do naam ek jaan (a fan- fic) - Page 9

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ok...herez the next part...(do naam ek jaan)

.............sujal meets kashish...but doesnt get a proper reply from her so he leaves.......

akshat and rishi are in the car looking for sujal:
akshat:...uska mobile bhi off hai, kahan gaya hoga.........
rishi:.......shayad..........kashish bhabie keh yahan!
akshat:....haan.........udhar le lo......
rishi drives to the sinha house......they both enter inside!.....the door is still open, while charu and tulsi are talking.........

tulsi:...tumhe lagta hai kashish ko aisi halat mein dekh ke muje khushi hoti hai
charu:...to phir aap unhe samjhati kyun nahi
tulsi: mere samjhane se kya hota hai.......yeh uska bhi faisla hai
charu:...nahi mama.......yeh baat unhone isliye mani hai kyunki apne kaha tha...........agar mein apni di ko janti hon, to aaj bhi woh sujal bhaiya se utna hi pyaar karti hai aur waqt keh saath saath yeh pyaar kaam nahi balke bharta jayege...............di ki halat ki zimidar kahin na kahin aap bhi hain!
tulsi looks at her in shock!
tulsi:....mein.......charu yeh......
charu: haan, mama.........di ne bachpan se sirf apki khushi apka pyaar chaha, aaj jab unko woh sab mila hai to woh isse khona nahi chahti...........aapke dukh ki zimidar woh khud ko samjhti hain...........aapke faisle keh khilaaf jake woh aapka dukh aur bharhana nahi chahti!.........likin aap samajhti kyun nahi!..............
rishi and akshat were standing beside the door listening to both of them!
charu: (cont.)....di ki khushi sirf sujal bhaaiya keh saath hai aur mein unse unki yeh khushi dur nahi hone dongi.......chahe muje apke khilaaf kyun na khara hona pare (cha gayi charu ...hehehe,)...while she says this she turns around to see rishi and akshat over hearing their conversation!!
charu:....rishi.......tum!
rishi:...woh........(he looks at akshat)
akshat:...sorry, bina bataye andar agaye..........
tulsi wipes her tears............
rishi: ......kya.......big b.......yahan aye the?
charu : (looks at tulsi)...haan aye the......aur chale bhi gaye!
akshat: WHAT!..........kahan gaya?
charu:...pata nahi (both akshat and rishi walk out in a hurry).....par huwa kya (but they have left already.........)
..........while charu gives another stare to tulsi!..........

....rishi and akshat are on the road again.....when suddenly akshat speaks
akshat:.....rishi........shayad muje pata hai woh kahan gaya hoga!
rishi: kahan?
akshat:..........tuushar's bar! (lol....ok dont worry about the name...its just a bar, where akshat and sujal used to hang out! sujal's fav place!)
...................
....well akshat is correct..sujal yahin hai , zara uski halat par nazar daltein hain...........
sujal:.......ek aur........
bar attendant:...sir aap pehle hi bahut pee chuke hain.........
sujal:...bahut.....(hez drunk).......bahut seh chuka hoon............aaj bahut pee longa......to kya fark parega.........so.....one more...........now!
bar attendant:....sir, plz meri nokri chali jayegi....muje pe taras khayie.....mein yeh nahi kar sakta..............
sujal:.(pats his shoulder)....hmmm.....taras kahon..............mein kya taras kahonga tum peh.................mein to khud kisi ki ek taras bahri nazar ka intezar kar rahaaa hooon.....(he falls off the chair...uff...itni pee hui hai)...
attendant:....sir saambhal keh...(he tries to help sujal).....
sujal:...hmmm....i am ok.............i am fine.........muje drink nahi de sakte koi baat nahi................mein yunhi jata hon...........
attendant:...sir...gari taak chor aon!
sujal:......chor to diya muje.......(the attendant looks at him)............sab ne!
attendant: jee...mein kuch samjha nahi...............
sujal again pats him on his shoulder............just then rishi and akshat arrive!

rishi:...BIG B!
akshat:....sujal.......(they come and hold him....and take him to the car......and back home!)

GAREWAL HOUSE:
all three reach home:....
sujal:.........yeh........yeh kahan laye muje ........rishi (hez totally drunk)....
rishi:big b...sambhaliye....gir jayeinge.............
sujal:..........bacha hi kya hai sambhalne ko!
akshat:...sujal....chalo andar.....ghar agaya hai!
sujal:...(looks at the house from outside...keeps staring then goes back trembling, picks up a stone and smashes the window on the front!)
akshat:.....sujal!...yeh kya kiya?
sujal:.........is ghar ki bunyaad hila donga!
rishi: big b plz.....andar chaliye.................
sujal: (shouts) NAHI!.........JO ANDAR HAIN UNHE BAHIR BULAO........................MR CHETAN GAREWAL BAHIR AAO..............BAHIR AAO MR C..CH......CHETAN GAREWAL.............(sujal had a strange twinkle in his eyes....the attitude was just pouring out like anything)

veena, chetan, vasu and archie all come outside at hearing sujal's disruptive voice!
chetan:...kya tamasha laga rakha hai yeh...............sujal.............tum sharab pee keh aye ho...........
sujal:........haan........haan pee ke aya hon..........ab yeh bhi ....yeh bhi is ghar ka naam.......the great name.......kharab karega...............haan...............(he come close to chetan)
chetan:...sujal....tum hoosh mein nahi ho.........
sujal:......GALAT.......hoosh mein tu mein.....ab aya hon............aur ab yeh ghar.........aa...aap....dekhein ge mere hosh mein ane ka anjaam..........YOU MR CHETAN.........GG........GAREWA....AAAAL..(he falls down and faints)
chetan:isse andar le keh jao rishi...........yeh larka us larki keh ishq mein pagal ho gaya hai!....sab kuch barbaad kar de ga..........
rishi:.....kon kitni barbadi lata hai ..........yeh hum sab dekhein ge dad!

rishi and akshat pick sujal and take him inside while veena follows!
vasu: (puts his hand over chetan's shoulder).....dont worry CG........subah tak sab theek ho jayega.......
chetan:.....i hope so..........i hope so!

