do naam ek jaan (a fan- fic) - Page 4

Farahji wah wah kya story likhi hai...
Hai main maar jawan!!!
Awesum!!!! 👏

oye farah...gotta dedicate a song for u....

Oye bubbly oye bubbly be my friend bubbly
oye oagal oye pagal story likho pagal!
hehe what a bongi...yaar great rocking parts..mein tumhari story pc main save ker rhai hoon..i love it..amna kia karoon farah o kaisay choroon? hehe..luv ya kiran

ok guys......next part!

tulsi left the hospital as she remembered her past and got depressed. while charu and sujal were left shocked!

Charu: yeh sach kaise ho sakta hai......mama keh thi hain keh di unki beti nahi.............di........jo humare liye apni jaan bhi de sakti hain..............jo apni khushi ko bhula keh meri khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hain.......jo mama ko mujhse zaida pyaar karti hain.....................zaida izzat karti hain................jinhone apni ab tak ki zindagi mama ki ek pyaar bhari nazar ka intezaar karte guzari..............woh di......woh kashish, humari kuch nahi lagti..........(she is crying helplessly and sujal holds onto her)

sujal: charu, sambhalo khudko
charu: kasie sambhalon, kyaa yeh ek sach humein di se alag kar deta hai, kya woh sari qurbaniyan bhoolne ki ijazat de deta hai.................hargiz nahi!!!!
......mama kuch bhi kahien, di meri di thi aur hamesha raheingi, (wiping off her tears)
charu: aur mama ko yeh baat mani hogi,,,,,,,,,,,,to kya huwa agar unka di ke saath janam ka rishta nahi, khoon ka rishta nahi.................mamta ka rishta to hai na! jiska ehsaas unhe dilna hi hoga.

sujal: tum theek keh rahi ho charu! yeh to aunty bhi janti hain keh is sab mein kashish ka koi kasur nahi.....phir janne anjane woh ussi ko chot pohancha rahi hai, ab tumhe khud ko bhi sambhalna hai aur apni mama aur apni di ko bhi!

charu: (looking up at sujal) bhaiya, mein aapse ek baat puchon?
sujal: haan pucho
charu: (a little hesistent) agar kabhie di......
sujal: bolo
charu: mere kehne ka matlab hai, agar kabhie mein kamzor pari to kya aap di ko...............
sujal: (though she didnt complete her sentence magar uski ankhon mein sujal par leta hai keh woh sujal se kya chahti hai)
sujal: pata nahi yeh theek hai keh nahi.............magar ab yeh meri zindagi ki sab se khoobsurat haqeeqat hai...............kashish keh pass koi ho na ho.......mein hamesha uske saath rahonga!!!!!!!
charu: (khush hote huwe) thanx bhaiya...........mujhe aap peh pura bharosa hai!
sujal pats her on the shoulder.
charu: mein abhi ati hon, mama ko dekh keh (she leaves).........................................

sujal goes towards the ICU and sees her lying there. she is in deep sleep.
sujal: kal ki subah tumhare liye sirf khusiyan layegi...........kasshhish!


NEXT MORNING:

kashish ko hosh ajata hai, charu was still with her in her room, woh kashsih keh paas ja kar uska haath tham thi hai and makes kashish sit up.
charu: di, ab aap kaisi ho?
kashish: kuch bhetar hon.....magar mein yahan kaise
charu: woh............(before she could complete sujal and the doc enters)
doctor: so ms. kashish, kaisa feel kar rahi hain ab aap?
kashish: better,likin mujhe huwa kya tha, aur mein yahan kaise ayi?

sujal: (before anyone could say anything) oh noooo! please ab tum yeh mat kehna keh mein bhool gayi!! (making a funny face)
kashish: haan!....aur tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? (asking sujal)
sujal: mein.....haan.........mujhe ICU ke kamron keh bahir bhetna bahut acha lagta hai......mera part time kaam hai!
charu and the doc start to laugh!

