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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice update!
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well, curious to know who is the guest whom maan sigh kurana waiting for to annouce his engagement.
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well, curious to know who is the guest whom maan sigh kurana waiting for to annouce his engagement.
U will know very soon in the next part ...šŸ˜‰
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Hi

Girls …

Must tell u some thing I was actually having doubts when I wrote the phone conversation part … was having doubts whether u all would like it or not … thank u every one for liking it …

plz let me know how u like this update … I hope tht U all like it … I know maaneet engagement means U all have high hopes … I just hope tht I can reach upto ur expectations … I am just hoping tht u all like this update tooo …please let me know if u like it or not …

hi girls this part is real lengthy ... so had to cut it in to two parts ... hope u like it ... plz reply girls need ur feed back …

Part 28 :-

Maan is getting ready …. His sherwani is also the same color as geet's engagement saree with a tinge of black to it here and there … as we know that Mr.Maan Singh Khurana loves black …

Dadima enter's maan's room and is speaking to maan – Maan guests saare aane waalae hain … geet kae family member's ka kya hua ….

Maan – dadima … they are on the way … bas ek aadh gante main pahunch hi jaayengae …

Dadima – ek aadh ganta ho tho teek hain … waise humnae jo time diya hain … uss hisaab sae tho sare guests shaayad abhi aane waalae hi hongae … teek hain aap tayyar ho jaaye tho neechae aa jayiyae …

Maan – hmmm … teek hain dadima …

Dadima - main abi geet kae paas jaa rahin hun …. Dekhungi unka kya haal hain … maine unsae kahan tha ki beauticians ko bula lungi sagai main unka make up pedicure manicure karnae kae liyae … par geet nae saaf mana kar diya aur mujhae bhi manaliya ki main kisi ko nahin bulavu … kitna simple ladki hain ….

Maan – haan dadima geet bahut simple ladki hain … aur isi sadgi kae upar tho main fida ho gaya hun ….

Dadima smiling - Haan wo tho hain …. Par maan agar uss waqt aap mere saath hothe aur agar aap geet ko kehthae tho shayad maaan jaathi make up kae liyae … jaise sumitra kae gehnae kae samay aap ki baath maaan gayi thi …

Maan – parr dadima geet mujhae aisae hi simple hi pasand hain … aur yeh baath shayad wo bhi janthi hain … is liyae bhi shayad usnae mana kar diya hogaa …

Dadima – sach main aap dono sae koi bhi nahin jeeth saktha …. Dono ek jaise hain … ya main kahun … ek sae badh kar ek … main jaa rahin hun …. Par shadi ka bridal make up kae liyae tho main in sab ko bulaungi aur geet ko ithna pamper karungi tum bas dekhna ….

Maan is smiling while … Dadima is walking out of the room … - teek hain dadima … waise bhi aap ko kaun mana kar sakhtha hain …

Maan - dadima aapko yaad hain naa … sagai ki baath surprise hain …. Aur jab tak geet neechae nahin aayegi …. Aap sagai kae baaren main announce nahin karegi …

Dadima at the door – haan maan mujhae yaad hain … main bhuli nahin hun… maan …

Maan – ok dadima …

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Dadima leaves maan's room & goes to check on geet while she is getting ready … - geet … aap ready ho gayi hain ki nahin ….

Geet's wearing her green tourmaline with uncut diamonds set while talking to dadima … geet still has the same bangles what maan made her wear in the morning in dadima's room … she is not wearing the bangles which came with the necklace set … instead she choose to wear the same bangles what maan made her wear in the morning ...

Geet – jee dadima … bas thodi daer aur …

Dadima – teek hain aap dono jald hi tayyar ho kar neechae aa jayiyae … hum sab udhar hi hongae …

Geet – teek hain dadima … wearing a maang tika which matches her green tourmaline set.

