wipes her tears...) woh ...um......meri friend hai!
tulsi :(gets up from the bed and walks towards the door) acha theek hai .....baat karo........
kashish smiles and nods..
.......tulsi: ..........magar apni friend se kehna keh itni betabi kyun.....kuch dino mein tum uske ghar hi arahi ho..........(tulsi gives a sweet smile and kashish blushed)
kashish: mama!
tulsi: ahaan....sujal! (she leaves the room)....

kashish picks up the phone gives a sigh.....
sujal: hello...kashish!
kashish: haan bolo sujal
sujal: itni der kyun lagayi....
kashish: are....mama kamre mein thi.....kaise utha thi
sujal: to kya huwa....keh deti keh mama, excuse me......mere hone wale unka phone hai!
kashish: sujal! (laughs) tum yeh keh sakte ho kya apni mama ko.....
sujal: beshak.......main tumhari tarah daarta thodi na hon
kashish: acha! to phir zara baat to kar wana aunty se
sujal: ....abhi....
kashish: haan abhi
sujal: woh asal mein......kuch busy hain........warna kar wa deta
kashish: ya ya! kamse kam mein sab ke samne daarti hon.....tum to apna daar andar hi dabaye bhete ho
sujal: aye kashish! sujal garewal kisi se nahi daarta!
kashish: ha! acah ab agar daar ki baat khatam ho gayi ho, to kya mein puch sakti hon....my would be pati jee, keh is waqt phone kyun kiya....
sujal: haan...dekho na tumhari in baaton mein bhool hi gaya!
kashish: meri baatein....hmmmmm.
sujal: acah baba...meri baatein.........khair yeh kehne keh liye phone kiya tha keh aaj raat ki flight se meri bua aur unki beti mumbai se arahe hain.
kashish: really (excited)
sujal: itni excitement.....i am sure jab tum unse milo gi to sari excitement khatam ho jayegi!
kashish: woh kyun?
sujal: yeh to unse milne keh baad mein tumse pochon ga!
kashish: kya itni buri hai woh.....
sujal:..........nahi.........tum jo itni achi ho........
kashish: sujal
sujal: kashish!
kashish: acha aur koi baat ya mein rakhon
sujal: mein ne bata di apni baat ab tum batao
kashish: mein kya bataon......bus kal college jana hai.....are haan,.....aaj mein pata hai kiske saath ghar ayi
sujal: rishi keh saath
kashish: are wah! ussne bata bhi diya!
sujal: haan.....aaj mein waqai bahut khush hoon
kashish: aur mein bhi....tumhari khushi mein khush hoon!
sujal:........i love you kashish!
....................................age kya baatein hui.........well.........main nahi batane wali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AIRPORT...
rishi airport a chuka hota hai! he sees two ladies are coming towards him. both had red coloured hair, ghar ka sara makeup chehre peh laga huwa, short hair.............the only difference was that one was younger than the other!
rishi: hi bua!
bua (played by vasu): oh my my.......rishi! tum kitne bare ho gaye ho (slaps him on his cheek)
rishi: bua (touches his cheek) ....mein bara kafi saalom se ho chuka hon,,,,,,,shayad apne abhi notice kiya!!!!!! oh ...hi archie!
archie: (played by urvashi).um.......hi..........sujal nahi aya!
rishi: nahi.....big b.....busy the!
archie: oh well........chalo ghar jake usse pakar longi! (she liked sujal a lot and was very chipku but sujal hardly gave her any attention)
rishi: pakar lo gi ( and gave a teasingful laugh)....big b ko kisi aur ne pakar liya hai archie!!!!
archie took some deep breaths: Can we plz leave this place now!
rishi: plz...... (showing them the way!)


Garewal place.............
rishi, vasu bua and archie enter
veena: are vasu...tum agayi.....
vasu: nahi....abhi nahi ayi (trying to mock veena)
rishi felt irritated by this behaviour!
veena (trying to avoid any misunderstanding) um....kaisi ho? aur archie tum kaisi ho? ao na andar!
vasu: hum to bilkul theek hain. CG kahan hai? aur sujal bhi nazar nahi raha. suna hai tum ne uski shaadi teh ki hai,,,,,kis ke saath ki hai, kon hain woh log, kya karti hai larki aur iske parents........

veena: uff vasu....itne sare sawaal...........tumhare bhai bus ate hi honge, sujal apne kamre mein hai, haan uski shaadi teh kardi hai....char din baad uski mangni hai............larki ka naam kashish hai...........sujal ki pasand hai...........rishi keh college mein teacher hai aur uske pita nahi hain......mama hain aur ek choti behen............kafi hai ya aur bhi kuch!!!

vasu gives her a weird look: kashish! hmmmmmm

archie: aunty sujal ka kmara wohi upar wala hai na!

rishi: haan....likin woh neeche ajayenge.......

archie: no...mein upar jake usse surprise dongi..............(she runs upstairs while rishi shakes is head)

rishi: sooo irritating!

vasu: kya kaha tumne

rishi: unnnnn....kuch nahi...mein abhi ata hon

sujal's room,
sujal is still chit chatting with kashish, lying on the bed when archie enters and jumps on him
archie: SUJAL!!!!!
sujal,(gets shocked )TUM....yahan.............
archie: haan, de diya na surprize.....
sujal: (gives a weak smile) haan....par mere upar se to utho.............................

kashsih on the other end is listening to this.............
kashish to herslf: archie,..........................

well. ok enough for now! i hope aapko pasand aya ho...na bhi aya ho to..........keep reading lol!
coming up...lots more and more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv.........farah


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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
ok...i'll continue.........(do naam ek jaan)

.............(guys...woh mujhe bhi abhi khayal aya keh hindus cant marry with thier cousins.....so lets not make archie vasu's daughter instead she is vasu's devar;s daughter (brother-in-law). vasu's husband, devrani and devar have passed away...so she is taking care of archie! ok....so hope this makes it better!!!

archie and vasu bua had arrived at the garewal house. archie goes staright into sujal's room and hugs him....while sujal was still busy with kashish on the phone.....

sujal: archie, mere upar se utha....choro
kashish (to herself): archie.......kahin yeh wohi to nahi jinke bare mein sujal bata raha tha...........hello!
sujal: hello kashish....mein tumhe baad mein phone karta hon (he hangs up)
kashish too puts the phone down!!!!

sujal: archie.....tum mere kamre mein kya kar rahi ho
archie: tumse milne ayi hon....i missed you sooo much sujal! (trying to hug him but he backs off)
just then rishi enters : ahem!....woh big b aapse kuch kaam tha
sujal: haan haan...mein araha hon. ok bye archie....see you later! (sujal and rishi apni jaan bacha kar bahir nikal ate hain.........

