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Posted: 19 years ago
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Write after exams plzzz!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx guys for your wishes..now that my exams are over i'll continue here as well as my kth duiiti and pyaar keh rang!...but yes as eid is coming i'll be away for sometime... šŸ˜† ..lol..isliye next week likhongi...but anyhow..heres do naam ek jaan šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx pink....and sana! and yeah sangi fikar not main hoon na, inkar ko ikraar mein badalne ke liye

so i'll continue.....(do naam ek jaan)

Kashish: mama.......mein yeh......shaad nahi kar sakti
everyone is shocked!!!! (making the pace faster) the garewals leave without saying anything with their dissapointed faces, veena was almost crying, well so was tulsi and charu! After the garewals left.............

Tulsi: yeh tumne kyun kiya kashish?
charu: di, aap to sujal bhaiya ko itna chahti bhi hain phir bhi! kyun di!
tulsi: itne saalon baad jab yeh khushi tumhari zindagi mein ane wali thi to kyun mun phir liya usse! aisi kya wajah thi??

all these questions made kashish confused!
kashish: (shouted) thi wajah........(calms down a bit) wajah thi! aaj woh yahan aye mera haath mange, magar kal ko jab unhe mere past keh bare mein pata chalta, to kya woh log mujhe apne ghar ki bahu mante, kya woh mujhe apnate...............
tulsi and charu get puzzled!
kashish: nahi mama, woh mujhe kabhie na apnate! mein unki zindagi peh bhi buj ban jati jaise mein aapki zindagi mein hon............
tulsi: (gets angry and shouts at kashish) khabar dar jo khud ko kosa to. tum nahi mein thi tumhari zindagi ki takleefon ki wajah, balke aaj bhi hon............agar mein ne tumha yeh sab sach na bataya hota to shayad aaj yeh sab.............(she starts to sob). while kashish comes up and consoles her
kashish: mama........plz aap mat royiye...........warna aapke yeh ansoo mujhe kamzor kar deinge! mein ne jo faisla kiya woh bilkul sahi kya ........bahut soch samaj keh kiya.................aur phir aap hain na mere saath..............

charu: aur sujal bhaiya?? (with tears in her eyes)
kashish: charu tum bhi na, do mulaqaton ko pyaar nahi kehte. i 'm sure jab sujal ko mere bare mein pata chalta to woh bhi yehi karta jo mein ne aaj kiya hai............
charu: magar di (trying to explain kashish)
kashish: (wiping her tears and tulsi's too) agar magar kuch nahi, discussion bandh.............chalo ab dinner karte hain!

alls well that ends well, Sinha house mein to sab ki ankhon se nammi mit gayi thi, chahe kashish ka dil kyun na ro raha ho, usne apni mama aur charu ko sambhal liya tha.......................magar kya yehi Garewals bhi bardasht kar payeinge!!!!!!!!! kya sujal is faisle se raza mandh ho payega!

well lets see:
GAREWAL HOUSE:
veena and chetan enter the house
rishi: big b mom is here. hey mom kya huwa, batao na, papa, humari hone wali bhabie kaisi thi (winks at sujal, who was standing with crossed arms and smiling)
veena : (comes close to sujal and touches his cheeks lightly) usne inkaar kar diya (and ran into her room will weeping, chetan followed her too)
rishi: (shocked) inkaar kar diya! (he too went after veena for further inquiry )

sujal's arm dropped and slowly the smile also fadded away!
he couldnt belive what veena had just said.
sujal: yeh kasie ho sakta hai,...............kashish ne...........inkaar!!!(he had a tear in his eye, that was almost about to drop!)
song time:
tanhaiiiiiiiii tanhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
palkon peh kitne ansoo hai layiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....
........(he goes to his room and hits the study table and kicks the chair)
..(song continues....) kyun aisi umeed ki meinne jo aise na kaam hui, door banayi thi manzil to raste mein hi shaam hui,
ab kahan jaon mein,
kis ko samjaon mein,
kya mein ne chaha tha aur kyun kismat mein ayiiiiiii,
tanhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, tanhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
jaise andhero ki ho gherayiiiiiiii! (courtsey dil chahta hai!)

