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Posted: 14 years ago
wow sis love Maan & Geet how describe there relationship i'm dreamland 😍😍 but i wonder sudden change of Vicky super mindblowing exccept the way yu left us with cliff hanger not fair sis pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey thanks for the update and thanks for listening to my req and bringing up with more maaneet moments...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally u updated this!!!!!!!!!!1
u have to give us at least weekly updates samjhi😡😡😡😡😡
chotoo sa bhi chalega!!!!!!!!!!!😡😡😡😡
deww me loves the button scene...............but why u didnt show geet cutting thread with her teeth????😭😭😭😭 and maybe kissing maans naked chest😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
when maan was saying mai roz karunga ...i thot geet will asy maine jaan bujh ke kiya.aap ke paas aane ke liye.because u r so busy in work!!!!!!!!!!!! that wud have been fun!!!!!!!!
sherni in seductive mood...........😉😉😉😉
next update me aisa kuch daal na.....😉😉😉😉
is vicky planning to make rajji J???
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it dear... awesome as always... please update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god wat happened to vicky😲..........hope rajji will pacify him😉 maaneet were so sweet n thinks that geet has noticed vicky's prob
hope to see some remedy soon
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
i miss the show button sewing scenes
no seriels show that anymore i hope in Geet they show it
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Posted: 14 years ago
dew amazing updates...........vicky-rajji ke scenes r superb reminds me of maan-geet........hide n seek of feelings........

maan-geet r always d most imp and der scenes rock as usual........it was a long update which i always wanted..........dew gr8 job dear.......

baby shower ho gaya whts next??????? i mean baby or still der is time?????? will b waiting for d update............thnx
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Part 47:-

Maan now making his index finger & middle finger trail on geet's back … he was kind of spider walking with his fingers on her back … Geet was getting lost in his touch … but she quickly holds maan's hand & pulls his hands off from her back …

Geet – yeh aap kya kar rahen hain …

Maan – main kya kar rahan hun … kuch nahin …

Geet – maan … aap aap ki shaitani band kariyen …. aur meri baath suniye … jaroori baath karni thi aapse …

Maan – jaroori baath … kaun si jaroori baath kaise jaroori baath ….

Geet – vicky …. Kae baaren main …

Maan – ab kya kiya vicky nae …

Geet – aap nae dekha nahin kya … aaj subah wo kaise barthav kar rahan tha rajji kae saath …

Maan – haan …dekha tho sahin …

Geet – aap ko kya lagtha hain ….

maan again keeps his hands on geet's shoulders …. Criss crosses his hands over her shoulders …. Playing with her soft hair …

Geet – aap mere baath sun rahen hain ki nahin ….

Maan – haan geet … bolo ….

Geet – bolo … main bol rahin hun …. Aap hi mere baath sun nahin rahen hain …. Aap ka dyan kahan pe hain …

Maan – I am listening geet …. Vicky … kae baaren main naa …

Geet – haan … aap ko kya lagtha hain …

Maan – shayad apni struggle ki wajas se pareshan hoga ….

Geet – aap ko … yeh wajah lagtha hain …

Maan – haan ….

Geet – aur koi dusra reason nahin hain ….

Maan – aur konsa reason hoga ….

Geet – maine aap ko pehle kahan tha na …

Maan – oh koi ladki ….

Geet – haan … isi liye main chahthi hun ki aap usse baath karen …

Maan – teek hain … baath karunga … ab kush ….

Geet – haan … par kab karengae …

Maan – ghar aane kae baad … ya phir ….. agar tum kahon tho main … abhi baath kar letha hun … bhale mujhe aaj office main bahut hi important work ho meeting ho …. Sab cancel kardae tha hun … Pehle vicky ka kaam karthe hain … teek hain ….

Geet – nahin … rehnae dijiye … ghar aane kae baad bath kar lijiye …

Maan – phir main …. abhi office ja sakhtha hun …

Geet – teek hain … jaa sakhthae hain … jaayiye …

Maan – ok bye …

Geet questioningly – bye …

Geet is looking at maan while he leaves …. Maan is near the door … because this is not the way Maan normally leaves to office … without saying proper good bye to her or the baby … geet is getting angry … maan is smiling mischievously knowing geet's feelings … because he just wanted to see how geet reacts … & she reacted in the same exact way …

Geet – maan aap kuch bhul nahin rahen hain …

Maan – nahin tho …

Geet – nahin …

Maan – haan yaad aya …

Geet feeling happy….. that she & their baby are going to get their DD (daily doses …. Well that's the term given by geet & maan to kiss … apart from gift … or thank you in a different way … )

Geet – yaad agaya …

Maan turning & looking at geet … & walking towards her ….

