do naam ek jaan (a fan- fic) - Page 6

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please do post the story soon
pooja

oki guys..i am contining do naam ek jaan 😉

.....rishi and kashish were in an argument, not so very pleasant!

rishi: mere big b ka naam mat lena apni zubaan se....warna...
kashish: (getting angry and upset) warna....warna kya rishi?
rishi: warna mein tumhara woh haal karunga keh tum is chehre ko kabhie nahi bhool paogi.....
kashish: tum se to baat karna hi fazool hai....tum kya jano pyaar kya hota hai....
rishi: oh stop it! pyaar...bari ayi pyaar karne wali...achi tarah se janta hoon tum middle class larkiyon keh liye pyaar kya hota hai....bus ek ameer larka dekha aur shuru ho jati ho.......
kashish :(terriby hurt and shouts)RISHII. age ek aur lafaz mat kehna!
rishi: rishi kehta nahi karta hai.....is si liye pehle hi keh raha hon keh big B ko chordo ...aur else.....
kashish: dhamki de rahe ho?
rishi: nahi dhamki nahi warning.....aur woh bhi last warning.......mere big b keh raaste se jitni jaldhi ho sake haat jao....... (points a finger at kashish's face)
kashish ko bhi acha khaasa ghusa char chuka tha. she holds her files tightly and says
kashish: sujal aur mera raasta bhi ek hai aur manzil bhi......mein bhi dekhti hon keh kon humein woh manzil panne se roke ga........
rishi: YOUUUUU (stepping towards kashish)
kashih: yes.....you and meee....we are both getting late for class.......bye! (she walks away with her attitude likin dil mein ek daar sa tha...keh kahin ek bar phir se khushiyan ate ate kahin apna rukh na mur lein.......


kashish takes the class likin rishi doesnt turn up as usual! likin this time he wasnt doing any awaara gardi but was sitting all alone thinking about his big b!!!!!

GAREWAL HOUSE........
rishi gets back home.....ghar peh bahut shor tha.......aur tayariyan ho rahi thi........
rishi: mama. yeh sab kya ho raha hai......
veena: rishi, acah huwa tu agaya.....hum log aaj kashish keh yahan shagun le kar ja rahe hain......aur is bar tum bhi asakte ho (she smiles and hits rishi on his face lightly)
rishi: mama....mama.....mein aapse kuch baat karna chahta hoon
veena: kis bare mein?
rishi: (confused usse samajh nahi ata keh kis tarah kashish ki asliyat sab bataye......but before he can say anything wahan sujal ajata hai)
sujal: kya mama...ap log abhi tak gaye nahi...wahan woh log intezaar kar rahe hain....
veena: acha....tumhe kaise pata.......
sujal: woh.......wohhhh.......kashish se baat. (he gets a little embarrassed)
veena: (laughs) ja rahe hain........ chalo rishi tayar ho jao tum bhi saath arahe ho........
rishi: mama....mein.....(hesitates)
sujal: kya baat hai? tum jana nahi chahte......
rishi: nahi...woh ......
sujal looks at him susiciously.....
rishi: ja raha hoon........
sujal smiles and pats him on the back!

they all leave!!!

while sujal gets busy on the phone.....
tring tring...(phone bell)
........kashish: kya hai sujal
sujal: tumhe nahi pata ....aaj humara rishta hone ja raha hai
kashish: sujal! yeh tumhara 11 phone hai.....kyun tang kar rahe ho...mujhe tayar to hone do.....
sujal: kya ...tum abhi tak tayar nahi hui...yahan se to sab nikal chuke hain
kashish: nahi baba...tayar ho chuki hon....likin tum kyun tang rahe ho.....
sujal: dil kar raha hai...isliye
kahish: sujal.....tum nahi sudhro ge......
sujal: kashish.....batao na kaisi lag rahi ho
kashsih: itna hi shauk ho raha hai to khud ake dekh lo
sujal: really! theek hai to ata hon. (he disconnects)
kashish: hello! hello! sujal! oh god kahin yeh waqai na ajaye...........


guys i have to go! ammna a lovely part! keep it up yaar!
and sara lamba bhi likhon gi....likin monday keh baad!!!! keep reading and commenting guys!!!!!!!!

farah......

ok so the story goes on...........(do naam ek jaan)

...sujal tells kashish keh he's coming too and hangs up......ussi wat darwaze peh ghanti baj ti hai.
"ding dong" (door bell)
charu: mama, lagta hai woh log agaye. mein kholti hon......(excited)
charu goes and opens the door. the garewal couple, with rishi had arrived!
rishi stares at charu while charu welcomes him too.
charu: hi rishi! how are you?
rishi: tumhe jaldhi pata chal jayega!
charu doesnt really get surprised by rishi's behaviour....she knew how he is!
veena: namaste tulsi jee!
tulsi: ayi na! hum log bus aapka hi intezaar kar rahe the.....bhetiye!
chetan , veena and rishi all sit while charu goes and gets kashish!

while they are all chatting amongst themselves and rishi is gazing around the house.....kashish enters!
kashish bends down and gets ashirwaad from chetan and veena!
veena: jeeti raho (hugs her)
chetan: (hits his shoulder to veena) dekha mere bete ki pasand kitni achi hai
veena: achi nahi....bahut achi hai......kyunke woh mera beta jo hai!
they all laugh, while rishi makes irritating faces!
kashish quietly sits near veena! while charu goes and gets drinks!
she serves veena and chetan and then comes towards rishi!
rishi: only water..(jaise keh charu koi waiter ho)
charu: yeh paani hai (she points at a glass)
rishi: mineral water......
veena: (snubs him) rishi.....pani hai....
rishi: oh...sorry mom....woh mujhe adaat nahi aam pani peene ki....i perfer mineral water!
kashish feels a little embarresed! well so does everyone!

