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Posted: 19 years ago
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kiran..yaar raat ko aur post karungi..tc 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dafa ho farah!!!!!!!! abhi ziada post kerney tha na!!! anyways good job
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok..guys hersz the next part to (do naam ek jaan)......uff..lagta hai log udaas ho gayein hain.....wedding hogi ya nahi....yeh to climaz mein pata chale ga....tab tak parte raho!

.................aaj sara din sujal aur kashish saath saath the.......aaj ej doosre ko nazdeek se janne ka moka mila tha...........kabhie woh larte to kabhie ek doosre ki khushi ki khatir apni khushi ko bhoola dete...........sujal and kashish were now outside the sinha house...it started to rain..both sujal and kashish stepped outside.......
kashish and sujal: (together) : i love rain........(they looked at each other and started to laugh)
sujal: chalo acha hai kahin to humari pasand mili!
kashish: (gets serious) tum waapis kab aoge?
sujal: bahut jald.......(ek dum se bijli karakti hai aur kashish sujal ke bahut pass ajati hai!)............
kashish: muje bijli ki awaaz se bahut dar lagta hai.........
sujal: main hoon na......(SRK ishtyle lol)
kashish looks up at him.......dono keh chehron par barish ki bondhe giri hui thi, kashish palat ti hai to go home....when sujal holds onto her dupatta........
sujal: is bar .....galti se nahi pakra (he pulls her towards him aur Ganna time)

hmmmm..hmmmmmm...hey hey ...aha haaaaaa
thoda saa pyaar huwa hai.....thoda hai baqi........(music.........sujal swings kashish around and pulls her again and they dance)
thoda sa pyaar huwa , thoda hai baqi
hum to dil de hi chuke
hooooooooooooooooooooo
hum to dil de hi chuke
bus teri haan hai baqii!..........(they were all wet.....when the lightning strikes again and kashish hugs sujal)!
.....(song continues)kashish....sochti hai: kon sa mor aya
zindagi ke safar mein
bus gaya tu hi tu
ab to meri nazar mein
sujal...thinks: dil ki har ek dharkan tujhko pehchanti hai
meri chahat hai ab kya
tu nahi janti hai
kashish (thinks): mein tujhe jaan gayi
hooooooooooooooooooooooooo
tujhko pehchaan gayi
bus teri haan hai baqiii!....................................(aur ek bar phir ek badal garaj te hain and sujal, kashish come out of their imagination..
kashish: (gets back and fixes her hair).....mein chalti hoon
sujal doesnt say anything....just nods........
kashish:.....(moves back)........
sujal stands near his car waiting to see her glimpse!
aur phir kashish murti hai..........aur sujal keh chehre par 100 volts ki smile ati hai, and he shouts: Main jaldhi waapis aonga kashish.....aur tumhe apne saath le jaonga!
kashish stands there , smiles and waves at him!...............

kashish andar enter hoti hai where she sees tulsi siiting on the sofa....
kashish: mama, aap jaag rahi ho?
tulsi: haan neend nahi arahi thi......
charu: bus aapka wait kar rahi thi
kashish: i am sorry...woh mein sujal keh saath.......
charu: di...woh apke hone wale woh hain....isme sorry ki kya baat hai
kashish sharma jati hai!: charuuu!
charu: kyun...kuch galat kaha (innocently).......
tulsi: kashish....beta tumhare kamre ki khirki khuldi thi mein ne shaam ko.....tum jake bandh kardo............lagta hai bahut tez toofan ane wala hai! (oh...she sounded scray)....mera maan bahut ghabra raha hai!
kashish: ma.....dont worry...ab kuch galat nahi hoga.....sab kuch theek ho gaya hai!.....mein khirki bandh karke ati hon
................yahan to tulsi ko kuch bura hone ka andesha lag raha tha.........zara Garewals keh pass chalte hain dekhne keh aisa kya hone wala hai?

Garewals! sujal enters.....everyone is sitting in the lounge
sujal: papa......woh mein ticket collect karne gaya tha,,,magar unhone kaha keh the tickets have been collected
akshat: bilkul theek kaha....kyunke mein shaam mein jake le aya tha.........tumhara aur apna ticket
sujal: hum dono ka...tum bhi arahe ho
chetan: haan...mein ne socha tumhe bhi company ho jayegi
sujal: excellent!
veena: mein to aabhi kehti hon...yeh sab kaam baad mein bhi ho sakte hain, shaadi zaida zaroori hai
vasu: oh veena! kaisi baatein kar rahi ho.....business is business aur phir CG kabhie ghate ka soda nahi karega...........kyun CG
Chetan: haan...vasu sahi keh rahi hai........aur plz veena is bare mein ab muje koi baat nahi karni!...........(both CG and vasu leave)
veena: yeh kabhie meri baat nahi samajh te!....(she too leaves while sujal wants to console her likin sujal aur veena keh beech mein koi ajata hai....jee....archie)
archie: are ruko sujal...kahan ja rahe ho
sujal: woh.....mein
archie: yeh woh choro.....kal tum ja rahe ho na..............i'll miss you (tries to touch his wet hair)
sujal (gets back).....really.......very good
rishi aur akshat wahan khare hansa shuru ho jate hain! while sujal leaves.......
archie: what was soo funny, rishi!
rishi: ......you're asking me............tum jab bhi Big b keh paas ati ho....everything seems funny!
archie: ......whatever......(she too leaves)......................

.....Next day. sujal and akshat go to the airport...sujal tries to call kashish magar cell is off...(some how)...........khair they get on the plane and leave for america..............

back at Garewal house:
chetan: veena.....aaj hum tulsi jee keh yahan jayenge
veena: aaj?
chetan: haan....kuch zaroori baat karni hai
veena: magar, char din baad to shaadi hai, ab kya baat karni hai
chetan: mein ne kaha na ek baat hai........
veena: magar aisi kya baat ho sakti hai,,....muje bhi bataiye..............
chetan:....woh....mein......mujhe kuch janna hai unke bare mein
veena: wohi to puch rahi hon
chetan gets annoyed!
vasu: oh...veena......jab chetan keh raha hai keh ek zaroori baat hai to kyun bar bar tang kar rahi ho..........hum sab aaj shaam ko wahan jayenge...........wahan pohanch keh tumhe khudhi pata chal jayega.........