SINHA HOUSE..........jahan garewal's keh yahan sujal ne toofan khara kiya tha wahin sinha's keh yahan kashish apne maan mein ek toofan sa samete bheti thi!...........ankhon se chahe aapna ghum nahi chalka rahi thi par maan se khoon keh ansoo ro rahi thi!!...........its very late at night aur kashish abhi jaag rahi thi!
tulsi:(enterz her room).......kashish....tum soyi nahi!
kashish:...bus...yunhi........
tulsi:.....sujal keh bare mein soch rahi thi
kashish:....ma..........
tulsi:......chahe kuch der pehle hi sahi...mein ne tuje dil se apni beti manna hai...........aur yeh ma apni beti ka dukh ankhon se par keh bata sakti hai!
kashish:....nahi ma...aisi koi baat nahi.....mein to bus
tulsi:.........meri zubaan ka maan rakhne keh liye khud ki khushiyon ka gala ghot do gi (kashish looks at her)...............
kashish:....kyun khud ko ilzam de rahi hain.....yeh faisla mera bhi hai ma!
tulsi:.......agar yeh faisla tera hai to kyun sujal se milne keh baad itni bechaini hai......kyun abhi teri nazrein usse dhund rahi hain.........
kashish:...aisa kuch nahi hai (she moves away....but tulsi grabs her arm)
tulsi:...aisa hi hai.........mat karo apne saath yeh............mein ne jo kaha ya kiya, us waqt is ghar ki izzat keh liye kiya......magar is ghar ki izzat teri khushiyon se bar kar nahi hai kashish!.............tu hai to yeh ghar hai.........aaj mein tumse yeh kehti hon............keh sujal ko apnane se inkaar mat karo.............agar woh aaj khud chal ke aya hai to yeh uski (she points towards the sky).......uski marzi hai............(kashish hugs tulsi tightly and starts to cry)........
kashish:....mein yahan reh kar usse bhool nahi sakti...........hum yahan se dur chale jayeinge ma
tulsi:...........nahi kashish....aisa mat karna
kashish:...ma plz........is bar yeh mera faisla hai.........mein papa ki ruswayi mein apni khushiyan nahi dhund sakti..................hum log kal hi yeh shehar chor deinge..................(both hugs again and weep.....aawww)

charu: (who was standing outside kashish's room..........isse aur koi kaam nahi hai kya...hehehe......well........she hears this)...........nahi!....yeh nahi ho sakta..........

ok......finally ends.....no not the story,....the episode..heheh!.........so ...kya kal ka din judai layega.......ya woh milan ki shuruwat hogi!.hmmmmmmmmmmmmm........kal hi bataongi! lol......guys keep reading and commenting aur plz.....yaar muje marne hi sazish ya dhamkiyon se parez keejiye.........hehehehehheeheh!............take care
love...........farah!

..next part....(do naam ek jaan)

..........so the next day!!!

sujal gets up ...hez got a head ache..(hangover from yesterday).....
sujal:....ahnn....(he holds his head and sees akshat lying on the sofa)....aakshat.....akshat!!!
akshat gets up:...sujal...uthgaye?...ab tabiyat kaisi hai?
sujal:.... mein theek hon....likin...sar mein dard....
akshat:....itni drink karoge to yehi hoga na........maana tum pareshan the magar sujal......tumhe aisi situation mein mainne pehle kabhie nahi dekha.......you were totally out!
sujal: (gets sharminda)...woh.......
just then there is a knock on the door.......veena enters!
veena:...sujal...uth gaye beta
sujal looks at her but doesnt really respond......
veena:...tumhare liye chai layi hon.....pee lena (she puts it beside him and touches his head)
sujal:mama........i am ....mera matlab....i am sorry......aapse is tarah se baat nahi karni chahiye thi.........
veena:....teri baaton ka muje bura nahi laga (chal joothi...lol)......magar kal raat ko tumhari halat dekh keh bura zaroor laga!
sujal...looks down
veena:....jis sujal ko mein janti hon,,,woh kabhie har nahi manta........aur agar tujhe apne pyaar par bharosa hai to tuje pyaar mein girna nahi uthna hoga............aur mein janti hon keh tu uthe ga! (she touches him on the head again and starts to leave)
sujal:.....mama........is baar mera saath deingi na aap??? (questions innocently)
veena:.....mein to hamesha tere hi saath hon.......bus apna raasta sahi rakhna...........aur agar kashish is ghar ki bahu banegi to mujse zaida khushi kisi ko nahi hogi.........(she smiles and closes the door).......
sujal feels relieved!
akshat:......khushi muje bhi hogi!........ab uth jao...meri to kamar reh gayi sari raat teri wajah se sofe peh sona para!......
sujal smiles at him while akshat fixes his back!