veena: (trying to change the mood) to tulsi jee.....hum ne mangni ki aur shaadi ki tareekh nikal wayi hai.......agle hafte mangni aur uske agle hafte shaadi.....apko koi aitraaz to nahi.....
tulsi: nahi.....bilkul nahi...balke yeh to bahut khushi ki baat hai....magar hum larki wale hain...pata nahi itni jaldhi sare intezaam.......
chetan: aap uski fikar mat kijeeye......hum log kisi cheez mein kami nahi hone deinge.....bus aap haan keh deejeye!
tulsi: na kehne ka to sawaal hi nahi utha.....mujhe manzoor hai. (she picks up the swets and offers them to veena and chetan)
rishi: mom....baraat is ghar mein aye gi
veena: aur nahi to kya...
rishi: magar yeh ghar humare status keh hisaab se kuch choootaa nahiii....
veena: rishi.....(whispers) yeh kya bole ja rahe ho......chup raho tum!
rishi sits back! kashish takes chetan's and veena's blessing and goes upstairs.......

...kashish upar pohanchti hai to dekhti hai keh uska mobile baj raha hai....she is soooooooo happy...she picks up the phone
kashish: .....sujal........
sujal: are itni khushi...abhi to mein pohancha bhi nahi
kashish: yeh tumhare ane ki khushi nahi hai....
sujal: to phir kis cheez ki hai?
kashish: well....bata don
sujal: kashish kyun tang kar rahi ho
kashish: bus...dil kar raha hai!
sujal: acha abhi se meri zubaan bolne lag gayi! (sujal is in smiles , bahut khush tha and was driving really fast to get to kashish's house)
sujal: acah, baba, bato na.....itni khush kyun ho?
kashish: pyaar karte ho mujhe to khud hi bhujo....
sujal: kashish.....acah theek hai, mein hi bata hoon......umm........
humari shaadi.....
kashish: haan....humari shaadi teh ho gayi! mein itni khush hoon itni khush hon . i love you suu.................( but before she could finish the sentence usse dosri taraf se sujal ki cheekne ki awaaz ati hai)
sujal: AhhhhhHHHHHHHHHHHHH! (DANG BANG DANG)
kashish: SUJAL!!!!!! SUJAL!!!!!! kya huwa! tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe.........
(she holds onto the phone for a while while her tears start to roll down........after a while she hears a lot of ppl from the other side
a voice#: are....koi madaat karo.........yeh to behosh ho gaya hai, isse jaldhi hospital le jao.
kashish: (shouting) sujal....hellooooo!
someone picks up the phone and says: heeloo?
kashish: aap kon hai? sujal ko kya huwa? (still crying)
a voice: unka accident ho gaya hai.....unhe balaji memorial hospital le kar gayein hain........(there is only one hospital in the city hehehehheeh)
kashish hangs up and runs down in a hurry........she is crying .......everybody stands up when they look at her condition!
tulsi: kashish! kya huwa.....tum ro kyun rahi ho
kashish: mama....woh .....(still crying)
veena: bolo beta....kya huwa....sab theek hai na!
kashish: ......aunty..........woh sujal ka accident!
rishi: (runs towards kashish and holds her by her arms titghly)KYA HUWA BIG B KO...........
kashish: rishi.........sujal ka accient huwa hai...usse hospital le kar gaye hain.................
everyone is shocked and in tears


BALAJI MEMORIAL HOSPITAL(lol)

rishi: (asking the receptionist) excuse me....mere Big b....i mean yahan koi accident ka case aya hai.....sujal garewal naam hai......
receptionist: jee abhi abhi kissi ko le kar aye hain.....naam to nahi pata likin is waqt woh operation theatre mein hain!
veena, chetan, rishi, kashish all run towards the operation theatre........(tulsi aur charu nahi ate....some odd reason....dont ask me..hehehehe)


after a while the doc comes out!
rishi: doctor. mere big b.......
doctor: dekhiye himaat rakhiye.......ab woh theek hain.....likin driving keh waqt itni laprwayi..........woh to shukar hai upar wale ka keh zaida chot nahi ayi,......warna kuch bhi ho sakta tha.........
veena hugs kashish and starts to cry: mera sujal.....agar usse kuch ho jata to......
kashish: nahi aunty......sujal ko kuch nahi hosakta......doctor ne kaha na keh woh bilkul theek hai! ayen usse dekh kar ate hain.
while kashish and veena step towards the ICU, rishi comes in between!
rishi: tum nahi jaogi! (facing kashish)
veena:rishi! yeh kya keh rahe ho
rishi: bilkul theek keh raha hon.......yeh sab kuch issi ki wajah se huwa hai.......agar yeh na hoti to
veena: (slaps rishi) rishi! tumhari himaat kaise hui kashish se is tarah baat karne kii
rishi: mama....aap nahi janti isko........yeh big b ki dulaat hatyana chahti hai........iski wajah se aaj big b ki yeh halat hai......mein isse ab big b se nahi milne donga......
veena phir se rishi ko kuch bolne wali thi when kashish stops her...... and runs away! (kahan........well......i think....apne ghar hi gayi hai! )