kashish: sujal, tum kabhie mere sawalon ka seedha jawab nahi de sakte.
sujal: de sakta hon na, likin agar tum koi seedha sawaal pucho to. ab mein yahan hospital ki safai to karne nahi aya aur na hi doctor ka haal puchne aya hon. is kamre mein khara hon.........aur yahan sirf ek hi patient hai,,,,,,to obvioulsy tumhe dekhne aya hon

kashish: feel shy!

charu: di, aapka accident huwa tha, aur sujal bhaiya aapko yahan laye the
kashish looks at sujal (with respect and love aur nazrein neech kar leti hai)
sujal was smiling all the way through!

doc: charu aap mere saath ajayein, kuch papers sign kardein aur phir kashish ko discharge kar diya jayega!

the doc and charu leave.
kashish to sujal: thanx, aap mujhe yahan layein...ap na hote to....shayad......
sujal: (still smiling at kashish at staring at her constantly)
kashish: aise kyun dekh rahe hain?
sujal: nahi,......mein soch raha tha.
kashish: kya? (innocently)
sujal: yehi keh, keh kahin yeh chot ka asar to nahi
kashish: asar? chot ka? kya matlab?
sujal: bhai...aj aap itne pyaar se jo baat kar rahi hain............
kashish feels so shy and blushes, while sujal sits beside her on the bed.
sujal: waise thanx ki zaroorat nahi, mein ne aapki nahi khud apni madaat ki thi
kashish: jee?....mein samjhi nahi
sujal: (shakes his head) mein............mein tumse.................
...............before sujal could continue......................kuch interruption ho jati hai!!!!!!!

so kya sujal apni baat puri kar paye ga, kya kashish sujal ki undhri baat samajh paye gi...............well wait guyz........i am thinking !!!! hehehehe
coming up......tulsi, kashish and charu's talks and sujal with his mama!!!!!!!
so until then take care guys and thanx to each and everyone for liking my story!!!!!!!!!!mmuuuuuuuwwwaaahhhh\

so the next part...........
before sujal could finish there is an interruption..........
charu enters: di, ready, hum ab ja saktein hain
kashish: (charu ki taraf murti hai and say) mama.....mama kahan hain?
charu: woh....di woh yahin hi, kafi thak gayi thi isliye mein ne unhone ghar bhej diya thoda araam karne keh liye
kashish: tum sach keh rahi ho
charu: aur nahi to kya di, aap bhi na! chalo mein aapka samaan le ati hon reception se aap tayar ho jao, phir ghar chalein
charu leaves again. the nurse comes for the final check up and says that kashish should take care of her self, and leaves

kashish bed se utarti hai but she has got some injury in her foot too so she is in a litlle bit of pain...(yeh balaji hospital bhi na....dufferz theek se check bhi nahi kya...lol)
she trembles likin apna sujal tha na....he holds onto her tightly
sujal: sambhal kar kashish
kashish: woh...pair mein......its ok, i'll manage
sujal usse chorta hai and moves back a bit, but she still is not able to walk properly........
sujal: (comes and hold her again.)Agar sahara le lo gi to koi nuksaan nahi hoga, magar nahi liya to shayad ho jaye
kashsih, looks at him and decides to follow his order........

sujal to himself: aaj to sirf sahara dene ke liye tumhara haath thama hai,,,,magar ab yeh haath zindagi bhar keh liye tham na chahta hon.......tumhara humsafar.....jeevansaathi bana chahta hon

kashish: kuch kaha tumne....?
sujal (surprised) ummm...nahi to
kashish: (smiles and says to herslf) jo dil mein hai woh kehdo sujal,....isse pehle waqt kuch aur faisla kar de.