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Maan in his room calling Adi from his phone – Adi jab Mr.Manchanda & family aayae tho mujhae inform kardena agar main uss waqt udhar nahin hua tho … wo log bas abhi aanae waalae hi hain … nahin ek kaam karna jab wo sab aajaye tho unhae direct dadima kae room main le kar aa jaana geet udhar hi hain …

Adi – jee sir … sir guests aa rahen hain … tho main unhae welcome karnae jaa raha hun ….

Maan – teek hain adi … main bhi bas thodi daer main neechae aanae wala hun …

Dadima is going downstairs …. Adi is already in the hall welcoming all the guests and asking them to take their seats that have been arranged in the hall …

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Geet in dadima's room – pinky ab aur kya baaki hain … main tayyar ho gayi hun naa … wearing a matching bindi which goes with her bottle green saree.

Pinky – oye geet tunae make up tho kuch kiya hi nahin …

Geet – pinky mujhae simple rehnae acha lagtha hain … mujhae make up lagana bilkul acha nahin lagtha …

Pinky – parr geet aaj kae din tho tujhae thodi bahut tho karni chahiyae naa …

Geet – pinky please mujhae nahin lagana hain …

Pinky – thoda sa slight touch ups please geet maan jaana yaar…

Geet – nahin pinky mujhae nahin karna …. Main jaisi hun waise teek hun …

Pinky - thodi bahut tho karnae dae naa … tu nae tho beauticians kae liyae bhi mana kar diya hain dadima ko …

Pinky uses her brain now ….

Pinky – geet tujhae maan sir ki kasam … ab tho tujhae thodi bahut make up tho karni padegi …

Geet – pinky … ithni si baat kae liyae tu maan sir ki kasam khil wa rahin hain mujh sae …

Pinky – haan jab ghee seedhi ungli sae nahin niklae tho ungli ko thedi karni jaroori hoti hain ……

Finally geet agrees for very minimal make up on her face …

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Maan gets a call from dev …

Maan – hello …

Dev – hello … bro … aap kaise hain …

Maan – main teek hun aur tum ….

Dev – main bhi teek hun … congrats bro ….

Maan – thank u … dev … Kaam kitna complete hua dev aur wapas kab aa rahen ho …

Dev – kaam abhi baki hain bro … shadi ke din tho pahunch hi jaayengae … waise bhabhi kahan hain … mujhae unko bhi wish karna hain …

Maan – wo ready ho rahin hain … ek min … rukh jao main jaa kae dekh tha hun …

Maan is going into dadima's room to make her talk to dev … in the meanwhile Mr.Manchanda enters the mansion with geet's parents, rajjo & tito.

Adi – aap … main aapko pehchantha nahin hun ….

Mr.Manchanda – main Manchanda hun … Pinky kae paapaa aur yeh geet kae family members ….

Adi – namasthe …( Adi greets every one …). – ek minute … Manchanda Ji …

Then he quickly dials Maan's # …

Maan on the way to geet's room – dev … mujhae koi dusra call aa rahan hain … main tumhari bhabhi sae tumhari baath baad main kar wa dunga … abhi main rakh tha hun …

Dev- it's ok bro …. I will talk to u later …. Maan hangs up dev's call ..

Maan takes adi's call …

Adi – sir Mr.manchanda aur geet kae family members aa gayae hain …

Maan as soon as he hears that he rushes towards the stairs …. – adi main abhi aa rahan hun … suno mera wait math karnae neechae aanae kae liyae tum unhae upar lae kar aa jao …

Adi along with geet's family & pinky's dad is going upstairs ….

Maan & evey one meet in the corridor …

Mohinder (geet's dad) is surprised 2 see maan – aap yahan ….

Maan – jee … yeh mera hi ghar hain …

Mohinder is now staring at pinky's dad – pinky's dad nods his head … saying it's him ….