archie: aur kab tak bacho ge mujse.......mein tumhe khud se dur nahi hone dongi.......

sujal aur rishi neeche ate hain......
sujal : bua! kaisi hain aap!
vasu: (hugs sujal ) tumhe dekha to jaan mein jaan agayi! jante ho tumhari itni yaad ati thi.......aur archie (who too was coming down the stairs) yeh to bus 24 ghanati tumhare hi gun gati thi!
archie: kya karun......sujal hai hi aisa (hitting her shoulder on sujal's)
sujal: (turns towards archie) haan.........kashish bhi yehi kehti hai!
archie ko ghusa ata hai...a little jealous.......: KASHISH.....sounds very boring!
rishi: tumhari raye kisi ne mangi nahi! (snubbing her)

just then CG enters........(chetan)
vasu: CG.......ohhhh..............(hugs him too) tumhara hi wait kar rahi thi....tumhe dekha to jaan mein jaan agayi..............(rishi and sujal look at each other and smile)
chetan: vasu......tum ati ho to ghar mein ronak si ajati hai.......are archie.....kaisi ho beta.........(archie gets his blessing)
vasu: kaisi ho sakti hai bechari...............jab se suna hai keh sujal ki shaadi teh ho gayi hai.... tabhi se..............
rishi: (cuts in btw) tabhi se............shaadi ke liye wait reduce kar rahi hai! hain na!
vasu gives him an evil smile!
vasu: waise CG........yeh kis ke saath kar rahe ho sujal ki shaadi....i mean.....
CG: woh......ek teacher hai....
vasu: haan....veena ne bataya...
CG: uske papa bhi proffessor reh chuke hain.......Mr sinha..........in fact......unki wife ne zikar kiya tha keh they were in mumbai before...........shayad tum janti ho..........akhir agarwal (vasu's husband) babu bhi to education ki field mein hi the...................
vasu: Mr sinha..................hmmmmmm....................the name sounds familiar......................likin kuch theek se yaad nahi...........kahir shoru......woh kya naam bataya tumne................haan kashish............kab mil wa rahe ho usse! akhir hum bhi larke ki bua hain......pura haq banta hai!
rishi: ab aap yahan hi gayi hain to mulaqat to ho hi jayegi.....

kab milenge vasu aur sinha's? kya yeh mulaqat koi naya gul khelaye gi!.........keep commenting guys!!!

love......farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
Next day.........Garewal house!
everyone is ready to go to their respective work places at the garewal house!sujal: mama, mein chalta hoon
veena: theek hai, magar khana kha lena yaad se....jab tak kaho na apna khayal nahi rakhte tum....
sujal: mama...kha longa..dont worry! acha ab jaon!
archie:(who is also ready and sitting on the breakfast table) are sujal...ruko, mein bhi tumhare saath chalongi...
sujal: kyun? (instant reaction)
archie: woh...mein ne socha keh mein ghar mein bhi bore ho jaogi to kyun na tumhare saath hi chal lon.........
sujal: haan.......magar ......woh aaj meri.....aaj meri ek bahut important meeting hai....to tum kya karogi....
archie: well...mein tumhari help kar sakti hon....i am quite capable...........
rishi: (jo keh kafi der se sun raha tha now finally interrupts) Yes we now what you are capable of! (making a taunting voice)
archie: tumhar matlab kiya hai rishi!
rishi: matlab kuch khaas nahi ......bus itna hi hai keh big b office mein bahut busy hote hain..........tum wahan ja ke kham kha mein bore ho jaogi.........so why dont you come along with me!
sujal: haan....i think yeh bilkul sahi rahe ga! thanx rishi.............(takes a sigh)
archie: likin........
rishi: likin wakin kuch nahi.....big b ne kaha to ana hi hoga! waise bhi mein tumhe bhabie se mil waoga......
archie: BHABIE?????????
rishi: itna shock.....kashish bhabie se!!!
archi makes a not-so-interested face......while sujal smiles and leaves!

COLLEGE TIME
rishi arrives with archie........
rishi: hey guys.....howz it going!
a friend: yaar good........abe rishi tu to bari tez cheez nikla.........woh ms. Sinha ko itni jaldhi apne bus mein karne ka acha tareeka nikala.....
rishi: matlab!!
anothe friend: ab itna mat ban....hum to kya ab to pura college janta hai...tere bare bhai aur ms. Sinha keh chakar keh bare mein
rishi:......watch it! woh meri hone wali bhabie hai.........(gets annoyed)
archie: (faltoo mein bolti hai!) hone wali hai rishi........hui to nahi na!
everyone pays attention to her.....
a friend: yaar....yeh kon hai?
rishi: yeh......yeh ......yeh meri...........
archie: hi....i am archie! sssujal ki freind! yahan kashish se milne ayi hon
rishi glances at her!
archie: to rishi....chalein!

rishi and archie walk upto the staffroom where kashish was coming out ......
kashish: (looks at rishi) hi rishi! (teacher tone)
rishi: hi! woh mein.....yeh archie hai......
archie: hiiiii! to yeh hai Kaashiish! .....
kashish: jee (smiles) aap......sujal ki bua ki beti........
archie: hmmmm........kafi kuch janti hain aap mere bare mein
kashish: sujal ne bataya tha......
rishi was leaning on a wall while archie was talking to kashish in a taunting tone!
archie: soo.......tum yahan teacher ho, right!
kashish: jee!
archie: ...mmmm....sujal se kaisi mulaqat hui......
kashish: woh...........bus shayad humari kismat mein ek doosre se milna tha,,,,,to mulaqaton ke bahane bante rahe!
archie: bahane.......i see!
kashish gives her a weirdo look!
archie: mein sujal ki bachpan ki ..........saathi hoon
rishi...(jo keh archie ki baatein sun sun keh pak gaya tha interruptes) aur archie yeh............big b ki jeevan saathi hain!
kashish feels protected!

archie:(feels embarrassed) haan haan! tumse milke acha laga
kashish: (sighs) mujhe bhi.....ab to milte hi raheinge............
archie: definetly
kashish: (turns towards rishi) ok rishi......hope to see you in class today!
rishi: keep dreaming! (in his rishi tone)
kashish: agar tumhara yehi treeka raha to i am afraid tum examination mein nahi bhet paoge.......
rishi: (smiles at her) mein bhi dekhta hon keh rishi garewal ko kon roke ga!
kashish shakes her head in disappointment! and rishi walks away from there!
kashish to herself: kabhie nahi sudhre ga!!

archie and rishi sara din canteen mein rehte hain......archie non-stop praising herself while rishi kaan mein royi dal keh bheta tha!!!!!! not listening to a single word!