Geet - haan …. mere white suit dry cleaning ke liye baej do …

Geet – kya …

Maan – haan …

Geet making a face – aap yeh bhul gaye thae …

Maan – haan … kyun kuch aur bhul gaya hun kya ... Ek minute sab check kar letha hun ….

Maan checking …. Geet now turning backwards feeling sad … her back is facing maan …

Geet to herself – kuch aur bhul gaya hun ... kya ….

Maan slowly comes & stands behind geet & kisses her on her shoulder … geet's face is turning to face maan … maan then kisses her on her neck … geet turns ... maan cupping her face in his hands …

Maan – geet main kaise bhul sakhtha hun … bolo … aur … agar main tumhe subah subah DD nahin diya ya tumse nahin liya … tho mera poora din kaise beet sakhtha hain bolo …

Geet – aap mujhe chida rahen thae …

Maan – haan ab tumse yeh sab nahin karo tho aur kiss kae saath karunga bolo … tumne hi kahan tha na …

Geet – haan … so tho hain …

Maan then gives gud bye kiss to geet on her forehead & cheeks …. After kissing geet gud bye … now it's the baby's turn …. Maan on his knees … touches geet's belly … first with his hand …. Then he keeps his cheek on her belly …

Maan – pari beta … papa jaldi ghar aa jayenge … ab aap bhi jaldi se bahar aa jayiye … papa aur wait nahin kar pa rahen hain ….

Geet has a sweet smile on her face …. maan plants a kiss on geet's belly …

Maan – main ghar jaldi hi aa jaunga … teek hain …

Geet – teek hain …

maan leaves for office …. Geet is in her room …

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Vicky in his room … & is on top of the world … & Happy on how all the incidents with rajji went in his favour since yesterday & according to his plan …. & Rajji acted in the same way …. First she became jealous … then she wanted to talk to him after the song in the morning …. Then she followed him to his room … next cooking for him …. then at breakfast table … every thing went well & accordingly … & he could not use the jealousy game any more as tasha would be working in office … & there is no way she would be coming to mansion … & neither rajji nor he would not be going to office … so he thought better to use the ignoring game On her & it is working very gud since morning … vicky is sure that rajji would be coming to his room very soon … he has every thing planned … his count down started …

10 …. 9 …….. 8 ……….7 ………6………5……..4………..3………..2………….1….. knock knock …

Vicky's knows it's rajji knocking at the door … & has his back facing the door …

vicky – come in …

rajji enters the room … She tries to get vicky's attention by coughing …

Rajji – uhun uhun ….

Vicky turns & faces her …

Vicky – yes …

Rajji – wo main …

Vicky - Kya hain …

Rajji – wo main aap ke liye straw berry shake lae kae aayi …

Vicky again turns & has his back towards her … & is smiling …

Vicky – kyun nakul ko kya hua … tum kyun le kae aayi …

Rajji – ji …. Wo maine socha tha ki …

Vicky – kya Socha …

Rajji – ki main dae du aap ko …

Vicky – teek hain … udhar table pae … rakhdo aur jao …

Rajji – jee … rakhdu aur jau … aur kuch nahin …

Vicky – kyun … kuch aur hain …

Rajji – jee …. jee nahin …

Rajji keeps the shake on the table … is looking at vicky … vicky behaving as though he was ignoring her … but he was looking at her from one end of his eye … rajji has a long face stands for couple of minutes & thinking … then she is about to leave … rajji is walking towards the door slowly … but …

vicky is too quick for her … holds her hand & pulls her towards him … rajji to support herself places her hands on vicky's shoulders … & he catches her in his arms tight …

rajji & vicky both looking into each other's eyes … their eye contact is broken …. Rajji bends her eyes out of shyness … rajji is struggling to come out of it …. But there is not that much struggle as before … vicky can definitely notice this change …. So now he is sure that now he is close to his destination …….

Rajji – mujhe jaane dijiye …..