a nurse comes......
nurse: aap mr sujal garewal keh saath hain
veena: jee.
nurse: unhe hosh agaya hai.......aap log mil sakte hain!
rishi, veena and chetan all go inside.
veena: itni laparwayi sujal...agar kuch ho ja ta to.
sujal: mama, (holds her hand) jab tak aapki duayein mere saath hain tab tak muje kuch nahi ho sakta ....
chetan: tum ab gari nahi chalo ge
sujal: papa....aaap bhi.....come on....chota sa accident tha........dont worry!
sujal looks at rishi, jo abhi bhi kashish ki wajah se ghuse mein khara tha
sujal: tumhe kya huwa.....ab tum bhi in dono ki tarah mujhe kuch mat kehna!
rishi comes towards sujal and holds his hand...whle sujal smiles at him!
sujal idhar udhar dekhta hai
veena: kya huwa......
sujal: kuch nahi....woh..........kashish....
before veena could say anything rishi interruptes
rishi: aap usse bhool jaye to bhetar hai
sujal: KYA!
veena: rishi!
rishi: kya galat keh raha hon main. yeh sab uski wajah se hi huwa hai.......jab se woh big b ki zindagi mein ayi hai........tabhi se........kashish jaisi larkiyon ko mein achi tarah se janta hoon..........bahut matlabiiii........
sujal (lets go off rishi's hand).....aaj keh diya hai......dobara mat kehna.........(sujal tries to get down the bed)
veena: are kahan ja rahe ho..........tumhe chot ayi hai
sujal: abhi nahi gaya to yeh chot.....nasuur ban kar zindagi bhar sataye gi!
veena: sujal...beta......(but sujal walks off........actually limbs)
chetan: rehne do veena....woh nahi sunne ga!
rishi: ha.....pata nahi yeh big b kab kashish ko pehchaan payeinge.
veena: (looks at rishi with anger and rishi leaves the room)


sujal tries to call kashish......likin kashish phone nahi utha thi...........
woh apne kamre mein hoti hai aur ro rahi thi! she had locked her room...while charu and tulsi were trying hard to open the door
tulsi: kashish....kashish....plz darwaza kholo
charu: di plz.....huwa kya hai........
kashish doesnt answer! she keeps on crying!/............just then the dorr bell ring
DING DONG DING DONG...............kon ho ga!

....ok guys.......aab mein bongiyan mar mar keh thaak gayi hon..hahhaahahhaa. to ab aaap meri bongiyan bardaasht karo!
coming up........kon ho ga bahir ! kya yeh galat fehmi kashish aur sujal dur kar payenge.......!!!!!

cheers..........farah

ok heres my story!!! its short likin abhi majborri hai! lol.

.......kashish ne khud ko kamre mein bandh kar liya hota hai and she was crying helplessly, while tulsi and charu are trying hard to open the door, just then the door bell rings
Ding dong ding dong.....
tulsi: charu tum kashish se darwaza khulne keh liye kaho, mein dekhti hon ko aya hai.
tulsi goes to open the front door.
tulsi: tum!.....sujal beta tumhara to accident huwa tha ......tum yahan kya....
sujal: kashish kahan hai?
tulsi:(holding his shoulder) tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai?
sujal: (puts his hand on top of tulsi's) bhetar hai aunty.........likin kashish....
just then charu comes down
charu: sujal bhaiya, acha huwa aap agaye, who di ne khud ko kamre mein bandh kiya hai, na kuch bol rahi hain, na darwaza khol rahi hai, bus roye ja rahi hain....ab aap hi unse baat karke dekhlein........

sujal goes upstairs while tulsi and charu neeche ek dossre ko tasali dete hain.....
sujal:(knocks)......kashish.....
kashish lifts her head up at sujal's voice and stands up to open the door....likin phir uske andar se awaaz ati hai
kashish to herself: nahi! kashish yeh tum kay karne ja rahi ho, tumhara sujal se door hojane mein hi uski bhalayi hai!
sujal: kashish plz....darwaza kholo......mujeh tumse baat karni hai
kashish:mujeh tumse koi baat nahi karni......chale jao yahan se.,......
sujal: mein yahan se janne ke liye nahi,, balke tumse milne aya hon,, aur binna mile nahi jaonga........darwaza kholo kashish!
kashish: zid mat karo....
sujal: yeh zid nahi pyaar hai!
kashish: aur aaj yehi pyaar tumhari zindagi cheen leta! (cries)
sujal:(could hear her crying) kashish tum shayad mere pyaar ko samajh nahi payi......mera pyaar meri zindagi se alag nahi hai.....yeh pyaar hai......tumhara saath hai.....tabhi to yeh zindagi hai.....warna kuch bhi nahi!
kashish: to phir issi pyaar ki khatir aaj meri baat manlo.....yahan se chale jao.......
sujal: ek bar mujhse nazrein mila keh yeh baat keh do
kashsih: sujal plz......mujhe majboor mat karo.....
sujal:pyaar mein koi majboori nahi hoti...sirf ek doosre ke liye ehsaas hota hai.....mein chala jata hoon, magar ek baat yaad rakhna, agar humara pyaar sacha hai to tumhe apne is daar ko khatam karna hoga........tumhe yaad hai kashish tumne ek bar mere pyaar par bharosa kar keh apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha,.......to kyun......kyun aaj ussi pyaar se tumhara bharosa uth gaya!!

