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diiii..... it was really nice.. still dint check the video song.. ll check it out soon..and upload the next part soon and plz pm me...
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Part 46:-

Rajji was listening to the song …. That vicky was singing & was feeling bad … she is still unable to decide … after some time she comes to a decision that she needs to talk to vicky ….& she thinks that she can't take it any more …. There fore She decides to go & meet vicky & talk to him …..

Rajji is now descending the stairs …. While vicky is coming from the garden …. he enters the hall … vicky & rajji are walking towards each other …. Both looking into each other's eyes ….

Rajji wants to speak to vicky …. So she is going near him …. They both come face to face with each other rajji thinks she will ask him to meet her on the terrace or they both can walk out into the garden …. But to her surprise even before she could open her mouth … vicky just ignored her & walked away from there ….

Rajji is now surprised by his action & watching him with her mouth open …. & thinking what happened to him all of a sudden & he was not like this till yesterday …. So she goes behind him … but before she could reach him … he is quite fast for her … he locks himself inside his room … rajji knocks the door of vicky's room & requests him to open the door but he doesn't ….

Rajji thinks to please him … by doing something for him so that he feels happy about it …. She goes to her room & gets ready & then again comes down & is talking to nakul asks him to help her in making breakfast … as she wants to make every body's favorite breakfast today … nakul helps her out … later on pia too comes & joins her …

In the meanwhile maan , geet , vicky ,geet's family ,dadima come down for breakfast … vicky's face is still kind of angry and actually he is looking more sad … geet notices this … pokes maan & signals him to see vicky's face … maan too notices his face … pia & rajji both are serving every one their fav breakfast … rajji gives maan his fav grilled sandwich & for geet her fav aloo ka paratha … then she comes close to vicky … she tries to serve him mooli ka paratha … but vicky does not allow her to serve him … instead of his fav mooli ka paratha … he prefers to just eat an apple … so grabs an apple from the fruit bowl which was placed in the center of the table …

Rajji – aap yeh kyun khaa rahen hain … paratha lijiye naa …

Vicky – mujhe nahin chahiye …

Rajji – par yeh aap kae liye hi banaya hain … mai (she stops half way she wanted to say maine …)

vicky looks at her … every one is looking at these two instead of having their breakfast …

vicky – mujhe nahin chahiye …

Rajji – tho phir aap kya kayenge …

Vicky now shouts at rajji …

Vicky – maine kahan tha naa … ki …. mujhe nahin chahiye …

every one is surprised at vicky's behaviour towards rajji … he does not get angry easily like maan …

Coming to maan He is not the angry young man any more …. of course maan changed a bit … but only for his family ……. But For his staff maan is still the angry strict boss … who does get irritated easily … he could be controlled by only one person …. Who else can that be … it is none other than geet …

Back to vicky … he is a bit soft natured person & does not get irritated or angry that easily …. He is quite patient most of the time … that's the reason dadima ,geet & maan are totally surprised by his behaviour … before maan could say anything to vicky … dadima scolds vicky … for being rude to rajji …

Dadima – vicky … yeh kaun saa tareekha hain … baath karne kaa … kya aap ko humne yehin baathein sikhya thi …

Vicky – sorry … dadima …

Dadima – sorry … aap humein nahin …. Rajji ko kahiyen …

Vicky not looking at rajji … but talking to her ….

Vicky – sorry …

Rajji – koi baath nahin …

Dadima – ab chup chap paratha kayiyen …

Vicky – ji dadima …..

Vicky takes the paratha … Every one is having their breakfast … maan informs dadima that he will be leaving to office after he gets ready … maan & geet finish their breakfast … geet & maan go back to their room.

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In maan & geet's room … maan is sitting in front of his laptop … working on it …. Geet is pulling out his regular office suit from the closet … white shirt with black waist coat … black & white tie … she comes & stands in front of maan … with his outfit in her hand …. Maan does not notice this … maan is burried in his laptop ….

