Colourful birds Maneet FF Pg 40 Climax - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

293

Views

59.8k

Users

48

Likes

583

Frequent Posters

pickachu thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Plzz don't make maan upset.
Let him meet his dream girl.I hope she is geet.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
.sireesha. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Thats Awesome Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved both the parts sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
OMG when is Maan going to know that the Girl is Geet............................
Pls UPdate Soooooooooooon
_darklove_ thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#33
nice ff u didn't tell me u wrote a maaneet ff
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Colourful birds Part 4





Rishi goes to the neighbouring house.He looks at the flower pots.He plucks two flowers.
Geet sees it.She raises her voice:Don't pluck flowers.
Rishi is embarassed:Why?
Geet does'nt say anything.Rishi goes near with naughty smile.His eyeballs roll on her.She realizes it.So she tries to go inside.
R:Geet!
R:If you did'nt like me plucking flowers i will return these flowers to the owner.
He extends the flowers to her.
She takes it with hesitation.
R:Plucking flowers happen unknowingly.
Her face becomes red.
R:Do you know why?To be able to give flowers to someone we love is a luck.Right?
It strikes her heart.She goes inside silently.Rishi is about to walk out.Suddenly Arohi comes out.
A:Give my regards to Arjun.
R:So it's a two way romance?
A:What?
R:I thought Arjun's is one way affair.But now i understood that the route is clear.
Arohi is shy.
R:I will convey your regards to him.I will even give your heart to him.But what will you give me in return?
Arohi did'nt like his tone.
A:You like flowers.Right?Geet scolded you for plucking flowers no.Don't bother.I will give you all the flowers.
R:No need of giving me all the flowers.I need only one flower.
A:Which flower?
R:Geet.Only Geet.
A:What?
Rishi goes away with a smile.
A:What is he saying?
Arohi is blank.

Geet is looking at the flowers and thinking of Rishi's words:To be able to give flowers to someone we love is a luck.
Mann's face comes into her mind.

Geet goes to the boys' house with different types of flowers and keeps them on the verandah.Then she goes away.Mann was standing behind the door.When she walks towards the gate he comes out and looks at her and the flowers.
He thinks:I guess these flowers are for Rishi.She must have understood that Rishi loves her a lot.She loves him too.

Mann knocks the door of the bathroom.Rishi is bathing there.
M:Rishi!
Rishi comes out only after 1/2 an hour.He has worn only his shorts.
M:Why did'nt you open the door when i called you?
R:Because i knew that you will bore me by talking about the girl who hides in the mist.Old topic.I'm fed up.
M:Then listen..Geet had come here.That's why i called you.
Rishi can't believe it:What?
M:I think she feels guilty.She scolded you for plucking flowers no.To correct her mistake she brought a lot of flowers.
R:Where are the flowers?
M:She kept them at the verandah.
R:Oh!I missed it.You could have told me this before.
M:How can i tell it?You were humming songs while bathing.
R:I will go and take the flowers now.
M:No.Never do that.
R:Why?
M:If she sees you in this bath costume she will have a bad impression about you.She is a well cultured girl.
R:I can't wait anymore.You please bring those flowers.
Mann goes and takes the flowers from the verandah.Geet sees it from her compound.She is relieved.
She says in her mind:Luckily the flowers reached Mann's hands.
Mann sees her looking at him.He smiles.She gets embarassed.
She thinks:Mann realized that i was waiting here to see him taking the flowers.

Rishi receives the flowers from Mann and keeps them close to his chest.
R:To be able to give flowers to the beloved and to get flowers from the beloved are a luck.Right?
Mann smiles.

Mann buys rose flowers from the flower seller and looks around for his girl.He feels upset and keeps the roses on a chair in the park.
Mann says in his mind:Though i have not seen you you are my beloved.I keep flowers here for you my beloved.
Geet sees it from a distance.After Mann goes,Geet takes those roses and keeps them close to her heart.
This repeated everyday.

It's raining.Arjun walks in the rain.
A:This stupid rain!
Arohi who is catching an umbrella sees him and calls his name:Arjun!
Arjun turns back.His face becomes pleasant seeing her.She smiles.Suddenly his face becomes dull.Arohi becomes dull.She goes near him and holds the umbrella for him also.
A:Why are you so serious with me now?
Ar:I was always serious Arohi.But you see me just as a funny guy.So you always makes fun of me.
A:I'm sorry Arjun.I make fun of the people who are very close to me.I thought you are a good friend.That's why...
Arjun is relieved and he smiles.She is relieved.
A:So finally you smiled funny man.
They both laugh.Suddenly they become serious and get lost in each other's eyes.They become conscious after a moment.
A:Let us walk Arjun.
Ar:Ok.
They both walk holding the umbrella together.

Armaan looks out through the window.He sees Riddhima dancing in the rain.She is wet and hot.He is mesmerised by her look.He dreams of a romantic dance with her in the rain.The romantic song 'jaana zindagi se na jana
pyar ka yeh khazana loot na jaye kahi
jaana hum rahenge tumhare
hain jab tak sitarein, hain jab tak zameen...'Aapka Abhijeet Sawant (Album}.


Geet and Devi step out of their house to go to the temple.
They are surprised to see Rishi in their compound.
D:What's the matter Rishi?
Mahima_13 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail A Bag Full of Love OS Contest Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#35
part 3-
yeh maan bhi na
but its awesome
dimpzz thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#36
hey jasmine!
nyc update......waiting for d moment when maan comes to noe tat d girl in d mist is geet..........
n rishi shudn't bcum a problem for both of them..........charu shud cum fast n he shud go behind her ....lol
update soon :)

luv
Navpreet
Mahima_13 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail A Bag Full of Love OS Contest Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#37
part 4-
flowers were for maan
but maan thought they were for rishi
omg
hope misunderstanding clears soon
pickachu thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
I hope misunderstandings between maneet will be clear.
Thanxx for the pm.
charmed ones thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Thaks 4 reat update..>!!!!👏👏👏

I was waiting 4 it...!!!!😊
I hope Maan sees Geet soon...!!!!😳
have 2 twist same tym.... Mann ses Geet😳 n Charu cme bk n goes behind Rishi...!!!!!😆😆😆😆
Update soon...!!!!😊
smarty2010 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awesome part.so maan thinks geet luvs rishi.omg.but geet luves maan.god wt a trianglethx 4 the pm

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

3 months ago

Punishment sequel to destiny of love ( Climax))

Hey there, readers , Just a quick note: I wanted to let you know that since the old module is now locked, I've created a new one for you. You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".