kashish is silent!
sujal: .........tumhari is khamoshi ne mujhe sare jawaab de diye.........shayad mere hi pyaar mein kami thi.......jo aaj woh itna kamzoor par gaya..........aaj pehli baar sujal garewal khud se haar gaya........(his voice sounded low! he had tears in his eyes)
yeh keh kar woh mur gaya.....
sujal: ab nahi aonga.....kabhie nahi aonga......
he starts to walk when he hears his name.....
kashish: .......ssujal!
sujal turns back aur kashish ko darwaze ke paas khara dekhta hai. dono ki ankhein num hoti hain aur hooton par ek doosre ko dekhne ki khushi ka ehsaas......
kashish: tum nahi haare....aur na hi humara pyaar kamzoor hai.....yeh duriyan humare pyaar ki kamzori nahi humare pyaar ki gheri batati hain....
sujal ki ankhon se ansoo bhe rahe the...........
kashish: mein to sirf tumhari khushi chahti hoon....aur mujhse door rehne mein hi tumhari khushi hai.....
sujal: yeh tum manti ho.....mein nahi....meri khushi aur zindagi sirf tumse hai.......agar tum mere saath nahi to yeh dono be maiyne hain!
they are both now very close to each other.........
kashish: itna pyaar karte ho mujhse????
sujal:.....nahi.....isse bhi kahiin zaida.......
kashish has tears rolling down her cheeks, while sujal wipes them away......and they both end up hugging each other!!
.....song time.........
thoda sa pyaar huwa ....thoda hai baqi
hum to dil de hi chuke ab teri haan hai baqi!!
pyaar tum ne kiya hai, pyaar humne kiya hai
yaar phir imtethaan kyun zamane ne liye hai
saath hum deinge teraaaaa
hoooooooooo
saath hum deinge tera
tujse waada hai saathi!! (courtsey main dil tujhko diya...lyrics kuch garbar ho gayein hain hehehe)
sujal after a while lets go off kashish hai says: OOUCH!
kashish: kya huwa! (gets back)
sujal: kuch der pehle mera accident huwa tha.......tum shayad hamesha ki tarah bhool gayi (he starts to laugh)
kashish: sujal...main tumhe nahi chorungi!
sujal: mein bhi yehi chahta hoon........
hugs again!...........

i know its boring.......kal se kahani kuch agay bare gi! hope abhi ise kaam chal jaye!
take care and keep commenting. coming up......rishi, kashish and sujal!!!!!

farah......

wow......that is kool........farah....u r a awesum writer....i wish kth was like this on star plus....yur stories r better than ekta's as well.....well done keep it up...gal 👏

ok..........i'll continue with do naam ek jaan!


........sujal and kashish were in a tight hug when they heard a voice..........
voice: ahem ahem!!
sujal and kashish leave each other to see who it is....yes kabab mein haadi..............none other than charu!
charu: agar aap logon ka ho gaya ho to neeche chalein........
sujal and kashish get a little embarassed!

GAREWAL HOUSE!
veena:(quite worried) yeh sujal is halat mein kahan chala gaya?
rishi:............mein achi tarah se janta hoon kahan gaye honge............
just then sujal arrives!
veena: kahan gaye the......mein kitni pareshan thi............tumhe kuch ho jata to....kaise reh pati mein tumhare bighar.....
sujal: mein bhi kaise reh pata mama........kashish ke binna!
veena: (usse pyaar karti hai) kashish ab jaldhi tumhari ban jayegi.....phir kon usko tum se alag karega!!! (looks at rishi)
rishi shakes his head in dissapointment and goes to his room..................

NEXT DAY........AT COLLEGE

rishi sees both charu and kashish entering college....as usual kashish staffroom ki taraf barti hai to charu class ki taraf............but before she could cross the ground rishi aur uske freinds charu ka raasta rok lete hain
charu: (looking at rishi) yeh sab kya hai?
rishi: tum se kuch baat karni thi
charu: kya? (suspicious)
rishi: aaj raat jo juniors ki welcome hai
charu: haan, janti hoon...........to?
rishi: to mein chahta hon keh tum meri.........patner bano!
charu is quite shocked!: kya! mein!
rishi: haan....tum!
charu: likin........mmmmmmmmmm
rishi: likin wakin kuch nahi.........muje NA sunne ki adaat nahi hai!
charu: ..............(ahista se) ok...........(and she walks off)

rishi's freind: are yaar...........yeh tumne kya kiya.tum iske saat jaoge?
rishi: haan.......aur aaj raat mein is chalu aur iski di ko aisa sabak sikhaonga keh yeh yaad rakheingi! (tannn tannaaa!)

after the class ek larka............(Swayam) charu keh pass ata hai.
swayam: charu..........hi!
charu: hi.........ummm....swayam.
swayan: yes........woh actually mein tumse puchna chahte tha keh kya aaj raat tum mere saath......party mein.......
charu: oh.........i am sorry swayam...........woh mein aaj raat rishi ki patner hon....isliye............im sorry............maybe some other time
swayan is dissapointed..............itne saal usne charu se baat karni chahi, aur aaj jab ki to jawab mein "na" sunne ko mila............!!!