ok guys,its a short part.......but i was trying it out in this new sections. thanks sujalfan for the help!!!! but do tell me if this is the correct way????
take care everyone!
farah

ok, i'll continue with my part...........(do naam ek jaan)

sujal aur kashish dil hi dil mein apne pyaar ka izhaar kar dete hain.
charu, kashish and sujal are now outside the hospital

sujal: aiye, mein ap dono ko ghar tak chor deta hon
kashish: its ok, mein taxi peh chali jaongi
sujal: as you wish, ao charu ....lets go (sujal moves towards his car)
kashish: likin charu tumhare saath kyun.........
sujal: tumne hi to kaha keh tum taxi se chali jaogi, to charu ko mein chor deta hon
kashish: (looks at sujal with "dont be smart with me" look) mera matlab tha mein aur charu dono taxi peh jayenge!
charu: ok guys....cut it, di sujal ji......
kashish gives charu a strange look!!
charu:mera matlab sujal bhaiya itna keh rahe hain to is mein harj hi kya hai, chalo na di....lets go!

kashish looks at sujal and sujal nods his head , saying lets go!
sujal drives them both home but doesnt get off as he is getting late.
charu: bhaiya andar ayiye
sujal: nahi, phir kabhie abhi late ho raha hon
kashish: (thoda sharmate huwe) thanx
sujal: kis liye?
kashish: for everything! (they look at each other aur jaise waqt tham sa gaya ho, both give each other a hidden smile)
.............sujal leaves

GAREWAL HOUSE:
as sujal enters
veena: fursat mil gayi ghar ane ki. kahan reh gaye the?
sujal: mama, (hugging her) mein ne bataya tha na apne friend keh bare mein, hospital mein tha woh
veena: ab kaisa hai tumhara doost
sujal: bilkul theek....abhi usse ghar chor kar araha hon.
veena: waise yeh kon sa naya doost ban gaya hai? (veena smells something fishy is going around)
sujal: mmm...woh ....hai ek mama,aap nahi janti
(she turns around and holds sujal's ear lightly)
veena:tumhari ma hon, raag raag se wakif hon, chalo seedi tarah bataon...
sujal: kya.....mama?
veena: meri hone wali......bahu ka naam!!! (and pats sujal lightly on his cheek)
sujal gets a little embarressed!
sujal: mama woh.......nahi aisi koi........
veena: nahi, matlal koi nahi hai
sujal: nahi hai.....(he puts his hand through his hair, sharmate huwe) magar abhi tak mein ne usse kuch kaha nahi!

peeche se awaaz ayi
rishi: to ab keh dena Big B! aur agar nahi kaha ja raha to hum ja kar keh dete hain! kyun mama!
sujal: rishi, tum! tum ne mama ko bataya, mein tumhe....... (comes towards rishi but veena comes in btw)
veena: to, yeh nahi bata to tumhara khayal hai mujhe pata nahi chalta! chal ab jaldhi se uska naam bata de, kal mein aur tumhare papa tumhare rishte ki baat karne jayenge!!!
rishi: woooohoo. congrates big b!!!
sujal: (hugs her mama tightly) you're the best mama!!

upar se to sujal yeh jaan kar khush hota hai, likin uske maan mein eh baat usse pareshan kar rahi hoti hai......yehi keh jab uske ghar walon ko kashish keh bare mein pata chale ga.........to sujal ki mama aur dad kya socheinge!!!!!!!

well, guess this is enough for today.......warna aap bhi meri tarah paak jayenge . coming up..........kya sujal ka pyaar rishte mein bandh payega..............ya kashish ki zindagi ka karwa sach uski khushiyon ko ek bar phir usse door le jayega!!!!

tc. cheers
farah

ok......me continuing too!! (do naam ek jaan)

sujal was really happy at knowing keh uska pyaar ab rishte mein badal jayega, magar he was worried keh kya uski family kashish keh past ko apna payegi?????????

sujal: mama, woh sab to theek hai, magar mein chahta hon keh kashish se pehle mein khud baat kar lon!
rishi: big b, agar hum ne yeh baat aap peh chordi to shayad 10 20 saal tak aap baat kar hi leinge. (he started giggle)
veena: dekh, tum ne larki pasand karli, humein koi aitraaz nahi, ab baqi ki baatein hum kareinge, aur phir mere bete ko koi inkaar kar hi nahi sakta!!!!..........(hmmmmm.........over confidence!!!!)