sujal gets ready and comes downstair.....sujal is in a hurry. coz he doesnt even want to look at chetan and waste time.....
he just passes the breakfast table, where vasu, chetan and archie were seated, without greeting!
archie:....sujal.....wait!
sujal: (takes a deep breath and stops but has his back towards archie)
archie: kahan ja rahe ho?
sujal:...tum se matlab
archie:...naraz kyun hote ho.....mein to bus waise hi....
sujal:...waise hi kya?
archie:....um...tum bura na mano to aaj hum log kahin dinner peh....
sujal: (faces her)....archie...muje nahi pata tum yeh sab kyun kar rahi ho...magar ek baat kaan khol keh sun lo....muje yeh sab pasand nahi aur agar tum nahi chahti keh main tumse sakhti se pesh aon to plz......yeh sab bandh kardo.........
archie:....magar mein to bus......
sujal:....muje der ho rahi hai.........(he starts to walk)
vasu:...apni hone wali biwi se aise baat karte hain sujal?
sujal turns in shock....: kya.......
vasu:....archie........is going to be your wedded wife soon
sujal:....(laughs)....archie.....aur mein....(laughs again).....archie keh saath jeene se pehle mein kashish keh saath marna pasand karunga..........
chetan:...sujal!
sujal nods his head in a no and begins to leave again jab peeche se rishi bhagta huwa ata hai..........
rishi:....big b.......stop......big b ruko......
sujal:...kya baat hai rishi......
rishi:...woh!.....
sujal:.....haan!
rishi:....abhi abhi cahru ka phone aya tha..........woh bata rahi thi keh kashish bhabie ne yeh shaher chorne ka faisla kiya hai..........aaj......1 ghantai mein train jane wali hai....(charu ki bachi..pehle nahi bata sakti thi...lol).....
sujal:....what!!
rishi:...big b.....apko unhe rokna hoga...(really rishi! duffer!)
sujal:...(gives a glance at chetan...who too stood up from his chair at listening to this).........agar..........agar woh aaj chali gayi..........to sujal naam ka apka koi beta tha.....yeh bhool jayiye ga.........i promise!! (he has tears aur ghusa ankhon mein)
chetan:....beta......
sujal:.....agar beta samajhte hain to is bar meri khushiyon ka bikharne mat deejiye ga! .........(he looks at veena jo keh yeh baat sunkar ghabra gayi thi)......and then sujal and rishi leave!

veena:...(goes to the mandir in her house, grabs something and calls out to akshat)...............AKSHAT....jaldhi ao....humein jana hai
chetan:..kahan ja rahi ho veena?
veena:....apne bete ki khushiyan waapis lane.........kyunki MAIN ab tak nahi bhooli keh mein uski ma huun......(akshat and veena leave too)
chetan:............vasu........muje lagta hai muje bhi jana chahiye......kahin mein sujal ko kho na bheton
vasu:...dont be silly chetan......yeh larka to pagal ho gaya hai!....come have breakfast!.......vasu and archie make themselves comfortable while chetan abhi bhi soch raha hota hai keh kya woh sahi kar raha hai!!!!!!

sujal and rishi were driving realllly fast.............
rishi: big b tez.....adha ghanta reh gaya hai
sujal:....is bar waqt ko apne haathon se nahi jane donga...song time
.....
aye waqt ruk ja thaam ja teher ja
waapis zara dor peeche

kashish at the station thinking:..(song cont.)...mein chor ayi khud ko jahan peh
woh reh gaya mur pecheeeee

sujal: (puts his hands through his hair):...kahan mein
kashish:...kahan woh
sujal:...yeh kaisa
kashish: hai jadooo............... (end of song....cortesy ddlj)


.............cut the tension.........they arrive at the station......
sujal:..tum udhar dekho mein idhar...........
rishi: ok........mein announce bhi kar wa deta hon...(see logic...hehehe.lol)
but before the annocement could be made......sujal ko koi awaaz deta hai............


ok...kya aj sujal kashish se mil payega.......kya woh usse rok payega............kya kashish mane gi...............ya phir...........wait...aj raat ko hi bataongi!......
love you all..........plz pink....thoda sabar....shayad sujal ko khusiyan wapis mil jayein!! hint hint!....lol..........
...do comment.............farah!

ok...next part!.......(do naam ek jaan)

........sujal and rishi reach the train station jahan woh kashish ko rokne aye the.....keh achanak sujal ko koi awaaz deta hai
rishi:...BIG B .....idhar....
sujal runs over to where rishi was standing and he sees charu and tulsi there!
sujal:.....charu........kashish...kashish kahan hai......
charu:..sujal bhaiya...muje pura bharosa tha aap aynge......(blah blah...lol)
sujal:....aunty......kashish........
tulsi:....woh ticket check kar wane gayi hai....wahan........
sujal turns around to see kashish standing near the counter....uski jaan mein jaan ati hai!
tulsi:.....sujal.........mein janti hon keh woh tumse bahut pyaar karti hai, aaj ussi ki khushi ki khatir mein tumse kehti hon...........usse apne se dur mat janne dena..............mat jane dena beta!!
sujal holds tulsi's hand!...he walks over to where kashish is standing.......

rishi:...aj agar big b nakamiyaab huwe ...........to mein dad ko kabhie maaf nahi karunga..........
charu:....rishi......aisa kuch nahi hoga......muje pura bharosa hai!!