KASHISH'S HOUSE!
the phone rings, kashish picks it up!
kashish: sujal! abhi to baat khatam ki thi!
sujal: haan......to ab phir shuru karte hain
kashish: ..............koi khaas baat hai ya phone rakhon
sujal: are yaar....tum itna ghusa kyun karti ho
kashish: kyunke tumhe bina dant khaye sudharte nahi ho, isliye!
sujal: hmmmmmmmmmmm
kashish: what hmmmmmmmmm? ab mein rakh rahi hon
sujal: nahi kashish....jo baat kehne keh liye phone kiya tha woh to sun lo
kashish: muje pata hai............(shies)
sujal: gosh tum larkiyan......humein khud ki tarah faltoo samjha hai.......mein ne i love you kehne keh liye phone nahi kiya!
(heheh bisti ho gayi kashish ki)
kashish: (dissapointed) to phir kis liye
sujal: ye batane keh liye keh aaj raat mein tumhe college ki welcome party se pick karunga......aur dinner saath kareinge! ok
kashish: likin yeh kaise ho sakta hai.....
sujal: ho sakta hai........college keh bahir mera wait karna......9.00 sharp!
kashish: su......
sujal: muje kuch nahi sunna! i'll be waiting there!
kashish: ...........theek hai..........
sujal: aur haan ek aur baat........
kashish: ab kya hai..................
sujal: i love you! (and hangs up)
udhar kashish reciever ko dekh kar smile karti hai and says: me toooo!!!!!!!

its almost time to leave for the party when charu comes in kashish's room.
charu: di, aap bhi arahi ho?
kashish: haan!
charu: likin subah tak to aap ka mood nahi tha...
kashish :(while brushing her hair for the final time ,picks up her purse and turns towards charu): likin ab mood ban gaya!
charu: (smiles at her) oh i see..........ok ab mood ban hi gaya hai to chalein!
kashish: (nods in yes) mein mama ko bata don.....................

ITS PARTY TIMEEEEEEEEEE!

rishi and his friends were standing outside the hall........rishi ofcourse waiting for the two sisters!!!!
rishi's freind: rishi, dekh woh dono agayi!
rishi: haan........likin yeh kashish andar kyun nahi arahi!
just then a car arrives.......uff car bhi andar bhete bande ki tarah fit thi! kashish sat inside,while charu waved at her!
rishi was noticing all this: Big b ki gari............yeh yahan kaise? dekhna parega! (he follows sujal and kashish)
charu: (to rishi's friends) rishi nahi aya..........
friend: haan......aya hai...........kahiin gaya hai abhi...........bus ata hi hoga!
charu: (nods and goes inside)......................

ab zara sujal aur kashish ki taraf! they enter a grand hotel.............
sujal: (to receptionist): mr sujal garewal ke naam se booking for two!
receptionist: jee sir....aapki table wahan hai............
sujal: (takes kashish's hand and proceeds towards the table............while rishi is spying behind and gets a table close to theirs!!!

kashish: itne mehnge hotel mein ane ki kya zaroorat thi........
sujal: zarorat thi isliye to ayen hain
kashish: i am sure iisse behtar khana woh humare ghar keh pass jo resturant hai wahan hoga...............
sujal: chalo theek hai..kal wahan chalein ge............
kahish: sujal!!!!!!............acha ab jaldhi order do warna der ho jayegi!
sujal: kya kashish.......hum pehli baar ek saath kahin akele ayen hain.......its such a romantic place aur tumhe jaldi machi hai...................deta hoon order!
sujal places the order!!
side mein soft music baj rahi hoti hai................candles were lit .........sujal and kashish ek doosre ki ankhon mein gum the.................while rishi was watching all this with anger!

sujal :(breaks the silence) kashish.......mein tumse maafi mangna chahta tha......
kashish: maafi ..kis baat keh liye?
sujal: jo rishi ne tumhare saath kiya................muje mama ne bataya tha......i'm really sorry........
kashish: (puts her hand on sujal's hand) sujal plz..........maafi mang keh mujhe sharminda mat karo................agar rishi tumhara bhai hai to mere bhi bhai jaisa hai.................uski kahi kisi baat ka mein ne bura nahi manaya (chal jhooti)

rishi to himself: yeh bhi sab natak hai!
kashish: jante ho sujal, tum bahut lucky ho............tumhare pass itne log hain jo tumse itna yaar karte hain! .................rishi ne muje se jo bhi kaha,sirf isliye kyunke woh tumse pyaar karta hai................tumhare liye fikar karta hai

rishi: (gets confused......likin andar se kahin woh yeh sab sunkar kashish ki izaat karne laga tha)
sujal: mein janta hon, jitna woh mujse pyaar karta hai,usse kahin zaida mein usse pyaar karta hon..........uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta hon................bus mein yeh nahi chahta keh uske aur tumhare beech kabhie koi misunderstanding ho!
kashish: nahi hogi! chahe meri aur uski soch na milti ho............magar hum ek doosre se tumhari wajah se jure hain..............aur yeh pyaar ka ehsaas hai................yeh kabhie nafrat mein nahi badal sakta! waqt ke saath saath sab kuch theek ho jayega...............

rishi was getting a little impressed by kashish aur uski baaton mein kho sa gaya tha keh he accidently hit his hand on a glass that was placed near by......
DHIIIIIISH!
everyone looked at him! sujal and kashish too
sujal: rishi! tum............yahan!
rishi: ya.....woh mein..............
sujal: tumhari to party thi na!
rishi: (confused didnt know what to say and how to say).......mmmmm....
sujal: chalo its ok.......ab aye ho to humare saath hi khana kha lo!..come!
rishi looks at kashish ............par is bar uski ankhon mein ghusa nahi tha.............well...............pyaar bhi nahi tha..........bus kuch mixed feelings thi...............
rishi jitna bhi inkaar karne ki koshish karta..........woh yeh baat nahi jhootla sakta tha keh usko kashish ki ankhon mein sujal keh liye behpana pyaar dikhta tha!!!!!!!..............kabhie woh sujal ko dekhta to kabhie kashish ko dekh kar nazrein neeche kar leta...............he was very confused!!!!!!!!!!!

all three of them start their dinner when kashish's cell rings.
kashish: hello!
a girl: hello....kashish ma'am
kashish: jee bol rahi hon
the girl: (tense) mein....mein charu ki dost bol rahi hon.........aap plz yahan college jaldhi a jayein............woh charu ne...........
kashish: charu ko kya huwa?...............(beeeeep.........line dropped) hello?hello?................................................ ....


ok abhi keh liye itna hi!!! to coming up................will rishi sudharofy! what has happened to charu!!!!!!!!!!!! and of course sujal aur kashish...............jin ke binaa kahani adhuri hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A BIG THANKYOU TO EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i really appreciate your comments............keep them going!

next part to do naam ek jaan!!!

