***ROAD TO LOVE*** (sk ff) pg 89 lst prt - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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IT's Ravi kAran not kIran...even in my college some teachers while taking attendancešŸ˜’...ufff...anyways lovely update...i really liked it a lot... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Whoa....wat a part!! It was nice to see Sujal saving her like this....but then the last lines that u said....marvellous!! Mujhe bahut maza aya padhne me....and I hope to read the next part soon. And yeah....add me to the PM list...hehe.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ohh nice start i am really excited for this ff khadus honma tou sujal ka haq hai yaar hum kahan mana kar sakte hain lolz and kashish is is very responsible lets see ky hota hai kismat kaise milati hai inko
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update
This drunken guy is very intelligent indeed. He knows his weekness and strength.
Kashish is thankful to him for saving her from the goons.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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'oh wow 2nd part is also awesome loved teh way he used his brain and save her and loved his reason too nd dear i am really upset with you u didn't bother to add my nam ein this ff's pm list i was not expecting this from u haan but khair nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful part yar....................our hero sujal saved her using his brains.........................i really liked this part.........................con't soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part.very unique way of saving a girl frm these type of pshycos..

pls cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting start.....i like ur fic already......sujal's way of dealing with the goons was different and new.......continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

part 3

sorry ppl for not posting early & replyin to ur comments, but i loved every comment, my net is so bad tht it can go anytime, plz all of u pray for my net

sorry sheela ur name got skipped frm pm list but yaar u didnt comment naa, to i jst added those jisne comment kia tha, abb tune kar dia comment to i added u..waise i loved ur khadus wala comment

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Next day she is standing at the same place in the same dark night.

She hears the sound of some uncoordinated footsteps approach towards her.

She knows its him.

She moves her head to look at the side.

And, she sees him.

He is in his formals; shirt , trouser, tie & a coat hanging through the tip of his finger.

He is drunk like every day..very drunk. Its not an unusual sight, she knows. His eyes are bloodshot red, his jet black hair are ruffled, his tie is hanging loosely from his neck, his face is flushed due to his excessive alcohol intake & he is holding a half filled bottle of a drink that looks like some alcohol he had been drinking.

But whatever his appearance was , she was thankful that he helped her the other day.

He was finding it difficult to walk, he was staggering badly trying to keep his balance.

He would occasionally sway & stumble into things.

She didn't feel scared in front of him, but was feeling unsure seeing him this state.

She knew he would just pass her , nor speak to her nor bother her.

She always thought that he was so drunk that he never noticed her existence, but yesterday she knew that he was aware of her but never ever , nor even once did he even try to disturb her in any way in this drunk stupor too.

He was walking with full concentration, trying to coordinate his steps gulping more from his bottle.

He reaches close to her.

She looks at him with unsurely & pressed her lips.

k-hi !

he looks up at her.

She knew his eyes had something, the depth his eyes had was indescribable, those eyes could melt anyone's heart.

He could speak through his eyes & his eyes were depicting sorrow & loneliness.

She smiles a bit as he looks at her.

He raises his hand a bit to answer her 'hi'.

But he somewhat loses his balance.

k-oh !

he somehow balances himself again.

He looks at her as her face has a small frown of concern.

She looks down.

k-emm'kashish'.

s-huh?

He puckers his brows in a questioning manner.

k-..kashish..sinha..mera naam

he looks at him unsurely with her big wide eyes, which look more innocent & beautiful when she is confused.

He gives a slight nod to convey that he understood.

She smiles a bit at this.

s-suz'.sujal'garewal'hoon main.

She shakes her head.

s-naa'su..suzal..ga..garrrrrewallll nahi'.nah'bass'suzal..bas..suzal..hoon..main'only'sujal'.

k-o-k-ay..

she is a bit perplexed at his reaction. While he takes a large swig.

k-emm'main chalti hoon. Meri bus aa gai..emm..bye

he lifts his hand & waves frantically in an uncoordinated manner, while shaking badly.

She climbs her bus & goes , while wondering 'sujal garewal' ye naam suna suna lag raha hai.

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
sweet part šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘..................... first talk b/w SK šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘................
it was nice .................šŸ‘.............waiting when they gonna meet when suuzzaal šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›.....is not drunk .......
suzzzalllll 😳😳😳😳............... aaawww reminded me of RK performance in KTH when he was drunk & sad 😭 😭 😭 😭😭..............

continue soon........ wait 4 furture SK meetings......... šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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