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Posted: 14 years ago
Awhhh...Musks, your made me teary yaar 😭 but I loved the update so keep up the great work!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Muskan,

will you be updating the next part today? 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

he realized how much she holds back her feelings & pain..this out busrt
was much needed but maan was touched deeply by her emotions..how much
she feels lonely & insecured he realized..

part 105

geet got up feeling a slight pain in her head..maan immidiately
softly stroked her head..& massaged it...geet put a brave face..
geet - i am fine..
maan kissed her & went to the pool
maan completed few laps pulled up his wet body resting on the side of wall
of the pool..sipped his juice..without ice..he knew..she insisted..
he turned to the splash in the water..he wondered who it was..he tried
to get a clear view..he looked at the person who was swimming towards him..
he saw a sky blue swim suit..merging with the blue colur of the water
he saw white skinny arms cutting through the water elagantly..
the strokes were beautiful & graceful..softly delicately
slowly moving closer & closer..he probably knew who it was..his eyes
had new sparks..umm..smirked..he blushed & felt little nervous..strangely
she emerged out like a white goddess infront of him...smiled..
suggesting to swim a lap togather..as they swam through the water just
talking and looking at each other maan was surprised at the feelings he had
the perfect companion in every turn of his life...she completed every little
space ..how she placed herself suttlely into his life..merging into him..
not changing anything but everything seemed different & beautifuly perfect..
maan - where did u learn swimming?
geet - krish taught me
maan - looks like my son is a good swimmer..akhir beta kis ka hain
geet - MERA!!..she had a winning smile...

geet stopped at the waters edge and maan looked at her face as trusting and happy
as he gently and lightly kissed her lips so soft and so tender..his excitement was
starting to show...she shied & they completed another lap..& another lap..
they stood at the shallow end...they stood there, breathing hard from the swim
and the apprehension of what they were about to do...it was a perfect morning..
sky was clear..and sunlight just starting to come in..they looked at each other
and smiled, geet looked no longer afraid of the memories...she looked happy..
as they looked soulfully into each others eyes... her heart skipped a beat and
her stomach fluttered...

he looked deep in her eyes and she in his as he placed his lips so tenderly over hers,
she closed her eyes and soaked up his passion that flowed through his lips...
as his hands touched hers it tingled and teased as he ran them so tenderly over
her arms to her shoulders as he slipped her swim suit straps off them and down to her hips.
geet - koi aa jaye ga..
his lips touched hers ever so lightly, gently caressing a desire so full of passion with
each movement of his mouth over hers that sent her head in a spin...she could'nt say word further..she looked up at him shyly & nervously..he wrapped the towel around her understanding
her shyness..she felt him hardening firmly against her and she smiled a warm and
happy smile, knowing that she had caused his manhood to harden as it did...
he embraced her into him..& led her to the washroom...they showered & got ready..

after maan left to office..geet got held up with krish's work &
checked with lunch..after she complted her work she decided to catch with kavya

geet called kavya on skype..regarding the weekend plan
kavya connected the call with pooja too..
geet - hi guys...
pooja - yaar geet it is impt..u have to reply to the Bajajs regarding their
offer..they are still waiting for ur response & because of that ..they
are not considering any one else..
kavya - i guess it is the same with Infosys & reliance..
geet - I have not made up my mind about job yet..
pooja - wat is wrong with u??
kavya - u will have to decide soon yaar...
pooja - as far as I knew u had to join them in sept
geet - I am very confused..
kavya - smriti is also going work to after her wedding..
pooja - if a family guy like ranbhir won't mind his wife working
then wat is ur problem ..i am sure ur would be won't mind
geet - nahi bajaj is based out in mumbai...I can't go there
infosys is very demanding & requires travelling...same case with reliance
pooja - wat do u mean..? if u want to grow..u will have to work hard
geet - nahi yaar ..u don't understand..
kavya - wat is it geet..u did so well with ur studies & interviews we
all thought u will be the first to grab a job & shine out
pooja - yah ..I always thought u will do well with ur career..
its been almost 2 months now & u have not settled with a job
geet - nahi I was busy
kavya - busy doing wat geet...
geet - yah I need to talk that also with u all..there is so many things
happening I am really confused..actually never even had time to check their offers
pooja - NO WAYS..u have not even checked the offers till now..
HOLLY CRAP..just go & check it now & call back
geet - nahi abhi nahi..lunch..time..she paused
kavya - yaar tu pata nahi kay karthi rahthi hain..
pooja - just check ur mail now..
geet - ok..

she cuts the call & checks the mails goes through the offer letters
all of them were the best offers but did'nt seem to impress her much
she heard him come in ..she closed the comp & pulled her dupatta on..
geet smiled at him..but maan could read something below those smile..
not sure wat was that..he smiled back trying to look deep into those eyes
the spell she always had on him..would just pull him to indulge into
her arms & her touch..he hugged her & kissed her passionately..
geet smiled as if that is wat she longed for all the while..

precap
maan knowing geet job hunt😉....

thanx guys..for all the support & love....please do comment...i am happy to read ..& now trying reply too...
love
muskan


Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Liked both parts
Geet was really caring a lot for Maan
Loved her care
Maan was shocked after hearing Geet was keeping nirjal warth
Well Smriti was besharam to give details of her kiss also😆😆
Geet was really feeling awkward in between them
Atlast Geet broke down n all her pain of loosing Khushi came out
Loved the way Maan was there for her
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Muskan 😊

Wow 😊 That was really fast😊
Thanks for the update 😊 😊

Loved it 😊
Seems like this morning is like a new beginning for her 😊
Geet is a fast learner! She's adapted herself according to Maan in every possible way 👏

Seems like soon Geet's frnds will come to know abt her marital status 😊
This would really be an interesting part to read 😉 😆

Why is Geet not considering to work with Maan? 😲
Hope your next update will answer this query 😉

Thanks, again 😊
Update soon 😊
Shivangi....
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was aazing loved it
i am bit scard lol...
well what will maan think abut her job search1
xx
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
the perfect companion best one 👍🏼 .........
oops th swimming scene dear ...........
hawt********** 😳

wat yaar even i din knw geet knws swiming .....
i thot she will answer " i had learned it in hoshiyarpur with my frnds " 😆

nd the name of companies u mentioned r my desire companies just 3 years more .....i'l haunt for job in thses company ..........

well honestly speaking i want geet to work with maan only 😊 ....
nd wat will happen wen geet will tell her frnds she is MRS.MSK.............
omg jst tht thot makes me luf 😆......bt they r too good jst lyk my frnds

i'm loving all this frnds part it just makes me smile 😊 ......

this was ....hawt cute nd aweusm 👏
thnk you 🤗
Edited by anu_luv_maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res

Hey musky,

It was a lovely update👏👏👏👏👏👏....i like their fds but i want geet to move on in life....she needs to stand up for her😊 and she should impress maan with that😉...already maan is impressed with her swimming and jogging😉..now i want her to do job atleast in maans office professionally..

waiting for maans reaction when he comes to know abt geets job hunt....

Love you,
Vinithaa
Edited by vinithaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
quite interesting,geet and maan complementing each other in every aspect
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. y so short update waitnf for long one.

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