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sujal and akshat in the plane:
akshat: kya sujal....bahut chup chup ho?
sujal: nahi...bus woh
akshat: kisi ki yaad sata rahi hai
sujal: (looks and him and smiles) ate waqt usse baat nahi ho payi
akshat : to jake kar lena....kon sa tum hamesha keh liye usse dur ho rahe ho...
sujal: akshat........kashish ko sujal se koi dur nahi kar sakta.........
akshat: sujal.....i didnt mean....
sujal: its ok............kya karun....bahut pyaar karta hon usse
akshat:.....aur is pyaar ko kabhie kisi ki nazar na lage!....(he puts a hand on sujal's shoulder)

ok guys,,,,,,abhi keh liye itna...........coming up....kya sujal kashish apne is pyaar ko archie , vasu ya chetan ki nazar se bacha payenge..............ya yeh teen din ki judai unke rishte ko hamesha keh liye tor degi...............huhuha ha............agaye agaye dekhiye hota hai kya............................

keep commenting guys..love.............Farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok...next part......(do naam ek jaan)

................akshat and sujal were on their way to america.....while chetan, vasu, archie and veena were all ready to drop at the sinha residence!

chetan: veena. tum ne bata diya tha ne keh hum arahe hain
veena: jee!......
just then rishi enters.......
rishi: hiiii...aap log kahin ja rahe hain
archie: haan (arrogantly)
rishi: ......mom...kahan ja rahe hain?
veena: hum log kashish keh ghar ja rahe hain.......tumhare papa ne kuch zarorri baat karni hai!
rishi: oh great......mein bhi chalta hoon.......wait for two sec......i'll just change!
vasu: rishiii...darling......koi zaroorat nahi hai tumhare ane ki........tum araam karo, jab tak hum waapis bhi ajayenge...........
rishi: thanx but no thanx......i am coming...(rishi apne kamre ki taraf jata hai when CG Speaks)
chetan: rishi........koi zaroorat nahi hai,......sirf hum log hi jayenge....tum ghar mein raho!
rishi: magar dad....i.....
chetan: no....means no!
veena feels upset....and rishi feels let down.....while vasu and archie pass an evil smile at rishi! They all leave except rishi........
rishi (to himself).....dad ne aise kyun behave kiya.........kahin kuch......i cant trust vasu aunty and that archie!...........................
likin rishi phir bhi kuch kar nahi pata.......he goes to his room!

in the plane.....
akshat: aur kitni dair hai sujal
sujal: abhi to bahut dair hai......tension kyun le raha hai...pohnach jayegein...........
akshat: meri tabiyat theek nahi hai....muje jahaz mein waise bhi chakar ate hain......aur........
sujal: saaf saaf keh na daar ta hai
akshat: nahi....nahi ...mein kahan darta hon.....haan bus unchayi se thora sa gabrata hon
sujal: (feels like teasing him) akshat...soch yaar hum kitni unchayi peh hain.....
akshat takes a deep breath....
sujal: agar abhi jahaz ko kuch ho jaye to.....
akshat: sujal...shut up yaar! kaisi baatein kar rahe ho
sujal: nahi...matlab...soch agar pilot ko neend a jaye aur jahaz bekaboo ho jaye.....hum 35,000 feet ki bulandi se neeche gire......parachute na khule....aur hum log seedah neeche se waapis (points up to the sky)...........
akshat: sujal....BUS! ab kuch bola na to bahut bura hoga
sujal starts to laugh: ......tu bhi na akshat....ek dum darpok hai!......ab mein to laga hoon sone.....tum jagte raho aur dekhte raho keh kahin pilot so na jaye!
sujal goes to sleep while akshat stays awake throughout the flight!..............(bara darpok hai)................

the garewals arrive at the sinha's...............tulsi ne sab tayariyan kar rakhi hain......khane peene ka intezam bhi bahut acha hai...aur ghar ek dum saaf sutra....like a doll house!...........kashish aur charu are both at home...likin upar kamre mein hoti hain! the door bell rings
DING DONG!! (lol....)
charu (runs down and opens the door)......namaste....ayi na....mama, apka hi intezar kar rahi thi
CG and vasu enter in a stiff manner, while veena gives blessings to charu....aur archie, wohi apna attitude nak peh rakhe huwe andar ati hai!

tulsi: jee namaste...ayi na....bhetiye.....
veena: kaisi hain aap? sorry apko ek dum se tang kiya......aap log to tayariyon mein bahut masroof honge
tusli: kaisi baatein kar rahi hai...yeh aapka hi to ghar hai...........waise aap bata rahi thi keh koi zaroori baat karni hai...........
veena: haan....woh.....yeh..........(she points at CG)......
chetan:(interruptes)...jee....veena ne bilkul sahi kaha tha.......mein ne hi aapse kuch baat karni thi.............ya yun kaheyi keh kuch maloom karna tha!
tulsi:....jee......(just then kashish enters)
veena: are kashish beta...kaisi ho tum? jeeti raho (as she puts her hand on kashish's head)
kashish: jee achi hoon....
archie: ab kya acha aur kya bura....abhi pata chal jayega.......(she mumbles but kashish hears this and looks at archie)
kashish: kuch kaha tumne archie
archie: nahi....mein to bus yeh keh rahi thi keh sujal k bina kashish kaisi hogi (she taunts however veena and tulsi pass a smile to each other...........and kashish sits down)
tulsi: charu kuch khane ko layo.........
charu: jee........
chetan: nahi koi zaroorat nahi hai is sab ki.........hum yahan aap se baat karne ayen hain....ek bahut khaas masle par
tulsi: kaisa khaas masla......bataiye....
chetan: um.....woh...........(he feels uncomfortable)
vasu: CG.....i'll say it! hum yahan sach janne ayen hain...
tulsi: (feels nervous) sach....kaisa sach?
vasu: yehi keh....................kya kashish........................aapki...........apni beti hai....................(loud music)
veena: vasu! yeh kya behuda sawaal hai! (she tries to snub her but chetan interferes)
chetan: veena...is si sawaal peh humare ghar ki izaat tiki hui hai..........jawab deejiye tulsi jee.....kya kashish apki apni beti hai.........yaa....
tulsi:(gets tensed.....aur kashish ki ankhon mein ansoo a jate hain)
kashish: uncle......yeh aap kya.....
chetan: plz......mere liye yeh janna bahut zaroori hai!..........boliye ...kya yeh sach hai ya nahi!
tulsi: kashish meri................kashish meri apni beti hai!
vasu: JHOOT......dekha CG..........yeh log ab bhi tumhe dhoke mein rakhna chahte hain
veena: vasu.....yeh sab kya ho raha hai....app hi muje bataein.....aise sawaal kyun puch rahe hain...................
vasu: oh veena.....tum bahut bholi ho....................aur sach yeh kya bataye gi........sach kisi se chupta nahi.............
tusli: vasu jee....aap ko koi galat fehmi hui hai
vasu: galat fehmi.................aur muje...........jee nahi tulsi jee......galat fehmi mein to aap jee rahi hain...................apne pati ki is najayaz aulaad ko apna kehne se yeh aapki nahi ho jayegi!
(kashish was now in tears....she didnt know what to do...........yahan uski wajah se uske ma aur papa ....dono ki izzat par sawaal kiye ja rahe the.......jiski wajah woh khud ko samajh rahi thi!)
charu: aunty aap di keh bare mein aisa................
vasu: ha.............di................tum logon ne itni bari sachayi chupayi humse aur chahte ho keh hum sawal bhi na karein...................dekha CG......yeh middle class logon ki mentality!
veena to shock mein chali gayi thi, even CG was standing in a frozen position.......
Chetan: itni bari baat...............apne humse ..........chupayi kyun?
tulsi: hum ne kuch nahi chupaya............sujal is bare mein sab kuch janta..................
chetan:...............main aur kuch nahi suna chahta..................
tusli: .....likin is mein kashish ki koi galti nahi hai........woh to is sab keh bare mein janti bhi nahi thi...........woh sirf meri beti hai....aur..............(almost begging.....veena ko yeh sab dekh keh bahut bura lag raha tha.....magar vasu aur chetan keh hote woh kya bolti......she was holding onto tulsi)
vasu: tumhare kehne se woh tumhari nahi ho jayegi.........tumhe kya laga tha keh barson pehle apne pati ka kiya huwa paap tum dho do gi...............galat..................is duniya mein ki gayi bhool ka anjaam bhi issi duniya mein milta hai! ...........................(she points at kashish who was standing helplessly)...............aur is larki ka rishta tum ne humare khandaan mein jorna chaha...............jis ka khud ka wajoob hi ek jhoot hai!...........jaise iski ma ne tumhare ghar ko torna chaha waise hi yeh bhi gir sakti hai, iski kya gurantee hai ...........(tulsi, veena and kashish all feel assulted....even charu was crying now........bus ek archie thi jis ke chehre par muskurahat thi)
chetan: vasu...bus karo.....ab chalte hain....sab kuch janne keh baad humein inse koi rishta nahi rakhna................
tusli:(after hearing this almost begs infront of CG)...aisa mat kahiye bhai sahib.........meri beti sujal se bahut pyaar karti hai...yeh .........isse mein ne pala hai...yeh meri beti hai.....mera yakeen keejiye..............
vasu: (tries to pull tulsi back) oh stop this natak.................kashish ek bhool ka natija hai.................aur hum isse bhol kar bhi apne ghar nahi le ja sakta...........yeh to ek najayazzzzzzzz (TEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSHHHH)
aap soch rahe honge...yeh kya awaaz thi.....well any guesses..........jee yeh woh zor dar thapar tha jo tulsi ne vasu keh mun par mara, jis se vasu keh sirf gaal hi laal nahi huwa.......balke pura pura skeletonish jism bhi hil ke reh gaya!
everyone was shocked.....kashish bhi!
Tulsi: BUS !! (the voice echoed....itni zor se boli tulsi)....>EK AUR LAFZ NAHI MERI BETI YA PATI KEH BARE MEIN.....................(points at CG..) .......APP RISHTA KYA TOREINGE..................AAJ ABHI ISSI WAQT.....MEIN YEH RISHTA YAHIN KHATAM KARTI HON.........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!( is baar extremely loud music!!!)