Subah ka uraaj nikal ata hai, magar sujal ki zindagi mein abhi bhi raat hoti hai! he gets up and without talking to anyone and without having breakfast, sits in his car and drives off.............while veena tries to call him.........but he doesnt respond

veena: hey bhagwaan, mere sujal ki rakhsa karna!
all were disturbed by the last evening event, rishi, veena and chetan too, magar koi zahir nahi karta!

COLLEGE

its monday morning, charu and kashish arrive at the college. kashish ki tang mein abhi bhi thodi si pain thi,........but she didnt want to miss the class!. is sse pehle keh kashish college ke andar step kar pati, keh achanak uske samne ek gari ake rukti hai! charu and kashish both step back.

ofcousre gari hoti hai apne sujal ki, Wah wah aaj to bahut hi dashing lag raha hai sujal. Well he gets out of the car, aur ake kashish ka haath pakar leta hai and pulls her while he walks back to his car.

kashish: (trying to churaofying her hand) sujal, mera haath choru........mein ne kaha mera haath churo!
likin uski koshsish na kamiyaab rehti hai and sujal forces her to sit inside his car and locks the door! he also sits inside and drives off.

while charu stands there watching all this happen!!!!

IN THE CAR
kashish: sujal gari roko..
sujal doesnt answer
kashish: mein ne kaha gari roko sujal, muje college jana hai
still silence
kashish: is sab ka kya matlab hai, tum kya sabit karna chahte ho.
sujal was still holding kashish's hand with one hand and drivng with the other!
sujal gaari ki breaks lagata hai!
kashish looks around! woh dono ek sunsaan si sarak par akele hote hain, koi gari nahi koi banda nahi (wah kya spot dhunda sujal!!!)

kashish: (ghabrate huwe) yeh tum muje kahan laye ho sujal? muje ghar jana hai, plz.....choro mujhe.

finally he turns towards kashish and apne sujal style mein sirf itna bola
sujal: tum ne ......inkaar kyun kiya ..........kashish???
kashish: inkaar.......mein samjhi nahi
sujal: itni bhi na samajh nahi ho.....achi tarah se janti ho mein kis bare mein baat kar raha hon. muje tumhara jawab chahiye
kashish: muje is bare mein koi baat nahi karni ( and finally releases her hand from his grip and opens the lock and gets down.

sujal too gets down: jawab dena hoga! tumhare inkaar ki wajah batani hogi......(kashish keeps walking and sujal follows her ,likin kitni door jati woh............sujal holds onto her arm once again and pulls her towards him
sujal: ek bar meri taraf dekh keh kaho keh tumne kabhie mujhse pyaar nahi kiya............ek baar meri taraf dekh ek kaho keh tum ne mera nahi bana chaha............ek bar meri taraf dekh ke kaho keh tumhe meri ankhon mein khud keh liye pyaar nazar nahi ata..............kaho kashish........KAHO!!!

kashish (thoda daar jati hai and gets tears in her eyes) mere inkaar ki wajah tum kabhie nahi samjh pao ge
sujal: yeh faisla karne wali tum kon hoti ho!
kashish: sujal plz, muje pareshaan mat karo. mein ne kaha na keh mein yeh shaadi nahi kar sakti matlab nahi kar sakti!
sujal: aur mein ne kaha na keh tum sirf meri ho, matlab meri ho!
kashish: (ab sujal ke pyaar aur zid keh age jhukna shuru ho gayi thi)
tum mere bare mein kuch nahi jante...............
sujal: janta hon
kashish looks at him surprised
sujal: sab kuch janta hon.....................aur kashish, agar tumhare inkaar ki wajah tumhara woh sach.............tumhara guzra huwa kal................tumhara past hai to tumhe apna yeh faisla badalna hoga.........................mere pyaar keh age jhukna hoga..................mera naam apne naam keh saath jorna hoga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kashish, abhi bhi sujal ki bahon mein khari thi, sujal ki baaton ko sun rahi thi aur uski pyaar ki gherayi mein koh gayi thi.................likin apne faisle keh bare mein abhi tak kuch nahi boli thi........................

kya hoga uska faisla,,,,,,,,,,,kya abhi bhi woh sujal keh pyaar ko nahi samajh payegi,,,,,,,,ya phir sujal keh pyaar ko apna le gi!!!!!!!!!! well..................next part mein zaroor bataongi!