Vicky – tho jo baath bolne aayi ho ….. wo baath bina bole hi jaana chahthi ho ……

Rajji – kaun si baath ….

Vicky – wohi baath ……

Rajji - mujhe kuch nahin kehna hain ....

Vicky – par mujhe tho aise nahin laga tha ….

Rajji – mujhe jaane dijiye …. Aur aise koi baath nahin hain …

Vicky – agar aise koi baath nahin hain …. Tho abhi abhi breakfast hua tha … tho shake ke bahane …. Mere room main aane ki kya jaroorat hain …. Tumhe …….

Rajji – wo nakul ne kahan tha ki … aap ke paas shake le jaa na tha … par wo busy ho gaya tho main laeke aa gayi ….

Vicky – acha … nakul ne kahan tha …. Maine tho nakul ko mana kiya tha …...

Rajji – par nakul ne tho kahan ki …. Wo busy hain …. Aur aapne yeh mangwaya tha … aur mujhe pooncha ki main yeh shake aap ke paas lae ja sakhthi hun ki nahin …

Vicky – yeh nakul bina … kuch bhi teek se sunta nahin hain ….

Vicky in his mind – "nakul gud job … you exactly did … like I asked you to do … thank you … "

Rajji – ab tho mujhe jaane dijiye …

Vicky – rajji … tum bhi janthi ho …ki agar nakul nahin hotha tho koi aur bahane se tum mere room main aathi … hain ki nahin ….

Rajji – nahin athi …

Vicky – nahin athi …

Vicky closing in the space between rajji & himself …… & tightening the grip on her ….

Vicky – sach bolo …

rajji's heart is beating faster …. As vicky was pressing her to him … she wanted to get drown in his embrace but was restricting herself …

rajji – na…hi …n …. aa … th …i …

vicky – rajji … ab tho batha do na ki tum mujhsae pyar karthi ho … aur kitna tadpa ogi mujhe …

rajji – jee nahin … main aap se pyar nahin karthi ….

Vicky – wohi baath mere aankhon main dekh khe batao ….

Rajji is avoiding vicky's eyes ….

Rajji – maine kahan naa … main aap se pyar nahin karthi …

vicky – nahin karthi ….

Vicky - acha yeh tho batao … tumhe tasha se jalan hua tha na … kal …

rajji – nahin tho ….

Vicky biting his teeth …

vicky – acha … aur subah … jab maine tumse baath nahin kiya … tho tum mere peeche kyun aayi …

rajji – wo main …

vicky – haal bolo … main sun rahan hun …

rajji – wo … bas … aap ko hello … bolne …

vicky – acha … hello bolne … mere room tak aagayi ….

Rajji – haan …

Vicky – is it really … yeh tho batao … mere liye breakfast kyun banaya.

Rajji – breakfast …. Wo tho maine sab ke liye banaya tha …

Vicky – par … mere mana karne ke baad bhi mujhe kyun serve kar rahin thi …

Rajji – wo tho … agar aap breakfast nahin khayenge tho … aap ki health ke liye acha nahin hoga naa … isiliye ….

Vicky – kyun …. Agar main ek din breakfast … nahin karunga … tho kya main marr ….

Rajji keeps her hands on vicky's mouth as soon as he says that word marr jaungaa not allowing him to complete the sentence …. Both have eye lock for some time … rajji with her fingers on his lips … still …

Rajji – aap yeh subah subah kaun si baath kar rahen hain …

vicky holds her hands & kisses her fingers …. Rajji pulls her hands off & is feeling shy …

Vicky – kyun rajji … tumhe iss baath se pharakh kyun padtha hain …

Rajji – kis baath se ….

Vicky – wohi marr …

rajji again keeps her fingers on his lips … vicky staring into her eyes …. & rajji too looking into his eyes … but she comes out of the eye lock & takes her hands off his lips … as he drops his eye lids … & looks down on her fingers …

Vicky – yehin baath se …

Rajji - mujhe pharakh nahin padtha …

Vicky – acha … pharakh nahin padtha …

Rajji – haan …. Nahin padtha …

Vicky - isi liye tumne mere muh par apna hath rakha naa … mujhe rokne ke liye … aur … kiss karnae kae baad bhi tumne mujhe kuch nahin kahan …

Rajji – nahin … mujhe gussa aaya naa …

Vicky – oh tho gussa aya … phir thappad kyun nahin maara mujhe …

Rajji – thappad …

Vicky – hmmm … thappad … Aur wapas mere muh pe haath rakha … yeh jaan kae bhi ki maine kya kiya aur kya kar sakhtha hun …

rajji feeling shy … she is now struggling little bit to come out of his embrace … when ever she remembers she has to struggle other wise she is quite happy in his arms ….

