Colourful birds Maneet FF Pg 40 Climax

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is my ff here.Plz support me...

pg 21:Pt 10

Pg 23:Pt 11
pg 26:Pt 12
Pg 29:Pt 13
Pg 32:Pt 14
Pg 35:Pt 15
Pg 37:Pt 16
Pg 40:Pt 17




Arjun,Rishi,Armaan are college students who move to a rented house.They stay in a house near a beach.They loved the location,but they can't enjoy it as their friend Mann has'nt reached yet.Mann could'nt join them on time as his distant relative is sick.
Rishi opens the window and peeps into the neighbouring house.He sees a lot of flower pots there.
Armaan:What are you looking?Who is there?
He looks there curiously.
He is disapoointed:Nothing is there.Why are you looking there?
R:I am looking at the flowers.So beautiful.Very romantic.Fragrance of love.
Arm:Nonsense!Romantic atmosphere.But nobody to romance.
Armaan teases him.
Arjun laughs.
Arjun looks out of the window.His eyes blossom.Armaan joins Rishi and Arjun to look outside.
He realizes that their eyes are on a beautiful girl who is touching a flower.She is a fair girl whose lips are like rose petals.Her silky hair flies in the air.
R:I wish i was the flower she is touching.
Somebody calls her from inside:Geet!
R:Geet..that's her name.She is soft and beautiful like music.
Geet goes inside.
Arm:Her cheek is like an apple.
A:She is pretty.But i will describe only after meeting her.
Arm:O!Really?Will you be able to meet her?Rishi..this is really a romantic area like you said.
Arjun goes out of the room and peeps into the neighbouring house.
"Whom do you want to see?"
He hears a voice.He looks behind.
He sees a snowy girl.
A:Who are you?How did you enter our compound?
She smirks:I climbed the wall and jumped into your compund.You were busy peeping into our house.So you did'nt see me getting inside.
He is embarassed.
She smiles.He also smiles.
She:Why are you smiling?
A:Seeing your pearl like smile.
She:Pearl like smile?What an awkward statement!Is it that comic?
He grins.
She:Well!What's your name?
A:Arjun.
She:Not bad.I realized that you are a sweet flirt.You were peeping into our house shamelessly.
A:No....you are misunderstanding me.
She:Were you looking at Geet?I saw you and your friends looking at her.
Arjun is embarassed again:How?
She:i was walking along the road.That time i saw it.You guys could'nt see me through the window.
A:Your accent is like punjabi...are you a punjabi?
She:Yes.
A:Me too.
She:Really?I did'nt feel so.
A:You are good at talking.What's your name?
She:Arohi.
Armaan sees it through the window.
Arm:Rishi...see this.Arjun has already found a girl.He is flirting with her now.
R:What?
Rishi goes near the window.They both look at Arjun and Arohi till they bid good-bye.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice.do continue.pm me the next update.plz
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Veryyyyy nice part.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


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wow nice one.. liked the update.. cant wait for maneet meet.. do continue soon
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wow
interesting
i really love it
awesome job
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Hey pls add me in ur PM list and pls update soon but one ? where is Maan pic pls add his pis also and ur doing good job pls update soon badly waiting.
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hey...that was really nice...
i really liked it..
do cont'd soon....
and no maan...but
will be waiting for him....
do add me 2 ur pm list...
thx and keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey jasmine!
thnxx for d pm dear :)
n lyked d ff
do continue.....
n no maan.....:(
no probz will b waiting for him in d nxt update
do get him :)

luv
Navpreet
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Hi 😊

Seems really interesting 😊
Continue soon...

No maan pic 😭
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Thats a Great Start Dear👍🏼
Loved it❤️
Interesting
Pls Bring Maan sooooooooon
Pls Continue sooooooooooooooon

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