.........kashish gets a call from the party, telling here that "charu ne" but then the line dropped.
kashish: sujal.........muje college jana hoga, charu kisi problem mein hai....
sujal: par huwa kya?
kashish:(tensed) yeh mein nahi janti..........bus college pohanchna zaroori hai...
sujal: ok theek hai.........chalo mein bhi chalta hon...........rishi.....tum bhi ajao!
rishi hesistates a bit but then sits in the car with them. they arrive at the college!

College...........
a girl:(runs upto kashish) ma'am.........woh charu.....
kashish: kya huwa charu ko........kahan hai woh (she looks around the ground)
girl: usse ghar le gaye hain.......she was drunk aur shayad drugs bhi........
kashish (shocked) WHAT!!!! charu.....drugs.......
sujal and rishi were shocked too.........
sujal: kashish, chalo jaldhi ghar chalte hain.....aunty wahan akeli hongi!
rishi goes along too!

Kashish's house!
they go upto charu's room where they find her unconcious...........
kashish: mama.....yeh charu........
tulsi: kashish......tum kahan thi...........dekho yeh charu ko..........
sujal: isse to hospital le jana chahiye tha, yahan kyun
rishi: acha huwa nahi le kar gaye......warna police case ban sakta tha!
sujal: (looked at him suspiciously) rishi, tumhe iske bare mein kuch maloom hai kya?
rishi: nahi big b , mein to charu keh wahan ane se pehle hi nikal chuka tha!
kashish is consoling tulsi......while charu still lies unconcious......
tulsi: doctor ko ghar bula liya tha........woh keh rahe the keh thodi der tak hoosh ajaye ga isse!
kashish: sujal thank you.......kafi late ho gaya hai......tum logon agar jana....
sujal: thank you ki zaroorat nahi hai....waise ab hum chalte hain, magar kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho to call kar lena..... (he gives her a smile)

Next day..............
kashish goes into charu's room.........she was getting ready........
kashish: ab kaisi tabiyat hai?
charu: ....behtar hai
kashish: charu.......tumhe kya zaroorat thi sharab ko haath lagane ki......aur yeh drugs.....how could you?? (she was angry now)
charu: di....aap yeh kya keh rahi hain......mein aur drugs..........mujhe to woh drink ek larke ne di thi.... mujhe to pata bhi nahi tha keh us mein kya hai...
kashish: larka?.........kon tha woh?
charu: mein nahi janti...........shayad woh rishi ka friend tha.........but i m not sure
kashish: (to herself) rishi!!!!!

College time...................
kashish was in college now, with charu! kashish kal keh incident keh bare mein principe se baat karne jati hai unke office mein......but to her surprise wahan to kuch aur hi ho raha tha.......
principle: rishi garewal.........last time mein ne tumhe maaf kiya tha tumhare bare bhai keh kehne par...........magar is bar...........tumne sari haadein par kardi.................yeh koi tareeka hai kisi larki se peesh ane ka...........tumhari is harqat se charu ki jaan bhi ja sakti thi! koi andaza hai tumhe!!!!!!!!!!!(shouts)

charu, rishi, charu's friends were all standing infront of the principle..........
and kashish was silently listening to all this.............
kashish:(to herself) yeh sab rishi ne kiya............woh aisa kaise kar sakta hai..............kya yeh sab usne mujhe se badla lene keh liye...............chi...itna gir sakta hai woh.................mujhe uske bare mein ab sujal se baat karni hi hogi (woh issi soch soch mein chalte chalte neeche canteen ke paas agayi thi jahan usse kuch larkon ki awaaz ayi!)

a guy: are yaar, fit ho gaya mamla.........kiya tum ne sab kuch aur bhogaadna us rishi ko hoga!
kashish yeh sun kar udhar hi ruk jati hai!
another voice: haan! itne saalon se us rishi ki batameeziyan bardasht karta araha tha..............this will teach him a lesson!
kashish deewar se jhankti hai to see............swayam!
swayam: ab usse pata chale ga........swayam se panga lena ka anjaam!
a guys(who was standing there with swayam) .....us charu ko drink dilwayi tumne aur ilzaam laga diya rishi par............manna pare ga......your'e too good!
swayam: ab kya karein...........na sunne ka shauk mujhe bhi nahi hai.........aur kal jab charu ne mujhe reject kiya tooo..............................ha, ab dekhta hon us rishi ko kon bachaye ga!