after the class kashish reaches the staffroom!
her mobile rings.....
kashish: haan sujal!
sujal: nahi kashish!
kashish: what? nahi kyun
sujal: pehle tum batao ....haan kyun?
kashish: sujal! muje samajh nahi ata keh tumhare paas itna faltoo time kaise hota hai! (she sits down on the chair)
sujal: faltoo time......ab apni would be wife se baat karne ko aaj kal time wasting kehte hain.............
kashish: (laughs) .....acha pata hai aaj woh tumhari bachpan ki doost milne ayi thi
sujal: meri bachpan ki doost?????????/kaun?
kashish: woh.....archie!
sujal: what? tumhe kisne kaha woh mere bachpan ki doost hai!
kashish: ussi ne!
sujal: pata nahi uska masla kiya hai
kashish: mein bataon
sujal: tumhe kaise pata
kashish: ......mujeh isliye pata hai , kyunke mein ek teacher hoon aur saath hi saath ek larki bhi......aur mein ankhein par keh bata sakti hon....kisi keh dil ka haal....
sujal: acha.....to phir mere dil ka haal janne mein itni der kyun lagayi.......
kashish.: .............ab aise hi man jati to meri value hi kya rehti!
sujal: really!
kashish: sujal....muje lagta hai woh tumhe pasand karti hai........
sujal: kaun?
kashish: ARCHIE! aur kaun
sujal: uff.....kyun uska zikar karti ho.......mujeh bilkul nahi pasand!
kashish: acha baba, nahi karti......likin tumse kuch khaas baat kehni hai
sujal: haan.......i am waiting for this khaas baat
kashish: sujal....yeh woh baat nahi hai......mein kehna chahti hon keh tum.......
sujal: keh mein........
kashish:.........keh tum woh archie se bach keh rehna.............muje uske irade kuch thek nahi lage
sujal: (cracks up) tum......tum larkiyan bhi na!
kashish: (was now blushing on the other side) sujal................

the talk goes on and on! (oh haan....agar aap us important meeting keh bare mein soch rahe hain to..welll.....woh to isrf ek bahana tha......archie se bachne ka!)

par kya sujal archie ki chaalon mein phansne se bach payega! kya kashish apna pyaar jeet payegi! and vasu............uske ane se kaun sa toofan ane wala hai...............agle part mein bataongi!
take care and keep commenting

luv...........farah!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
ok......i'll continue my next part..........(do naam ek jaan)

..........the class had finished aur sujal aur kashish ki baatein bhi.........it was chuti time.............and everyone went home...........luckily kashish too went home on time....

kashish house.
kashish: mama. kal mein zara jaldhi jaongi....principle ne meeting bulwayi hai....isliye muje thodi jaldhi utha dena...ok
tulsi: kashish......yeh sab kya hai.........do din baad tumhari mangni hai aur ek hafte baad shaadi.......tum kal kahin nahi ja rahi ho..........balke charu keh haath application bhej wa do 1 mahine ki chuti ki...........shaadi ki tayariyan humein milke karni hongi............aur waise bhi mera nahi khayal woh log chaheinge keh garewal khandaan ki bahu kaam kare...............isliye.......
kashish: par ma...........abhi se kyun........mein mangni ke baad leave ke liye apply karongi
tusli: nahi....mein ne kaha na keh kal se hi to kal se hi! warna mein tum se kabhie baat nahi karungi!
kashish: (hugs tusli) oh ma....acha theek hai...manli apki baat........nahi jaongi kal..........ab to naraz nahi hain na!
tulsi pats her on her cheek lightly..........

so kal kashish ki college se chuti! yani.....ab woh aur tulsi sakoon se shaadi ki shopping pe ja sakte hain!!!!!!

raat ko hi sinha's keh yahan phone ata hai!
kashish: (sees it is from the garewal house aur bina soche usne phone uthaya aur kaha) Sujal..........tumne chain nahi hai! aur kitni baatein karni hain.........
from the other side ek aurat ki awaaz ati hai: hello.....beta kashish......mein veena.........
kashish: (totally embarrased): aa............aaaunnty...aap ....woh mein samjhi......
veena: (was smiling on the other side) acha....to ab mein samjhi keh yeh sujal itni raat raat bhar kyun jaag ta hai aur kisse baat karta rehta hai.......
kashish: nahi....woh.....mein.....woh sujal (uff totally confused)
veena: .........koi baat nahi! acha tulsi jee hain paas mein
kashish: jee....mein deti hon
...................
tulsi: namaste veena ji!
veena: namaste..kaisi hain aap!
tulsi:bilkul theek.....aap sunaye! khariyat se phone kiya!
veena: jee. woh asal mein meri nanad ayi hui hain....mumbai se........woh aap logon se zara milna chahti thi.....to kya hum log kal......
tulsi: jee muje to bahut khushi hogi agar aap log ayen......likin shaadi ki tayariyan bhi karni hain aur beech mein sirf ek hi din hai...........waise agar aap ana chahey to......
veena: (gets the point) nahi nahi! aap sahi keh rahi hain.......waise bhi do din baad to milna hi hai..............koi baat nahi, aap log tayariyan keejeeyi!
tulsi: apko bura to nahi.......
veena: tulsi jee kaisi baatein kar rahi hain! mein samajh sakti hon,,,,,mere ghar beti nahi to kya...........ma ki pareshani to har ma samjh sakti hai!
tulsi: aap se baat karke bahut acha laga
veena: mujhe bhi! theek hai to phir purso milte hain........
call ends

sorry....yeh kisi ki farmayish peh aaj mein ne likha hai.........sorry zara chota hai,,,,par majboori hai! so vasu aur sinha's ek baar phir se milte milte reh gaye..........ab yeh mulaqat hogi mangni keh din............us din kya tamasha hoga..........wait.....hope to write a long part next time!!! until then.....issi se kaam chala lo pink!!!

love farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
ok...so guys i'll continue (do naam ek jaan)

.............so the next day .....kashish aur tulsi shaadi ki shopping mein sara din busy the.....kapre, jwellery, rings etc etc....sab ki tayariyan kar rahe the.....charu bhi shaam ko unke saath madaat karne lagi!
while all were busy at the sinha house......garewal's keh yahan bhi yehi sab ho raha tha...........rishi sujal ko cher raha tha.........veena sab tayariyon mein busy thi.............chetan aur vasu.......sare jahan keh dardon keh bare mein baatein kar rahe the.............while archie was busy pampreing herself jaise ke woh hi dulhan ho!