Rano, Rajji & Tito are also there along with geet's dad and are equally surprised to see maan over there …

Maan – aap mere saath chaliyae main aapko geet kae paas lae jaatha hun … baaki baathein hum sab baad main karengae sagai ho jaane kae baad …teek hain …

They all are walking towards dadima's room where geet is present …

Mohinder – teek hain … maan ji … baad main baath kar lengae … pehlae geet sae millengae …

Maan – aap mujhae ji math kahiyae … aap mujhsae bade hain … agar aap mujhae maan kahengae tho mujhae jyada acha lagega … hum abhi geet kae paas hi jaa rahen hain …

Adi – sir main neechae jaa rahan hoon …

Maan – teek hain adi … tum jao … hum bhi thodi daer main neechae aa jaayengae … dadima ko inform kardena ki geet kae family members aa gaye hain … dadima ko upar baej dena … unkae room main …

Adi – teek hain sir …

They all walk towards dadima's room … Adi is going downstairs …

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In the mean while Sasha & her chamchi Tasha enter the hall ….

Tasha – Sasha ….

Sasha gives her cold stare to tasha …

Tasha – I mean maam …. MK dikhayi nahin dae rahen hain ….

Sasha searching for maan – main bhi MK ko dund rahin hun ….

Changu & Mangu spot Sasha & Tasha ….

Changu 2 – Mangu ….

Mangu – haan bol changu … kya baath hain …

Changu points towards sasha & tasha … - chudailen ….

Mangu – chal un dono kae saath thodi daer kabaddi khel kar aa jathae hain … jab dekho tab hamein shut up, idiot , gawar … aur najanae kya kya bol thi rehti hain naa …. Chal … ab aayega mazaa … dikha dethae hain unhae Changu Mangu ka kamaal ….

Changu – haan … abhi maan baba bhi yahan nahin hain … chalo …

Mangu – chalo …

Changu is serving beverages to the guests … but makes it a point that he still has some glasses full of beverages left in his tray … is now going towards sasha & tasha … signalling to mangu to come over there …

Mangu is coming from other side with tray in his hand with glasses full of beverages towards sasha tasha & changu as per their plan …

Then mangu on purpose puts his feet in front of changu so that changu's tray falls & all the drinks spill on both sasha & tasha them … making their dresses in to cocktail … while changu trying not to loose his balance tries to get mangu's support which in turn leads in to more mess as his tray also falls on sasha & tasha … making them more messy …

Sasha – stupid .. dekh kar nahin chal sakhthae …

Tasha – silly me … oh no … yeh kya ho gaya hain …

Changu & mangu both controlling themselves …

Mangu – agar dekh kar …

Changu – chalthae tho aisi naubat thodi aathi …

Adi who is coming downstairs towards them could not control himself …

Adi – ha ha ha ha ha …

Sasha – adi … shut up …

Adi – sorry sasha … waise tum bahut achi dikh rahin ho … still laughing ha ha ha ha ha …

Sasha – adi … I said shut up …

Adi still controlling himself – changu mangu tum dono nae yeh kya kiya … ab jaldi sae yeh sab saaf kardo nahin tho maan sir ki gussa tum dono janthae tho ho … come on fast …

Changu – teek hain …

Mangu – adi bhaiyya …

Changu – waise saare drinks tho …

Mangu - in dono kae upar giree hain ….

Changu watching floor – neechae tho

Mangu 2 watching the floor now – thoda gira hain …

Changu – abhi saaf kar dethae hain …

Changu & mangu start cleaning the mess they created before any other person spots them …

Adi controlling his laughter – sasha tasha … tum dono apna geographia teek karo … jao …

Sasha - geograp… what do you mean adi …

Adi – jaa kar apnae aap ko clean karo … maan sir neechae aa nae wale hain abhi thodi daer main …

Dadima is checking on the caterers - sara food ready hain na …

Caterers – jee dadima … Indian(specially punjabi food & etc.), italian , thai , chinese sare varieties ready hain …

Dadima – teek hain … aap ko aur kuch chahiyae …
Caterers – nahin dadima … sab teek hain ….

Adi comes over there – dadima … geet kae family members aa gaye hain … maan sir nae aap ko aap ke room main bulaya hain ….