ok...this was for today...coming up......tulsi mayia ka zor daar lecture to cg and vasu!.....kashish keh dil keh tot ne ki awaaz kya sujal tak pohanch payegi!...kya itni dooriyon keh baad bhi sujal apne pyar ko hasil kar payega....................well lots more coming up!
take care aur udaas mat hona.......jo hota hai ache keh liye hota hai!.............chill.........love ...........farah

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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok...so the next part!! (do naam ek jaan)

..............everyone was shocked after hearing tulsi....woh bhi itna uncha uncha!

charu: mama, yeh....yeh aap kya keh rahi hain?

tulsi: wohi keh rahi hon jo pehle keh dena chahiye tha.....take us waqt hi yeh log yahan se chale jate............himmat na banti mere pati ya meri beti keh bare mein kuch kehne ki!

veena: tulsi jee......plz.....hum araam se bhi baat ko samabhal saktein hain.......

tulsi: koi zarorat nahi hai ab is sab ki.....baat to bahut pehle hi bighar chuki hai,.........ab agar kuch ho sakta hai to woh hai is rishte ka khatam ho jana!

vasu:.....tumhare kehne se kya hota hai....yeh larki is kabil hi nahi keh garewal khandaan ki bahu ban sake............

tulsi: BUS! tumhare keh dene se kashish ki kabilyat mein koi fark nahi parta......meri beti kis kabil hai yeh mein achi tarah se janti hon!...........likin tum log is kabil nahi keh meri beti ko apna keh sako!

vasu: what do you mean......

tulsi: i will tell you what i mean...........tumhe lagta hai tum yahan khare ho kar meri beti peh kichar uchalo ge aur mein sunti rahon.............tum mere pati ko badmaan karogi aur mein sunti rahongi............yeh tumhari galat fehmi hai!.........haan kashish meri beti nahi hai............nahi diya mein ne usse janaam...........magar sirf janaam dene wali ma to ma nahi hoti, palne wali ma bhi unti hi ma hoti hai!.............kashish mein meri sikhayi hui tarbeeyat hai................WOH MERI BETI HAI! likin aap log kaise samjhein ge yeh baat, apke liye to rishton ko certificate ki zaroorat hoti hai....pyaar aur jasbatoon ki nahi!!............aap log kya jhoot layeinge meri kashish keh wajood ko.........joothe to aap log hain.......matlabi to aap log hain........dokhebaaz to aap log hain....banawati to aap log hain........!

kashish (beech mein tulsi ko rokne ki koshish karti hai)...bus ma...bus karo....plz......

tulsi: dekha! bahut ahsaan hota hai kisi aur peh ungli uthna....... magar sab kuch sun keh chup chap sehna har ek keh bus ki baat nahi........yeh hai meri kashish!!!! (ajj hi chup ho gayi...sujal keh samne to bari zabaan chalti hai .hehehe)

tulsi: aap log is layak hi nahi keh meri beti aapke ghar jaye...........apne shayad apne bete ko sahi se nahi janna.....magar mein ne apni beti ki ankhon se uske dil ka haal jan sakti hoon..............mere is faisle se chahe uski ankhon mein ansoo ajayein,.........magar mere ansoon ke liye woh khud ko mita sakti hai................uske dil mein chahe sujal basta ho..............woh apni dharkon ko mere liye thaam sakti hai!.................uski haathon ki mehndi beshaak sujal ko pukare.........woh us mehndi keh rang jo jhutla sakti hai...............yeh hai meri beti.............woh khud se zaida apne rishton ko chahti hai aur aap kehte hain keh woh......naja.................(tulsi sofe peh bhet keh rona shuru ho gayi! while kashish consoled her).................

chetan: chalo veena..........ab aur kuch suna baqi nahi raha!

veena: waqai......ab kuch nahi bacha aur na hi bache ga (she looked at chetan with anger and dissapointment and leaves)

after the garewals leave......................

