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Originally posted by: rinky70

well i m eager to knw as well whether maan is gud kisser or not update it soon honey can't wait

i m wokin on it rite nw... so it will by done by evening... and thanks! 😊

I'm 19 yrz old and i basically live in canada/calgary bt cuz of our eid thing... i hve came to pakistan after 4years... anways i have nt had a bf... mayb couldnt find any1 like maan...(anways) ALOT of my friends had bf's and weneva dey would be ready to move it up a notch dey would 1st do the apple test thing... as dey said it reali works da deeper the guy bites into the beta... bt as i have said i havent tried it out... bt if any1 wants too, plz tell me the results afterwards!!

Recap; b4 geet could answer pinky came and took geet wid her for the next class leaving maan thinking: wot geet doesnt wana be my friend... my friend?

maan was left thier thinking; geet meri dost nhai bana chati? likan kyn ever1 wants to be my friend

dev cums

dev: i was lookin everywhere 4u

maan still thinking: geet... dost, kyun

dev: MAAN

maan: geet

dev tugges maans shoulder and maan cums back to reality: dude phir geet, yaar (in a quite voice) do i look like a gurl or sumthing

maan still lost walks away, again leaving dev confused

dev: isko kya ho gaya hai? wot if pinky notices my gurlness... wot nooo :s

pinky and geet go to thier class, they sit together

pinky: u nw how u can tel if a man is a gud kisser

geet: u can?

pinky: offcourse, it is the way how they eat apple

geet: apple?

pinky: yea the more they suck into the apple for a bite da more they are gud and if they take a small bite they r triable, and today i will find out if dev is a gud kisser or nt-- pinky smirked

geet: how will u do that

pinky: by giving dev a apple offcourse!

geet thoted: i wonder if maan is a gud kisser or nt... mayb i should give him an apple as well

geet: i dont belive dat

pinky: it is true those, alot of people say dat and plus it has been tested on alot of guyz by gurls b4 thier kiss

geet thinks: hmmm, this sounds interesting

pinky: to make it nt dat obvouis and to fool the guyz i will give an apple to you, maan and devvv

geet smiled: i cant wait till this class is over

pinky: same here... hey i cant wait... bt y cant u wait?

geet's check got red: aaa...mmm... for you!

pinky: awwww

pinky hugs geet

soon the class is over and pinky, geet, dev and maan meet at da cafetria

dev talks in a deep/manily voice: hey wots up

pinky: wot happed 2ur voice

dev: nuthing

pinky: quite talking like dat

dev talks normal: do u think i have a girly voice?

geet, maan and pinky looked at and all of dem start to laugh

dev: wot....realii

pinky: no u dont, wana a apple?

dev: nt nw, look dis is serouis for mee

pinky: wot r u tryin to say dev...

maan: i think 4om dev...dev wants to bcum devi

all of dem laugh immsenly- maan looks at geet and thinks she has such a lovely laughter

dev: shut up maan this is all cuz of you

maan: me

dev: yea weneva u look at me u call me geet

geet looks up at maan: realii...

maan: no he is lyin

dev: no i m nt... god tell me do in anyway i look like geet?

maan: hell no, u and geet r veriii veriii defferent

pinky: okay guyz plz stop this non sence... nw who would wana have a apple?

pinky takes out four apple gives one to dev one to geet and one to maan and keeps one for herself

pinky: cum'on guyz eat alreadyy

geet takes a medium bite... dev takes a huge bite which makes pinky's feet off of the ground

pinky: dev i have to talk to you

and drags dev away 4om thier...

geet: arent u goin to eatt?

maan: me and apple neva... i dont like apple

b4 geet could say more to maan sasha cums

sasha: baby i was lookin everywhere for you... kidar ta

maan: i was here wid geet and--

sasha: oh, geet i didnt see u dere, how r u

geet in a stren voice: im fi9

sasha: maan i was thinking dat we should go to the pardain hotel for tonites dinner... it will be fun... kyun?? aur wasey bhi kal weekend ho so it will be alot of FUN

maan: gr8 idea, we could double date

sasha: double date

maan: yea u, me and pinky and dev... bt wot will geet do, i think geet u should cum wid us...

sasha: bt wot will she do dere?

maan: the same thing dat we will do thier... have fun and njoy!