..................udhar principle sujal ko bulalete hain! sujal arrives!
principle: mr garewal...apke hi kehne par hum ne rishi ko waapis liya tha, likin kal keh haadse keh baad i am sorry to say keh we have to throw him out of the college! (all the senior teachers were now present too)

sujal is extremely embarrassed and looks with disgrace at rishi! : plz......mein iski taraf se maaf.................
kashish: koi zaroorat nahi hai sujal!
all of them turns towards kashish, who was standing near the door along with swayam!
sujal: kashish ............tum!
kashish: haan! aur koi zarorrat nahi hai tumhe ya rishi ko maafi mangne ki! kyunke iske peeche zimidaar rishi nahi koi aur hai!................sab ko sach batao swayam!
.......swayam: jee........woh....yeh sab mein ne hi kiya tha.........out of jealousy..........mein cahru se pyaar karta hon aur woh rishi keh saath kal...............(he felt soooo embarrassed)
ab swayam ne sach kyun bataya! well.........kyunke kashish ne usse warning di thi keh she will delibretaly fail him in the examination and will see to it keh he doesnt get admission anywhere!!! (are wah.........kashish bhi dadagiri peh utar ayi ..lol)

yeh sunkar principle fixes his glasses.
principle: swayam.........i am shocked.......tum jaisa student aisa kar sakta hai............you are suspended for two weeks and i want a written apology for charu and rishi from you,.............today!!.................kashish....thank you beta......
swayam: (just nods his head and walks out likin jate jate gives kashish a "i'll-teach-you-a lesson" look)

principle: i am sorry rishi..............mujhe tum peh yunhi shak nahi karna chahiye tha! i'm sorry mr garewal mein ne aapko bhi kham kha mein zehmat di!
sujal: its alright sir! likin plz.........agli bar rishi par ilzaam lagane se pehle puri maloomat kar le jeeyga.........mein apne bhai koi achi tarah se janta hoon.......woh kisi larki keh saath aisi harqat nahi kar sakta!
rishi felt proud of what sujal said about him
sujal: chalo rishi!..............thanx kashish
kashish: phri wohi! mein ne tumhe kaha na thanx ki zaroorat nahi hai! mujhe bhi rishi par pura bharosa hai!
rishi looks up at kashish! (with ........................well yes tiny bits of respect)
sujal: rishi.....tum kashish keh bare mein jo sochte ho woh sahi nahi hai! likin mein jnata hon keh yeh baat ek din tum khud samjho ge!

well after all the thankyous and sorrys exchanged sab apne apne kam par lag jate hain!!!!

its now evening aur ek bar phir se kashish college mein hi reh jati hai.
kashish: oh no! 6 baj gaye.............(she quickly collects her stuff and goes out to get a cab)
sarak sun san hoti hai! , kashish tries to stop some taxis but none of them do,,,,,,,,,,,,,when suddenly she sees some guys coming towards her.......
kashish: tum log!
swayam: jee maa'aam,,,,hum.............aaj subah aapne jo kiya uska thankyou kehne aye hain!
kashish: matlab.........
swayam: matlab............so guys ab humein ma'am ko matlab bhi samjhana hoga! (they all start to laugh and make a circle around kashish)
kashish: dekho swayam........
swayam: dekh hi to rahe hain, (he tries to come forward)
kashish: swayam.........mujeh se door raho warna.........
swayam: warna........kya............aap cheekein gi ya mujeh maarein gi........are mein to daar gaya! (huuuuu....such a pain)
swayam aur uske friends kashish ko dara rahe the when a car stops right next to them.................
likin nahi nahi...........is bar sujal nahi tha.................is baar tha ............rishi!!!!
rishi (gets out of the car) swayam aaj jo tumhari wajah se huwa.....uske liye mein ne tumhe kuch nahi kaha......likin abhi agar tum yahan se nahi gaye to mein khud nahi janta keh mein tumhare saath kya karonga!
swayams friend: chal swayam chalte hain..........iska koi bharosa nahi!
swayam: (looks at him and then turn towards kashish) aaj to tum bach gayi .......likin agli baar..........
rishi steps forward but before he could come close to them swayam and his friends run away!

kashish (now relieved) .........mm....thanx...rishi!
rishi: iski koi zarorat nahi hai, subah aapne mujeh bachaya....aur abhi mein ne .........so hisaab bara bar!
kashish: (gives a weak smile) mein......chalti hoon!
rishi: aayen mein chor deta hoon!
kashish: nahi. its ok...mein taxi le longi!
rishi: jaanta hon keh aapko taxi mein janne ki adaat hai.........likin mein apni hone wali bhabie ko taxi mein jate nahi dekh sakta.......so plz
kashish :(shocked) KYA!!!!! ..........kkya kaha tumne
rishi :(blushes) .....mein ne kaha .......plz....
kashish: usse pehle............
rishi: aapko taxi mein janne ki adaat hai! (trying to avoid)
kashish: (sighs) rishi.......uske baad!
rishi: wohi kaha jo kehna chahiye tha........ab plz........chalein..........bhabieee
kashish looks at him and they both smile at each other!

garewal house!!!
rishi enters.......
veena: kahan the itni der tak!
sujal was also sitting there on the sofa!
rishi: woh....kisi ko ghar chorne gaya tha
sujal looks at him: kisse?
rishi: apni hone wali..............
sujal: kya?
rishi:big b.....kya kya.........apne hone wali bhabie ko.....(he smiles)
sujal gets up................he is happy!
sujal: bhabie.....tumhara matlab kashish!
rishi: kyun.....apka kahin aur bhi chakar hai...(mischievously)
sujal: shut up!! (they hug each other....ufff ...........finally sujal khush huwa)

veena: rishi, mein aaj bahut khush hoon!
rishi: mom!!
veena: are tum dono ki baaton mein mein batana hi bhool gayi........
sujal: kya mama?
veena: aaj tumhari bua aur archie arahe hain....mumbai se..............rishi tum jake le aoge unhe airport se!
rishi: WHAT!!!! mein............................

ok guys..abhi keh liye itna hi! so rishi acha ho gaya!!! happy !!!!!!!!!!!!!! to ab yeh naye log kaun hai....kahin ye sujal aur kashish ki zindagi mein koi nayi musibat to nahi lane wale..............well.........hope not! keep commenting guys!!!!