thanx everyyyyyyyyyyone for appreciating the story!!!! hope you enjoy it......keep commenting or criticizing!!!!!
luv...farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok.........i'll contiune further (do naam ek jaan)

.....kashish yeh jaan kar hairaan hoti hai keh sujal ko sab maloom hai..........jis baat ko woh chupana chahti thi, jis baat se woh khudh ko sujal se dur kar rahi thi, uske bare mein woh pehle se hi janta tha.....

kashish: (standing very close to sujal) mujhe samajh mein nahi araha mein kya karun...........
sujal: (usko haath pakar te huwe): sirf mujh par bharosa karo aur mere pyaar par aitbaar..........mein tumhe kabhie akela nahi hone donga!!!
kashish: (looking directly into sujal's eyes and noticing his tear that were all ready to drop!) ek shart par.............
sujal: mujhe har shart manzoor hai......tumhare liye!
kashish: tum mujhe kabhie tang nahi karo ge......(slightly smilimg)
sujal: mmmmmmm....sochna parega! (he too smiles )
kashish hits him on his shoulder and sujal steps back , jaise kashish ne nahi balke Mohammad ali ne punch mara ho. hehehehe) likin kashish holds onto him and they embrace.........awwwwwww.........pehli baar!!!!!!!!! yeeeppeeeee.
kashish: i.........i....love you sujal!!!
sujal: mein hamesha se janta tha. (still hugging)
song time................taaaataaa!

kon sa mor aya zindagi keh safar mein,
baas gaya tu hi tu, ab to meri nazar mein,
dil har ek dharkan tujhko pehchaan thi hai,
meri chahat hai ab kya tu nahi janti hai
mein tujhe jaan gayiiii
hoooooooooooooooooooooooooo
tujh ko pehchan gayiiii,
phir bhi teri haan hai baqi!
thoda sa pyaar huwa hai, thoda hai baqi!!!(courtesy mainne dil tujhko diya)

sujal and kashish were still in a tight hug position keh achanak koi horn marta hai........

a man from the car: are oh laila majnu,,,,,,romance karna hai to side peh ho ke karo, yeh sarak keh beech mein kyun khare ho!
sujal and kashish get embarrassed!
sujal: sorry sir! (he asks kashish to sit in the car and he too sits in! and off they go...............kahan gaye yeh next part mein, i am in a hurry at the moment..............

to kashish aur sujal ka pyaar to ikraar mein badal gaya, ap logon ke purzoor israar peh , magar kya yeh pyaar apne anjaam tak pohanch paye ga!

well.........i'll be back!!!!
luv
farah ............(sorry pink is baar bahut chota hai, magar next time bahut lamba likhongi)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok guys........and sara. (lol) i'll now end the wait hehehehehe. here's the next part (do naam ek jaan)