tulsi (holds onto kashish's hand) muje maaf kardo.................mein tumhare pyaar ko nahi bacha payi..............tumhari khushiyan...tumhare spane ....sab kuch................

kashish: ma, bus!( she too was crying but wiped her tears) mujh pe bharosa hai na aapko...............tu phir kyun aise...............aap sahi kehti hain....jahan mere papa ki izaat nahi wahan mein kabhie khush nahi reh pati!

tulsi:....muje maaf.....(trembles)

kashish: aapki koi galti nahi hai ma!

charu: mama plz....sambhalo khud ko.....

tulsi:......kal tak jis ki bidayi keh sapne dekh rahi thi aaj usko apne hi haathon itna bara dukh de diya..................

kashish: dukh ma.............mere liye aap se bar kar koi nahi...............aapki khushi ki khatir mein kuch bhi kar sakti hoon.........

tulsi:.....sujal................

kashish:.....sujal..................samajh longi keh woh kabhie muje mila hi
nahi! ............................bhool jaongi ...............sujal.............sujal ko!...(she went upstairs)


PLANE.......
sujal ek dum ghabra keh utha.................

akshat: kiya huwa?

sujal: kuch nahi.....................bus dil kuch bhari sa ho raha hai...........kahin kuch bura...................(he was tensed and confused)

akshat: saaf saaf bol na tuje daar lag raha hai...........(he laughed)

sujal: shut up............muje dar nahi lagta...................bus............bahut bura.........

akshat: kuch nahi hone wala.............waise bhi hum land karne wale hain.........tum ab seedhe ho jao

sujal: hmmmmmmmmm........(but was still tensed..he layed his head back on the seat aur ahista se bola)...........i ..........love you ......kashish!

kashish:(in her room)....................shayad yeh pyaar ab meri kismat mein nahi .........sujal!...............(she started to cry!!!)


ok abhi keh liye itna hi...............coming up....garewals reach at home....rishi gets to know about this...........whats his reactions...............sujal tires to contact kashish............will he be able to?....................kya kashish keh liye sujal ko bholna uthna hi ahsaan hoga.......jitna usne kaha tha............lots more coming up!
take care....love..............farah!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
ok....the story goes on...(do naam ek jaan)

.........udhar sujal apni ane wali zindagi keh khuwaab jur raha to to idhar kashish ka sab kuch ek hi pal mein bikhar chuka tha!

the garewals reach their residence!
rishi was sitting in the lounge chatting on the mobile with a friend!
rishi: yaar...i'll call you later!..................mom...you're back

veena looked tensed, while chetan was expressionless (as alwayz) .
Vasu and archie were more than satisfied!

rishi: mom.....kya huwa..............? (he noticed something was wrong)

veena looked at him ...she had tears in her eyes...: .....jo nahi hona tha....woh ho gaya..........(while saying this she goes in her room)

rishi:....nahi hona tha.........woh ho gaya.........dad.......whats all this

archie: mein bata ti hon!

rishi crosses his arms and looks at her weirdly!

archie: tumhare big b ka rishta tor keh arahe hain!!!!!!

rishi releases his arm........he gets a set back!
rishi: WHAT!!!!.........apni faltto baatien apne paas rakho...........

archie: yeh faltoo baat nahi hai balke tumhare dad ka faisla hai!

rishi: (turns towards chetan) dad............yeh sab.............

chetan (sighs)...archie sahi keh rahi hai!..................is bare mein muje ab koi baat nahi karni..................(he too leaves)

rishi: ...............but dad......................(rishi hits the sofa)........yeh sab tum logon ki wajah se huwa hai! (he points at vasu and archie....while they still keep smiling)

vasu: rishi.....oh rishi..................yeh sab to hona hi tha............woh larki is layak hi nahi keh is ghar mein a sake..............aur.........

rishi: (raises his hand in the air).....plz.............muje aapse is bare mein koi baat nahi karni.................. (he walks towards veena's room but suddenly turns back)..................likin apne jo kiya woh acha nahi kiya.........mere big b ko nuksaan pohchane ke bare mein sochna bhi mat................warna mein aapke saath kya karun ga................yeh mein bhi nahi janta!!!! (ooooooooo)

archie: mom...apne kashish jaisi dewaar ko gira keh aaj sabit kar diya keh............. your the best
vasu: .........i know darlin!......so lets partyyyyyyyyy!!

rishi goes upto veena's room
rishi: mom...yeh archie kya keh rahi hai....big b ki shaadi tordi..........i mean....yeh....
veena: sahi keh rahi hai! (wipes her tears off)
rishi:....................yeh kaise........aap thi na wahan.....roka kyun nahi aapne

veena:.......kuch nahi kar payi.....apne sujal ke liye kuch nahi kar payi............rishi (she goes bezerk).....sujal....sujal ko pata chala to.........woh tot jaye ga...............rishi.....(clings on his shirt)...........woh muje kabhie maaf nahi karega..................mein.......mein................mein kya karun...........sujal..................(she is crying desperatly)

rishi :(looking at her condition gets worried ).....mom.....mom relax.........kuch nahi hoga..............mein hoon na! mein big b ko phone karta hon...........unko yahan bulata hon............yeh shaadi hogi mom...........plz....samabhaliye khudko!..................(rishi goes out in a huff)


America! .......sujal and akshat have landed safely and now checked in a hotel...where the meeting is taking place!
they are in the same room...........single single beds (hehehehe)
sujal gets his cell out and dials a number...............hmm............kashish ko...aur kisko!
sujal:...oh shit!.....
akshat: kya huwa?
sujal: yar iski to battery khatam ho gayi hai!........charger..............woh to mein ne rakha nahi shayad! ...........damn it!
akshat:....tu ne charger nahi rakha........ho kya gaya hai tuje............chal le mere cell se call kar le! (he hands him over his cell phone).......

sujal...dials the number:.............: Great! (is he now totally annoyed).....yeh kya baqwaas hai yaar!
akshat: ab kya huwa?
sujal: tere paas credit nahi hai!................
akshat:....oh......woh......jab tu room ki keys le raha tha tab mein..............woh......kanan se baat................shayad isiliye..........
sujal: (uske kan khare hote hain...) kya!!!!! kanan?....matlab...........wohi wali.....
akshat: (sharmate huwe) haan......wohi..........
sujal:........(forgets his anger and turns towards akshat)....tera matlab hai keh abhi tak tu ussi keh saath hai............kahin sach much mein pyaar viyar to nahi.............
akshat:...........ab yeh pyaar viyaar to tera kaam hai.......bus mein yeh janta hon keh muje bahuuut achi lagti hai! mera khayal rakhti hai aur teri shaadi keh baad mein mama se apni shaadi ki baat bhi karunga......!