raat ko sinha house!! phone bajta hai!!
Tring tring!
kashish: hello!
sujal: hi kashish....kaisi ho
kashish: is waqt to bahut busy hoon
sujal: yani baat nahi ho sakti
kashish: bilkul nahi!
sujal: ummmm....likin mein ne ek bahut zaroori baat karni hai!
kashish: acah to jaldhi se batao......mama bula rahi hain!
sujal: woh.......
just then interuption......yes its rishi!
rishi: big b wohhhhhh...................ohhhh.....sorry.....bhabie jee se baat ho rahi hai? (teases him)
sujal: kya kaam hai rishi?
rishi: kuch nahi....neeche aapko bul rahe hain........aur waise bhi kal aap ne milna hi hai.....
sujal: bus thodi der
rishi: mama ko bulaon kya!! (dhamki) well while rishi and sujal were chatting kashish on the other hand was listening and smiling......
sujal: nahi....mein......hello kashish! woh.....kuch kaam hai isliye
kashish: its ok...tum jao...kal to milna hi hai na.............
sujal: (whispers) i love you!
kashish: i know!
rishi while leans on the door and laughs with covering his mouth with his hand!
phone ends.....
sujal: ab bolo.....kya hai
rishi: uhnnnnn.....aaj.......friday hai!
sujal: rishi keh bache.....(runs after him)
sab log khush the........akhir is din ka kab se intezaar tha sabko! likin ek chakas tha...jo is sab ko nazar lagane mein tula huwa tha........well thi.......yes archie.
archie: (in her room ) mein yeh sab hone nahi doongi.....sujal ko bachpan se chaha tha mein ne aur ab woh kisi aur ka hone ja raha hai............ no no.....this can not happen..........likin karun bhi to kya..............sujal to meri taraf dekhta bhi nahi....................likin kuch na kuch to karna hi hoga!!!!!! (evil smiles come across her face)

So the big ....actually second big day comes..........kyunke aaj shaadi nahi mangni hai!
the sinha house is all set! chota sa ghar tha......but beautifully decorated akhir kyun na hota..............kashish ki pasand thi!!!!
the garewal's arrive.................tulsi and charu, with some dur pare keh relatives and friends welcome the dulha walaz!

charu: ayi ayi...wow jeejuuu you're looking great (sujal ko halka se kandha marte huwe)
sujal smiles: really.....woh to mein hamesha lagta hoon
charu: woh to hai....magar aapna dil sambhal keh bhetiye...kahin di ko dekhte hi behosh na ho jayein
rishi: (beech mein bolta hai) kyun......itni buri lag rahi hai (and laughs)
charu gives him a strange look: jee nahi! aaj to unke samne chand bhi kuch nahi!
rishi: uff itna garoor! chalo bhai...dekhte hain.....
sujal to abhi se idhar udhar dekh raha tha...bus kisi tarah kashish nazar ajaye..............aur haan.........phir woh waqt bhi aya, jab charu and freinds ja keh kashish ko neeche hall mein layi!
kashish was looking just WOW! (ab details mein muje samajh nahi arahi,.....bus uski khoobsurati keh age lafz bhi kam par rahe the.....isliye aap khud hi soch lein woh kaisi lag rahi thi)

sujal ne uski taraf nazar uthayi aur wahin ka wahin reh gaya! uski ankhon se pyaar chalak raha tha! aur dil kashish keh pass ane ko betaab tha! kashish bhi sujal ko chupke chupke dekh rahi thi, kabhie nazar uthati to dosre hi moment sharam se nazrein neeche kar leti!

tulsi comes and makes kashish sit next to sujal!.........sab log unhe congratulate karne arahe the.......while in the corner.........koi ansoo baha raha tha..............archie.......
vasu: (comes upto archie) archie...darling....ro kyun rahi ho
archie; mom.......(she calls her mom) apne kaha tha keh sujal mera ho ga,,,,,to yeh sab......
vasu: dont worry! abhi to sirf magni hui hai
archie: abhi magni hui hai phir shaadi ho jayegi
vasu: so.....kya kabhie shaadiyan tut ti nahi! (evil smile) now stop crying...mein jati hon............dono ko wish karne........tum bhi ajao!!!!!kkkkk
archie weeps her tears...fixes her makeup and follows!

vasu and archie were now standing near sujal and kashish....jahan veena aur tulsi pehle se hi khare ho kar......apne bachon ko duayein de rahe the!!!
vasu looks at tulsi and looks strangely at her...as if trying to remember something............par kya??????????? well that is yet to come
archi: (skakes vasu and brings her back to reality) mom......lets go.....
vasu: haan............archie....yeh......aurat kon hai....veena keh saath
archie: mom....muje to yeh kashish ki mom lag rahi hai......
vasu: kassshiish ki mom......i see!.............archie lets go home
archie: (surprised) kya.....why home mom....abhi to function shuru huwa hai
vasu: mein ne kaha na.............let go! and both vasu and archie leave unnoticed!

the ring ceremony is about to happen.... while chetan looks around for his sister dear...he tries to call her but no response......
veena; aap kya kar rahe hain. wahan sab aapka wiat kar rahe hain
chetan: veena, magar vasu nahi
rishi: mom,,,,dad........hurry up!
veena: chalein na, vasu ajayegi!
chetan finally agrees and the ring ceremony takes place........"congartulations and celebration....we wish you a happy happy life"!!! (tatata...)
while all were busy congratulating sujal and kashish..........
ek surili si awaaz ati hai..........(song time)

rishi: wah wah raam ji! juri kay banayi
everyone looks at him! and smile!
rishi: bhaiya aur bhabhi ko.....bhadayi ho bhadayi....sab rasmon se bari hai jaag mein dil se dil ki sagayi!!!!
...........................
charu: (tulsi ke peeche se nikalte huwe...walks towards sujal and kashish)
charu: aap ki kripa se......shub ghari ayi
jeeji aur jeeja ko
bhadayi ho bhadayi! sab rasmon se bari hai jag mein dil se dil ki sagai!!!!!!!

everyone starts to sing (what........well i dont know.....kuch to ga hi rahe the ...heheheh) while sujal chupke se holds kashish's finger
kashish: (jhatke se apni ungli chorwati hai).....sujal chor na! kya kar rahe ho
sujal: tum mujeh nahi rok sakti........ab legally is ungli peh mera haq hai........
kashish: (looks at him) tumhara haq....woh kyun bhala?(asks innocently)
sujal: are mein ne is peh apne naam ki anghoti pehnayi hai.....to is peh mera bhi haq hai!
both smile while kashish shies away!
yahan to pyaar shuru ho gaya tha.........jab keh charu aur rishi mein gannon mein bhi jhagra ho gaya..........

rishi: aye...chalu......
charu: charu....c-h-a-r-u.........
rishi: wohi wohi........kitne pake huwe ganne ga rahe ho tum larki wale.....kuch maza dalo.....
charu: acha (puts her hands on her waist) to theek hai....aisa ganna gate hain keh tumhe bhi maza ajaye......................................

