Colourful birds Maneet FF Pg 40 Climax - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update... wanna c maneet together.. plzz no triangle.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
hey iwant Mannet romance kick this Rishi Geet sirf Maan signh Khurana ki hai wow cant wait when Maan will come to know that mist girl is Geet.update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Thats Awesome Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Thats Lovely❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
But Im feeling bad abt Maan's misunderstanding regarding Geet-Rishi.
Pls clear the misunderstanding sooooooooooooon
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Sooooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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add me 2 the pm list please.............😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
hi Jasmine,

Sizzling updates? So you have brought in 4 leading pairs together in one FF. Thats really Great but ensure you give equal importance to all the pairs. By the way, (sorry if it hurts) I am not sure of Rishi & charu's, from which serial are they from?

Your Maan is too emoitional & soft hearted who can cry his heart out for not meeting his dream girl? That is really amazing, every where else, we can see the typical sadoo Maan and here is a change in his character. loved it.

keep sending the PMs
Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Rishi & Charu r from Kahin to hoga.But they wer not a pair in KTH.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

hey...that was really nice...i so loved it...

it was really nice...so keep writing

and do cont'd soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
hey ur ff is really sweet...
add me to ur PM list plzz..
continue updating...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Colourful birds Part 5





Rishi:I saw new types of flowers in the flower shop.So i thought i will get them for Geet.I mean you all like flowers.
Devi smiles.
Geet sees two new flower pots in the compound.Geet goes near the flower pots and smiles.
D:You are right.We all love flowers especially Geet.
Rishi tells in his mind:I know that.That's why i brought flowers.
D:We are going to the temple.
R:Ok carry on.
D:Don't you go to temples?
R:Yes yes...ok..then i will make a move.Bye.
Rishi goes.
D:Rishi is a nice boy.
Geet smiles.

Geet is looking at the sea waves.
She hears a whistle.She turns back.That is Rishi.He smiles.He has worn sun glasses.He removes it.
R:Why are you here?
G:What do you think?
R:You are enjoying the beauty of the beach.
G:Yes.Why?I can't do that Mr.Rishi?
R:Nothing like that.Since your childhood you have been watching this.Still you are not bored?
G:You are right.I have been watching this since my childhood.I love it that much.
R:No wonder.It is that beautiful.
G:I don't come here to see the beauty.
Rishi looks at her with curiosity.
G:I feel that my parents come here.I come here to see them.
She smiles.But Rishi sees pain in her smile.
Geet goes away.Rishi is numb.He can't move.
Arjun and Arohi come there by kinetic honda.
A:What a speed Arohi!I got tensed.
Arohi laughs:You are scared of everything Arjun.
They move towards Rishi.
A:Why are you standing here like this?
A:Geet has'nt come yet?
Rishi looks dull.
R:She came.Became very sentimental and went away soon.
A:What did you tell her to make sentimental?
R:We just talked about this beach.
A:I thought so.It's like that.Talking about this beach makes her sentimental and nostalgic.
Arjun giggles:Is the sea water the result of Geet's sentiments?
A:Sea waves snatched Geet's parents from her.They drowned here.They never returned.When she comes here she feels that her parents are coming back.
Rishi and Arjun feel sad for Geet.

Rishi sees Geet in the temple.
G:Hi Rishi.
R:Surprise!First time i'm seeing you here.
G:That's because you don't come here.
Rishi is embarassed.
Rishi and Geet walk out.They pass a church.
Enchanting music is flowing.
G:When i hear the music from the chapel i go to another world.Listening to the piano music is a feeling.Right?
R:Do you read piano?
G:No.I don't know how to use it.
R:I will teach you.
G:Really?
R:Yes.

Geet buys a piano.Every evening Rishi takes piano class for Geet.Mann,Armaan,Arjun,Arohi and Riddhima think that it is a part of their romance.

Geet is in the wonderland of piano music.She dreams...
A snowy night.She has worn a beautiful glittering white saree and diamond earrings.She is reading piano.
Mann who has worn a black outfit looks very handsome.He comes close to her with lots of white flowers.She takes flowers from him.Then they dance to the sizzling piano music.

Arohi goes to the boys' house.Rishi,Mann and ARmaan try to move away to give privacy to Arjun and Arohi.
A:Don't go anywhere.I just came to inform you all about the evening show in Town Hall.It will be a rocking show with dance and music.
Armaan:How do you know that?
A:I know that.Because i'm also there to dance.
Armaan:Really?Then be careful.
A:Why?
Arm:It will be better if you take the speech session.That will be easy for you.You can keep chatting.Chatterbox!
Arjun gives him a pat.
Arm:Strong love.Arjun did'nt like me teasing his beloved.
Arjun and Arohi blush.
Mann:Only Arohi is taking part from your gang?
A:Ya.Geet did'nt get time to prepare.Riddhima has no interest.She is interested only in cosmetics and costumes.
Armaan thinks:Seems that my pocket will become empty in future buying cosmetics and costumes for her.
A:Since Charu is not here she can't participate.Otherwise she would have danced.She is trained Kathak dancer.
Arm:I can't understand why you are giving a long description about the show.
A:You did'nt get me?You all should come for the show.You all can try.Atleast Arjun should come.
Mann,Rishi and Armaan hoot at Arjun.Arjun is shy.Arohi giggles.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
reserved ok frm this i get soo far that rishi likes geet (gosh wen is charu cuming?)
the gang thinks its their romance
geet likes maan
and i have a feeling geet is the misty girl that maan likes
okk i'll be bak later to discuss further
need tym to digest today's episode
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago

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