ok...now lets move over to sujal and kashish.............sujal kashish keh side peh ake khara hota hai while kashish fixes her hair woh sujal ko dekhti hai

kashish:...sujal........
sujal:....ja rahi ho
kashish:...(idhar udhar dekhte huwe)...haan......
sujal:...muje chor ke
kashish:...(uska dil bhari ho raha hota hai....is tarah se sujal se alag hona mushkil ho raha tha).............tumhari .....tumhari yaadon ko saath le ja rahien hoon.........
sujal:.......kis haq se (arrognatly)
kashish: (looks at him).....mein..........nahi janti..........
sujal: mein bataon
kashish again looks at him but doesnt say anthing this time.....
sujal:.....mujse pyaar karti ho, is haq se......tum aaj yahan se ja rahi ho isliye nahi kyunke tum mujse dur jana chahti ho..........tum khud se bhaag rahi ho....
kashish:...sujal plz........muje kamzoor mat banana
sujal:....mein tumhe kya bananao ga....aaj to tum muje mita keh ja rahi ho
kashish:.....(gets tears in her eyes).......mein kabhie tumhari nahi hosakti.....is judai ko humari kismat samajh ke apna lo.............
sujal:.....(halki si smile ati hai)....sujal agar kisi ko apnaye ga to woh tum woh kashish.....warna apne aapko tak mita dunga
kashish:....itna pyaar mat karo.........keh mera jaana mushkil ho jaye......
sujal:....tumhe yaad hai kashish tumne ek dafa kaha tha keh tumhare kadam dagmaga saktein hain magar tumhari rahein nahi badleingi.........tu kyun aaj apni rah badal keh ja rahi ho.......kyun raaste mein muje akela chor ke ja rahi ho.......
kashish:.........sujal, jin rahon ko hum ek samajh rahe the, woh sirf ek bharam tha.....humari rahein uthni hi alag hain jitne huamre naseeb
sujal:......magar manzil to ek hi hai na........kashish!

kashish sujal ki taraf dekhti hai (song time......a version of wada raha...my fav!)
sujal looks at kashish aur gana back ground mein:....tu hi meri ashiqui janne maan
tuje se hai meri khushi
tu hi meri ashiqui janneman
tujse hai meri khushi
bin tere kuch nahi ab meri zindagiiiii

kashish:.tere liye hai bechain dil
dhunde tuje meri yeh nazar
chahongi tuje mein kitna sanam
tujko nahi hai uski khabar
khawbon mein tu
ankhon mein tu
dharkan mein tu
sason mein tuuu

sujal:...dekha karun mein jisse raat bhar....
tu hai wohi chandani
bin tere kuch nahi ab meri zindagii
wada raha pyaar se pyaar ka....
ab hum na honge judaa!

sujal aur kashish ek doosre ki ankhon mein kho chuke the aur ankhon se ansoo thamne ka naam nahi le rahe the........
sujal:....yahan tak ake mere pyar ko adhura chor keh mat jao
kashish:...udhara rehna to meri kismat hai
sujal:...to is kismat ko mere saath jordo kashish......yeh haath abhi bhi tumhara intezaar kar raha hai.....(he strectches his hand out towards her)....
kashish:...(still crying)....tum....(wipes her tear)...khush rehna
sujal:....meri khusi apne saath le kar ja rahi ho aur muje keh rahi ho keh mein khush rahon
kashish:...shayad yehi zindagi hai
sujal:...nahi....yeh tumhara.....(wipes his tears)......shayad mere pyaar mein koi kami thi.............(he moves aside....while kashish looks at him for the final time....and starts to walk....jab woh sujal ko cross karti hai tab achanak sujal uska haath parka leta hai
kashish:.....sujal.....haath choro
sujal doesnt speak just gives her a pyaar bhari nazar
kashish:...(she looks idhar udhar)...sujal....mein ne kaha haath choro.....
....
itne mein train ki siti (whistle) bajti hai......kashish mur ke train ki taraf dekhti hai.....
kashish:...sujal...muje jana hoga....haath choro...(par sujal ki grip bahut mazboot hai,)
sujal:.......mat......jao! (he says with tears about to drop)
kashish: (look at him.....woh sujal se dur nahi hona chahti thi...magar sujal keh saath re kar duniya bhar ki zilat apne papa ke bare mein bhi usse gawarah nahi tha.......yehi sab uski frustration ban ke samne a raha tha aur usne ghuse se sujal ki taraf dekha aur kaha............)..........KIS HAQ SE ROK RAHE HO MUJE................................................
sujal khamosh nazron se usse dekhta raha......aur phir kashish ka haath chor diya..........uske anso gawahi de rahe the keh aaj usne kashish ko nahi apni zindagi ko apne haathon se janne diya...............keh achanak.........jee haan achanak ek awaaz ati hai!