.........KASHISH"S HOUSE

charu and kashish enter the house, tulsi is in her room! kashish is somewhat nervous and scared, whether she should go and talk to tulsi or not.
charu: di, mama kamre mein hain, aap unse milo!
kashish: haan......mein...........magar, woh...(she is still confused)
charu: di, yeh jo rishte hain na yeh itni asaani se nahi tute, aap hi mujhe kaha karti thi na jab mein mama se naraz ho jati thi. to phir yehi baat mein aaj aapko keh rahi hon. aap jao aur mama se baat karo
kashish: (has tears in her eyes) charu tum kuch nahi janti.........
charu: janti hon di, likin sab kuch janne ke baad bhi jab mere aur aapke rishte mein koi fark nahi hai to mama keh liye aapke pyaar mein kaise ho sakta hai!
kashish is quite shocked at knowing this.
kashish: charu yeh tum kya keh rahi hon
charu: haan di, mama ne hospital mein mujhe sab kuch bataya tha!

while both the sisters were talking tulsi comes down the stairs to where kashish and charu were.

tulsi: ab kaisi tabiyat hai?
kashish: (gets more tears in her eyes) mama, i am sorry..........meri wajah se aapko sari zindagi ek bujh uthaye jeena para, mere karan aapki zindagi jahanum se bhi batar ho gayi..........mera aapki ankhon ke samne rehna shayad kisi saza sa kaam nahi tha..............(she starts to weep) nafrat hoti hai muje khudse.......kyun mein bach gayi.....mera mar jaana hi behtar hota!!!!

tulsi: (who is standing firm comes close to kashish and picks her up from the floor holding her arms) khabar daar jo dobara aisi baat ki to, mera maara mun dekhegi!

kashish: mama!!!!
tulsi: (also crying awwwww...like daghter like mother. lol) tu sirf meri beti hai, galti meri thi jo tujhe mein samajh nahi payi. tu kya huwa agar tumne meri qook se janam nahi liya to..........teri ma to sirf mein hi hon na! (abe kya palta mara hai!!! tulsi maiya you are great )
kashish: (now with khushi keh tears) mama, mein........aap hi meri mama ho, aur koi nahi! (they both hug each other warmly and tulsi consoles her)

meanwhile charu who was standing a side while wiping her tears showed a thumbs up sign to tulsi and tulsi gracefully acknowledged it......happy family!!!)

par aap sab janna chahte honge keh tulsi ne yeh patla kyun mara, i mean when did she changed her opinion......so this was not long ago, infact yesterday night, jab charu tulsi keh peeche ayi thi hospital se tab ki baat hai.......................FLASHBACK)

charu enters her house and sees tulsi sitting on the sofa and crying.
charu: aap ro kyun rahi ho mama? di jeeye ya mare aapko kya fark parta hai, unka aur humara rishta hi kya hai.
tulsi (snubbing her) charu! woh teri bari behen hai, khabar dar jo is tareeke se uske liye baat ki to
charu: kya woh sirf meri bari behen hain, aapki kuch nahi? (with twinkling eyes)
tulsi: ......haan uska rishta tumse hai......mujhse uska koi nata nahi
charu: agar unka ap se koi naata nahi to yeh ansoo kis ke liye baha rahi hain?
tulsi: (looks at charu ) mein.....apne pati ke liye...jin se kiya huwa wadah mein nibaaah nahi payi
charu: kis pati ke liye mama? woh jis ne aapko dhoka diya? aap se pehle kisi aur aurat keh saath naja........
tulsi slaps charu tightly
charu: kyun...takleef hui mama. us aadmi keh liye jis ne aapko aapki zindagi ka sab se bara dhuk diya........us aadmi ko to apne maaf kar diya..........aur unki kiye ki saza di ko deti chali gayi! yeh kaisa insaaf tha mama aapka??
tulsi: (......thinking) ....woh mujhse bahut pyaar karte the........
charu: aur di! kya di aapse kaam pyaar karti hain?
tulsi looked at charu with eyes wide open.
charu: kyun aapki nazron mein di keh pyaar ki koi ihmiyat nahi! sirf kyun ke unka aapse khoon ka rishta nahi!...........mama apne dil peh haath rakh keh batayein keh kya di aapko mujhse zaida pyaar nahi karti?
tulsi soch mein par jati hai, uska dil kuch aur keh raha hota hai aur dimaag kuch aur!
charu: bolo mama, bolo/. di ka kasoor kya hai? bolo
tulsi: (cry outs loud) to kya mein usse kaam pyaar karti hon!!!! maaana keh usse dekhte hi mujhe beeti baatein yaad ajati hai magar mera dil janta hai keh mein usse kitna pyaar karti hon..........
charu: to phir di se kehti kyun nahi. kyun khud bhi ghut ghut keh jee rahi ho aur di jo bhi jeete jee mar rahi ho................
charu hugs tulsi and tells her to make a decision. either follow her heart aur follow her dimaag!!!...............rest you all know!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(FLASH BACK ENDS)

