FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 4 - Page 95

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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!
geet thinks sooo much about maan!...too good!..and knows in and out of him!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan.....ur ff is really gr8...😊
u r an amzing writer....👏
loved ur ff....n plz add me on ur pm list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats a Fabulous Update
Loved it
Loved Geet calling Maan Sadoo..............
Loved these lines sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
kyun mujhe se itna pyar karthi hoo..
pata nahi..yah ehsaas kya hain aur kyun hain...lekin mujhe aab is ehsaas se daar laagne laaga hain..
I just Loved it soooooooooooooo much
The pics are soooooooooooooooooooooooo Lovely
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow to good plz update soon and plz add me to your PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago

a wonderful update...

meaningful conversation btw maan and geet.....loved it yaar
plz update soon and thnxxxx for this brilliant update
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

geet passed a glance to maan...(she knew maan would get bothered)
pari shied.. maan was restless..looking at geet..

part 114

after the meeting geet shook hands with pari & maan
maan did'nt leave her hand...she pulled back (maan kept looking into her eyes)
geet - we shall work with the creative team & get back to u with the first proof..
maan - umm
geet gave a warm formal smile & left the room..maan & pari spoke with Arjun for
little longer..maans eyes was looking for geet..
maan mailed her..where are u??(5.05pm)

geet did'nt reply..
geet finished her work & walked out of PM media...he pulled her hand & dragged her to car


geet - aap office nahi gaye..u have a meeting at 6pm right?
maan - I was waiting for u
geet - mera gadi bhi hain...aur jaasos bhi...
maan rolled his eyes..he had given up explaining that he was her body gaurd
maan - main tumhe mile bhina kaise chale jatha..
she smiled..
maan - ise smile ke intzaar me kada tha...
maan instructed his driver to follow in her car..
geet - kyun...?
maan - main aapne biwi ke saath coffee peena chatha hoon..

Really? Only coffee? Muskan you are ikidding, how come your Maan is satisfied with so little?

geet had a widder smile & sat in the car...
they drew to a drive in coffee shop...he placed their order
& turned to her..
maan - geet are u fine with this job?
geet - yah I love it..
maan looked worried
geet - aap ko kyun laga ki main khush nahi?
maan - nahi..Arjun is genrally very rude with females
geet - smiled..
maan - but he seems to be fine with u...infact I have never seen him speak to any other
(geet could see a tinch of jeaslous in that concerned eyes..she loved it..)
female so nicely...apna jadoo ..use sadoo boss bhi chalaa diya
geet - aap se jada to sadoo nahi hain..(she smirked)
maan - SADOO...
geet closed her mouth with her hands..
maan moved closer..sadoo...umm!! & bit her lips...

Here you go, I knew he is upto something more than just coffee? He wnated to drink her beauty than the coffee, Coffee was just the excuse to spend extra time with his wify........ but, btw, how could he bit her lip while she was closing her mouth with her hands?😉😉😉😉😉


geet pulls back...aap ko ghar ke bhar hi romance soojh tha hain..
maan - tum kaho to ghar main chal kar romance kar lethe hain
geet hides her face in his chest..he pats her head & places a kiss .
If Geet can kiss him on his lips @ someone else's office in front of 2 other people (though they didn't bother to look @ these 2), will stay back and accept his defeat? All he did is kiss her in the proximity of their car. Have some more couraneg Mr.Maan Siongh Khurana..........(I know she kissed him to keep his anger cool).


waiter gets their order..geet pulls apart & straighten herself..

while sipping the coffee..
maan - geet I am really sorry..
geet looks at him innocently
maan - nahi I have been little busy since the time we have come back from shimla
geet - little (she smiled) ..I am not complaining...lets not talk about it..
maan - nahi mujhe kehna hain..
(he holds her capitive in his looks...)
geet i want to be with u ..want to be part of ur life..
jis tarah tum mera zindaghi main shamil ho...main bhi tumhare zindaghi main
shamil hona chaha tha hoon...tumhare har pal main..tumhare har ehsaas main..
geet - mushqil hain (she shies)
maan - aise kyun kah rahi ho...(maan was heart broken)
geet - because u don't have time for anything...
maan cups her face..but u know that I am there for u always....umm!!
geet - umm!!!..(blinks softly her eyes once)
there some where..(she pauses..& says..)
where I can never reach!!!
(she had pain in those words) she immdeitely smiles & hides those feelings...
aab chaloo aap ko late ho raha hoga...
maan looks down..he knew he has let her down again...
hurt her again..& this time it was reflecting ...so deep & intense..he was not able to
bare it...this is why he did'nt want to get close to her at the first place...