sasha: bt pardain hotel is for expensive people-- no offensice geet bt do u hve da rite clothes 2wear , bt i guess u can borrow my clothes

maan just bare her insult and b4 geet could defend herself maan but in: YEA sasha ur rite... bt b4 we talk about geet, letme ask u, do u hve da rite clothes to wear?

sasha: offcorse maan

maan: sumthing dat covers all of ur body like geets clothes becuz as u said pardain hotel is a expensive hotel and i wouldnt want u to stay out while all of us had our dinner cuz dey mite think ur a hook--er or sumthing

sasha got reali burned/ embrassed and geet got a wide smile on her face

sasha: ..... maan ..... baby ...

maan walks away holding geets hands

maan: god i just hate it wen people do dat... maan is his head{i dont hate wen people do dat, infact im da one usually donning dat, bt y did i felt bad for geet)

geet: it okay, bt u shouldnt have called a hook-er..., i think u should say sori to her

maan: MSK doesnt say sorii

geet: okay den dont say sori, say plz forgive me sasha

maan: ahh, another word i dont say, plz...

geet laughs: bt u just did say sori and plz to me...

maan: i didnt say dem 2u, i was tellin u dat

geet: it kinda means da same thing, and for the sake of it i forgive you!

maan: nt fair

geet laughs

maans fone viberate and rings

maan: its txt 4om sasha...

maan read out loud: plz maan dont be mad.. i-- blah blah blah ...ummm hmmm a lilte more of blah blah blah, and we are still on for tonite... rite? 7... ish myb?

maan: wot say geet, do u wana go...

geet: umm no its okay it is ur guyz double date, wot wil i do dere...

maan: gr8 me and dev will cum to ur side by 6:45ish... so be ready

and maan leaves leaving geet dere, cuz maan knew if he had stayed there more longer geet would have made up sum kinda lame x-cuse!

geet: uff yeh maan bhi na... bt i totaly forgot

geet looks at the apple in her hand... 'so much for dat'

pinky mets up wid geet; WOT DID I TELL YOUUU

geet understood by the x-citment in pinky voice: i m so happy for yew

bot huge again!

back in the hostel pinky and geet are gettin ready

geet: r u sure i should sum along,

pinky: look im surprised dat u dont wana cum along, and if it helps just think it da five friends who are going to have FUNN,

geet: five nha four

pinky: wot u maan still nt gettin along,

geet: no it is nt me and maan -- geet suddenly quites down: hmmmm and thinks 'dat stupid sashaaa'

pinky: dw da more u will nw him da more u will love him!

geet thinks: i thnk da lov part has started already...

pinky: com'on get ready geet already

geet changes into a green coloured salwar kameez suit and puts on lite make-up while pinky wear a suit as well in pink colour!

geet: wow pinky u gr8 in pink!

pinky: and u look beauitful in green!

both prasie one another

maan and dev get up, maan wear a green t-shirt wid jeans and dev wore a black t-shirt wid jeans

maan: lets call da gurls

dev calls dem and tells dem to cum down

geet: where is sasha?

maan: oh forgot to txt her again

pinky:likan this was sasha idea..

maan: no it was my idea in da end!

dev: maan yaar kya kar ta hoo

maan: wot juz 4get it!

pinky: maan

geet: yea maan i think u should call her

maan: out off all da people i thot you would be the last one to say dat...

dev and pinky look at one another

maan: no i mean cuz she passes rude comments to u..., anways guyz v r gettin late so letsss goooooo already!

dev: bt

maan sits in the driver seat and honks the horn

pinky sit at the bac geet is about to sit wid pinky wen dev cums in

dev: sorii bt im goin to sit wid pinky.. u go sit in the fornt

so nw maan is driving geet is in the passgener seat and dev, pinky are seating at the back

dev pulls up the divider in the jeep making pinky onli to herself, and maan puts on lite song

geet: ap ne jo kiya sasha ka saath acha nhai kiya

maan: bt its wot i do

geet: wot

maan: yea, like me and sasha are yesturdays news

geet: wots dat suppose to mean

maan: its means i broke up wid her

geet: and ur feelin fi9?

maan: yea, how cum u always ask me if im feelin fi9 or nt?

