***ROAD TO LOVE*** (sk ff) pg 89 lst prt - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
reserved so Finlay they meet each other wow great now story will take turn ..
Edited by monikaseth - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
nice part neelu. so they introduce each other!!!!!!
cont.soon.
thnx fr the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part
Chalo finally dono ne ek dusre ko apna introduction toh de diya.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
hi 😊
neelu
the up is really sweet 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😃😃😃😃😃
kashish phir se wahi bus stop par khare hue haai aur woh sujal bhi aapne druken state mein walk kar raha haai
sukar haai aaj kashish aur sujal ne thore par baat toh ke ek dusre se 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
ab dekhte haai aage kya hota haai😊
plz cont soon aur haan do pm me
aur do no ups he bohot aache the
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part dear.................finally they introduced themselves....................and kashish finds sujal's eyes very expressive....................sirf ek hi mulaqaat mein she found loneliness in them...................cont soon dear................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice parts
they both have introduced .....cont soon
PM me also
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wishing our Deepa (spvd) a very very very very happy bday !!!!!!!!!!! e all love u !!!!!!!!!!!! thanku for being my reader & frnd, ur very special !😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey nice part dear....am glad Sujal n Kashish talked this tym.....I mean that simple convo was so nice.....I am just having this smile...hehe. And she has heard the name Sujal Garewal....hmm.....lets see wat she finds out now. Pls continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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finally they talked and introduced their selves to each other in ki gadhi itni low speed mein chal rahi hai roz bass aik dusre ko dekh chale jatay hain abbbe yaar be fast kuch tou baat bhare sujal was cute when he was giving his intro to her in his drinkish state small but nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the comments to all my readers, i specialy liked puri ka 'suzzal' wala comment , it was hilarious, i love ur observation, aur amnalicious ke humour ke kya kehne, you always make me laugh. saumya , ria & deepa ur to always good.

thanks to all the readers for reeading & liking my part

part 4

She was thinking the whole day ki ye naam 'sujal garewal ' kahan suna hai usne?

But bohot sochne par bhi kuch yaad nahi aa raha.

At last she decides to brush of the matter.

Its night again & she is waiting at the bus stop again.

She checks her watch to see when will the bus come & she also knows somewhere that he will also come.

She looks at her side as she hears a footstep.

She knows its him, & indeed it was him; in his usual drunken stupor & trance trying to walk straight as much as possible.

But she knows what he is trying is nearly impossible to achieve in the state he is in.

She is observing his every move.

He walks in a criss-cross manner using all his concentration to balance himself.

He loses his balance for a second & stumbles, about to fall.

k-oh ! sambhalke Mr. Garewal !

he balances himself on time & refrains himself from falling.

He looks at her with those red blood shot eyes.

k-emm...thik hain?

She doesn't know why is he looking at her like that.

He staggers towards her in haste, as if in a hurry.

s-nahiiiii''.!!!!!!!..nahi hoon main !!!!!!! kaha..naaaaaa..kaha tha naa..maine....nahi..hoon main....koi..Mr Garewal'.bass suzzal..hoon..suj'....al.......sssuuuuuuuuu'.....zaaaaal.

S-U-J-A-L ! koi suzaaal gare..garewal..nahi hoon'[he takes a gulp from his bottle , she is looking at him with her wide eyes]'

He looks at her again, its hard for him to speak without shaking.

s-nahi..hoon'.samziiiii'samajjjjjj gai?????...no gare-wal..no'...nahi hoon ! nahi hoon main kisi garewal ..industries ka maalikkk ..nahi''....noooo..main bass suzal hoon !

her eyes dilate hearing this, she now remembers usne wo naam kahan suna tha.

k-kya????? Aap wo ho???????..emm..wo..aap sach mein sujal garewal ho? Garewal industries ke'

s-nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!!!!! kaha naaa [he steps back automatically]

k-i mean haan'I mean nahi'aap nahi ho..matlab aap ho par..aap..wo matlab...aap ho par phir bhi nahi ho..matlab aap ho naa..matlab aap actually ho..naa..aap nahi ho..i mean...

sujal is looking at her narrowing his eyes & mouth slightly open, his drunk numb brain cant make out what she is saying, neither can she.

s-k..kya?

k-kya? wo..main..pata nahi ! pata nahi main kya keh rahi hoon

s-hmm'[he takes a swig] are you drunk?

k-no

s-phir bi..tymhe nahi..pada..tum..kya bol rahi ho..huh?

he starts laughing aloud. She slightly puts her lips & looks at him with her big eyes.

Then she looks at him, she sees him in a new light.

Till today she just thought that he was just that 'drunk guy' she saw daily, but he was actually 'sujal garewal' the rich & famous entrepreneur.

Bt why was he so sad , why was he lonely? These peple are supposed to be surrounded by people naa, why was he in this state when he had everything.

Her thoughts are interrupted by the sound of the brakes of her bus.

She looks at him, who is still in his laughing fits.

She just whispers a good bye & climbs her bus.

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago

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