NEXT DAY............GAREWAL HOUSE (sunday yani choti ka din)

veena: are jaldhi keejiye na, der ho rahi hai. Mrs sinha intezaar kar rah hongi!

rishi: mama, i ready!
sujal: are tum kahan ja rahe ho?
rishi: apni bhabie jee se milne big B, aur kahan!
sujal: nahi mama, plz, rishi nahi jayega! yeh wahan sara kaam bighar dega, aur waise bhi tumhara college hai!
rishi: big b aaj sunday hai!! aur aap dar kyun rahe ho trust me na!
sujal: mama!
veena: haan rishi tum nahi jaoge, aaj sirf mein aur tumhare papa jayenge, tum yehin rahe kar apne bhaiya ko sambhalna..........
rishi: mom...not fair..........chalo koi baat nahi, face to face nahi to kya huwa phone peh baat karlunga!

So finally the garwal duo gets ready and goes to the sinha house, jahan tulsi unka intezaar kar rahi thi.....

kashsih: mama ap itni tayariyan kyun kar rahi ho? kon ane wala hai?
tusli: kuch khaas log hain, aur tum bhi zara ache se tayar ho jao!
charu was also busy cleaning the house and preparing! keh achanak door bell beeji!
ding dong.....
tulsi: shayad woh log agaye! charu ja keh darwaza khol!
charu opens the door and says namaste to veena and chetan! and welcomes them both indide.
tulsi greets them and they start to have a friendly conversation!

veena: tulsi jee, kashish nazar nahi arahi!
tulsi: jee woh yehi hain, charu ja bula keh lana di ko
charu: abhi ayi!
charu goes up in kashish's room.: di chalo mama neeche bula rahi hain.
kashish: acha ati hon.
charu: jaldhi se!!!!
kashsih comes down stairs and meets sujal's parents. veena to kashish ko dekhte hi 32 dant ki smile deti hai and chetan too is glad to see her
veena: bahut pyaari beti hai aapki! likin tulsi jee hum aaj yahan isse apni beti bana ke liye ayen hain, agar aapko koi aitraaz na hoto......mere bete sujal ke liye......apki kashish ka haath...........

everyone smiles and tulsi is over joyed..........sab khush hain siwaye...........kashish keh.
tulsi: aaj aapne mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse bari khushi di hai...................
...........charu hugged kashish, but there was no response but suddenly kashish came back to her senses and said
kashish: mama.........mein yeh shaadi .........nahi karti sakti!

tan tan tanna!!!!!!!!!!! Everyone is left shocked!

kya wajah hai keh kashish ne sujal se shaadi se inkaar kiya.......kya yeh inkaar ikrara mein badal payega...............well.........lets hope so!
its a long part today............hope i havent bored you! tc. and enjoy
farah!

conitunue soon!!
nice to see the story again
Pooja

😕 😕 WHY????
Anyways GR88888888888 longggggggggg parts!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesum!!!!

please please farah
post the next parts
hope tos ee your marvelous story soon!
Pooja

Farah madam zara parts post ker dein plz...actually her computer has some prob and exams too...bachoo kal paper hai na!!! best of luck..