sujal:....ha......i dont belive this......Mr akshat shergill ko larki pasand agayi hai.......aur muje batana zaroori nahi samjha! kyun be! (pushes him)

akshat: yaar..........bus! kya bataon uske bare mein! (he lays back on the bed).............woh itni bhooli...masoom...........
sujal: (to lies on his bed)...hmmmmmmm. (likin apne khayalon mein kho jata hai)
akshat: uski ankhein.....(gets flashes of her eyes)
sujal: itni masoom............(he's thinking of someone else....)
akshat: woh jab bolti hai to.........
sujal: kuch aur sunayi nahi deta
akshat:..............woh hansti hai to.........
sujal: ...pholoon ki barish hui ho jaise........
akshat:........uska pyaar se muje pukarna.........
sujal:..............haaaa...........waqt thaam jata hai!
akshat:...........samne ati hai to..........
sujal:.....dil ki dharkan tez ho jati hai..............
akshat:....haan..........aisi hai meri ............
sujal:....................kasshiish!
akshat: (sits up immediately)....kya!!.........kashish.....idiot mein kanan ki baat kar raha tha.........
sujal:........oh......mein to kashish keh bare mein...........

akshat: tu to pyaar mein sach much pagal ho gaya hai!.........chal ab yeh baatein chor aur meeting ke liye tayar ho jao!....warna hum dono yahan majnu ki tarah behte rahein ge aur meeting khatam ho jayegi...........

sujal: (instant reaction)...........ae......majnu nahi..........usse uska pyaar kabhie nahi mila...........mein to sujal hi theek hoon.........kaam se kaam apne pyaar ko paa to sakon ga! (he had a confidence in his eyes)

akshat:.......as you wish.....mr. garewal....ab khayalon ki duniya se bahir ayen aur ready ho jayen!.................likin kashish se baat to hui nahi na tumhari.........
sujal:haan...............ake ke room keh phone se karlunga.....
akshat: ok

both akshat and sujal attend the meeting.........and come out very satisfied!.........likin kya yeh satisfaction bar karar rahe gi????

sujal enters the room........akshat goes to the toilet immediately!
sujal:...akshat............yaar sambhal keh...room mein ek aur insaan bhi hai tumhare siva............kahin aisa zulm na kar dena keh kal mein zinda hi na bachon.............
akshat: (from the toilet) shut up man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sujal has a good laugh: hmmmmmmm....kashish ko phone karta hoon........(he gets the international call thingy and dials kashish's number!......kabhie apne ghar pe bhi kar liya karo sujal...heheh)

tring...tring....tring.........
kashish: hello!
sujal:/........kashish...........mein sujal.....kaisi ho tum!
kashish is a little shocked but keeps quiet.........
sujal: hmmmmmmmmm....fazool sawal tha...mere bighar kaise theek ho sakti ho.............hello!
kashish still doesnt reply....she gets tears in her eyes!
sujal: hello....kashish.......ok baba...i am sorry......itni der baad phone kiya isliye naraz ho.........acha......aisi galti dobara nahi hogi.........bus do din tak waapis aonga...aur phir kabhie tumse dur nahi jaonga.............happy!!!

tusli....who was sitting near by asks:....kaun hai kashish......????/
kashish: (comes back to reality and says while holding onto the phone)......koi nahi mama..............shayad..........kisi ko wrong number mil gaya!.........(she hangs up)

sujal: hello............kashish.......kashish..............(he keeps calling her name likin bahut der ho chuki thi..he too puts the reciever down......confused)

akshat: (calls again)........kya huwa.....devdas ko paru mili ya nahi..........

sujal; shut up........usne phone rakh diya........pata nahi................dobara karon.......
akshat: haan haan kar le.....baap ka maal hai! ( giggles)

sujal phir se reciever utha tha hai jab akshat ka without credit....good for nothing..........mobile baj ta hai.....
akshat: hey sujal......yaar plz..phone uthana......dekh shayad kanan ka hoga!
sujal puts down the reciever and goes picks up akshat's cell........

sujal: helloo....(waiting to her a girls voice)
instead a male voice:........akshat?
sujal: uh....nahi....mein sujal...uska doost
voice: big b aap (oh so its rishi)
sujal: rishi.....?
rishi: acha huwa aap mil gaye big b......aapka phone kyun bandh hai....
sujal: haan woh battery khatam ho gayi hai....tum batao....sab theek hai na!
rishi: ....big b.....yahan kuch theek nahi hai...........sab kuch.......(his voice is trembling)
sujal: (worried)....kya huwa rishi....saaf saaf batao............mama theek hain na.......
rishi: .....big b....aap plz yahan jaldhi waapis ajayein.......
sujal: RISHI......HUWA KYA HAI........?????
rishi: woh....big b.....woh.........kashish bhabie.............(ti ti ti ti............yani line dropped)
sujal: hello, rishi.............hello! ( too late )

someone snatches the phone from rishi........
rishi: AAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok...so the part ends here.................so coming up: ..kis ne phone cheena..........????......................sujal comes back and the truth hits him.......will he be able to bare the pain....the lose........will he fight.....ya samjhota kar le ga................lets see.....................keep commenting!.......take care
love...........
farah!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
thought of posting the other part today too......so here it cont. (do naam ek jaan)

.............rishi:....AAP!
vasu: haan mein.........yeh tum kya kar rahe ho rishi......its not done....
rishi: (furious) what the hell! give me the phone back warna mein..(he raise his hand at her in anger)
chetan: RISHI!!!!
rishi: (drops his hand).....dad...aap jo kar rahe hain woh sahi nahi
chetan: aur jo tum kar rahe ho woh?
rishi: mein ne kya kiya?
chetan: is tarah baat karte hain apni bua se
rishi: oh forget it.....yeh to bua keh lane keh layak hi nahi!
chetan: riishhiiii behave youself!...i will not tolerate it
rishi: .......no dad.........i will tolerate it NOW!
archie: rishi. yeh kya tareeka hai uncle se baat karne ka (oh....what and angel ehehehehe)
rishi: you just stay.............(points his finger at her)
chetan: tameez se baat karo rishi.........
rishi: kyun dad.............kyun.....yeh log hote kaun hain humare ghar mein interfere karne wale...............big b se unka pyar unki zindagi cheen ne wale.............aur aap bhi inki baaton mein agaye.............WHO THE HELL ARE THEY?????????????
chetan:....................mein bata hon.........(he goes towards archie)....yeh.............(he holds her hand lightly) yeh tumhari.............hone wali bhabie hai!
Shocking music.
chetan: samajh mein ayi baat!..............(he leaves instantly)

rishi is standing there with a great jhatka!
archie: samajh mein ayi ya theek se samjhaon......................ab mein tumhari hone wali bhabie hon........yani tumhari big b ki................would be wife! understand!
rishi:...................kabhie nahi............apna saman bandne ki tayari karlo.............warna bad mein jute pehne ka waqt bhi nahi donga!
archie: oh really...........ab bhi itna garoor............dekhte hain..............abhi to mein jati hon.....aaj bahut dinno baad achi neend jo ayegi!...............(she yawns)
vasu: good night young fella! (she leaves too)..........................