..........farah

ok....now i'll continue with (do naam ek jaan)

..........rishi had come home after dropping kashish at her house! when he comes home gets to know that his bua and archie (her daughter) are coming at their place!
veena: aaj tumhari bua aur archie arahe hain...tum ja ke unhe le lena!
rishi:What! mein.......mein kyun mama! no way,,,,mein nahi jaonga........aur waise bhi woh dono phir se kyun arahi hain.........abhi to ayin thi

sujal: yehi baat mein bhi mama se keh raha tha.

veena: tum dono to aise puch rahe ho jaise khud kuch jante nahi....woh log har saal hi to ate hain aur phir yeh to sujal ki shaadi ka mokah hai.......waise bhi tumhare papa apni behen se kuch puche bina nahi karte..........isliye unka ana to lazmi hai.

rishi: likin mom! you know how.....

veena: bus aur behhis nahi.........mein ne kaha na keh tum ja rahe ho matlab tum ja rahe ho!

rishi makes irritating faces and looks at sujal for help....but no no no! bua se bachne ka treeka to sujal keh paas bhi nahi hai! he smiles at rishi, pats him on his back and goes upto his room!

kashish's house!

charu and kashish are sitting in kashish's room............

charu: di. aaj jo kuch bhi huwa uske liye i am sorry, bina soche mein ne rishi ka naam le diya............aapke bare mein bhi nahi socha.....plz..mujhe maaf kar deejiye ga!

kashish: charu, pagalon jaisi baatein mat karo! tumne jo kiya woh tumhe sahi laga, aur mein ne to sirf sach sab ko bataya! ......waise mein ne rishi keh bare mein jo kuch bhi socha tha woh bilkul galat tha.........woh ek acha larka hai!

charu: (excited) haan di....woh bahut acha hai.

(kashish looks at her strangely) kashish: kya matlab bahut acha!

charu: matlab....kuch bhi nahi......

kashish:(innocently) kuch bhi nahi...........

charu: nahi hai.....likin (confused) kashish starts to laugh at her! just then tusli enters.......

tulsi: tum dono yahan ho!! kya baatein ho rahi hain!

charu: kuch nahi mama, yeh di bhi na......

kashish: are chup kyun ho gayi baaton na mama ko keh kya baat ho rahi thi! charu blushes and goes to her room! while tulsi and kashish start to laugh at her!

tulsi: kuch dino baad tumhari yeh hansi is ghar se bahut dur chali jayegi....

kashish hugs tulsi.....

kashish: aisa kyun keh rahi hain mama, mein aap se milne aongi na!

tulsi gets tears in her eyes and kisses kashish on her forehead.

kashish: mama, aapse ek baat puchna chahti thi...(a little hesistant).......

tulsi: haan pucho na!

kashish: mama, apne bare mein itni bari sachayi janne keh baad bhi mein ne agar khud ko kisi ki beti mana hai to woh aap hain..........likin.

tulsi: likin kya?

kashish: likin mama, mein janna chahti hon keh yeh sab....matlab meri asal mama..........kon.........

tulsi: gets up from the bed when kashish holds onto her hand...

kashish: mama, plz aap muje galat mat samajhiye..........ap nahi batana chahti to mein force nahi karungi.......likin papa ne aapke saath aisa kyun kiya............itna bara dhoka.......kya yeh janne ka haq nahi hai muje.....

tulsi turns towards her and sits down again.

Tulsi: pura haq hai! likin yeh tumhare papa ki bewafai nahi thi..........bus ek bhool thi.......jo kab haqeeqat bani iska andaza hi nahi huwa!

ok..........flash backs!!


yeh un dino ki baat hai jab meri aur tumhare papa ki nayi nayi shaadi hui thi aur hum log mumbai mein rehte the...........tumhare papa wahan ke ek college mein proffessor the! humara chota sa ghar tha....aur hum dono bahut khush the! keh ek din......woh humari zindagi mein ayi..........tumhare papa ki colleague thi woh.............tumhari ..........ma!........

unki doosti gheri hoti chali gayi.........aur ek din is doosti ne ek naya naam le liya! tumhare papa ki sab se bari bhool...........jo unhone jaan bhuj keh nahi ki! likin jab tak woh kuch kar pate tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi!
tum is duniya mein agayi thi aur tumhari ma ye duniya chor keh chali gayi thi............tumhare papa ke ilawa tumhara koi nahi tha.........
......unhone mujhse sari zindagi apni iss karni ki maafi mangi.......woh waqai sharminda the, is liye mein ne bhi unhe maaf.........likin jab jab mein tumhe dekhti mujhe unki bhool aur us aurat ki shakal nazar ati.....aur tumhari koi galti na hote huwe bhi mein tumhe saaza deti rahi!!

hum log phir yahan shift ho gaye,,,,,chor diya woh shehar jisse humari purani yaadein juri thi!!!.........

guys....abhi keh liye itna hi....well this was to connect the story! ab yeh to tha tulsi ki zindagi ka woh sach jisse woh mumbai mein chor ayi thi.............magar kya yeh sach ab duniya se chupa payegi.........ya koi purani yaadein ake phir taza kar jayega.........
keep commenting everyone!

luv..........farah