geet laughs: no i mean u just had ur broke up, and i have herd people feel treible

maan: oh dats cuz dey r people im ms--

suddenly geet says: K... i nw ur MSK bt u r a human arent you

maan: geet

geet: maan

after dat both stayed quite, in the back seat dev had his arm around pinky

dev: i reali love you

pinky: same here...

dev: i just wish maan could feel this feelin as well

pinky: and i wish geet could, u nw all her life she has been scared 4om her brothers... im just so proud of her dat she has finally decided to be free 4om hp and live her life like a normal person

dev gets naughty smile :}

pinky: wot da smile for

dev: for...

dev gaves pinky a kiss

pinky: wot was dat for?

dev: for being soo sweet and thinking so much for ur friend

maan stoped da car and pulled down the divider

maan: v r here... guyz plz seat apart

dey all steped out of the car and left to thier table

maan: hi bookin for four plz

butler: msk, it is always a pleasure to hve u in our hotel, this way

maan and dev sit on one end of the table while pinky and geet sit one the otherside...

pinky: god im so hungry

maan: tell us sumthing new...

pinky: then how about today we will hve desi food

maan: WOT it is the pradian hotel... and u wana have desi food?

pinky: yes cuz, traditional food is geets favorite... hannah geet

geet nods her head: bt if u guyz wana eat sumthing else i dont mind... as change is good

dev: no geet dont be formal, u nw i have always herd the desi food is way beta then wot v eat

maan: i guess it is 3 agasnit one... so lets order

geet: da food is reali gud here...

maan: agreed it is...

dev looks at maan

maan: wot?

dev: nuthing... (in his head) at least nt nw...

soon dey get done eating

dev: will u cum my lady, and extends his hand

pinky: offcourse, puts her hand in his... geet we are goin for sum dancing, and will be back soon -- pinky and dev(devky) leave

maan think: i wana ask geet to dance wid me as well, bt will she geet offened... as she doesnt even consider me her friend...hmmm bt wot if i challenge her...

maan: i would have gone dancing as well...

geet looks up

maan: bt i dont think infact im sure... hp gurls cant dance...

geet: did u indirectly ask me to dance wid yew?

maan: no.. i mean like u cant dance can you

maan thinks: this is gurl is so fast and doesnt get talked into

geet smiles: im sure hp gurls can surprise yew

maan extends his hand and geet widout thinking twice takes his hand and goes to the dancing place, as dey enter the music gets slow and ever1 starts to couple dance

maan puts his hands around geet wasit and pulls her closer to him, geet stares at maan and maan at geet, maan holds geet rite hand and puts it on his shoulder and her other hand in his hand, and slowly they start to sway aorund the floor, maan moves his head down to geet ear and whispers

'ur were rite hp gurls can surprise'

geet felt his breath on her neck as he spoke dat gave her shivers, maan was kinda knwing wot effect he had on geet...

'so about being my friend... wot say?"

geet couldnt answer bt just nodded her head, which maan saw, maan gt a sly smile

'gr8'

and quickly made her spin two times under his hand making geet banging into maan's chest

'mayb hp gurls need a lil tranin wid dat'

geet who was so lost in his feel, his touch &couldnt defend herself....

on the otherside on the floor pinky spoted geet

pinky: is dat geet?

dev: wid maan

pinky: i cant belive maan would do sumthing like dat

dev: wot... dey look nice together...

pinky: bt u nw maan how he is...

dev: and by the way i won the bet...

pinky: dev nt rite nw, dats my best friend thier...

sori but i gotta go, will update soon hope u guyz liked it plz comment and thanks for the pervous comment as i keep on saying they reali motivate me! :) and i tried to make a longer update den usuall... plz plz comment!

it ws lovely yaar.. my god.. no words.. really the dance ws just so dreammyy 😍

Wow 😊
Great update 😊
MSK falling for Geet and geet too 😊
I like Pinky's concern abt Geet 😊

omg that was too good

i love it..omg the dance was sooo dreamy!!.. i like the way dev and pinky want maan to feel the same way as they feel..n pinky's concern for geet!!!

AWESOME UPDATE........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 as usaul, i fell in love with your ff. I want a very long update plzzzzzzzzz...........and also some more cute scenes between maan and geet you know what i mean very romantic scenes😉😉😉😉😉.

Anyways update soonnnnnnnnnnnn

Love you,
vinithaa

awesome update