...........sujal sits in the car with kashish and drive off................
kashish: (thodi age ja kar khamoshi tor ti hai) hum kahan ja rahe hain?
sujal: pata nahi
kashish: sujal...
sujal: kashish
kashish: tum phir shuru ho gaye
sujal: kya karun aadat se majboor hon....(and smiles while looking at her)
kashish: sujal, plz batao kahan ja rahe hain? mujhe class bhi attend karni hai.
sujal: kashish: kaha na.......nahi maloom
kashish: theek hai jao mein tum se baat nahi karti (she starts to look out of the window)
sujal: are...........abhi se jhagre shuru............waise kisi ne mujhe kaha hai (coming close to kashish and whispering in her ear) keh pyaar ka doosra naam takrar hai!
kashish: acha (now looking at him) janab ko pyaar keh bare mein kafi malumaat hai......kis kis ke saath pyaar ki takrar mein ulhaaj chuke ho........
sujal: kis kis ke saath matlab
kashish: matlab......tum to aise baat kar rahe the jise pyaar karne ka experience reh chuka ho............
sujal stops the car................. and freezes in one position......total silence
kashish :(thoda ghabra jati hai, she doesnt understand keh sujal ko kya huwa hai) sujal...............tum theek to hona........gari kyun ruk di.............
sujal: tum ne sahi kaha...............
kashish: kya sahi kaha?
sujal: mere pehle pyaar keh bare mein............
kashish is shocked to hear this:
kashish: yeh tum kya keh rahe ho..........pehla pyaar!!!
sujal: haan pehla pyaar...................meri mangetar................Nisha!
kashish: sujal agar yeh mazak hai to bahut bura mazak hai,,, mein tumse kabhie baat nahi karungi
sujal: nisha ne bhi kuch aisa hi kaha tha................aur phir waqai itni dur chali gayi keh mein kabhie usse baat hi nahi kar sakta!
kashish (with tears rolling down her cheek) sujal tum mazak kar rahe ho na, (holds onto his coat)
sujal nods in a no manner!
kashish: matlab mujse pehle tumhari zindagi mein...........
sujal: haan..........tum se pehle thi ek........woh bahut........
kashish: plz, sujal........ mujhe age kuch nahi sunna! (she is now weeping and pulls the door to get down when sujal holds her hand)
sujal: are are..........kahan ja rahi ho? (he is laughing like carzy) mein mazak kar raha tha!
kashish: (looks at him with surprize) MAZAK!!
sujal: haan to aur kya..............
kashish: sujal...........yeh mazak tha............how dare you (she starts to slap sujal in a playful manner) khabar dar jo dobaar is kisam ka mazak kiya to.............tum jante nahi mein kya kar bheti.................mein tumse bahut pyaar karti hon, aur yeh pyaar sirf mera hai..........samjhe............
sujal: mein to samajh gaya..................likin tum bhi dobara mere aur apne naam keh beech mein kisi ka zikaar sochne ki koshish bhi mat karna..................warna mein jeete jee mar...................(kashish puts her hand on his lips)
kashish: sujal! dobara aisa mat kehna..........
sujal cleans her tear and they hug again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

they leave each other after a while and kashish says: sujal mujhe college jana hai, wahan tak chor do ge
sujal: nahi!
kashish: sujal......plz...students wait kar rahe honge
sujal: to ek din chuti karlo..........yakeen mano students ko koi problem nahi hogi! they'll be more than happy! (winks at her)
kashish: SSUJAL!
sujal: ek bar phir se
kashish: kya ?
sujal: mera naam lena
kashish: sujal tum pagal ho..........acha ab plz mujhe college chordo. mein leave nahi le sakti kyunke mein ne abhi tak application nahi di hai.........
sujal: well...........tumhe aaplication dene ki koi zaroorat nahi
kashish: woh kyun?
sujal: aap shayad bhool rahi hai keh aap garewal khaandan ki hone wali bahu hain aur Sujal garewal ki hone wali dharam patni...................so..........
kashish: so.................
sujal: so Mrs Sujal garewal ko koi kaam karne se pehle kisi ki ijazat ya application dene ki koi zaroorat nahi! get it!
kashish: uff.......... tumhare issi attitude ne na..................
sujal: (cuts her in btw) tumhara dil le liya..........hai na!
kashish: (smiles) khush fehmi hai aapko!
sujal: aapki hi badolaat hai! (they look at each other once again with laaooooooove)
sujal: ahem (coughs) kya kashish tum bhi na.....jis special kaam keh liye nikla tha woh to bhula hi diya...........kitna bolti ho tum
kashish: han bolti bhi hon aur hansti bhi hon............tumhari tarah nahi...........MR ATTITUDE garewal!
sujal :(looks at her and smiles ) yeh lo...........khush
kashish: bahut!...........waise kya kaam karne ja rahe the tum...........
sujal: bata hon bata hon.............wait.

sujal drives the car and comes at his place..............THE GAREWAL HOUSE.......................

sujal: (before entering) kashish tum yahin khari rehna, jab tak mein na bulaon tab tak mat ana.......ok
kashish: theek hai...............

sujal goes inside where veena and chetan were already disscussing about sujal...............and how kashish ne inkaar kiya.