Rajji – mujhe chodiye ….

Vicky – sorry rajji … aaj main tumhein nahin chod ne wala … hun … kya malum kal yeh mauka … phir mile ki na mile …

Rajji – chodiyen … koi aa jayega …

Vicky – is it … ane do … kya hoga …

Rajji – aap samajh thae kyun nahin hain …

Vicky – main samajh gaya hun … bas tumhara haan ka intezaar hain …

Rajji – koi hamein aise dekhengae tho acha lagega kya …

Vicky - atleast sab ko hum dono ke baaren main pata chal jayega … main yehin tho chahtha hun …

vicky leaves her …. But rajji still has her hands over him … & is holding him …

Rajji – hum dono main aisa kuch nahin hain …

Vicky – kuch nahin hain …. Iss liye maine tumhe chod nae kae baad bhi tumne mujhe pakda hua hain …

Rajji notices that vicky left her … she takes her hand off him … but vicky again tightens his grip on her … as soon as she leaves him …

Vicky – rajji … bahut hogaya … yeh hide & seek ka game … ab jaldi jaldi … batha do ki tum bhi mujhsae pyar karthi ho …. I am waiting …

Rajji – main kitni baar kahun … ki mujhe aap se pyar nahin hain …

Vicky – pyar nahin hain …

Rajji – haan … nahin hain …

Vicky - tumhara zubaan ek baath kehtha hain … par tumhari ankhen aur harkatein tho kuch aur hi kehthein hain ….

Rajji – maine kahan naa … nahin …

vicky tightens his grip even more so as there is no space in between them … vicky running his hands on her back … rajji keeps her hands in between them to separate the hug … she is getting totally lost in his touch … but is controlling herself …

vicky – sach batao rajji … jab bhi main tumhe apne kareeb letha hun … kya tumhein … kuch nahin … hotha …

rajji trembling – nahin … hota …

vicky – kya tum mere bahom main simatna nahin chahthi ….

Rajji – nahin chahthi …

Vicky – jab main tumhe apni kareeb letha hun … ya tumhe chutha hun … tumhe kuch bhi mehsoos nahin hotha …

Rajji – nahin hotha …

Vicky – kya tumhara dil zoron sae dhadaktha nahin …

Rajji – nahin …

Vicky - nahin … phir … mujhe kyun sunayi dae rahen hain hain … tumhari dil ki dhadkhanein …

Rajji – aisa kuch nahin hain …

Vicky – tum abhi bhi baath ko wohi le ja rahin ho … teek hain jao …

Vicky leaves her …

Vicky - par agar … tumhari wajah se … main pagal ho gaya … tho baad main rona math … kyunki … agar mujhe kuch bhi hua … tho uss ke zimmedaar tum khud hogi …

rajji Walks few steps back … she is thinking over the entire matter … walking towards the door … turns back & sees vicky's dejected face … could not … see him any more like that … so runs towards him … & hugs him tight … vicky too reciprocates her hug … after some time vicky & rajji comes out of the hug …

rajji then tells him the problem that's been bothering her … about her darji,brij veerji well as of now he is in jail , parents & how their family treated geet & how their family might come in between their love & she also tells him that there is no future for their relationship … how difficult it is to please darji & the rest of their family & how they would react when they might come to know about geet & her self …

Vicky – rajji … tumhe …. Baudi pae … aur bhai pae bharosa hain naa …

Rajji – haan … hain … khud sae bhi jyada …

Vicky – phir main bhai aur baudi se baath karunga … teek hain … sohni …

Rajji – sohni … yeh sohni …kaun hain …

Vicky – tum aur kaun ….

Rajji feeling shy – main …

Vicky – haan … ab tho bata do ki tum bhi mujhsae pyar karthi ho …

Rajji – nahin … mujhe sharam aa rahin hain ….