Maan – geet … mere white shirt nikal dena …

After completing his sentence he lifts his head & notices that …. Geet is already standing in front of him smiling with his clothes in her hand …

Maan – oh … tho … meri sweet heart ne already … mere liye mere dress pick kardiya … wo bhi mere pasand kaa …

Geet – haan … aap pehan lijiye … main ithne main aapka baki ka saman lathi hun …

Geet then lays his outfit on the bed …

Maan – as you say … sweet heart …

maan then gets up … goes near the bed & changes …. Geet in the meanwhile is pulls out his walet & handkerchief ……

Geet – maan mujhe aap se jaroori baath karni hain …

Maan – kaun si baath hain geet …

Geet – bathathi hun …

Maan while buttoning up his shirt … notices that one of the button just came off …

Maan – oh god … yeh button ko bhi abhi nikal na tha …

Geet – kya hua …

maan shows her his shirt button which came off … maan was wanting to change … but geet stops him …

geet – bas ithni si baath … rukhiye … main abhi bathathi hun …

geet brings the needle & thread …

geet – button dijiye mujhe ….

Maan gives the button to her … geet takes it & starts sewing the button on to his shirt … maan places both of his arms on her shoulders … while pulling her a little bit close to him … with his arms still on her shoulders … & pushing her forward with his hands placed on her back …

Maan – agar mujhe yeh raaz pehle malum hotha tho main … roz button thod dae tha …

Geet – kya …

Maan – haan … dekho maine kitne saare oppurtunities miss kar di …

Geet – kaun si opputunities … button se … yeh aap kya baath kar rahen hain …

Maan – tube light … biwi …

geet stopped stitching …

Geet – kya apne mujhe wapas tube light kahan …

(if you girls remember they both called each other tube light in earlier updates after their SR morning … part 34 … )

Maan – haan … aur nahin tho kya …

Geet – aap bhi na … bina sarr pair walen baathen kar rahen hain … aur mujhe tubelight keh rahen hain …

Maan – tum ho hi tubelight … arey babaji … isse ab tak aap ne akal diya hi nahin … shadi kae ithne din baad bhi … abhi bhi yeh aise hi bathein kar rahin hain …

Geet – aap na … babaji ko beech main math laayiye … seedhae seedhae bathayiye baath kya hain …

Maan in sensous voice …. – suno … par stitch karogi ki nahin …

Geet – haan … karungi …

geet again resumes stitching ….

Geet – par … aap mujhe seedhe seedhe … bathayiye … vajah kya hain ….

Maan – vajah … suno …

Geet – boliye …

Maan - agar yeh ek button ki vajah se meri sweet heart meri bahomein aayegi … mere ithnae paas rahegi … tho main button kyun nahin thodungaa … batao … main roj button thodunga …

Geet – kya …

Maan blinking his eyes & nodding his head in a yes …

Maan – haan ….

Geet - acha … agar … aap roz ek ek button thodthae rahengae naa … tho main … main …

Maan – main … main kya …

Geet – tho main … aap ki shirt seeungi nahin …

she again stops stitching the button to his shirt … & folds her hands …

Maan – acha … nahin karogi …

Geet – haan … nahin karungi …

Maan – sure …

Geet – haan …

Maan still has his left hand on geet's back & now with his right hand … on geet's chin … maan pulls her face close to his face … geet is looking into his eyes … he is closing in the space between their faces … tilts his face a bit … kisses first on her left cheek … then on her nose …. Then on her right cheek … while maan looking into her eyes … geet too looking into his eyes … maan asks geet will she do it or not …

maan – ab karogi … ki nahin …

geet bends her eyes & head down & resumes the stitching … as she resumes her stitching maan again criss crosses his hands over geet's back …

geet – aap bhi naa … bahut shaitaan hogaye hain …

maan – acha … main shaitaan hun …

geet – aur nahin tho kya …

maan – yeh … sab sangath ka asar hain …

geet – sangath … kiska …

maan – aur kiska …

geet – bathayiyen naa …

geet finally finishes stitching the button … geet smiling at maan … still maan with his arms criss crossed over geet's shoulders coming close to her … now he is close to her ear …