vioce:....sujal............mang bharo.............
sujal aur kashish ek dosre ko dekh rahe the aur yeh sun ke awaaz ki taraf focus huwe..................and the grand voice was of ......yes......it was veena..............jo keh ek sindor ki dibiya haath mein liye khari thi.,.....
sujal: (looks at veena and get surprised)....mama.........yeh.......
veena:......sujal....is sindor se aaj kashish ki mang bhardo............
everyone gets there......no not the passengers....lol...but tulsi, akshat, rishi and charu...............
kashish:....aunty yeh aap.............
tusli:...bus.........kashish.......ab tu kuch nahi keh gi.............sujal iski mang bharo..........
kashish:....ma....plz....aap aisa (she gets all confused)
charu:....jee bhaiya.....mang bahrein
rishi:....big b.....hum yahan apka pyaar lene ayein hain......mang bhariye
akshat:.....do it sujal!!!
ok zor dar music bajti hai................aur sujal araam araam se sindor ungli mein le kar kashish ki mang bhar deta hai.........................(taliyan.....)
kashish gets extreeeemmly shocked........
kashish: (shouts)...SUJAL............(she touches her forehead)....yeh tumne kya kiya............mein........(shez about to cry)
veena:.......tumne hi to pucha tha na kis haq se woh tuje rok raha hai........to yeh hai uska jawaab.....(kashish looks at veena)..........tumhare ..........pati.....ke haq se!
kashish looks at sujal again and then at tulsi:.....ma....
tulsi:....tuje yehi shakayat thi na keh yeh duniya , samaaj tuje kabhie apnaye ga nahi...........to aaj ............sujal ne......na sirf humare samne....par is sare samaaj (she points around at ppl standing and watching all this) keh samne tuje apnaya hai................aur yeh hum sabka faisla hai kashish......
kashish looks at the ground and closes her eyes..........
sujal:.....mein ne jo tumhari mang mein bhara woh meri liye sindor tha..........likin tum isse chahe mita sakti ho........sirf ek lal rang samajh kar.....(kashish sujal ki taraf dekhti hai)..........par humara pyaar...............(nods his head)....kabhie nahi mita paogi!....(he starts to walk when someone grabs his hand..................)

ok...i hope ab aap mein se kafi logon ki narazgi dur ho jayegi.....aur kafi logon ka muje murder karne ka plan bhi.............waise wait..kashish ne abhi haan nahi ki..........ho sakta hai woh yeh sindor waqai ek rang samajh khe mita de...............ok...rest of the story....tomorrow.........waise kal last episode hai..............parna mat bhuliye ga............Lots of love and keep commenting!

farah

hi guys....back with the final part 1.....(do naam ek jaan)

.......sujal yeh keh kar janne keh liye murta hai.....while everyone is tensed.....keh achanak someone grabs sujal's hand!
Voice:.......muje chor keh jao ge
sujal turns around (ofcourse he recoginzez the voice)...he turns around....excitement and sees kashish looking at him.....(uff wohi zalim nazrein....lol)...........
everyone seems relieved.....
charu: (hugs kashish while kashish is still holding onto sujal's hand)...di.....di...aj mein bahuuuut khush hon
kashish smiles shyly still looking at sujal and sujal too has a smile on his face............
veena touches kashish's head while tulsi kisses her on her fore-head!........
kashish aur sujal ab bhi khamosh ek dosre ko dekh rahe hotein hain!
rishi notices this:....ahem.....mom...woh....udhar chalein.......
akshat:...(abruptly) .......kyun.......
charu:...kyunki yahan..........yahan bahut garmi hai.........(she laughs )...lets go.......(they all walk aside while giggling. tulsi and veena both have tears in their eyez......akhir dono ke maan ki murad puri ho gayi!

sujal:....(after everyone leaves very strictly says)......haath choro
kashish:...woh....
sujal:...mein ne kaha haath choro kashish
kashish....feels sad and leaves his hand
sujal comes closer to her.....: pucho gi nahi kyun haath chor waya
kashish:....(gets tears in her eyez)......
sujal:....are budhu.....shaadi keh baad miyan biwi haath nahi balke ...........gale milte hain...........(he burst out laughing)
kashish: (hits him playfully)....sujal tum.......tum kabhie nahi sudhro ge......(she hits him while sujal holds her hand)...
sujal:....kashish.....sab dekh rahe hain.....
kashish: (brings sujal closer).....to dekhne do........(and hugs him tightly)...
sujal to hugs her!
thoda sa pyaar huwa hai
thoda hai baqi
thoda sa pyaar huwa hai
thoda hai baqi
hum to chaheinge tumhe.......hoooooooo
hum to chaheinge tumhe, jab talak jaan hain baqii!
rishi: (runs up to sujal aur uske kaan mein bolta hai....)....big b......public mein.........tut tut!
sujal and kashish leave each other instantly and blush....aaww!!!

veena:...rishi...gari nikalo....aaj hum apni bahu ko le kar jayeinge
tulsi:...veena jee...likin....abhi sari rasmein to hui nahi...aise kaise kashish.....
veena:....mein samjhti hon......isliye, pehle hum sab mandir jayeinge..........shaadi keh liye
rishi:mom...magar big b ki shaadi itni sadgi se.........
veena:......yeh sab isliye take phir hum kashish ko saath le ja sakein...........samjhe(he looks at rishi)
tulsi:...likin....
veena:..likin wakin kuch nahi....ap ne kaha rasmein puri karni hongi isliye shaadi abhi keh abhi hogi............
everyone agrees finally! and they go off to their ancestral mandir but on the way veena gets tears in her eyes:....
rishi puchta hai:...mom....aap ro rahin hain
veena:..bus....tere papa keh bare mein soch rahi thi, aaj sujal ki khushi mein woh shamil nahi hain.....
akshat:....mama.......uncle bhi maan jayeinge....aur phir baad mein ek grand reception rakhein ge na....sari kami puri ho jayegi!

finally they reach the mandir jahan the shaadi ceremony takes place.........aur sujal kashish aaj ek rishte mein bandh jate hain..........do naam.....jo aaj ek ho jatein hain.........!!!(after all the blessing and ruksati ka rona dhona.....the sinha sister and mother go home.....while garewal's with thier new daughter-in-law reach the garewal place......................