Vicky – baad main sharmana … abhi boldo …

Rajji – nahin … main … nahin … keh sakhthi …

vicky – abhi kahon gi ki nahin …

rajji – maine …. Haan kahan naa …

vicky – tumne haan … kab kahan … bas yehin kahan ki … tumhara parivaar hum dono ke pyar ke beech main aa sakhthe hain …

rajji – dekha kahan naa …

vicky – teek hain … aaj ke liye main tumhein chod dunga … par main aaj sham tak tumhare muh se ILU ILU sunna hain …

rajji frees herself from him embrace & shows him a thumbs down & runs away from him …. Vicky is also finally happy … that atleast she said yes to his love … rajji is outside the room …

rajji – shake pee lijiye … baad main milenge …

vicky – teek hain … par shaam ko … yaad rakhna …

rajji – dekhengae … shaam ko naa …

vicky then goes out on his work after finishing the shake ….

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Part 48:-

Maan calls & informs geet that he would get late … so she can go to bed after having her dinner … as today he is really caught up in some urgent work … but geet refuses to have her dinner without him … as after marriage they made it a point to eat every meal together … if they cannot have lunch together …atleast they are supposed to have dinner together ….

Knowing geet & his promise made to her … Maan tells her that he will try to finish his work early & come home … maan tries to come home early … but still misses dinner with every one … but geet is waiting for him … without having her dinner … Well rajji still did not say IlU ILU to vicky … maan comes home & notices that geet is waiting for him …

Maan – geet tum room main kyun nahin aaram kar rahin thi …

Geet – maan … main teek hun … bas abhi abhi bahar ayi thi …

Maan – teek hain … tum kab meri baath manogi … aur sab ne dinner kar liya …

Geet – haan … bas hum dono baki hain …

Maan – chalo teek hain … jaldi dinner laga do mujhe bahut bhukh lagi hain …

geet serves him … but maan insists on serving in 1 plate only … geet understands & serves in 1 plate only …. Maan then starts feeding geet & geet too starts feeding maan … after their dinner finishes …

Geet – maan … mujhe chocolate cake khana hain …

Maan – chocolate cake … abhi … isi waqt …

Geet – haan …

Maan – chalo … phir chalthae hain … dekhenge humein kahin mil jaye …

Geet – mujhe aap ki haath ki bani hui cake chahiye …

Maan – oh … tho … meri haath ki bani hui chahiye …

Geet nods her head in a yes … maan & geet both go to the kitchen … maan helps geet to be seated in a chair … & then … starts making cake … geet too helps him … finally cake is done … geet cuts the cake … maan takes a piece & makes geet to eat it … geet too feeds maan some cake … maan then takes some cake pieces & puts them in a plate & feeds geet the cake … while she was eating the cake … their discussion starts …

Geet – oh ho … maan … aaj aap daer sae aaye … aapko vicky se baath karni thi naa …

Maan – subah baath kar lungaa geet …

Geet – maan janthe hain … vicky … aaj afternoon se bahut kush dikhayi de rahan hain ….

Maan – acha … yeh vicky ko bhi mood swings ho rahen hain shayad tumhare jaise … oh ya … yaad aaya … tumhara bhai jo tehra ….

Geet beats maan in his chest …

Maan – ouch … apne pati par haath utathi ho …

Geet – maine apne pati pae nahin apne pyar ko pyar se chua …

Maan – acha … isse chuna kehthe hain … tho maarna kise kehte hain …

Geet – karke batao …

Maan – nahin … aaj nahin … waise suno …

Geet – haan …

maan coming close to geet … geet is looking at maan …

Maan – geet … ab bahut daer ho gaya chalo … chalthae hain … raat bhi bahut hogayi hain aur main bhi thak gaya hun … aur tumhein bhi aaram karna chahiye …

maan & geet go to their room & go to bed …

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Next day morning after everyone finishes their breakfast …. Geet notices that vicky & rajji quickly finish their breakfast & go back to their rooms … but does not take the matter too serious … back to maan & geet bed room …

Geet – aap abhi jayiye …. vicky se baath kariye …

Maan – haan .. baba main ja rahan hun … warna tum tho aaj mujhe kha hi jao gi …

but as soon as maan tries to leave towards vicky's room … maan gets a call from adi … saying that … some emergency came up in office & maan needs to check on that matter immediately … geet was listening to the whole conversation shrugs her shoulders & hands over maan his laptop bag …

geet – teek hain … shaam ko baath kariye …

maan – sorry sweet heart … sham ko jaldi aa jaunga …

maan gives geet & baby their daily dose of kisses & leaves to office promising to come back early & speak to vicky ….