Yaar we know that he is self disciplined guy who has put forth his carrier than anything else in his life. Who has never learnt to share his thoughts with others. Who can forget himself when he is @ something important @ his work front. That is one reason he shifted his dear, his only son to a boarding school so that neither of them feel the pressure or hurt feeling for keeping away from each other while being ion the same house. Now he has his wife with him, who waits for him day in and day out, silently without any complaints which is leaving him confused and huumiliated. He wants to spend quality time with her but his schedules doesn't allow him to do that. He doesn't want to hurt he nor he can imagine something bad happening to her. So he takes all the preventive measures to ensure her safety and in the process hurt her much more.

e remembered all the time in those two years..how much he struggled to hold himself back...
but she just came closer & closer & closer & he never realized how he just lost
himself completly to her...he looked really disturbed and withdrawn
geet glared up at him, loving the way the evening stubble shadowed the lines of his jaw,
causing him to look even more forbidding...
geet - Why do you have to make everything so difficult..??
let it be...the way it is...why do u rise hopes..& then make it difficult for u
& impossible for me...maine to aap se kabhi kuch nahi manga..
maan - kyun geet ..kabhi kyun kuch nahi mangthi...
geet - main mangoo aur aap de na paavoo to...
maan - to...
geet - mujhese jada aap ko duhk hoga...(her eyes was moist)

I am feeling their emotions here, only a loving & understanding partner can realize the pain in her or his spouse, when they failed to fulfill the counter parts wishes. Why Geet has to be so understanding and so vocal. It is too difficult for any man to accept this submission of his inabilities or incapabilities. He will breakdown


muskan



Love you
Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago

geet kisses him goodbye & moves to her car...
maan was not happy to let her go...but had to...

part 115

maan came home at 11.30pm..
geet was chatting with pooja..she hangs up & gives a warm hug to maan
she does'nt ask him for dinner she ..walks up the kitchen & has her dinner
maan was suprised...
he changes & joins her in the kitchen...she was having her dinner...
maan sits next to her...she passes his coffee...
maan - you did'nt ask me to join u for dinner..(he sipped his coffee)
geet - i thought u had..thats why I made coffee for u
maan - then why did'nt u have untill now..
geet - I did'nt know untill u walked in..
maan just looked at her..wondering how she just looks through him...
his body is like a transperent glass to her ..she could glance at him & know
wat he wants..
maan - u don't wait for me..like this..
geet - umm!!(totally not registering wat he said..maan smiled)

after her dinner..maan takes his coffee & goes to his study
geet goes to the bedroom & waits for him...
when he slips in the spread..geet hugs him from behind..slowly slipping
his fingers ..little reluctant & concious..yet shy
maan - u did'nt sleep..(he caressed her hand)
geet - I wanted to ask u some thing..
maan tunred to see her...she looked reluctant..
geet - ji woo..(she rested her head on his chest)
maan - boolo geet
geet - pooja's parents are going out of station..
maan - umm (he was playing with her hair..stroking..rolling over his finger)
geet - they requested me to stay back with her
maan - tum mujhe chod kar kanhi nahi jaa rahi hoo..samjhi tum..
he pinned her down on the bed maans eyes traveled over her from her head down
to her toes, and back up to her face... geet could barely hold his narrowed black gaze
she could feel his intense look sweep over her like a fire suddenly out of control..
creating a burning sensation..clearing her throat nervously..main kanhi nahi jaa rahi..
geet saw maan's expression change, his eyes turning smoky, darker color... she felt
his fingers tighten over hers.. as he lifted his hand and slid it around her slender
neck to draw her in, she was caught off guard ..her lashes automatically closed as
she placed her hand on his shoulder and arched her back..
she lost herself in the splendor of maans mouth.. the warmth of his ragged breaths
the hunger in his touch.. and the power of his need for her... geets fingers dug
rapidly into his shoulder as he kissed her.. maan was at once flattered
the masculinity and the male tenderness he shed on her...the roughened quality
of his fingers against her cheek only heightened her ... maan stroked her
skin like she was some priceless gift, and it brought a rush of tears to her eyes...
in fear & pleasure...maan realized he scared her..he slowly laid on his back..
maan looked at her ..saw the color of her cheeks deepen and realized
she was blushing... her lashes were down and he couldn't read her eyes...
geet laid humbly on him, her hands embraced him, her head to one side to avoid his eyes...
geet - main aap ko chod kar kanhi nahi jaa rahi..
maan kissed her head..
maan - phir aise baathe kyun karthe hoo..
geet - sorry
maan - why don't u ask her to stay with us
geet - nahi(she cried..maan smiled)
maan - aacha suno
geet - umm!!
maan - tum ne message main kyun lika ki..I can't miss u
geet rested her head on his shoulder and sighed..her fingers trailed across his chest,
then she tucked them under her chin and closed her eyes..I am never going to let u miss me she said quietly. ..no matter what...I will be always there where ever..when ever u want me..need me..her voice trailed off as she fell asleep... maan lay on his back and stared up at the ceiling...
he could hear the regular sound of her breathing... maan realized ..how true she was..