Akshat bahir ata hai and sees sujal tensed............
akshat: kya baat hai?...kon tha?
sujal: rishi............yaar......lagta hai humein waapis jana hoga
akshat: likin kal to confrence hai
sujal:......yes....but.......muje samjh nahi araha.....wahan kuch problem hai yaar....warna rishi muje yun phone nahi karta.............aur kashish ne bhi baat nahi kii............i dont know
akshat: ok...tu relax kar....mein kal ki flight ka pata karta hon.....
sujal: hmmmmm.
akshat, calls up the airline aur pata kar wata hai about the next flight! : ........ok.....thats fine.....humari original booking cancel kar wake is flight peh humein do seats de deejeeye........yes mr. akshat shergill and mr. sujal garewal!
........................thanx!
akshat: sujal.....yaar kal shaam ki flight hui hai...subah jagah nahi thi filght mein.............ab araam karo..........kal subha confrence bhi khatam ho jayegi................phir koi problem nahi hogi!
sujal: (puts his hand on akshat's shoulder).....i hope so!........................

yeh raat kashish aur sujal keh liye bahut lambi thi, actually,,,, sujal keh yahan raat thi aur kashish keh yahan din.....jo keh kisi raat se kaam bhi nahi tha!
kashish apni khirki keh pas jati hai and opens it! she sees sujal standing there.....
kashish: (apna haath agaye ki taraf bharate huwe) sssujal....(but he vanishes,.............woh window keh saath lean karti hai)..............kya bus yehi tak tha humara saath...............(song time)
suna suna...lamha lamha.....meri raaheein tanha tanha
ake muje, tum tham lo
manzil teri............dekhe raasta.........
mur keh zara, ab dekh loooo
aisa milan..........phir ho na ho.........sab kuch mera ...tum hi to ho ho ho!
(one side of the window shuts down........yahan ek pat bandh hota hai to sujal ke room ki khirki achanak khul jati hai............wow jadooooo! lol).........
sujal walks up to the window and tries to close it when he sees kashish outside!..............(ek aur jadoo).......
sujal: kaashishhhh!......(too late....she too dissapears......song continues!)
sujal: beh pana pyaar hai ajaaa
tera intezaar hai aja
hooooo
behpana pyaar hai aaa jaaa
tera intezaar hai ajaa!................sujal's get tears in his eyes!....he wipes them immediately............
sujal: kyun....tumhari itni yaad arahi hai...........baat kyun nahi ki mujse kashish.............tumhari khamoshi jo mujse kehna cha rahi thi woh aaj mein kyun nahi samajh pa raha......................kahin.....humare beech keh fasle.......................nahi.......aisa nahi ho sakta..........kashish tumhe mujse dur koi nahi kar sakta...............yeh sujal khudh haar sakta hai magar apne pyaar ki har kabhie nahi seh sakta....................mein araha hoon kashish.............mein araha hon......(closes the window properly)

kashish:............kaash keh waqt nikal ne se pehle tum ajate..........kaash humare sapne bikharen se pehle tum ajate............kaash mere ansoon keh girne se pehle tum ajate..............kaash...............kaash sujal ................kaash!...(she breaks into tears)

there was somebody standing outside listening to kashish's lists of kaash!!!......kon hai woh............????............kya sujal apna waada nibah payega, kya woh kashish ka saath pa paye ga.............ya..........is baar sujal ki nahi uske pyaar ki har hogi!...........par te rahiye.......................
love...
farah

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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
okizz.....next part! (do naam ek jaan)

..........the person outside.....knocks.....kashish apne apnsoo wipe kar ti hai and closes the window!...
kashish: ajao.....
charu: di!
kashish: haan charu.....koi kaam tha
charu:....(doesnt say anything just nods in a "no" direction)......
kashish:.......mein soch rahi thi kal se college join kar loon
both of them sit on kashish's bed.
kashish: (cont.)....aur phir ghar mein bhi koi khaas kaam nahi hota....isliye.....socha......
charu:...jo ho raha hai woh sahi nahi hai
kashish looks at charu....: kya matlab?
charu: di......aap kya samajhti hain...........apke chupane se aapka ghum humse chup sakta hai...........aapke mitane se yeh ansooo............mit saktein hain..............nahi di...............bilkul nahi...........
kashish:....ab in bataon ka kya faida.............shayad yeh meri kismat..........
charu: kismat ko ilzaam dena bus karo di................woh di jo larna janti thi, apne faisle karna janti thi.........humein sahi aur galat ka fark sikhati thi................woh kahan kho gayi hai? kyun aaj khud keh liye itni kamzoor ban gayi ho di....kyun!
kashish: tumhare in sawalon ka mere paas koi jawaab nahi (she gets up from the bed)
charu: (holds her hand...) to jawab dhondo di...........abhi bhi waqt hai.......doosron ke faislon keh agaye...khud ki khushi mat qurbaan karo.........plz di....i beg of you! (charu is almost in tears.........jis di se woh itna pyaar karti hai....aj woh itne dhuk mein hai.......charu goes from the room.........when she gets outside....she sees someone standing behind the door)
charu: mama.........aap!
tulsi:......woh...............
charu shakes her head in dissapointment: apko nahi lagta..........apke is faisle mein di keh liye dhuk keh ilawa aur kuch nahi!
tulsi:....she's numb!: mein uski khushi chahti hoon
charu:.....mujse behtar to aap janti hain keh di ki khushi kis ke saath hai mama..................nahi janti kya? (she questions)
tulsi gets confused!.......both leave from there!

tulsi in her room:.....tumhe bahut takleef di hai mein ne kashish.....ab sirf tumhe khush dekhna chahti hon...........magar lagta aaj apne hi haaton mein ne woh bhi tum se cheen li hain..................muje maaf kardo............

its now morning in america!.............the confrence takes place.....jahan sujal apne hi khayalon mein gum tha...but somehow......akshat...manages it off well!

akshat: sujal....theek ho na
sujal:hmmm.....chale airport?
akshat: haan!
sujal and akshat board their flight and zzuueeeeeee! flight takes off!