Maan – koi ladki hain …

Geet – ok … koi ladki hain …

Maan – koi ladki hain … jab wo hasthi hain …

Geet – kya …

Maan – haan … suno … naa … disturb math karo …

Geet – sunrahi hun boliye …

Maan - koi ladki hain … jab wo hasthi hain … baarish hotha hain … tunak tunak tun tun …

Geet thinking to herself – "yeh aaj maan ko kya ho gaya hain … gana kyun gaa rahen hain … ajeeb ajeeb har kathein kar rahen hain… "

Geet – aap mujhe naam … bathane ke bajaye … gana kyun gaa rahen hain …

Maan – ab … main uske baaren main … iss kae alava aur kya kahun …

Geet – acha … bolne kae liye kuch nahin hain …

Maan – haan …

Geet - aur uska asar hain …

Maan – haan …. Bilkul … aur … wo hain hi aise …

Geet – oho … tho … wo hain hi aise …

Geet – aur wo kahan pae hain …

Maan – mere aakhon main basi hain … tumhe nazar nahin aa rahin hain ….

Geet now smiling … but is acting as though she did not understand what maan meant … geet cupping maan's face in her hands ….looking in to his eyes …

Geet – nahin tho …. Mujhe tho kuch bhi dikhayi nahin de rahin hain … sirf button jaise aap ki kaali kaali ankhen hi dikh rahin hain …

Maan – kya ….

Geet blinking her eyes & smiling at maan ….

geet - haan …

Maan - teek se dekho … geet …

Geet – dekha maan … mujhe kuch bhi nahin dikh rahan hain …

Maan – geet … ab shaitani kaun kar rahan hain …

Geet – kaun …

Maan – aur kaun tum ….

Geet – acha … maiiiinnnn …

Maan – aur nahin tho kya …

Geet – acha rukhiye ….

Geet now pulling his face closer to hers & looking into his deep dark eyes …

Geet – Wapas dekhthi hun …

Maan being impatient – dikha ki nahin …

Geet – haan dikha … tho sahin …

Maan – kya dikha …

Geet smiling – mera chehra …

Maan now making his index finger & middle finger trail on geet's back … he was kind of spider walking with his fingers on her back … Geet was getting lost in his touch … but she quickly holds maan's hand & pulls his hands off from her back …

Geet – yeh aap kya kar rahen hain …

Maan – main kya kar rahan hun … kuch nahin …

Geet – maan … aap … aap ki shaitani band kariyen …. aur meri baath suniye … jaroori baath karni thi aapse …

Maan – jaroori baath … kaun si jaroori baath kaise jaroori baath ….

Geet – vicky …. Kae baaren main …

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Posted: 14 years ago
di awesome update y this sudden change in Vicky....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Hima, beautiful beautiful harkatein Maan aur Geet ki!!! Loved reading it, made me smile a lot. Kash cvs yeh dekhe, it will be great to see them incorporate into the series. I have not read the earlier bit so lost on Vicky and Rajji, and this pg 34 i wanna read!!! sr wala!. Keep it up Hima, keep it coming!!! Hugs for such a great job!!! 👏👏👏 🤗🤗🤗

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Thank you all friends for all the lovely & encouraging comments you all have posted '. Please let me know how u like this update '. Critise if u don't like any thing ' comments are always a welcome ' as they are my vitamins to write the next update '. Plz hit the like button if u all like this post ' by the way friends '

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Part 46:-

Rajji was listening to the song '. That vicky was singing & was feeling bad ' she is still unable to decide ' after some time she comes to a decision that she needs to talk to vicky '.& she thinks that she can't take it any more '. There fore She decides to go & meet vicky & talk to him '..