chetan abhi bhi pareshan tha...he didnt know whether to leave his ego behind and move forward for sujal's khushi!...........when he sees veena entering the house.............
chetan:....veena....tum agayi.......kya huwa
veena:...ayi to hon...magar akeli nahi............
vasu: acha....kis ko saath le ayi ho
veena:...(looks at chetan)......is ghar ki...............bahu ko
vasu : (gets horrified and archie who was reading a magazine drops it on the floor)
archie:....aaaaaahunty
rishi:(enter from behind).....archie.....aaaaahunty nahi.......aunty! (he mocks her) ..........aur mom aap..........woh thali waghira.....you know.....meri bhabie ayin hain.......unki nazar to uthar wayein........yahan kafi logon ki nazar lag sakti hai............
veena quickly goes and grabs the pooja things (sorry i am not really sure...bus jo filmein dekh keh sikha hai wohi hai.....lol)...........
chetan is still in a shocked pose....when veena comes to him
veena:......ghar ki izzat insaano se hoti hain.......insaano ki izzat ghar se nahi.........is ghar ki khatir aap apna beta gawane ja rahe the..........bhagwan ne apko dosra moka diya hai......ho sake to ab bhi apni galati sudhar leejiye...........(she touhces his hand and leaves to welcome kashish)..........
kashish aur sujal darwaze peh khare hote hain with akshat and rishi accompanying them.......veena nayi bahu ki nazar uthar rahi hoti hai........

vasu:.....yeh nahi hosakta............yeh yeh larki............CG this is not right!.....humare is ghar ka kya hoga........tumhara naam, status.....sab is ....is larki ki wajah se miti mein mil jaye ga............
sujal:......BUA!!
vasu:...oh sujal stop it..........yeh sab kya tamasha hai.........CG......tum kuch bolte kyun hai...........yeh najayaz larki.............
TAAAAAAAAAAPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKKK (thapar ki gunj............bhala vasu ko ab kisne mara................hmmmmmmm........chetan ne)

vasu: (shocked like anything)............CG....yeh...(she touches her cheek)
chetan:....khabar dar jo meri ghar ki izaat ko gali di to............
everyone , sujal and kashish too are surprised to see chetan speaking up for them
vasu:....yeh tum kya keh rahe ho
chetan:...theek keh raha hon...........kabse mein tumhari sikhayi hui zubaan bol raha tha......apne rishte...apni biwi.......apne beton ki khushiyan sab bholaye behta tha...........tumhari wajah se..........magar ab nahi!............jo kuch hona tha ho gaya...............yeh shaadi honi thi so ho gayi..........jab mein kuch nahi kar paya to tum kaun hoti ho yeh sab rokne wali............mere bachon ki khusiyon mein aag lagane wali.................
archie:....uncle......par sujal ki to mere saath.......aap apna wada kaise tor ........
chetan:...par tumse bhi pehle sujal aur kashish ki shaadi teh ki thi mein ne.....aur mein apna pehla wada kaise bhool sakta hon...............
(chetan walks over to kashish and sujal)....chetan:....beta...ho sake to muje maaf kar dena....
kashish:..uncle plz....yeh keh kar humein sharminda mat keejiye.........apne humein apna liya...mere liye yehi bahut hai!
sujal:....aaj lag raha hai jaise mein duniya mein akela nahi!.......thanx dad!...(they touch his feet).................
rishi:...kya ab hum andar ja saktein hain..........muje bahut kaam karne hain
akshat:...haan muje bhi.......akhir aaj sujal ki (he whispers in sujal's ear).....suhaag raat hai!!..........
sujal smiles while rishi and akshat laugh!

chetan turns towards vasu:..muje maaf kardo vasu, mera maqsad tumpe haath uthane ka nahi tha.....mein to hamesha se is ghar ki khushi aur apne bachon ki bhetari chahta tha..........
vasu looks at him but doesnt say anything..........
chetan:...meri bahu aur bete ko ashirwaad nahi dogi.......(chetan tells sujal and kashish to take ashirwaad, while rishi tries to stop sujal likin sujal still bows down and vasu puts her hand on thier head
vasu:...jeete raho......
archie is still weeping in the background!..........

chetan:...alls well that ends well........chalo sujal office chalte hain.......get ready
veena:...yeh aap kya keh rahe hain...abhi to shaadi hui hai, use apni biwi keh saath kuch waqt to guzarne do..........
chetan:.....hmmm.....chalo phir mein hi chalta hoon...(he pats sujal on the shoulder and smiles......leaves)
rishi:...hmm...kuch jalne ki boo arahi hai....kyun akshat(he looks at archie)
archie:.....mom..........lets leave this place.....at once
rishi:..yehi faisla agar kuch din pehle kar liya hota to shayad itna dukh na hota.................
archie ignores him and goes upstairs gets her bags packed......she comes down
rishi:....airport tak...........lift de don
archie:....no thanx.....we can manage...(she was hurt...ah....who cares!..lol)