ab kya hoga...............kya larki wale jeet payenge...ya dulhe wale bazzi mar jaeynge
......aur haan.........vasu kahan gayi..............well yeh sab next part mein.....until then take care guys!
love ...............farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
WOHOO!!!
Aik baar ati ho dhamaka machatiho...
clasicz!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
the story continues........(do naam ek jaan)

..............so the engagement was going on....jahan charu aur rishi ganno ki kash-mo-kash mein phase huwe the.....rishi ne charu ko challenge diya aur charu ne shauk se accept kiya....................
charu: aaj hai sagaiii.......(rishi has his back towards her but turns around after hearing her)
charu continues with her friends dancing along with her: aaj hai sagai....sun larke (change of lyrics) keh bhai......zara nach keh humko dikkha!
hey, aaj hai sagai sun larke keh bhai zara nach keh humko dikha......kuri ki tarah na sharmaaaaa, kuri ki tarah na sharma,
tu meri gal man jaaa
tu meri gal manjaaa (pushing him back)

rishi gets a hold of himself aur age barte huwe with confidence: Sab ko nachaon , nach nach keh dikhaon......a mujhko gale se laga
sab ko nachaon ...nach nach keh dikhaon , a mujhko gale se laga
munde se zara ankh milaaa
munde se zara ankh milaaa
tu meri gal maan jaaa
tu meri gal man jaa...oh soniye!!! (finishes his lines by doing bhangra)
rishi: kya huwa.....har gaye? (pointing towards charu)
charu shos him off...while rishi and his friends laugh!!!! sujal too touches kashish on her shoulder
sujal: tum hi kuch ga do
kashish: mein....nahi nahi
sujal: kyun
kashish: sujal! mein kaise....unhe ganne do...aj hum sirf sunne gein
sujal: ok.....as you wish.....ab se sirf tumhari hi baat manni hai!
kashish: you better.....(they smile at eachother!)

rishi: har gaye har gaye...larki wale har gaye............
charu: aye rishi.......kis ne kaha hum har gaye..........
rishi: to gao na!
charu: woh......(woh idhar udhar dekhti hai for help aur ek dum se awaz ati hai)
a vioce (male): dholak mein taal hai, payal mein chan chan..........
(everyone looks at him while he continues...............) dholak mein taal hai, payal mein chan chan, ghongat mein gori hai, sehre mein sajaan,
jahan bhi yeh jayein
baharein hi chahein
keh kushiyan hi payein
mere dil ne dua di hai
mere yaaaar ki shaadi haiii
mere yaaaaaaaar ki shaadi hai ( gaate gaate hi comes near sujal and kashish)
sujal: .....akshat!!! (hugs him tightly......akshat, played by chaitanya)
akshat: kyun....agaya na time peh!
sujal: nahi ata to kal tera qatal ho jana tha.......(both laugh)
sujal: kashish.........yeh akshat hai....mera ek lota aur sab se acha doost
akshat: hi bhabie.......waise to mein sujal ka hum umar hoon likin aap muje apna devar samajh sakti hai..........kyun....sahi hai na sujal?
sujal: ab yeh to devar aur bhabie keh beech ki baat hai!
kashish smiles and says hi!

charu: kyun rishi.........ho gayi na bolti bandh............larke wale har gaye...har gaye
rishi: hey wait a sec......akshat bhaiya.......yeh sab kya hai..........aap big b keh doost ho ya bhabie ki side se ayeho.............. (comes upto akshat)
akshat: are baap re...mar gaya...........yaar rishi baat asal mein yeh hain keh hoon to mein sujal ka doost............aur sujal ki jeet to kashish bhabie keh saath hai.............yani unka jeetna lazmi tha.................to indircetly mein ne sujal ko hi jitwaya hai!.........right!
rishi.: right............no wrong...........arghhh! whatever!

everyone has a good time.....while the engagemnet party gets over and garewals and their friends leave.............

sujal: (jate huwe kashish ko kehta hai) abhi to ja raha hon,kashish magar jaldhi ayonga
kashish: aur mein us din ka intezaar karungi (both look into eachothers eyes)
sujal: tum sirf meri ho
kashish: aur tumhari hi rahongi! (they wanted to hugs eacth other magar public mein mushkil ho raha tha.........lol)
sujal: byee......................

well.........the part ends here.................ab ghar jake keh kya hone wala hai yeh agle part mein...........kya sujal kashish ko lene a payega!!!!! aur akshat ki bhi kahani age bare gi.............but after the break!
until then take care everyone
....love.........farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
ok....i'll continue with ...........(do naam ek jaan)Valentine special for kiran...lubbb u! 😆

...................the garewals were now back at home.......sab bahut khush the.........

veena: aaj itne dino baad ghar mein itni khushi ayi hai.........mein bahut khush hon...........bhagwan mere sujal ko hamesha aise hi khush rakhe....
(sujal who was standing there with akshat was smiling)
rishi: sirf big b ko.........mujhe nahi!???
veena: tu to khud ko khush rakh sakta hai............magar mera sujal hamesha dusron ki khushiyan dekhta hai...........ilsiye usse duayon ki zadida zaroorat hai...............samjha (pulling his ear)
akshat: waise mama (calls veena mama), sujal sach mein bahut lucky hai........kashish bhabhi jaisi biwi milne wali hai aur itna pyaar karne wali ma............
veena: kyun. kya mein tumhari ma nahi hun
akshat: bilkul
veena: to phir!
sujal: kya mama, aap aaj tak isse samjhi nahi.........yeh yunhi emotional black mail karta hai..................
akshat: haan haan....bus yehi ilzaam reh gaya tha.........mera dard to koi nahi samajhta.........(jhooth mut ka natak)
veena: khabardar sujal...............mat tang karo usse
sujal: ahhh........ma............le mere baap yeh lo.......haath jore tumhare age.......
rishi: chalo bhabie keh ilawa kisi aur keh age to haath jure..........
sujal: acha.......waise mein ne kab kashish ke age haath jure
rishi: nahi jure......chalo koi baat nahi ab jur leejiye ga..........akhir shaadi keh baad yehi haal hota hai!
sujal: mere saath aisa kuch nahi hoga
akshat: uff........itna confidence.....ek bar shaadi ho jane de .....phir pochnege

..............and the conversation goes on............jahan neeche yeh larka party sujal keh bachelor hood ke kuch akhri din enjoy kar rahe the...........wahin upar vasu keh kamre mein kuch important baat discuss ho rahi thi............chaliye dekhte hain...................