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Geet is almost ready now … - pinky ab tu aur kya kar rahin hain …. Andhar baith kaae … kithni daer lagayegi ….

Pinky is in the bath room…. - aayi … bas ek min …

Pinky is actually waiting for adi / maan's call … - ab main aur kya bahane banao … mujhae tho bol diya ki geet sae kuch math bolna … ab tak kaise bhi kar kae chup thi …. Ab kaun sa bahana banau …

Geet – yeh pinky bhi naa … pinky … bahar aa jao …(Saying this geet turns towards the door …)

Geet is shocked & surprised to see her family over there in front of her … initially din't know how to react on seeing them after a whole 2 months … she is controlling her tears but in vain could not control them … geet's mom comes near geet & they both hug each other for some time …. both crying ...

Rano – geet puttar … tu kaisi hain …

Geet still with tears in her eyes – main teek hun ... aap kaisei hain maa ...

rano - main tho teek hun puttar ... mujhae tho bas tumhari chinta hi rehthi thi ...

geet - main bhi teek hun ... par aap yahan …
Geet turns towards maan … realising that she wanted to ask him about her family members since morning … but could not speak to him as they got busy with some thing or the other .... asks him with her eyes that is he the one who arranged all this …

Maan nods his head in a yes …

Geet is giving maan a smile & saying thanks with her eyes & their usual sign language …

Maan is also acknowledging her smile with a smile ….

Then her papaji comes near her & he too hugs her … has tears in his eys too ...

Mohinder – geet tu apna khayal rakh rahin hain na puttar …

Geet – jee …. Papaji … aap kaise hain ...

mohinder - main bhi teek hun puttar ...

Next rajjo & tito's turn to hug geet …

Rajjo & Tito – geet di … aap janthae hain … hum dono nae aap ko kithna miss kiya hain … & all three are still hugging & crying …

Geet – main bhi tum dono ko bahut miss kar rahin thi …

They come out of the hug after some time ….

Maan – geet … yeh sab baathein hum baad main karengae abhi time nahin hain … pehlae tumhari family members ko guest room dikha dena … thaki wo ready ho jaaye … sare guests aa chukae hongae ab tak tho … guests ko aur intezaar karwana acha nahin lagtha hain na geet …

Geet 2 maan – jee … aap sahi keh rahen hain …

Geet - maa , papaji ,rajjo & tito … aap sab chaliyae mere saath …

Maan – geet ruko … pinky kahan hain … pinky … pinky …

Pinky now comes out of the bath room thanking god that her vanvaas is over.- shuker hain baabaji ka … atleast ab tho mujhae bahar bhulaya … aisae lag rahan tha ki main udhar baithe baithe budhi ho jaaungi …

Pinky – jee sir …

Maan – pinky ek kaam karna …. Geet kae family members ko guest room dikha dena … unko ready hona hain naa party kae liyae …

Pinky – teek hain sir … aunty ji, uncle ji chaliyae , tum dono bhi chalo , papa aap bhi ….

They all follow pinky ….

Geet – maan … aapnae yeh sab … mere liyae kiya …

Maan – haan geet … tumhare liyae nahin tho aur kiskae liyae kartha geet … mere liyae tumhari kushi zyada maynae rakhthi hain … aur yeh baath tum bhi janthi ho … aur tumhari life main … yeh 4 din kithnae ithni important hain wo baath main jantha hun … aur agar iss waqt tumhare ghar walae tumharae saath hongae … tho thumhae jo kushi milegi wo kushi shayad main tumhae baad main dae nahin paa ungaa … kyunki yeh din hamare zindagi main baar baar nahin aathe … hain ki nahin geet …

Geet – thank u …

Maan – maine tumhae mana kiya tha na … thanks kae liyae … waise tum chaho tho mujhae dusri takeekae main thanks keh sakhthi ho ….

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awesome part!!! Now I cant wait till the actual engagement :-D

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