Menawhile the college is working in routine...............rishi too has come.....but not to take his class, infact to meet someone.......................

rishi: charu (waves his hand in the air to get her attention!) wait!
charu: (stands still as rishi walks upto her).......hi....rishi
rishi: hi....woh tumhi se milne aya tha...........big b aur tumhari di keh bare mein kuch baat karni........
charu:......kya baat karni thi..............
rishi:.......yehi keh jo kuch bhi huwa hai woh galat hai............
charu:....tumhare kehne se ab kya fark parta hai...jo kuch kehna tha tumhare dad aur bua keh chuke hain.............
rishi: charu plz.......unko jo karna tha woh kar chuke........likin unke ane wale iradon ko humein rokna hoga..................
charu: ane wale irade................abhi kuch karna baqi hai???
rishi:..........(he looks sternly at her).....dad big b ki shaadi archie se karwana chahte hain....................
charu: (shocked) WHAT!!!!!!!!........................................

in the plane:...............
akshat:........sujal.......tumne lunch nahi kiya...kuch khao lo
sujal:.......bhook nahi hai..........
akshat:.....yaar..........dont worry i am sure koi aisa bara masla nahi hoga.......warna, uncle tumhe khudh bula lete...........
sujal:........muje apni fikar nahi hai akshat.....bus kashish ke bare mein soch raha tha...........kahin woh kisi musibat mein..............
akshat:...jitna socho ge utne hi bure khayal ayenge...........yeh lo apple kha lo (hehehe....lol)

...........
charu comes back home and runs into kashish's room!....kashish was sitting on her bed holding onto sujal's photograph!
charu: diii!...........sujal bhaiya ki shaadi archie se te ho gayi hai..........
kashish stand up from her bed aur uske haathon se tasveer zameen peh gir jati hai!...........
charu:....di plz....aap kuch keejiye.....isis tarah raha to sujal bhaiya aur aap kabhie nahi mil payeinge.................
kashish silently observes sujal's tasveer..... a tear rolls down her cheek and lands on sujal's charming face.....on the snap!...............

........plane.........
sujal: (wipes a drop of water from his face).....akshat...kya kar rahe ho
akshat:...sorry...woh jahaz ko jhatka laga to pani uchal gaya!........(he smiles when he looks at sujal)...........aisa laga keh tum ro rahe ho..........
sujal shakes his head and wipes of the remaning drops of water............(ek aur jadooooo...heheheheh................pyaar zaida ghera ho to aisa hi hota hai!!!!...rota koi hai aur ansoo kisi aur keh nikal te hain......)

akshat and sujal finally arrive back home......and drive to their residence...........the garewal house!!!!!!!!!!!............sujal ke maan mein ek becheini si thi............
akshat:....lo pohanch gaye ghar.................
they both get down and enter the house, where in the sitting room......vasu, archie and chetan were already present!!!........
sujal:......hi papa.......bua (he touches her feet....everything seemed normal too him........)
archie: hi sujal......(boy...shez over excited)
sujal: (just nods his head at her).....mama kahan hai papa?..........
chetan: tum jaldhi agaye sujal !!!!!
sujal: jee woh.(doesnt want to explian him anything).....mama kahan hain??
chetan:.........woh .....(he points towards the room)........par yeh to batao keh kaisi rahi meeting.....
sujal:haan......woh (he wants to meet veena first).......achi thi, details files mein hi hain...........(he walks towards veena's room but is se pehle keh woh kamre mein dakhil ho.......veena khud hi bahir ajati hai)..........mama! (he hugs her tightly)
veena: (too hugs him).....kaisa hai (she sounds low)
sujal: mein to theek hon.........magar apki tabiyat theek nahi lag rahi!........
veena:....nahi..........mein theek hon.........bus teri yaad arahi thi
akshat:...apne yaad kiya aur apke bete laut aye.............(he hugs veena)
sujal:........yeh rishi bhi na..........muje phone kar ke dara diya tha...........mein samjha keh koi serious problem ho gayi hai!..............aur rishi kahan hai............oh uska to college hoga.................mama............waise (he whispers in her ear)...............uska phone aya kya?
veena knew who sujal was talking about magar yeh nahi samajh araha tha keh jawab kya de............: ......kiss...kiss ka?
sujal:......mama...........kashish ka aur kiska .......koi phone aya kya?

veena aur chetan.....chup rehte hain.............while vasu speaks....
vasu:.........nahi aya!....aur naa hi kabhie ayega!!!!!!!!!!
sujal turns towards her (loud music.."DHA DHA DHA TANNA)...................

ok so....it ends here..........ab kya hoga.........sujal ko sab sach pata chale ga...........what will he do.........who will he blame...........kya hum sujal ka ek aur roop dekhein ge...................parte rahiye..............and keep commenting......
ek special thank you to pink...natz....princesspari105 (pooja) , ja'an.vi..harpy...and all those who read the fan fics.......thank you guys!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
ok....continuation..........(do naam ek jaan)

..........At hearing vasu, sujal turns around to face her!
sujal:...kya matlab!?
vasu:.....matlab yeh ...keh woh ab is ghar mein nahi ayegi...uska ab is ghar se koi taluk nahi hai.......
sujal's expressions change suddenly! his eyes became narrower and the smile vanished instantly...........
sujal: (holds veena from her shoulder) mama.........yeh kya keh rahi hain?
chetan:............vasu bilkul theek keh rahi hai!.........hum ne kashish keh saath tumhara rishta tor diya hai........aur un logon ko bhi humare faisle se koi aitraaz nahi!
sujal drops his hands from veena's shoulders and looks at chetan in shock!
sujal:....rishta ........tor.....diya..............
chetan: haan...........tumhare aur ghar ki bhalayi isi mein thi!
sujal:.....kisse puch keh liya apne yeh faisla..........
chetan:.......muje faisla lene keh liye kisi ki ijazaat ki zaroorat nahi!
sujal: (comes close to him....he was standing near the bar area!!!).....zaroorat nahi!( he says this slowly and then suddenly shouts) ......ZAROORAT NAHI!!!!!!!!...mujse meri khushiyan cheene se pehle apne mujse puchna zaroori nahi samjha.............muje zindagi bhar ki saza suna ne se pehle apne zaroori nahi samjha (he smashes his hand on the wine glasses placed near his hand)...............
veena:....(gets worried)...ssujal!!..........
sujal:............mar gaya!
veena: yeh..yeh tu kya keh raha hai!
sujal:.........sahi keh raha hon.......mar gaya aapka sujal mama.....woh sujal jiski khushyion ki duayein mangti nahi thaak ti thi aap aaj uski sab bari khushi usse cheen li gayi aur apne kuch nahi kiya...........mar gaya sujal mama...............MAR GAYA...........(he breaks the bottle too)............
vasu and archie were silently observing this while akshat was trying hard to stop sujal..........par aaj koi takat sujal ko nahi rok sakti thi!
chetan: sujal! behave youself warna mein.................
sujal:........warna aap kya?.........kya kareinge aap...........iss ghar se nikal deinge..........property se nikal deinge............is shehar se nikal deinge ya phir is duniya se................
veena: sujal...bus kar beta...........
sujal:.......nahi mama.............ab nahi................mein ne zindagi bhar apni khushiyion ki par wa nahi kii.......inki khatir (points at CG)....jo chaha woh kiya.....jaise chahe waise kiya.............magar ab mein aur keemat nahi chuka sakta.................mere saath saath mein kashish ko pyaar karne ki saza nahi milne donga...............nahi...........ab nahi! ( he moves his head in a no direction and leaves.....akshat follows him)
chetan : (tries to stop him)...........sujall!.........
vasu: CG...leave him.........kahan jayega.......abhi bahut ghuse mein hai jab ghusa thanda hoga to khudi laut ayega.....aur phir hum usse..........
veena: (interuptes wildly)......aur phir.......aur phir kya karogi tum??...dosron ko sivaye dukh dene keh aur ata hi kya hai tumhe...........
vasu was shocked to see a speaking veena!!!!!
veena: sirf doosron ka ghar aur sansar ujarna ata hai tumhe vasu........isliye tumhe parivaar aur bachon ka sukh kabhie naseeb nahi huwa.........tum kabhie ma ka dard nahi samjh sakti kyun ke tumhe ma banne ka sukh hi kabhie nahi mila.........
chetan:....VEENA!!!!
veena:...mat lijeeye apni zubaan se mera naam!....sujal ki khushiyon keh saath saath humara har rishta tut gaya.......sab khokla nikal..........(she falls down and cries her heart out)........woh sujal....jiski khushiyon ke liye mein jeeti thi......woh aaj mujse apni khushiyon ka hisaab mang keh gaya...........sirf aapki wajah se...........sirf aapki.....waa...jj...aa... se!

