~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 1~ - Page 23

OMG! LOVING this FF! ;))

awwwwww dat was sooo cuteeee epi

awesome part

I read part 2 + 3 yesterday but was unable to comment but I still wrote a comment, and will post it before reading part 4.. i absolutely cannot wait to read the part.. will come and edit this once i've read part 4 =D
Wow muskan.. In response to part 2 + 3, muskan evry word was like beautiful poetry. I love the way you've written their feelings, the atmosphere their confusion and everything. Its really beautiful. The previous part, maneets 2nd encounter was depicted amazingly. You've written this ohh-sooo well - can't tell you.. I could picture it all perfectly. Every description u gave was wondeful. There is already so much intensity between them, an immense urgency to want to be together but its baffling for them too. This is so intriguing and so different from ur other ff. I adore it so much already and am honestly in awe of the way u've written it. I absolutely love it and can't wait for the next part! The story is moving quickly but the suspense is killer...Thank u so much for ur pm's as well. I was eagerly awaiting fr u to update to this ff more than the other 1.. 😳 This one has a completely different feel to it.. Oustanding work muski!

*edit... omg muskiiiiiii!!!! 🤗 u know what.. i really love u! ur such an awesome writer! itne zabardast scenes, and dialogues and everything..!! hayye... awwesome update! after reading the last parts, i was soooo looking forward to what u were gonna write next..! I didnt imagine sucha hot "interview.." if we can call it that 😆 their closeness was like Maneet's in the show, which is very special 😊 Also the way u'v described Maan, omg.. ☺️ be it the way Geet perceives him, or the narration u'v given about him, or even his dialouges.. Maan is sooo hawwwt! 😆 I just wanna give u a bigg hug for how well you've put this all together!

I also gotta say, that I lovedddd this line from geet to the baby:

"..yah I know papa ko dehk kar naach raha hain..
just shut-up & sleep.."

i was laughing / giggling soo much when i read that line !! that was sooooo cuuuute and suuuuper funny muskan!! really capturing the character of the original geet from the show i must say 😆 Lovely Lovely Lovely update!!! I soooooo love this ff of urs, it rocks!! and So Do You! Meri suuuperrrrstar!!
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wow. great update. i love ur stories. i love when she talks to the baby

muskan,ur hindi is really good yaar....

its really nice 2 see how beautifully u put the words.... n of course,d update was gr88888👏👏 aur,maan srk type nhi hua to kya.....srk se kuch kam vi to nhi hai!!!!😃😆😃 what say????

😛😉 awsome....update...loved it again..plz try to post da nxt update by tody..my eyes r dying to read d nxt one soooo plzzz doooo hurry ...muskaan👍🏼

hw can u handle writin 2 really fab ffs simultaneously.madhoshi have a very different feel of writn but the depth of love and passion in both the ffs r the same.

thank you for the pm............love it..........please continue soon..................

di trust me....u write awesome..i am even reading ur madhoshi....but dont get tym to comment...since i cum online evry less...but dont forget to send em the pm of madhoshi toooo