Geet thinks on checking on vicky herself & see if she could talk to him … so she is walking towards vicky's room … till then vicky & rajji … were talking to each other … Geet almost reaches vicky's room … & stops near the door as she listens to rajji's voice … geet is confused & is thinking what is rajji doing in vicky's room …

Then she listens to the conversation & understands that rajji wants to leave but vicky is not allowing to leave …. As vicky wants her to tell him ILU ILU … but rajji is not saying … & vicky is begging her …

Rajji – nahin …

Vicky – teek hain … aaj sham ko … 6:30 … hamare garden main … jo stone caves hain …. Wo acha rahega …. thaki … koi hamein nahin dekh na sakey … aaogi naa …

Rajji – dekhungi …

Vicky – dekhungi …. Nahin … main udhar … tumhara wait karunga … taki hum sab ki nazron se bach sake …. Nahin tho … ghar main koi na koi disturb karthe rahengae … bas thodi daer ka liye ….

Rajji – teek hain …

Geet to herself –"oh … tho chori chori milne ka plan chal rahan hain …. Well ab tum dono ka banda phut gaya hain … dekho … main kya karungi …. Aur kya keh rahen Mr.Vicky … koi na koi tumhe disturb karengae …"

Geet connects all the dots & now has the entire picture … of both rajji & vicky … she now understands that rajji was talking about vicky … geet is happy that her sister will be her devrani … & she wants to share this news with maan … calls him … & finds that his meeting is still going on … so leaves a message with pinky … asking her to inform maan to come home early & she SMS's maan to come home early too … she wants to surprise maan so does not give him the reason in the SMS …

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maan comes home early … as per Mrs. geet maan singh khurana's orders… hands her over his laptop bag …

Maan – ab main vicky se baath karne jaa rahan hun …

Geet – rehne dijiye …

Maan – kya …. Rehne du … isi liye tho … tumne mujhe jaldi bulaya naa.

Geet – maine kahan naa … rehne dae nae kae liye …

Maan sitting on the bed … loosening his tie …

Maan – par kal tak tho tum mera dimag kha rahin thi … ki vicky se baath karo baath karo ….bol ke … Ab achanak kya hua …

Geet – aap rukhiye …. Main aap ko kuch dikha ungi … Phir Aap ko hi sab samajh main aa jayega …

Maan – kya samajh main ayega … aur kya dikhaogi …

Geet – thoda sabar rakhiye … time kitna hua hain …

Maan – appx … 6:25 hone wala hain …

geet panics … she starts pulling maan … with her hand …

maan – rukho kya hain …

geet – utiye …

maan – kyun …

maan get's up & walks along with geet … maan holding geet's hand …

Geet – oh … aap naa … bathon main mujhe uljha daethe ho … aap ki chakkar main … maine ghadi bhi nahin dekhi …

Maan – ab kya kiya main … aur main bathon main uljha tha hun main…

Geet – aap chaliye mere saath … aur yeh behas na … hum baad main continue karengae … teek hain …

Maan – kahan … chalu … yeh kya … baad main continue karengae … break ke baad continue karengae kya … behas …

Geet – haan … abhi … aap chup chap chaliye tho sahin …

Maan – chup chap …

Geet – haan … finger on your lips … maan …

Maan – finger on my lips … lagtha hain …. Abhi se pari ke liye training main lagi ho …

Geet – maan … I said finger on your lips … please …

Maan – ok …ok … I will …

Maan walking along with geet while holding her hand & another hand on his lips ….

vicky was already waiting for rajji in the mentioned spot … of stone caves …. In khurana mansion garden … well it's not exactly stone cave … but there is enough shelter to cover you from rain … sun … wind … & two more stones so that you can sit & chat … rajji too now enters the cave … geet is with maan but made sure that rajji does not have a clue as to some one is behind her … maan too is confused as to what geet has in mind … but has finger on his lips as geet asked him to keep quiet … geet & maan are outside stone caves … geet took position in such a way that they both can clearly listen to the conversation that's going on between vicky & rajji … geet talks very very softly in maan's ear.