just then rishi enters from college and is horrified to see the broken glasses and bottle.....and veena crying!....he goes over to veena!
rishi:mom....yeh sab
veena:......rishi....sujal.....ko
rishi: (looks at vasu).......agar big b ko kuch huwa na.........to mein aapko......(hez got pain and anger in his eyes....jo keh sirf vasu hi nahi archie bhi dekh sakti thi)..............before completing his sentence he goes out to find sujal...........but instead gets in touch with akshat..........
rishi: akshat bhaiya......big b ko dekha.........
akshat:...ussi ko dhund raha tha........pata nahi gari leh kar kahin chala gaya........
rishi.......lets go.....(they too drive of in search of sujal)

magar apna sujal ja kahan sakta tha...wohi moolah ki daur masjid tak........yani sujal ki daur kashish tak.............. sujal arrives at the sinha house!
DING DONG!!!
charu opens the door:.....bhaiya......aap!
sujal:(without saying much)...kashish........kahan hai?
charu: woh....di...apne kamre mein............
sujal: (pushes the door and enters and goes straight up to kashish's room)
BANG!! (bhai....yeh sujal ne kashish keh kamre ka darwaza khola....ghuse mein.........kashish was sitting on her bed.....)
kashish: (hairaaniyat mein)............sujal..........(she was happy to see him and wanted to hug him magar.......uff......yeh zalim majbooriyan....heheh)
sujal:.....naam mat lena (oh like mother like son..hehehe.).....
kashish:.....sujal...woh......
sujal: (walks upto her and grabs her by her shoulders).......kya kami reh gayi thi mere pyaar mein...........kya majboori agayi thi.............kon sa vada adhura reh gaya tha jo muje yun beech rah mein chorne ka faisla kar liya............bolo kashish...............KYUN!!!!!
kashish: sujal.....choro muje....(she tries to push him par jitne sujal ke irade mazbut the utni hi uski grip)..............
sujal:...........kya mere pyaar peh se itni jaldhi bharosa utha gaya tha kashish............
kashish:.....(shez got tears in her eyes.)......muje is bare mein baat nahi karni.....plz choro......
sujal:........karni hogi...........yeh faisla sirf tumse nahi balke mujse bhi jura hai.............tum shayad mere bighar jee sako magar mere liye yeh sazaye maut se kaam nahi!..................kyun akhri waqt mein ake mera saath chura tumne.............jawab do kashish............
kashish:.....kyunke mein tumhari jeevan saathi ban ke kabil nahi hon......
sujal:.....kon kehta hai (looks directly into her eyes)
kashish:.......samaaj..........tumhare papa......bua........aur yeh faisla ma ka hai.....jo mein kabhie nahi talongi......kabhie nahi...........
sujal: (lets go of her and very calmy speaks).....mujse pyaar.......in sab se puch keh kiya tha?
kashish:......pyaar kisi se puch keh nahi hota............magar zindagi aur rishte sab ki marzi se bante hain........
sujal:............mein sirf.....apni aur tumhari baat kar raha hon.........yeh rishta humne .....apni khushi se jora tha na............ek dosre peh yakeen kiya tha na.........phir aaj kyun itni duriyan bhar gayi hain!
kashish:.......in duriyon se pyaar to kaam nahi hota...........pyaar to hamesha rahega..............bus us pyaar ko koi naam nahi de payenge hum.................(she looks at him with tears rolling down her cheeks)
sujal:.....pyaar ko kisi naam keh sahare ki zaroorat nahi hai kashish......pyaar mein do dilon ka hona hi kafi hai................
kashish:.......muje maaf kardo sujal............shayad ab yeh mumkin nahi.............mein is rah mein chalne se pehle haar gayi......(rote rote neeche gir jati hai)
sujal:.......ek bar haath bara keh dekho kashish.....mein abhi bhi wahin khara hoon............is rah peh tumhare saath chalne ke liye...aj bhi meri nazrein tumhara intezaar kar rahi hain!............ek bar haath barao kashish...............(he brings his hand forward)
kashish:.....(sits there with her head facing the floor.....)...nahii.......mein haar gayi hoon........aur himaat nahi hai muje mein.........
sujal:....na hi....sujal ka pyaar kamzor tha na kabhie hoga......na hi sujal ne kabhie haar mani hai aur na manne ga..............mera vada hai tumse kashish......jab bhi nazreein utha keh dekho gi muje apne samne paogi..........aaj chahye tum duniya ki baaton mein ake kamzor par sakti ho..........magar tumhara dil aaj bhi sirf pyaar ki sunta hai.........aur iska ehsaas tumhe jald hoga!!!!!...........vada raha! (he takes back his hand aur kamre se bahir ajata hai).................
kashish.......stays there in the same position!
as sujal comes down he sees tulsi standing near the door....(she just came back from the market)..........
tulsi:.........sujal.............tum yahan..........
sujal:..........kashish se baat karne aya tha
tulsi: ...to kya baat ki usne...........
sujal:............lafzon se nahi magar uski khamoshi bahut kuch keh gayi...............(tulsi looks at him while he walks out.........but suddenly turns back).............agli bar jab aonga to apni amanat apne saath le jaonga........yeh mera vada raha!.........(he touches her feet and then leaves)..............................


phew....aaj heavy duty dialogues ho gaye hehehehehe!.......ok...coming up......lots of encounters ............nahi bullet wale nahi.......meeting wale.....heheh!...keep reading!...........hope zaida tissues zaya nahi hote aap logon keh!.lol...(bad joke)............ok..take care
love ..................farah!!
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