vasu: this is too much CG
chetan: nahi....yeh sach nahi ho sakta.........vasu tumhe zaroor koi dhoka huwa hai!
vasu: CG....tum jante ho mein jhoot nahi bolti (yeah right)......mein jo kuch keh rahi hon apni ankhon se dekhi hui baat keh rahi hon
chetan: likin.............tulsi jee.........woh humse jhoot kyun boleingi
vasu: badnami keh daar se aur kya.............oh CG stop acting like a kid.............koi khud se bataye ga keh uske pati ka ek najayez rishta reh chuka hai aur uss rishte se ek bacha bhi hai............
chetan:(looks at her with shock and confusion) ...........muje samajh nahi araha
vasu: is mein na samjhne wali baat konsi hai CG...................mujhe to tulsi ko dekhte saath hi sab kuch saaf saaf yaad agaya tha..................proffessor sinha aur tumhare jeeja, ek hi college mein the..........us waqt tumhare jeeja principle huwa karte the........................proffessor sinha ki doosti kab ek najayaz rishte mein badli, mere pati se zaida behtar koi nahi janta...............aur phir proffessor sinha ka transfer bhi to tumhare jeeja ji ne hi kar waya tha...................tulsi se ek do martaba mulaqat ho chuki hai meri functions par.............................but i cant belive it keh unhone tum logon ko dhoke mein rakha................i mean agar mein na ati aaj to kya gazab ho jata...........garewal khandaan ki bari bahu .............ek najayaz aulaad hai!!!! ohh my GOD! (she takes a breath and shakes her head)

chetan was left shocked...........par kahin na kahin woh vasu ki baaton par bhi ghor kar raha tha..........woh nahi chahta tha keh garewal khandaan par itna bara daag lage..........................he leaves the room ..............

archie: mom! great.........i am sure ab uncle yeh shaadi hone nahi deinge.......
vasu: ...........just wait and watch...............( she passes a smile to archie who was sitting on bed and listening to all this)

all night chetan was disturbed.........usse samajh mein nahi araha tha keh woh kare to kya kare...........agar ek jaga uska khandaan aur naam tha to dosri jagah sujal ki khushi aur pyaar.......................
chetan: (to himself)............magar yeh baat unhone chupayi kyun..........kyun dhoke mein rakha.................muje tulsi jee se baat karni hi hogi!
veena: kya soch rahein hain?
chetan:(comes back from thinking) .....ummm....kuch nahi bus woh..........
veena: sujal keh bare mein na
chetan: haan..............haan sujal keh bare mein hi soch raha tha........asal mein ek important meeting agayi hai to uske liye usse jana hoga
veena: meeting...........yeh kya keh rahe hain.........subah tak to aisa kuch nahi tha
chetan: ..........woh.......abhi abhi pata chala hai,
veena: likin sujal kaise ja sakta hai....panch din baad uski shaadi hai aur phir
chetan: ........veena.......business is business.......aur phir mein koi nuksaan nahi uthana chahta...........sujal jaye ga and that is final (chetan keh kuch raha tha aur ishara kahin aur tha................par veena ko sab sach abhi batana nahi chahta tha)

meanwhile..........rishi and akshat (who was staying at sujals' place were fast asleep jab sujal chupke se utha aur phone milaya.................archie ko...............hehehe........... nahi kashish ko...........

the cell rings, its very late at night, actually early morning by now!
kashish: ...hmmmm.....(sote mein se uth keh) heeelllooooo
sujal; tumhari awaaz subah subah aur bhi achi lagti hai
kashish: sujal........TUM.............is waqt........
sujal: haan kyun?
kashish: sujal.....itni raat ko
sujal: raat kahan hai............yahan to kab ki subah ho chuki hai
kashish: matlab..........(now wakes up properly)
sujal: jab se tum meri zindagi ka hissa bani ho tab se raat kahan hui hai meri zindagi mein
kashish: (shies) sujal..............
sujal: bahut acha lagta hai tumhare mun se apna naam suna
kashish: aur muje yun tang karna bhi
sujal: haan........ab woh to mera right hai
kashish: shaadi hone do.......tumhare left right sab theek kardongi
sujal: shauk se
kashish: acha....ab phone rakho......muje sona hai
sujal: kya kashish..............yahan mujeh neend nahi arahi aur wahan tum sone peh lagi ho...............
kashish: ab phone peh to sirf tumhari awaaz ati hai.....kam se kam sote huwe tum dikhte to ho.........
sujal: oh..........to muje dekhne ka itna shuak ho raha hai..........
kashish: hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
sujal: to ajaon.......
kashish: hargiz nahi (instantly)
sujal: kyun............
kashish: bus yunhi................waise subah mein ne college nahi janna.........agar tum chahu tooooo
sujal: toooooooooo
kashish: sujal.........to hum mil sakte hain
sujal: great.........to subah milte hain aur sara din tum mere saath raho gi.........lunch, dinner, shopping everything aur phir...........
kashish: bus bus bus...........abhi subah hone to do.......................


well...........abhi keh liye itna hi......................kya subah kashish aur sujal keh plans kamiyaab ho payeinge.............ya phir..............story mein koi aur twist aye ga...............parte rahiye...................

keep commenting guys...................take care everyone and thanx to everyone toooooooooooooooo
love........farah

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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
ok...now i'll continue....sorry for the delay!! (do naam ek jaan)

.............ok so the next day! everyone at the garewals comes to the dining table....sujal was more than excited.....akhir kyun na hota, aaj uski aur kashish ki mulaqat jo honi thi!

veena: sujal, kuch khao to sahi, kin sochon mein gum ho
rishi: big b, jag jao..raat ko khuwaab dekh lena bhabie keh (hits him on his arm)
sujal: jagte huwe khuwaab dekhne ki aadat meri nahi tumhari hai, isliye chup chap bheto aur nashta karo............mein ja raha hon
akshat....(who was just about to take a bite from his apple.....gosh akshat appla khana kab bandh kare ga...lol) are kidhar ja rahe ho? mein itne dino baad aya hon.......aur tum ja rahe ho..........(heheh...he sounds like sujal's biwi...hehehe)
rishi: (holding akshat's arm) akshat bhaiya aaj na rokein inhe.........aaj aapse zaida special logon khe saath meeting hai!
sujal: rishi...sudhar jao.........yaar akshat........aaj zara important kaam hai.......samjha kar na (winks at him)
veena: (enters again with a glass of juice) yeh kya sujal. tum bina nashta kiye uth gaye.......chalo yeh juice piyo..........
sujal: mama.....muje der ho rahi hai....................(uff kyun koi sujal ki pareshani samajh nahi pa raha hai!!!)
veena: SUJAL!
akshat: mama....jane do na... kisi important meeting mein ja raha hai......kisi khaas chakas se milne.................ya should i say chaksi.....kyun rishi (both of them start to laugh...while sujal feels shy)
sujal: (drinks his juice in a hurry) acha mama....ab jaon.....aur haan raat ko khane peh wait mat karna aaj mein............
rishi: pata hai....date peh ja rahe hain (giggles again)
sujal:......rishi.....waapis ake dekhta hon!