Rajji is now descending the stairs '. While vicky is coming from the garden '. he enters the hall ' vicky & rajji are walking towards each other '. Both looking into each other's eyes '.

Rajji wants to speak to vicky '. So she is going near him '. They both come face to face with each other rajji thinks she will ask him to meet her on the terrace or they both can walk out into the garden '. But to her surprise even before she could open her mouth ' vicky just ignored her & walked away from there '.

Rajji is now surprised by his action & watching him with her mouth open '. & thinking what happened to him all of a sudden & he was not like this till yesterday '. So she goes behind him ' but before she could reach him ' he is quite fast for her ' he locks himself inside his room ' rajji knocks the door of vicky's room & requests him to open the door but he doesn't '.

Rajji thinks to please him ' by doing something for him so that he feels happy about it '. She goes to her room & gets ready & then again comes down & is talking to nakul asks him to help her in making breakfast ' as she wants to make every body's favorite breakfast today ' nakul helps her out ' later on pia too comes & joins her '

In the meanwhile maan , geet , vicky ,geet's family ,dadima come down for breakfast ' vicky's face is still kind of angry and actually he is looking more sad ' geet notices this ' pokes maan & signals him to see vicky's face ' maan too notices his face ' pia & rajji both are serving every one their fav breakfast ' rajji gives maan his fav grilled sandwich & for geet her fav aloo ka paratha ' then she comes close to vicky ' she tries to serve him mooli ka paratha ' but vicky does not allow her to serve him ' instead of his fav mooli ka paratha ' he prefers to just eat an apple ' so grabs an apple from the fruit bowl which was placed in the center of the table '

Rajji ' aap yeh kyun khaa rahen hain ' paratha lijiye naa '

Vicky ' mujhe nahin chahiye '

Rajji ' par yeh aap kae liye hi banaya hain ' mai (she stops half way she wanted to say maine ')

vicky looks at her ' every one is looking at these two instead of having their breakfast '

vicky ' mujhe nahin chahiye '

Rajji ' tho phir aap kya kayenge '

Vicky now shouts at rajji '

Vicky ' maine kahan tha naa ' ki '. mujhe nahin chahiye '

every one is surprised at vicky's behaviour towards rajji ' he does not get angry easily like maan '

Coming to maan He is not the angry young man any more '. of course maan changed a bit ' but only for his family ''. But For his staff maan is still the angry strict boss ' who does get irritated easily ' he could be controlled by only one person '. Who else can that be ' it is none other than geet '

Back to vicky ' he is a bit soft natured person & does not get irritated or angry that easily '. He is quite patient most of the time ' that's the reason dadima ,geet & maan are totally surprised by his behaviour ' before maan could say anything to vicky ' dadima scolds vicky ' for being rude to rajji '

Dadima ' vicky ' yeh kaun saa tareekha hain ' baath karne kaa ' kya aap ko humne yehin baathein sikhya thi '

Vicky ' sorry ' dadima '

Dadima ' sorry ' aap humein nahin '. Rajji ko kahiyen '

Vicky not looking at rajji ' but talking to her '.

Vicky ' sorry '

Rajji ' koi baath nahin '

Dadima ' ab chup chap paratha kayiyen '

Vicky ' ji dadima '..

Vicky takes the paratha ' Every one is having their breakfast ' maan informs dadima that he will be leaving to office after he gets ready ' maan & geet finish their breakfast ' geet & maan go back to their room.

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In maan & geet's room ' maan is sitting in front of his laptop ' working on it '. Geet is pulling out his regular office suit from the closet ' white shirt with black waist coat ' black & white tie ' she comes & stands in front of maan ' with his outfit in her hand '. Maan does not notice this ' maan is burried in his laptop '.