akshat::.....so finally.........buri nazar aur bala tali.....
they all laugh! (wonder why...lol)
veena:...ao kashish, mein tumhe tumhara ghar dekhaon......
rishi:MOM!......big b hain na....bhabie ko sara ghar dekha deinge.....kyun big b?
sujal:...rishi! (rishi was teasing him)
akshat:...haan haan mama....ap kyun fikar karti ho, sujal hai na.....sujal kyun na bhabie ko tum pehle bedroom dekha do......
both akshat and rishi start to giggle....while veena holds thier ears
veena:...mere bete aur bahu ka mazaq ura rahe ho...
rishi:....aah mom!!......
veena:..jao sujal..kashish ko upar le jao...thodi der yeh bhi araam kar le!
sujal:...jee mama!....(he looks at kashish)...chalein!
kashish smiles and starts to walk behind sujal
akshat:....are yaar, yeh kya tareeka huwa apni biwi ko kamre mein le jane ka.......kuch style hona chahiye!!....
rishi:...yes big b!.......(woh sujal ko ishara karta hai and sujal smiles willingly, and suddenly grabs kashish by her hand aur usse gud mein utha leta hai....
kashish:...sujal....sujal...sab dekh rahe hain...neeche utharo....plz
sujal:....dekhne do (he winks at her and she shies.....while rishi and akshat clap and whistle)

ab kamre ki baatein ek short break keh baad...........yeh last part hai, i have divided it into two parts.............second part zara khaas rajeev and amna fans keh liye!....so stay tuned!!!!...........love you all and sorry for cutting the story short, dun worry i'l be back with another one shortly!....................
keep commenting
farah!

........ok.....guys...final part.......(do naam ek jaan).....

........sujal kashish ko apne kamre mein le jata hai!..........
sujal:....aur yeh hai......humara bedroom (she was still in his guodh!)
kashish:....bahut acha hai(she looks around)....par muje neeche to utaro
sujal:....nahi!....aise zaida acha hai
kashish:..sujal (hits him lightly...)....plz...
sujal:...ab tum itne pyaar se keh rahi ho to mana kaise kar sakta hoon.......yeh lo(sujal use neeche utarta hai and kashish goes around looking at the room........she is standing in front of the mirror and sujal is right beside her).......
sujal:....(looks at her in the mirror)....aaj to jaise mein ne tumhe kho diya tha...
kashish:....pyaar ki takat sab se mazbut hoti hai......aj mein ne bhi yeh jana hai!
sujal:....so (wraps his arms around her)....phir kabhie jaogi muje chor ke?
kashish:...hmm....agar tumne muje tang kiya to shayad....
sujal:...(brings her close )....aye....dobara aisa...sochna bhi nahi!
kashish: (holds her ears)...ok baba...nahi sochongi.......ab tum muje choro, mein neeche mama ke paas jati hon.....
sujal;....are....yeh kya baat hui......not done....waise bhi mama ne hi humein upar bheja hai
kashish:...araam karne keh liye...jo tum muje karne nahi doge...isliye mein neeche jati hon
kashish realese herself from sujal and walks towards the door.....when sujal grabs her hand........
sujal:...itni asani se nahi.....
kashish....matlab
sujal:...keemat deni paregi (he looks at her mischieviously)
kashish:..acha kaisi keemat............
sujal:....hmm.....let me think......
kashish smiles at him!:...sujal tum bhi na! (woh haath chor wa ke darwaze ki taraf barti hai jab sujal uska dupata pakar ta hai......
sujal:...kahan chali.....keemat?
kashish:..acah baba...bolo...kya chahiye
he walks towards her.....
sujal:....ek.....
kashish:....haaan....
sujal:...(gets closer to her while she tries to step back but sujal hold her from her waist)......ek.........
kashish:...sujal (she feels shy).....choro na plz.......
kashish apne apko chorwane ke chakar mein bed se takra ke gir jati hai...(sar peh chot ati hai aur woh apni yadash kho deti hai...hehehehehheehhe...lol.....daar gaye kya...hehehe...sorry.....)...kashish bistar peh gir jati hai aur sujal uske upar ake girta hai!
kashish:...ah....sujal...utho......
sujal:...tum bhi ajeeb ho kashish...jab dekho...."sujal choro, sujal haato, sujal utho:....kabhie pyaar se yeh bhi keh diya karo....."sujal pakro, sujal aaoo"......che!
(hez still leaning on her)...
kashish:...acha...to yeh baat hai.........(she puts her arm across his shoulders)....to sujal aao.....
sujal:...(gets surprised).....woh....(he tries to get up)
kashish:..kya huwa...(pulls his tie)....aao na.....pakro.....(then she starts to laugh and lets go of him)........pagal! (pushes him off and stands up!)......
sujal is stiil lying down and looking at her...uska har andaz sujal ko bhata tha.....kyun na ho........itna pyaar jo karta tha usse!
kashish(notices him observing her closely)...kya dekh rahe ho
sujal:....tumhari yeh hansi...........mein chahta hoon keh tumhe hamesha yunhi khush dekhon..........(he gets up)
kashish:....tumhara saath meri sab se bari khushi hai.....
they embrace with love.....aur ahem ahem......agaye kya bataon......khud hi samajh lo bhai! lol!!!.......