it had been a busy week for both of them..maan was really held up with his work &
geet tried every little thing to keep up to his busy schedule...but things were
just getting hard on them...but geet always found her way out to meet up with him
while she worked hard with her new job..

geet gets a call from pooja in conference with smriti & kavya
pooja - I hate u..tu friendship ke naam pe dhubha hain
geet - lekin
smriti - how could u hide it from us
geet - meri baat to suno
kavya - I thought we will be the first to know it
geet - please let me explain
pooja - yaar geet hamari doosti main kya kami rah gayi thi
smriti - I really hate u...
kavya - never call u again
geet becomes quite..babaji.inhe kaise pata chala?? yeh log kitna gussa ho rahain hain how
will I explain them now..
pooja - geet ..geet are u there
geet - umm..yaar I am sorry
pooja - how could u do this
geet - I was about to tell u about maa
pooja - when ???? after dating Arjun Punj...
geet - yeh loo tumlog job ke baat kar rahe ho..(she starts laughing)
smriti - u r laughing & she cuts the call
geet - nahi nahi..meri baat to sono
kavya - geet u really disappointed me..
geet - nahi kavya ..please meri baath to sono
kavya - we are really angry & she hangs up
geet - pooja..yaar
pooja - yaar tujhe sare HOTY's ke saath kaise job mil jaatha hain
phele Maan aur aab Arjun Punj
geet - I wanted to meet up & share it with u all..yaar kuch kar na..
pooja - smriti & kavya are really mad at u
geet mummers...job ke liya aise react kar rahen hain..Maan ke bare main..babaji
kuch karo na...
pooja - tu kya bol rahi hain..mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaraha...
geet - pooja bata na main unhe kaise manovoo..
pooja - phele tu mujhe mana..phir unko...
geet - poo please yaar...kuch kar na..tu to sab samajhthi hain na..
pooja - tu mujhe Arjun se milaye ghi to..
geet - teehk hain (geet says promptly)
pooja - aacha let me plan something & then call you

precap
geet disturbed & maan making a difference...

thanxs for all the replies..hope u all like this part...please do comment really motivates me to write better..
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey, you are taking me off guarded. I had just finished commenting on your previous part and saw the new part here. Will comment later.

Jaya

That was so sweet of Geet to not compel him to eat dinner when he had already finished his. But do you one thing, it was not necessary for the lady to force the man to eat but if he knows that she was waiting for him to eat the dinner with him (like if she says, shall i lay the plates for dinner or shall we have our dinner), he will force himself with additional food just to keep her happy. I really feel pitty for those husbands. Here Maan is lucky enough to have such an understanding wife ion Geet. Forget about Geet, the intensity of his love scares me to the core. It is too difficult to handle such husbands, even with a minute pain to the spouse will break them down to pieces. I love the way she said that she will not allow him to miss her and she will always be waiting for him @ all the time and @ all the places.

Nice to see the cat fight with friends and at last Geet has decided to spill the bean of her marriage secret to her friends. Nice development.

Jaya



Edited by deejagi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 114 - loved it a lot.. will comment in details l8r

going to read part 115 now 😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

part 114 - loved it a lot.. will comment in details l8r

going to read part 115 now 😊😊😊😊

will be waiting...😃😳

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