FF: You & I...Collide Part13 pg145 July 27 - Page 104

Originally posted by: Teenage.dream

Poor Geet !! I really feel sorry for her !! 😭 Although I dont mind Maan and Sam pairing as Sam is really a kind and nice girl but Still Geet dealing with Sam's pregnancy case is just painful . .
I wonder what will happne next .. Please Continue soon ..
And Again .. Amazingly written .. 👏

it may be painful for you as the reader 😆...but wait for Geet's full reaction...she's a bigger person than to let something like this effect her so much...she already said she's a doctor first...and as a woman...she understood Sam's pain at her previous losses...😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: darkice7_12

Glad you are back and updating again. Can't wait to check out your other updates, as well.

Unfortunately, this will be the last chapter I'll be reading of this great fanfic. While I know there are greater things to be revealed, while reading this chapter I realized that it's just too painful to read a story that has Maan and Geet in it, but has them apart. But that is just a personal quirk of mine that I cannot seem to overcome.

Wish you all the best with this story. 👍🏼

thanks i guess

JAZ

Originally posted by: MsMovielover

as much as i love your stories yep all the torture you put us thro 😆.. i just cant seem to digest the fact that its not maaneet 😭.. yea i'm a girl who believes in happy endings although i know life is sometimes otherwise i know ask me but still in the fantasy world i want to be happy 😍
i totally respect ur story but i just cant not read maaneet being apart 😭

lmfao!! everyone is STILL on the fact that it isnt maneet..i disclosed that ages ago and people still arent over it...dear lord!! 🤣...it amazes me the number of readers who refuse something different and unusual...but to each his/her own...god bless...oh and as for happy endings...Maan and Geet do have happy endings...just not with themselves

JAZ

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

that was just fantabulous...my heart goes out for sam...and my anger goes to maan...the two ladies have suffered quite alot.. sameera is reallty sweet and i am sorry for having thought bad about her earlier...

looking forward to adeet in the nxt ud...

vidushi.

thank you!! im glad that after all the other comments of people saying they are going to stop reading...i have a comment where my work is appreciated...you're awesome!! 🤗

JAZ

Originally posted by: eiya22

damn its nt easy as i thought...to read it even aftr kwng that maan nd geet r nt together... and nw even harder kwng that sam is pregnant...ufff...but u answerd everything in the last part...

"Don't thank me, I didn't do anything," Geet said. "You have the life you have because that is how destiny wrote it. Your life is your life because that's how it was meant to be."

What's meant to be...is what's meant to be...exactly...tis s meant to happen...eagerly waiting for the next part...do continue soon...

i truly believe that...ke...what ever God, destiny and fate has planned for you is what is going to happen...each decision we make leads us down the path we're meant to take...thanks for the comment

JAZ

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hey Jaz...thanks 4 da pm! Welcome back! Nyways wonderful update. 👏 So Maan n Sam married for convience but it later turned out 2 b much more! Nw they r having a child. more on the development of their story in coming updates...it wasnt all good to go form the get go...they had to feel their way into the relationship as well 😉 Feeling sad for Geet, bt I loved her strength n determination. She treated Sam n was cordial n friendly! Geet is defn something else! yes!! Geet is a strong independent woman in her own right!! i just wish that like you...other saw that too...everyone else is weeping at how hurt and devastated geet is...Sam married Maan for her education n Geet lefy Maan cos of her education. Seems like Maan n Sam r happy. Geet deserves her happiness as well. Maan moved on bt Geet has nt. who says Geet hasnt moved on...she's isnt waiting for him after ten years...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya 😉The last comment by Geet is what happened...that is destiny! Love Geet! although nt happy abt Maan n Sam😔...will defn continue reading dis FF. U r a brilliant writer ⭐️. Further this FF is interesting - love the way u write. So will there b something between Adi n Geet? Update soon ...😊 thanks for having enough faith in me to continue reading...and yes...next update will have Adeet in it for sure...its time to see what their relationship is all about as well 😳