veena: (when she noticed sujal who was standing with his arms crossed)
sujal tum kahan chale gaye the. mein aur tumhare papa kitne pareshan the! dekho beta zindagi mein aisa kabhie kabhie hota hai.............jo hum chahte hain woh kabhie kabhie humari kismaat mein nahi hota..................isse dil chota nahi karna chahiye

sujal: (holds veena's arms) mama, mein ne zindagi mein kabhie kuch nahi khoya aur na kabhie khoun ga...................sujal garewal ne kabhie haar nahi maani,,,,,,,,,,,,meri kismaat mein ne hamesha khud banayi hai aur age bhi banaonga.............
veena puts her hand through his hair!
sujal (cont).............aur yeh hai uska saboot...................(he turns around and calls) kassshhiissh!

chetan and veena get surprized and shocked too as kashish walks in...........
veena: sujal yeh...........
sujal: aapki hone wali bahu..............(he is all smiles)
so is veena and chetan who move forward and give their ashirwaad and later hug her.
veena: mein janti thi tum ek din maan jaogi..........mere sujal ki khushi waapis le aogi! aaj mein bahut khush hon! (she then hugs both sujal and kashish............uff hoooo bahut zaida hugs ho gaye hain ..hehehehe...lol........isliye beech mein dalte hain kuch tension.........of course who else................rishi boy)
rishi: kis baat ki khushiyan manayi ja rahi hain (rishi enters inside the room, kashish as her back towards rishi)
veena: aaja.....tumhari hi kammi thi!
rishi steps forward as he steps forward.............kashish turns around to face him.............................................
rishi looks at her and gets a shock..........
rishi: TUM!
veena: tum nahi aap............tumhari hone wali bhabie!
Rishi now gets the biggest shock of his life.......................: BBHHHAABIEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

..............ok so i'll finish it here. hope you liked it. aaj zara sujal kashish ki baaton peh zaida zor tha..................hope it didnt bore you guys..........actually its quite hard to write romantic dailogues...........but i still tired! (wonder how kiran, amna, rameena and mehraal manage it.....way to go guys)

so coming up, rishi's face to face talks with kashish...........will he accept her or not....................ab yahan hai twist!!!! wait and watch...........oops.......read!!!
luv farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok so guys, the story continues.........(do naam ek jaan)

Rishi: (gets a huge shock when he gets to know that kashish is going to become his bhabie) BHHHHHAAAABIIEE!!!
yeh....ms. Sinha!
veena: haan,likin yeh ms. Sinha kya laga rakha hai, iska naam kashish hai aur tum jald se jald bhabie kehne ki aadaat dalo!
rishi: magar....mom......yeh.......(he was all confued and kashish was very well understanding his confusion!)
sujal: kya huwa rishi! kal to bara khush ho raha tha apni bhabie se milne ke liye aur abhi.......
rishi: nahi big b, aisi baat nahi hai, magar mein inko pehle se jaanta hon isliye bus thoda sa.......
Sujal was smiling while looking at kashish!
veena: acha tum jante ho isse, lo yeh to aur bhi acha hai, waise tum dono kab mile??
rishi: mama, yeh mere college mein ek.....maamuuli si teacher hain.
sujal looked at rishi when he said mamuli! but before he could say anything veena interrupted
veena: RISHI! kashish is ghar ki hone wali bahu hai aur tumhari hone wali bhabie.......(in angry tone and then she turned towards kashish, jo sar jhukae khari thi)
veena: aur phir yeh to mere sujal ki pasand hai (kashish keh sar par haath phirte huwe)......humare liye yeh to anmol hai!
sujal: mama! (whispers to her) you're the best!
veena kisses sujal on his forehead!!! while rishi still stands there in confusion!!
kashish: um... sujal....mujhe ghar tak chor do ge....
sujal: haan....chalo....mama mein kashish ko.....
veena: jao, aur dehan se chalana. (as kashish comes towards veena to take her blessings veena says)
veena: agli baar jab is ghar mein aogi to is ghar ki bahu ban kar aogi! jeeti raho!
chetan to gives her ashirwaad! sujal leaves first and kashish walks behind him. Rishi was standing by the front door! while kashish walks past him they both give each other a not-so-friendly stare!

rishi is now in his room!
rishi: ....yeh kashish.........big b keh saath.......zaroor uski koi nayi chal hai mujhe neecha dekhane ki..........mujhe is bare mein sab kuch maloom karna hoga........kahin yeh kashish Big b ka faida to nahi utha rahi..................