just as sujal was about to leave Chetan ki awaaz ati hai............
Chetan: Sujal!!
sujal: (stops immediately aur bura sa mun bana kar phir murta hai) jee.....papa?
chetan: kahan ja rahe ho?
sujal: woh......woh mein............kuch urgent kaam hai!
veena , rishi and akshat laugh at sujal! while sujal gets blushed!
chetan: ......woh.....abhi janne ki kahin zaroorat nahi hai ........mein ne tumhari kal ki seat confirm ka wa di hai.....
sujal: seat? kaisi seat?
chetan: tum kal america ja rahe ho..........for the TGE conference......
sujal: magar papa............mein kaise ja sakta hon
chetan: what do you mean tum kaise ja sakte ho..............meeting hai aur attend karni zaroori hai
sujal; woh sab to theek hai magar.............
veena: (cuts in) yeh aap kya keh rahein hain....aap jante hain keh sujal ki shaadi hai kuch dino mein, woh is tarah sab kuch chor keh kaise ja sakta hai..................
Chetan: veena plz.....business mein interfere mat kiya karo...........mein iska pita hon aur ikse liye kya bura hai aur kya acha yeh mein achi tarah se janta hon.............aur phir teen dino ki to baat hai............shaadi se pehle yeh waapis ajayega!
rishi and akshat were listening to all this with silence!............
sujal: (to stop the argument) theek hai papa, jaisa aap kahein.....mein chala jaonga (he sounded low......kyun na hota ab jake jab kashish uski zindagi mein ayi to ab uske paas waqt hi nahi!)
chetan: hmmm.......raat ko tickets collect kar lena
sujal: jee.....mama...mein chalta hoon! (sujal finally leaves heavy hearted)

veena stares at chetan and gives him a bad bad look with tears in her eyes! and goes in her bedroom, while rishi......goes off to college!

veena keh kamre mein.................she is crying
akshat: mama....yeh kya aap ro rahi ho
veena: (wipes her tears at once) nahi.....bus yunhi
akshat: mama.......muje apna beta manti hain na......to beton se jhoot nahi bolte
veena: to kya karun akshat............tumhare uncle kuch samajhte hi nahi.............mera sujal khud se kabhie kuch nahi kahe ga..........andar hi andar ghuta rahe ga...................magar unhe to samjhna chahiye na.........woh uske pita hain koi dushman nahi!
akshat: ..........apne sahi kaha mama...woh uske pita hain, dushman nahi..........woh bhi to sujal ki khushi chahte hain........aur phir teen dino ki to baat hai.phir to sujal ne waapis ana hi hai
veena: mera maan bahut ghabra raha hai.............kahin kuch galat na ho............
akshat: kuch nahi hoga mama............mein hon na
veena: magar
akshat: bus! no more arguments and no more tears! ab jaldhi se smile karein aur mere liye gajar ka halwa banaye...........kitne saal ho gaye aapke haath ka gajar ka halwa kahye huwe!
veena: (pats him on his cheek and wipes her tears) lati hon...........
she stands up and walks magar age ja ke she turns around and says: Akshat......tum sujal ka khayal rakho ge na!
akshat nods in agreement and gives a fulfilling smile.............veena leaves!

...........ab dekhte hain keh sujal kahan tak pohancha.............
well. he had reached the sinha house....and calls kashish...........
kashish: (picks up her cell) haan sujal......bolo
sujal: bolon kya..............mein neeche khara hon...jaldhi ao na
kashish: tum a bhi gaye?
sujal: nahi mera bhoot khara hai
kashish: sujal....,mazaq mat karo
sujal: ab pyaar tum karne nahi deti........socha filhaal mazaq se hi kaam chala lon....
kashish: sujal........acha andar ao na
sujal: nahi.....tum bahir ajao
kashish: ok...2 minutes arahi hon
sujal: i am waiting............................................

kashish neeche ati hai...lounge mein tulsi bheti hoti hain aur tomatoes kat rahi hoti hai......
kashish: mama. mein ja rahi hon
tulsi: kahan?
kashish: bataya tha na ....sujal ayega
tulsi: haan
kashish: to woh bahir khara hai........
tulsi: are to usse andar bulao na
kashish: nahi ma.....mein hi ja rahi hon.........raat ko khane peh nahi aongi....to aap khal lijeeye ga
tulsi: ab to tumhare bighar khane ki aadat dalni hi paregi.............jao....khush raho!
kashish: bye.................(leaves and close the door behind her)

she comes towards sujal who was leaning against the car.........
kashish: hi sujal! kaise ho?
sujal: (looks at her and smiles) tumhe dekh kar tabiyat hamesha theek ho jati hai
kashish: kyun......mein koi tablet hon?(jokes)
sujal: haan ho na.....(comes close to her).....tum tablet ki tarah meri zindagi mein dissolve ho jaogi.........aur sari mushkilein aur udasiyan bhi dur ho jayengi!
kashish: bus bus philosopher saheb...........kya ab hum chal saktein hai!
sujal: (hits lightly on her head) ..........chalooo............

meanwhile at the garewal house.........
Chetan: vasu....mein ne sujal ka yahan se jane ka bandobus to kar diya hai......take woh in sab baaton se zara dur hi rahe..............uske janne keh baad hi mein tulsi jee se baat karunga................agar woh yahan rahe ga to muje kabhie yeh karne nahi dega.............aur garewals ka naam mitti mein mil jayega!
vasu: well done CG.......mere khayal mein its a brilliant idea!
archie: agar yeh sab sach huwa to uncle kya aap yeh rishta tor .............
chetan:(looks at her)...............HAAAN..............agar yeh sach hai to yeh shaadi kabhie nahi ho sakti..........
archie: magar sujal apki baat manne ga kya..........
chetan: woh to usse mani hi hogi! (EXTRA LOUD MUSIC!!!!!!!!!!!!)

sujal aur kashish gari mein hote hain!
sujal:(hesitates) kashish..........tum se ek baat kehni thi
kashish: haan...kaho
sujal: woh...........asal mein......
kashish: kya baat hai sujal.........
sujal: ...kashish kal mujeh ke important confrence ke liye america jana hai
kashish: KYA!!!!!!!!!
sujal:........i know yeh sahi waqt nahi hai, magar conference bahut important hai aur papa chahte hain keh mein yeh attend karon
kashish: sujal...........likin............humari shaadi.........
sujal: (brakes lagata hai) kashish....dont worry, mein time se pehle ajaonga.........(holds her hands and brings them closer) aur ab humein koi alag nahi kar sakta................sivaye maut keh!
kashish:(sujal ke lips peh haath rakh ti hai) aisa nahi kehte..........muje pura bharosa hai tum par............(she smiles)
sujal:...............i love you kashish
kashish:.................mein bhi....budhu! (and they have a long tight hug)


ok..........it was a long part.........hope you guys dont get bored..........ok agay kya hoga..........well...jaldhi bataongi! ..............but kafi kuch hone wala hai so parte raheiye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanx everyone again and really sorry for the delay!!!!!!!!!
love .............farah
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...............ok...next part!(do naam ek jaan)

jahan sujal aur kashish apne pyaar ko rishte mein badlne ka khuwaab dekh rahe the wahin chetan, vasu aur archie keh saath milke sare khuwaabon udhura karne ka soch raha tha!