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

Indeed a fabulous update ,but very sad one . i was thinking lyk how destiny plays with u . geet ,for small reason ,their relation ended and for sameera ,for same reason only she came into maan's life . ahh,that is really "You have the life you have because that is how destiny wrote it. Your life is your life because that's how it was meant to be." it is very touchy update jaz .couldn't stopped myself to become emotional .Waiting for the next . im glad you liked it...and yes..ironic that the one thing that broke Maneet's relationship is also the same thing that made Samaan's relationship...😉 i will end my comments by rendering beautiful ghazal written by nidafazli which suits your lines sung beautifully by jagjit singh . i will try to incoprate video but for now lyrics to read and feel .

"apni marjise, kaha apne safar ke hum hai
rukh hawaonka jidhar ka hai, udhar ke hum hai

pehele hur jeeet bhi apni
magar ab lagata hai
apne hi ghar mein
kisi dusare gharke hum hai
rukh hawaonka jidhar ka hai, udhar ke hum hai
apni marjise, kaha apne safar ke hum hai

waqt ke sath mitti ka safar sadiyonse
waqt ke sath hai mitti ka safar sadiyonse
kisko maalum, kahake hai, kidhar ke hum hai
rukh hawaonka jidhar ka hai, udhar ke hum hai
apni marjise, kaha apne safar ke hum hai

chalte rehate hai, ke chala hai musafir ka atit
chalte rehate hai, ke chala hai musafir ka nasib
sochate rehate hai kis rah gujar ke hum hai
sochate rehate hai kis rah gujar ke hum hai
rukh hawaonka jidhar ka hai, udhar ke hum hai
apni marjise, kaha apne safar ke hum hai"

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wow...truly beautiful lyrics!! thanks for sharing!! 👏

Originally posted by: maansi007

seriously dnt mind but i am so hating it maan being concerned for someone else n lovng sumone else is lyk makng me angry n hurt cant see maaneet apart for long plxxx unite them n plxxx tell me dis part was a dream sequence maan n sam actually havng a happy married lyf well cnt digest da

t n i so dnt want to see dat sam being pregnant wit maan baby not 1 or 2 but thrd tym ewww i so dnt lyk it😭

NO MANEET!! i dont know how to make everyone understand that this story has NO MANEET!! maan is married to Sam...they are having a baby...its all real...no ekta style dream...lmfao!!! and if you dont like it...simple solution..>DONT READ IT!! 🤣...why put yourself through torture

JAZ

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Thanks for the PM dear...

Missed u a lot...🤗

Thanks for the update it was worth waiting...😊

What an awesome writer u r hats off to you 👏 thank you!! good to see a nice comment after so many not so nice ones

Since I have started reading ur FF I have always found the un predictable element in ur story line...

According to my opinion this unpredictable factors hooks your readers to the end ... thats what i'd like to think too...i personally love the unpredictability that my stories have...😳

Sam and Maan r happily married 😭..not very happy to see their lovey dovey scenes... aare this wasnt even that lovey dovey...he he...this was rather calm...no? 😛

right now I feel sorry for Geet ... dont feel sorry for geet..shes a better and stronger woman than to let the past effect her like that

I don't know how u would bring our Maneet together...😕 NO MANEET!!!!!! omg...kaise samjaoon!? 🤣

You have portrayed Geet a thorough professional which she has opted against her love... she didnt choose her career over her love...she chose her love for her mother over that of maan's...its different...she's not just some cold hearted girl who wants to be rich or a doctor...she had a reason for doing what she did 😳

the core message of this FF according to me is..

1)Setting your priorities,and making your choice.

2)Looking for options available for ur choice.. what options? pls explain...cuz someone else mentioned and i have no idea what you are talking about...lol

brilliantly written dear ... thank you!! 🤗

continue soon.