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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx a lot for the encouragement.I did'nt put Mann's pic last time only bcz he had'nt entered the story.Friends...plz send me friend's request.so that its easy 2 pm u all

Colourful birds Part 2







Armaan and Rishi look at Arjun with jealousy.
Arm:We just landed.How did you get a girlfriend so fast?
Arjun is shy.
A:I like her.But i don't know whether she has the same feeling for me.
Rishi and Armaan smile.
A:There is an old lady in that house.Geet is her grand daughter.The other three girls are paying guests.
Armaan is excited:Three girls more?
A:Yes.Other than Geet there are Arohi,Riddhima and Charu.Charu's mom is not well.So she has gone home.

Mann is sleeping.His mind tells:Mann...there will be a girl waiting for you in the new place.
Mann wakes up.He smiles.

Mann gets out of the bus.He walks on the grass.Mist everywhere.He sees a girl walking.But because of the mist the girl is not seen clearly.He tries to see her.But he realizes that the girl has vanished.He remembers what his innervoice told him:
Mann...there will be a girl waiting for you in the new place.
He smiles.Suddenly a car reaches there.Armaan,Rishi and Arjun get out of the car.
R:Hey Mann!
They hug Mann.
Arm:We missed you.
M:Me too.
Mann enters the car with them.
Arm:Life will be cool here.
R:Beautiful flowers...very romantic atmosphere.
They reach the house.Rishi,Armaan and Arjun look at the neighbouring house.Mann notices it.
M:I don't think that just beautiful flowers can create a romantic atmosphere.
Arm:You are right.
M:That means there are beautiful flowers inside the house also?
R:Yes.Three girls.We were waiting for you to come to go and meet them.
M:Within a short time what all has happened?Ok.Let me get ready.

Armaan,Mann,Arjun and Rishi go to the neighbouring house.
The old lady of the house Devi get along with them very well.Rishi's eyes are on Geet.Armaan sees Riddhima.That moment his attention diverts from Geet to Riddhima.He can't take his eyes off her.Riddhima realizes that.So she is irritated.She hates his smile.But she suppresses her anger and tries to smile back.She says in her mind:
I don't want to hurt Devi dadi by insulting the guest.Otherwise a scene would have been created.How dare he?This dumb Armaan is not worth for me.
Arjun smiles at Arohi.Arohi winks at him to tease him.Arjun becomes shy.She makes funny faces at him.Rishi sees it and whispers to Arjun:I thought Arohi is in madly in love with you when you kept talking about her.But see..she is making fun of you.She is just making you crazy.
Arjun feels bad.Rishi moves away.Arjun looks at Arohi.She winks at him again.He turns back with a dull face.Arohi giggles.

Mann goes to the washroom and washes his hands.Geet comes that way.When Mann turns to go out of the room,by mistake his body hits Geet.Geet puts her arm on his shoulder to prevent herself from falling down.They both look into each other.Mann has a killing look.
M:I'm sorry.
G:It's ok.
Mann goes out of the wash room.

All the four guys are jogging.Mann's eyes are struck by the mist.He is sure that there is a girl hidden there.He looks at that eagerly.The other guys turn back.They see Mann standing and staring at something.
A:Why are you not jogging with us and standing here simply?
Arm:Is there any flower girl here?
M:Not a flower girl.A girl who is beautiful and pure like snow.
"Where?"They ask.
He looks at the mist.His face becomes dull as he does'nt see anyone there.
R:Where is she?
Mann's face bends down.
Mann could'nt sleep that night.

The next morning Mann goes for jogging alone.
He sees a girl in the park.She looks as if she is covered with snow.
Mann to himself:Today i will see her face.
Suddenly he hears a voice:Mann!
He turns back.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update.. waiting for rishi-charu meet n more of maneet.. do continue soon..
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nice update.thx 4 the pm.try to add more mann n geet scenes.do pm me when u will update
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update soon and add me to your pm list
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hey cool yaar pls update soon good going
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superbb!!!

continue soon....add me to ur pm list!!!!
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wow
awesome
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hey....that was fab...really awesome

loved it...totally rocking 👏👏👏

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Awesomeeeeee!!!
Waiting for maneet scenes.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Colourful birds Part 3





Rishi,Arjun and Armaan are staring at Mann.
Arjun:Why did you go out without telling us?We searched for you.
He looks at the mist.There is no girl there.He gets angry.
M:Why did you all come now?
R:You are blaming us?
Mann's eyes become wet:The day i landed here itself one girl won my heart.I could'nt see her face till now.Early morning i see her.But because of the mist i'm not able to see her face.I thought atleast today i can see her face.But because of you guys it did'nt happen.
Armaan laughs:You are mad.Before seeing the face itself you fell in love with her.
R:When there are hot chics near our house why are you after this veiled girl?I have chosen Geet for me.Why don't you choose one among them?What about Riddhima?
Armaan gets irritated:No way.I'm there for Riddhima.
Arjun:Arohi is for me.
R:Ok..then you take Charu when she come back.
Mann loses his control:Stop it.Don't play cupid.
A:Ok ok.
R:Don't be upset.You relax.We never expected you to be so emotional.We won't desturb you anymore.You wait.Tomorrow she will be waiting here for you.
Mann is relieved.

Armaan looks out through the window.He is excited to see Riddhima entering the compund of the neighbouring house.She has worn a bright red salwar kameez.He smiles.Riddhima sees him.She does'nt smile back.
Arm thinks:No problem.One day you will smile sweetly for me.
Riddhima walks away without bothering about him.
Armaan sits on the sofa and looks at his costume.
Arm:My dress is red.Her's also is red.What a match!We truly match each other.

Arjun thinks about Arohi's fair fresh face and her stylish nose ring.A cute smile appears on his face.

The next morning..
Mann is waiting at the park looking at the mist.Somebody calls him:Mann!
Mann turns back.That is Geet.
G:Why are you alone here?
M:That is because...why are you here?
G:I come here daily.One flower seller comes here.I come here to buy flowers.I love keeping flowers in my room.
M:There are so many flower pots in your house.
G:Ya..but i don't feel like plucking those blooming flowers.
A flower seller comes.Geet buys flowers from her.That time Mann looks at the mist.He becomes upset as he does'nt see any girl there.


The next morning also Mann waits at the park.A lot of yellow flowers are lying on the ground.He buys roses from the flower seller.
M:I will give these roses to that girl.
But he gets upset again about not finding her there.
He goes back.When he reaches near the gate of the house a cute dog jumps upon him and manages to snatch the roses from him and runs to the neighbouring house.Mann is so irritated that he runs behind the dog.The dog enters the house.Mann also.He becomes embarassed seeing Geet there.The dog shows the flowers to Geet as if the flowers are for her..She takes those roses and smiles at Mann.
M:I'm sorry.I got inside the house by mistake.
He runs away.Geet giggles seeing it.She looks at the flowers and pampers her dog lovingly.Her dog's name is Romeo.

Mann is sitting silently in the room.
Armaan:Forget that stupid dream.You waited for her.But did you see her?You may not see her in the future also.Don't waste your time.
Arjun:Be practical.
Mann hugs Rishi and bursts into tears.
Rishi becomes upset:What is this?You are behaving like a kid.
They all become upset feeling Mann's pain.

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