Maan ' geet ' mere white shirt nikal dena '

After completing his sentence he lifts his head & notices that '. Geet is already standing in front of him smiling with his clothes in her hand '

Maan ' oh ' tho ' meri sweet heart ne already ' mere liye mere dress pick kardiya ' wo bhi mere pasand kaa '

Geet ' haan ' aap pehan lijiye ' main ithne main aapka baki ka saman lathi hun '

Geet then lays his outfit on the bed '

Maan ' as you say ' sweet heart '

maan then gets up ' goes near the bed & changes '. Geet in the meanwhile is pulls out his walet & handkerchief ''

Geet ' maan mujhe aap se jaroori baath karni hain '

Maan ' kaun si baath hain geet '

Geet ' bathathi hun '

Maan while buttoning up his shirt ' notices that one of the button just came off '

Maan ' oh god ' yeh button ko bhi abhi nikal na tha '

Geet ' kya hua '

maan shows her his shirt button which came off ' maan was wanting to change ' but geet stops him '

geet ' bas ithni si baath ' rukhiye ' main abhi bathathi hun '

geet brings the needle & thread '

geet ' button dijiye mujhe '.

Maan gives the button to her ' geet takes it & starts sewing the button on to his shirt ' maan places both of his arms on her shoulders ' while pulling her a little bit close to him ' with his arms still on her shoulders ' & pushing her forward with his hands placed on her back '

Maan ' agar mujhe yeh raaz pehle malum hotha tho main ' roz button thod dae tha '

Geet ' kya '

Maan ' haan ' dekho maine kitne saare oppurtunities miss kar di '

Geet ' kaun si opputunities ' button se ' yeh aap kya baath kar rahen hain '

Maan ' tube light ' biwi '

geet stopped stitching '

Geet ' kya apne mujhe wapas tube light kahan '

(if you girls remember they both called each other tube light in earlier updates after their SR morning ' part 34 ' )

Maan ' haan ' aur nahin tho kya '

Geet ' aap bhi na ' bina sarr pair walen baathen kar rahen hain ' aur mujhe tubelight keh rahen hain '

Maan ' tum ho hi tubelight ' arey babaji ' isse ab tak aap ne akal diya hi nahin ' shadi kae ithne din baad bhi ' abhi bhi yeh aise hi bathein kar rahin hain '

Geet ' aap na ' babaji ko beech main math laayiye ' seedhae seedhae bathayiye baath kya hain '

Maan in sensous voice '. ' suno ' par stitch karogi ki nahin '

Geet ' haan ' karungi '

geet again resumes stitching '.

Geet ' par ' aap mujhe seedhe seedhe ' bathayiye ' vajah kya hain '.

Maan ' vajah ' suno '

Geet ' boliye '

Maan - agar yeh ek button ki vajah se meri sweet heart meri bahomein aayegi ' mere ithnae paas rahegi ' tho main button kyun nahin thodungaa ' batao ' main roj button thodunga '

Geet ' kya '

Maan blinking his eyes & nodding his head in a yes '

Maan ' haan '.

Geet - acha ' agar ' aap roz ek ek button thodthae rahengae naa ' tho main ' main '

Maan ' main ' main kya '

Geet ' tho main ' aap ki shirt seeungi nahin '

she again stops stitching the button to his shirt ' & folds her hands '

Maan ' acha ' nahin karogi '

Geet ' haan ' nahin karungi '

Maan ' sure '

Geet ' haan '

Maan still has his left hand on geet's back & now with his right hand ' on geet's chin ' maan pulls her face close to his face ' geet is looking into his eyes ' he is closing in the space between their faces ' tilts his face a bit ' kisses first on her left cheek ' then on her nose '. Then on her right cheek ' while maan looking into her eyes ' geet too looking into his eyes ' maan asks geet will she do it or not '

maan ' ab karogi ' ki nahin '

geet bends her eyes & head down & resumes the stitching ' as she resumes her stitching maan again criss crosses his hands over geet's back '

geet ' aap bhi naa ' bahut shaitaan hogaye hain '

maan ' acha ' main shaitaan hun '

geet ' aur nahin tho kya '

maan ' yeh ' sab sangath ka asar hain '

geet ' sangath ' kiska '

maan ' aur kiska '

geet ' bathayiyen naa '

geet finally finishes stitching the button ' geet smiling at maan ' still maan with his arms criss crossed over geet's shoulders coming close to her ' now he is close to her ear '