guys abhi keh liye itna hi.......i hope zaida boring na raha ho, likin i'll write the next part soon! keep reading guys.......ho sakta hai kuch twists a hi jayein. lol

cheers.......farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok guys i'll continue.....(do naam ek jaan)

....kashish aur sujal gari mein ake bhet the hain.
sujal: kya baat hai?
kashish: kuch nahi(she was looking tense, after seeing rishi's reaction)
sujal: mujhe pata hai.......kuch to hai.....
kashish: (looking at sujal) kya???
sujal: kya kya kya! kuch to hai......ek dum flop film hai
kashish: film? tum film ki baat kar rahe the....
sujal: haan....wohi kekta jee ki....kuch to hai!! main to teen baar theatre gaya tha.....
kashish: woh film dekhne.....?
sujal.... nahi....yeh dekhne keh abhi bhi chal rahi hai ya bandh ho gayi!
kashish: kya sujal tum bhi na! (and laughs)
sujal: kashish main bhii nahi.....main hii!
kashish: jo hukaam....ab mujhe ghar chor do ge.....
sujal: nahi!
kashish: ab nahi kyun?
sujal: nahi....ya ni maza nahi aya.....tum bina bole, bina jhagre.....meri baat kaise maan gayi!
kashsih: SUJAL! isse pehle keh mein tumse jhagrana shuru ho jaon.....tum mujhe ghar drop kar do......warna....
sujal: ...warna......(kashish ki taraf pyaar se dekhta hai.....
kashish: warna....(kashsih sujal ki taraf dekh kar thoda sharma jati hai) ......warna.....mein taxi le keh chali jaongi........jaon kya?
sujal: kya kashish......mere romantic mood ka kabara kar diya!
kashish: koi baat nahi......abhi to puri life tumhare saath hi rehna hai........bahut mokeh milnge ......romaancee keh! (she smiles)
sujal looks at her and smiles too
kashish: ab kya dekh rahe ho...
sujal: apne liye tumhara pyaar......
kashish:(cuts in) humara pyaar..........

guys,sorry again a short part.....par sach bataon to bilkul dil nahi kar raha .....after hearing about sujalfan's father.......i came in the afternoon to write the next part but i just couldnt..........abhi bhi i wrote a light part........not very interesting.....kyunkii mera aapna mood nahi tha......anywayz......life must go on......may his soul rest in peace!!!aur Allah Tallah unhe himmat aur sabar diye rakhe! Ameen......

farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
ok so i'll continue......(do naam ek jaan)

....sujal aur kashish ki pyaar ki baatein tab anjaam peh pohanchti hain jab kashish ka ghar ajata hai....
kashish: thanx sujal......main chalti hoon.
sujal: hmmm.......
kashish: bye!
sujal: hmmmm
kashish: kya huwa..bol kyun nahi rahe.....
sujal: kya bolun?
kashish: kuch bhi.....
sujal: theek hai......kashish mat jao!
kashish: sujal.....tum bhi na....yeh bhi koi baat hai
sujal: filhaal mujhe iske ilawa aur koi baat sujji hi nahi!
kashish smiles: filhaal yeh kehne ka haaq tumhare paas nahi.....pehle humara rishta to jur jane do.....phir jo dil mein aye woh kehna aur mangna!
sujal:.....rishte ka kya hai...jab dil mil chuke hai to naam bhi jur hi jayeinge......kyun??
kashish: likin main naam jurne tak intezaar karungi.....aur ab bye.....tumhe der ho rahi hogi!
kashish gets out of the car,likin uska dupatta ek bar phir se sujal keh haath keh neeche ajata hai, she turns around.....but beore she could say anything sujal bhi dekh leta hai.....
sujal: are baap re.....isse pehle keh tum chilao....tumhara dupatta galti se mere haath mein agaya tha.....
kashish: (she smiles and pulls her duppata) pagal! (kashish ghar mein chali jati hai)
sujal :(in his car) haan woh to hoon.....tumhare liye!