sujal: kashish, chalo....ab bataon pehle kahan jana hai
kashish: .....hmm...pehel thodi si shopping, phir lunch....phir ek long drive....phir.....dinner aur phir...........
sujal: ...ice cream
kashish: haan! woh bhi chocolate flavour
sujal: chocolate...woh to bache khate hain
kashish: ....bare bhi khate hain.......ajj hum dono khayein ge
sujal: likin muje choclate nahi pasand
kashish: par muje to pasand hai na
sujal:....par....mein
kashish:......sujal please (smiles innocently)
sujal: ok.......anything for you!...........and they drive to the mall......jahan pohanch keh dono shopping karte hain.......
sujal: kashish...yeh dekho yeh wala dress acha hai
kashish: nahi sujal..........uska colour dekha hai tumne
sujal: colour mein kya burayi hai
kashish.:ummm...muje nahi pasand......bahut pale hai
sujal: par kashish tum par acha lage ga
kashish: sujal.....woh choro na......yeh wala dekho kitna acha hai
sujal: Yeh (shocked)...tum is colour mein bilkul achi nahi lago gi
kashish: sujal..........muj peh yeh colour bahut suit karta hai
sujal: nahi....i dont like it
kashish suit ko table keh patak thi hai aur dokan se bahir chali jati hai................
sujal follows her.........
sujal: naraz ho gayi......
kashish doesnt answer............
sujal: acah baba sorry.......chalo ek kaam karte hain, dono dress le lete hain
kashish looks at him: nahi.............its ok........woh tumhari pasand wala lete hain
sujal smiles at her
kashish: likin ek shart par
sujal: kya
kashish: tumhare liye mein shirt pasand karungi........
sujal: hmmmmmmmm....ok...done.....chalo ab chalte hain
.....the but the dress and go to the mens section.........
kashish: sujal yeh shrit tum par achi lage gi.....
sujal: oh god kashish.........is ka colour bahut light hai
kashish: to kya huwa....
sujal: nahi.larke aisi shirts nahi pehente........
kashish: sujal...but you promised keh tum meri pasand ki shirt pehno ge.......
sujal: kashish par yeh..............
kashish: ............abhi mein ne tumhari pasand ki dress li na....ab tum bhi yeh le lo!
sujal: (makes a bad face ) theek hai........do!
kashish....smiles.........

sujal: to ab kahan chalein?
kashish: thodi aur shopping karte hain na
sujal; nahi mein thaak gaya....chalo kuch khate hain
kashish: abhi se thaak gaye....likin abhi to shopping shuru hui hai
sujal; kashish tum shoping karte huwe larti bahut ho
kashish: mein larti hoon......tum larte ho
sujal: mein? meri pasand hamesha sahi hoti hai.....likin tum
kashish: likin mein kya (gets angry).........tum sare larke ek jaise hote ho..........khud ki choice to hoti nahi hai aur koi agar achi cheez dekhata hai to use hi bura kehte ho,,,,,,,,,,joa muje tumse baat nahi karni............(kashish leaves from there)
sujal: .....kashish...........(follows her)....aut tum larkiyan........jab tak haan mein haan milao tab tak sahi rehti ho jahan zara si baat na manni wahin mood kharab.........(he shakes his head)
kashish:..........aisi baat hai to jao ja ke shirt waapis kar do........
sujal: ab to le li hai...........
kashish: reciept hai..........jao waapis kar ao......aur ainda se mein tumhare liye kuch nahi loangi!........ab chalo......khana khate hain....tumhe bhook lagi thi na
sujal:.....nahi...ab mit gayi...........(feels sad)
kashish: ab zaida natak karne ki zaroorat nahi hai.....chalo (pulls him)
they are now at a restuarant .....and order the food!............both are quiet...............when sujal breaks the ice..............
sujal: .....i..........am......sorry!
kashish looks at him but doesnt say anything!
sujal: galti meri hai...........muej tumhe yun nahi kehna chahiye tha
kashish:...........(now feels a bit better) its ok...........mein ne bhi overreact kiya
sujal: (smiles ) waise ajeeb baat hai na kashish.........hum dono ki pasand kitni alag hai likin phir bhi hum saath saath hain
kashish: haan......isi ko pyaar kehte hain.........ek doosre keh liye apni khushiyon ko bhool jana......doosre keh rang mein rang jana
sujal:........ek minute!(he gets up)
kashish: kahan ja rahe ho?
sujal abhi aya..........(sujal leaves)........................................
.........thodi der baad sujal comes back......magar he was wearing something else..............yes...the shirt that kashish chose for him! wah sujal kya lag raha tha .........
kashish: sujal yeh.......
sujal: kaisa lag raha hon
kashish: ...likin yeh to tumhe pasand nahi thi na
sujal:....kaisa lag raha hon??
kashish: .....(comes towards him) bahut bahut ache
sujal smiles at her!
sujal: apni zindagi ko kabhie khud se naraz hote nahi dekh sakta..........chahe humari pasand alag alag ho.............humari rahein ek hi hain
kashish: (uski baatein ghro se sun rahi hoti hai) aur unhi rahon peh chal ke hum apni manzil payenge sujal! ...........hain na!
sujal: hmm...............(they hug each other................uff .......in public......)
kashish: sujal...choro na........sab dekh rahe hain
sujal: (leaves her) dekhne do na............kabhie itna pyaar karne wale nahi dekhein honge.........
kashish smiles..........!
.............
after dinner sujal kashish ko ghar chorne jata hai.............they reach the sinha house!
sujal: kashish....tumhara ghar agaya
kashish:......aaj ka din meri zindagi ka sab se acha din tha
sujal: aur aise din tumhari zindagi mein ate raheinge
kashish:....sujal......
sujal:.........pyaar mein kabhie kabhie takrar bhi zaroori hoti hai.....warna pyaar ka maza hi kya...........
kashish.: haan......magar kabhie kabhie...............(starts to laugh)
jaise hi kashish hansi..............ek dum se barish shuru ho jati hai!! are wah what a coincidence! lol
kashish and sujal both step outside in the rain aur phir...........................................

ok gotto go.. kahani to be continued!!
lol....keep commenting guys!
love...........farah!

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