Maan ' koi ladki hain '

Geet ' ok ' koi ladki hain '

Maan ' koi ladki hain ' jab wo hasthi hain '

Geet ' kya '

Maan ' haan ' suno ' naa ' disturb math karo '

Geet ' sunrahi hun boliye '

Maan - koi ladki hain ' jab wo hasthi hain ' baarish hotha hain ' tunak tunak tun tun '

Geet thinking to herself ' "yeh aaj maan ko kya ho gaya hain ' gana kyun gaa rahen hain ' ajeeb ajeeb har kathein kar rahen hain' "

Geet ' aap mujhe naam ' bathane ke bajaye ' gana kyun gaa rahen hain '

Maan ' ab ' main uske baaren main ' iss kae alava aur kya kahun '

Geet ' acha ' bolne kae liye kuch nahin hain '

Maan ' haan '

Geet - aur uska asar hain '

Maan ' haan '. Bilkul ' aur ' wo hain hi aise '

Geet ' oho ' tho ' wo hain hi aise '

Geet ' aur wo kahan pae hain '

Maan ' mere aakhon main basi hain ' tumhe nazar nahin aa rahin hain '.

Geet now smiling ' but is acting as though she did not understand what maan meant ' geet cupping maan's face in her hands '.looking in to his eyes '

Geet ' nahin tho '. Mujhe tho kuch bhi dikhayi nahin de rahin hain ' sirf button jaise aap ki kaali kaali ankhen hi dikh rahin hain '

Maan ' kya '.

Geet blinking her eyes & smiling at maan '.

geet - haan '

Maan - teek se dekho ' geet '

Geet ' dekha maan ' mujhe kuch bhi nahin dikh rahan hain '

Maan ' geet ' ab shaitani kaun kar rahan hain '

Geet ' kaun '

Maan ' aur kaun tum '.

Geet ' acha ' maiiiinnnn '

Maan ' aur nahin tho kya '

Geet ' acha rukhiye '.

Geet now pulling his face closer to hers & looking into his deep dark eyes '

Geet ' Wapas dekhthi hun '

Maan being impatient ' dikha ki nahin '

Geet ' haan dikha ' tho sahin '

Maan ' kya dikha '

Geet smiling ' mera chehra '

Maan now making his index finger & middle finger trail on geet's back ' he was kind of spider walking with his fingers on her back ' Geet was getting lost in his touch ' but she quickly holds maan's hand & pulls his hands off from her back '

Geet ' yeh aap kya kar rahen hain '

Maan ' main kya kar rahan hun ' kuch nahin '

Geet ' maan ' aap ' aap ki shaitani band kariyen '. aur meri baath suniye ' jaroori baath karni thi aapse '

Maan ' jaroori baath ' kaun si jaroori baath kaise jaroori baath '.

Geet ' vicky '. Kae baaren main '

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Sorry friends to stop over here ' will give you an important update in the next part '

I will be updating Dil Kya karen hopefully tonight ... please let me know how you liked this update '.
Thanks for all your wonderful comments ' please give me your review on this update '

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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwww awesomeeeeeeee
is vicky using d ignoring trick or he is totally pissed off with rajji
hope geet understood tht rajji n vicky like eachother
millii thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice and owsem
ilove it
swetha10 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. button wala scene was really cute.. luved maneet.. continue soon..
whitepearl thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very sweet update hima...Maan and Geet always bring smile. What's cooking b/w Rajji and vicky?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow...this was great but why is Vicky like this?
Thanks a lot for the update

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