KASHISH"S HOUSE:
kashish enters.......tulsi is sitting really worried with charu by her side
tulsi: (kashish ko dekhte hi) kashish....tum theek to ho. itni der kahan lag gayi thi...charu bata rahi thi keh college se sujal tumhe le gaya tha......beta tum.....
kashish....(hugs tulsi) jab aap meri itni fikar karti hain to bahut acha lagta hai (and smiles while letting go off her)
tulsi: kashish.....mein kya puch rahi hon aur tum kya bol rahi ho
charu: di....bolo na....sujal bhaiya kyun le gaye the
kashish: woh.....woh.....woh sujal mujhe
tulsi: tujhe.....tujhe kya?
kashish: mama.....main ne sujal ko haan kehdi!
tulsi: kis cheez keh liye( still confused)
kashish is now embarrassed akhir apne rishte ki baat woh khud to nahi kar sakti thi apni mama se......likin not to worry....charu hai na.....sab kuch sambhalne keh liye!!!!!)
charu: What!!! DI!!!! aap sach keh rahi ho.......i cant belive this (she runs and hugs kashish) i am soooo happy for you.....
tulsi: charu....kashish....yeh sab kya hai....????/ (Gosh such a duffer....eeekkkss joking!)
charu: mama aap bhi na! kashish di ne sujal bhaiya ko shaadi keh liye haan keh di!
tulsi: kya! (in happy mood but with tears in her eyes....yani khushi keh ansoo)
tulsi: kashish....kya yeh sach hai.
kashish silently smiles.
tulsi: aaj mein bahut khush hon.......jeeti rahe! isse zaida achi baat ho hi nahi sakti thi.......likin ab tum hum se door chali jayo gi......zindagi bhar mere pyaar keh liye tarasti rahi aur aaj jab mein ne tere is pyaar ko samajha to tum mujhse door chali jao gi (she gets all emotional and hugs kashish).........

...phir kya tha.....agar is bar ankhon se ansoo bhe rahe the to dilon mein laddooo phut rahe the......all were really happy at the sinha's and at the garewal's too....except one.......yes rishi!!!!

rishi abhi bhi soch raha tha keh dal mein kuch kala hai...yeh kahin kashish ki koi chal to nahi!!!!

NEXT DAY AT COLLEGE........
.....rishi was with his freinds.....likin kuch khamosh khamosh sa tha....
friend#1: kya yaar, rishi aaj tu itna chup chup kyun hai?
friend#2: haan mein bhi yehi soch raha tha? ya huwa.....kisssi larki ne inkaar kar diya (all start to laugh and this irritates rishi even further)
rishi: (shouts) JUST SHUT-UP (he gets up and walks away)
friend#1: yaar yeh rishi ko kya huwa? itna ghusa....pehle to kabhie nahi kiya
friend#3: koi ghar mein problem hogi......koi baat nahi...lets carry on guys!

rishi was now sitting all alone jab uski nazar samne se ane wali do larkiyon peh parti hai! yes...kashish and charu........
kashish rishi ko dekhti hai jo uski taraf ghuse se dekh raha tha....she tells charu to go to the class while she goes towards rishi!

rishi and kashish were now face to face.....
kashish: rishi! woh kal shayad tumhe.....
rishi: tumhara plan kya hai?
kashish: plan? kya matlab rishi...
rishi: itni masoon nahi ho keh meri baat na samajh pao.....mere Big b ko apne pyaar mein phasa kar kya sabit karna chahti ho....keh tum mujhse jeet jaogi
kashish: (trying to convince rishi) rishi...tum galat samajh rahe ho.....mein sujal se....
rishi: (points towards kashish) naam mat lena mere Big b ka apni zabaan se.....warna.............


ooooookkkk..so warna rishi kya karega? kya kashish uski is warna ki dhamki se daar jayegi...ya daat ke samna karegi.........well.......wait till the next part arrives!
bye the way....juhi...rishi ne accident nahi kiya tha....he was there and saw everything and than ran away.....accident kissne kiya tha.....yeh ab bhi batana baqi hai!
so guys thanx a lot for your comments and plzzzz keep commenting and critizing!!!! luv it!

farah.........
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
ok ji....kiran abhi kafi hain....roz ek part parna....mein phir ek week tak ake agaye likhon gi.....tasnim you too šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
EID mubarak in advance everyone!...hope you guys have a great eid!....love farah

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