geet – abhi aap … chup chap suniye … jo kuch bhi ho rahan hain … baath math kariyen …

maan nods his head with still finger on his lips … just then maan listens to rajji & vicky's voices … vicky asking rajji to say ILU ILU … maan's eyes have widened & is staring at geet … as though asking her with his eyes … is this true … is this what you wanted me to see … geet nods her head in a yes … maan is also giving a sweet smile to geet as he saw that geet is really happy that vicky & rajji both love each other … if maan's geet is happy … maan is happy … so he does not have any objection to them … rajji is about to say that she loves him …

rajji – I ….. Lo …

even before rajji could complete her sentence … geet starts shouting … rajji & vicky are shocked to hear geet's voice … so they run outside …

geet – maan … maan … mujhe pain ho rahan hain …

maan panics …

maan – pain ho rahan hain … ab main kya karun …

geet grabs maan collar …

geet – kya karun … kya … mujhe bacha hone wala hain … jaldi mujhe hospital le jao … classes main kya seekha aapne …

maan – geet … geet … calm down …

vicky & rajji too come & stand in front of maan …

maan – tum dono yahan kya kar rahen ho …

geet grabs maan collar … & pulls him towards her ….

Geet – aapko main konsi language main bolu … mujhe hospital le jao … warna … main … mera …

Maan – oh geet … abhi … abhi le chaltha hun … aur tum dono ko main baad main dekh lungaa …

Rajji & vicky scared at being caught together … Maan picks up geet in his arms ….

Maan – vicky … quick gaadi nikalo … fast …

Vicky – jee bhai …

Vicky runs ….

Maan - rajji jaake ghar main sab ko inform kardo … ki geet ko labour pains ho rahen hain …

Rajji – jee jiju …

Rajji runs to inform everyone at the mansion … Maan takes geet to the hospital … geet is in labour … maan too wants to be with her while she is in labour … so maan too stays with her … while she was delivering … geet delivers a beautiful baby girl just like maan wanted to be … maan takes the baby in his hands … he is over whelmed to see the baby in his hands … we can see tears rolling down from his cheek … & geet too is crying …

Maan – oh my little angel … kitna …cute hain … dekho … geet …

maan takes the baby near geet … & hands the baby to geet …

geet – haan maan … bahut cute hain …

maan – isse naa main … roz office le jaunga …

geet – kya … abhi se …

maan – haan …kyun nahin …

geet – maan aap ko kya hua hain … ithni choti bachi ko koi office le jathae hain kya …

maan – kisi ka tho malum nahin hain … par maan singh khurana jaroor le jayega …

geet – haan … janthi hun … maan singh khurana ko kaun rok sakhtha hain …

the nurse comes & interrupts them … informing that Geet's room has to be changed …

geet's room is changed … maan informs everyone geet's room number & location … every one enter the room … congratulate maan & geet … first it is rano who takes the baby from maan … maan holding geet's hands & sitting next to her … The baby's smiling with half opened eyes …

Rano hugging the baby – yeh tho geet jaise hi dikh rahin hain … geet bhi jab paida hui thi tho aise hi dikhthi thi …

The baby's still smiling … Mohinder taking the baby from rano …

Mohinder hugging the baby – haan rano … geet jaise hi dikh rahin hain … wohi aankhen … wohi naak naksha … ek damm geet jaise hi dikh rahin hain …

The baby's still smiling … in everyone's hands … mohinder handing over the baby to dadima …

Dadima – geet … kuch naam socha …

maan – haan … dadima …. Pari …

Dadima hugging the baby – pari … acha name hain … bilkul nanhi si pari lag rahin hain …. Meri par pothi … meri pari …

every one hug each other … & decide on going home & making necessary preparations for the baby & mommy … geet & maan come home with the baby … after the cradle ceremony … geet's parents ,rajji & tito leave to hoshiarpur … while pia goes back to her parents place …

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We will be having a leap now …

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After pari was born … while she was growing … maan & geet were having a happy married life … vicky's struggle ended & he got some music contracts with some companies … in the meanwhile as per maan's & geet's advice rajji goes on for her higher education … geet's family still does not know about vicky & rajji … rajji joins an Engineering College & does Civil Engineering … so that she can join KC … later on … Geet too completes her M.B.A. so that she can help maan in his business …

Pari's 5th birthday will be coming very shortly … she will be turning 5 in a couple of months …