sujal aur kashish ek dosre ki bahon mein the jab darwaze pe knock huwa!!!
kashish: (leaves sujal).....darwaze peh koi hai....mein dekhti hon
sujal:...ab kon agaya kabab mein hadhi banne! (he gets annoyed).....
kashish goes and opens the door!
rishi:...oh akshat....kaha tha na newly wedded couples ko disturb nahi karte.....(sujal is sitting on the bed......quite relaxed while kashish feels embarrassed!)
akshat:...aur bhabie...pura ghar dekha ya abhi tak issi kamre ki checking ho rahi hai.......
kashish:....woh...(she looks at sujal who was smiling mischievously).....mein mama se milke.....
rishi: (blocks her way)....are are...abhi kahan......aap ayi idhar (he drgas her and makes her sit next to sujal)......yahan bheti ye......
sujal:.....to...tum log yahan se kab tashreef le jana pasand karo ge.....mein aur kashish zara busy the...........
akshat:...o we see!...haan haan hum bus ja rahe hain.....bus yeh puchne ayethe keh aap log kahan jana pasand kareinge?
sujal:...kahan matlab
rishi:...big b....shaadi keh baad honeymoon jaisi cheez bhi hoti hai to uske liye aap kahan jana pasand kareinge..........
kashish ab bhi chup thi......sujal points at her:....kashish se pucho....
rishi:...yes ...to bataiye...kahan ki tickets?
kashish:...um......
akshat:...australia!.....
kashish smiles......and nods.........
akshat: ok....done...likin purso tum dono ka reception hai.....ghar pe hi grand celebration hone wali hai........uske baad ki hi karwaunga.......done
sujal:....haan mere baap done....ab tum dono jao !
rishi:...itni jaldhi kya hai big b, koi imporatant kaam hai kya?.....(he laughs)
...likin hum tab tak nahi jayeinge jab tak bhabie nahi kaheingi.........
sujal:...acha....ab to bhabie ki baaton peh chale ga
rishi:...why not......to bhabie.....hum jayen kya........?
kashish:...(smiles).....
rishi and akshat move out likin rishi ko kashish peeche se bolati hai
kashish:....rishi...ek min.........tum ne kaha tum meri baat manoge
rishi just smiles in agreement
kashish:...to mein tumse kuch kahon........
rishi:...jee kahiye na......apka har order pura hoga!
kashish:....tum.....kal se...........
rishi is waiting for her to complete the sentence
kashish:...tum kal se....regualrly college jao ge , classes attend karoge....aur exams mein ache numbers se pass hoge..............bolo yeh order pura karoge mera
rishi:....ms sinha ki baat to mein hargiz nahi manu ga
kashish:....aur mrs sujal garewal ki..........apni bhabie ki bhi nahi
rishi:(looks at sujal and then kashish............aur phir ek halki si smile uske chehre peh ati hai).............mere big b ki khushiyan apse hain.......isliye apki baat talna.......impossible..........(he holds her shoulders and she smiles........)

aaj jaise kashish keh sare ghum, dhukh dur ho gayein hon..........aaj usne apni zindagi keh kayi mukaam pure kar liye............ek achi beti, ek achi bahu bane ka wada.....ek achi behen, ek achi bhabie...........apni mohabat ko naya naam de diya..............aur ek achi teacher...jisne aaj apni ane wali nasal ko bhi sahi rah dekha di!!............she felt complete today!!..................

bus phir kya tha........rishi aur akshat kamre se bahir............and door closed..........ab andar ki baatein mein kya bataon.............(lol)...

parso reception huwa jahan shehar keh sare jane mane log aye.....kashish ki colleagues bhi.....jo usse dekh dekh keh aag babula ho rahi thi!........reception keh baad honeymoon, jahan kashish aur sujal ki khati meethi larayiyan jari rahi aur pyaar bharta hi chala gaya!...........
.......rishi sudhar gaya, college bhi attend kiya...pass bhi ho gaya aur ab sujal keh saath office ka kaam sambhalta hai......................jee jee uski bhi shaadi ko gayi...........wohi apni.........charu se..........unki larayi pyaar mein kab badli...iska andaza to unhe bhi nahi huwa.....magar sujal aur kashish ne ek bar phir............do pyaar karne walon ko mil wa diya................

akshat ki kuch din baad doli uthi........i mean shaadi ho gayi........kanan keh saath.........aur woh bhi hansi khushi apni zindagi beetane lage......

veena aur chetan...apne bachon ki khushiyon mein khush the......jabke tulsi chand saal baad hi apne proffessor keh paas chali gayi!!!.(she died...)

vasu aur archie se sare rabte bandh ho gaye......kabhie kisi khushi keh moke peh woh ajati to mulaqat ho jati warna......unko no entry ka sign dekha diya tha!!!!

six years later:.......
sujal:...KAASHHHIIISH......KASSHIIIISH
kashish (comes in a hurry)...kya baat hai...mein neeche bachon ko tayar kar rahi hon......
sujal:...kashish...meri tie kahan hai?
kashish:...tum koi kaam khud bhi to kiya karo....sab mein hi kare ke don.....yeh lo (she gets him a tie)....
sujal kashish a haath thaam leta hai.....
kashish:..tumne to tie pehni hui hai...to
sujal: (pulls her towards him)....bahana....tumhe yahan bulane ka...
kashish:...sujal...koi ajaye ga.....
sujal:....koi nahi ayega.......(he closes the door).......
kashish:....sujal.....tum kabhie nahi sudhroge....(they hugs again)
sujal:....are farah...tum kya dekh rahi ho.....sharam nahi ati! (lol)..........

oh no guys sujal ne parda gira diya....agaye kya huwa yeh to mein ne bhi nahi dekha....par itna zaroor maloom hai keh aaj bhi sujal kashish.....ka naam sab ek sans mein lete hain..............ek aisi prem kahani....jo apne mokaam tak pohanchi......aur waqt keh saath saath chalti rahi!!..................

THE END!!!
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farah!

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