FF: You & I...Collide Part13 pg145 July 27

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maansi007

@maansi007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1021

seriously dnt mind but i am so hating it maan being concerned for someone else n lovng sumone else is lyk makng me angry n hurt cant see maaneet apart for long plxxx unite them n plxxx tell me dis part was a dream sequence maan n sam actually havng a happy married lyf well cnt digest da

t n i so dnt want to see dat sam being pregnant wit maan baby not 1 or 2 but thrd tym ewww i so dnt lyk it😭

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1022

Thanks for the PM dear...

Missed u a lot...🤗

Thanks for the update it was worth waiting...😊

What an awesome writer u r hats off to you 👏

Since I have started reading ur FF I have always found the un predictable element in ur story line...

According to my opinion this unpredictable factors hooks your readers to the end ...

Sam and Maan r happily married 😭..not very happy to see their lovey dovey scenes...

right now I feel sorry for Geet ...

I don't know how u would bring our Maneet together...😕

You have portrayed Geet a thorough professional which she has opted against her love...

the core message of this FF according to me is..

1)Setting your priorities,and making your choice.

2)Looking for options available for ur choice..

brilliantly written dear ...

continue soon.

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1023

Awesome update...!!
hmm...so that is how maan n sameera got married n ended up with a happy relationship of hubby n wife..!!!
nice update...!!!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1024

OMG.. Jaz... too much.. Sam is indeed a nice girl.. how will the twist be??

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1025

hey Jazzy...great to have you back...now me can go back to my stalker mode😆

today's update was all SaMaan...it was interesting...

u explained the circumstances in which Maan and Sameera came together as a couple...and my heart goes out to the girl who lived a life of hardships...

Her happiness with Maan is well deserved...deserved every bit of it...

Maan is really adorable in the way he cares for his wife...his pregnant wife...even Geet could tell how much he loves her...when Maan Singh Khurana loves...he loves with all his heart...

a marriage that was suppose to be nothing more than what can be called a contract...yet it grew into a marriage full of love...why is that? It's because of destiny...that u mentioned...as humans we can fight all we want but at the end...u only get what is written in your destiny...

and the fact that all have to accept is that Maan and Geet weren't to be Maaneet...

and the second reason it became a marriage of love is because as i mentioned before...the heart possess the ability to love once again...Maan and Geet have every right to love another person...i seem to stuck on this certain fact...but i feel like this is vital for this story..

and Sameera and Geet...i don't know why i was emotional reading their bit...Maan's past and present colliding...i feel like they will emotionally bond over time...i want a bit more on them before i can comment on them...u know...analyze them a bit more...but i definitely like the way they interacted with each other...

ur last line..."What's meant to be…is what's meant to be."

spoke volumes...and i loved it...

now me waiting for Adeet...but this update was fab...

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1026

Jaz ... Forget the maan n geet , geet n adi, maan n Sam... I just have a question ... Do u believe in relations of convienence? Coz I don't know how this story will turn out to Be but so far it seems that the plot is advocating towards oppurtunities alone and nothing else :(
world is full of ppl who aid their destiny by making wrong choices of not appreciating the things they have, of picking ego instead of luv, of letting go of sumthing wonderful , of not putting an extra effort in the relation that cud've been, of not walking the last mile that cud've taken them to the paths of etenal bliss... But then that's 99% of the world's population that we r talking about!!!It's mundane and ordinary. It's the story of every1.
... I wish to read about those hardly 1% who will do anything to rewrite their destiny a million times till it gives the only one thing that they had wished for :) and i wish u b the writer of such a creation :)

Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago

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Kads

@Kadds02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1027

M srsly eager to knw what have u planned for Maan & Geet!!!

Liked the way uv brought out the story

-Kads

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1028

U cant see us happy na

Sam n Maan are married wo baat ab tak hazam nahi hui thi n u showed Maan n Sam having their 1st child n us par se Geet her doc

Man she is gng through so much pain

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1029

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
Jaz,

I must confess I'm terribly depressed after reading the update... thats why i put the disclaimer...i said read at your own risk

Maan and Geet have been such a constant factor in my everyday life and in all stories I read that I can never think of a situation where they are apart - I really admire all your characters - but am feeling incredibly sad at where destiny has put them...Sameera seems an awesome lady - her past really had me troubled and Maan cares so much for her ... she is pregnant with his child - that too after two miscarriages - its all so unexpected you see - you have changed the total concept of pairing...it pains me a lot to read this 😭 im always unexpected...what is the point of a story if there arent good and unexpectd twists...😆...thats what makes the story something worth reading...and i knew that the pregnancy is something NO ONE saw coming!! 😛

You write so well and I've read and appreciated most of ur works...but I come to IF to look for some happiness in my mundane office hours...dont mind - i think i'll just skip reading this one ... it gets my mood totally sad and depressed... by all means...dont read...i cant cater to all maneet fans and give maneet even when i feel that the story wont work that way...so...its fine...

Happy writing lady...see u in another thread 😃

P.S.: Loved Humesha Saath 😳

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1030

Originally posted by: abina03
awesome well written update
but i read it with heavy heart.i didn't mind when you paired Maan and Sam but this is too much Jaaz you brought Sam as pregnant in front of Geet. I agree Geet left Maan as her wish.still it is too painful to see. why...if its ok to pair Maan with Sam as husband and wife...its the natural order of things for them to start a family...and so what if she is in front of Geet...do you think my Geet is that weak that she's going to break...that she's under sort of delusion that Maan and Sam dont share that kind of a relationship...come on...give Geet more credit...

by the way i think you never been in love.that's why you are hurting me. love has nothing to do with the way i write...i write because thats my creativity...
😭😭😭
whatever it is i love to read you thannks
love you
take care
thanks for pm np 😊

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