Dadima has her hands on pari's head …. While pari was sleeping in maan & geet's bed room alone …

Dadima to herself – waqt kitne teji se badh jatha hain … ab pari ko hi dekho kitne jaldi badi hogayi hain … aise laga ki yeh tho kal hi ki baath thi ki yeh geet ki paet main thi … ab dekho 2 months main iski 5 th birthday ayega ….

pari wakes up from her bed … dadima is sitting next to her … pari is looking every where for her parents …

Pari – dadima … mama aul papa kahan hain …

Dadima – mama papa … aja yengae … tumhare liye ek chota sa bhai ya behen laene gaye hain ….

Pari – haan … dadima …

vicky enters ….

Vicky – what is my princess doing ….

Pari jumps at him from her bed ….

Pari – chachu …

Vicky takes her in his arms …

Pari – mama papa … mele liye … bhai lane gaye hain …

Vicky – behen bhi tho ho sakthi hain naa …

pari is crying …

Pari – na hi nnnn …. Waaaa waaaaaaa … mujhe bhai hi chahiye … waaaa …. Waaaa ….

dadima is yelling at vicky …

dadima - Vicky aap chup nahin reh sakhthae thae … ab usse chup karayiye … aur usse school ke liye ready kariye … main abhi athi hun …

vicky – chup ho jaa meri maa …. Chup ho jaa … main tumhe …on the way ice cream parlour le jaunga …

pari still does not stop crying ….

Vicky – main tumhe daer saare chocolates kareed kae dunga …

Pari – aul ….

Vicky – aur kya chahiye …

Pari - chips …

Vicky – haan haan chips … bhi …. Sabhi … ab jaldi se ready ho jao … chalo …

Vicky takes her to the bath room …

Pari – chachu … main led color tooth blush se blush kalungi …

Vicky – ok … yeh lo …

vicky puts some tooth paste on the tooth brush … as soon as vicky turns to check on hot water in the tub … pari eats the tooth paste … & then goes near vicky & pulls his shirt … vicky turns …

vicky – kya hua princess …

pari – chachu … tooth paste … chahiye …

vicky – toothpaste … abhi tho daala maine …

pari laughing …- ha ha ha ha ha … wo tho maine kha liya …

vicky – naughty girl … wait ….

pari runs …

Pari – catch me if you can chachu …

vicky & pari both play …. with vicky running behind her … and she was running all over the place from the bath to the bed … playing catch me if you can … finally vicky get holds of pari … & makes her brush her teeth & bathes her & gets her ready … vicky is now combing her hair …. Dadima comes in with pari's breakfast … dadima feeds pari … then vicky takes her to her school …

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In the hospital geet is admitted as she was in labour … maan was also with her again … finally geet delivers a baby boy … maan takes the baby boy in his hands … & shows him to geet …

maan gets a phone call while he is with geet … so maan hands over the baby to geet & tells her that he will be back with her & he also needs to inform dadima about geet delivering a baby boy …

maan walks out of her room while answering the call but as the reception was not good the call gets cut … so he had to walk out from geet's room & goes out ….

maan calls dadima informs her about geet's delivery … maan finishes all the calls he had to make & while coming back to geet's room … on his way … he justs turns his head casually & looks into a ward … he is still walking towards geet's room … but stops after couple of steps …

Maan to himself – "is it her … what is she doing in this ward & what happened to her …. & What is she doing in India … she was in canada when I saw her last or rather say when she left …. How can I forget her … after what ever she did to me …. I need to find out what she is doing in delhi …

by the way maan what happened to you why are you worried at the sight of her … not that geet does not know anything about you … geet knows your deepest secrets too … about your past … so geet will not have any problem …

babaji … I don't want any complications in our life specially for geet … all I want is geet's happiness … it took her so long to forget her past …. My past … now all of a sudden … she is in the same hospital as geet … but what is the reason …. Let me find out about her … "

Maan notes down the room no … Maan goes to the reception to enquire about the patient in the room no 701 ...

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So any guesses on who maan was talking about ... who is this new entry ....

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Sorry for the delay in the update … will continue very soon … hopefully day after tomorrow … will update the SS either tonight or by tomorrow …. Sorry for the delay … & friends thank you very much for your loving & wonderful comments … please let me know how you all liked the update … thanks a lot once again …

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