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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ff cont soon n plzz pm me on d next part
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PART - 52

Maan gets anger and starts walking away like a kid.....Geet stops him and says

GEET : Maan rukiye mai bhi chalti hoon....

Maan : tum???? Kaha Geet ???

GEET : Haan Maan mai.... aur kaha kya??? aap office nahi ja rahe the???

MAAN : haan Geet mai tho office hi jaa raha hoon...

Geet : tho fir chaliye na Maan der ho rahi hain....

Maan : Geet .... tum yahi raho...

Geet : kyu???

Maan looks at Pari for help..... and slowly walks away before Geet gets to realise he left....

and then Pari lovingly explains how is it for Geet to have sufficient rest....and

also convinces her saying that the baby would be happy and healthy if she would be

careful and take rest for the coming days.............

and our Geet is convinced by the way Pari speaks and Vicky and Dadi on the other hand

stand all surprised how Pari's words worked like magical spell.............

Geet gets back to her room and Dadi accompanies her..........

While the childhood buddies start speaking about all their best moments

and share a very good time together...... thats when Pari gets a call and

the screen start showing SALAAM BAALAK on the scroll...........

she happily answers the call with a wide smile on her face and shouts aloud

in happiness........... :ESHA????


but when she does'nt get a response she calls out

PARI : helloooo.... Esha? chup kyu ho??

kuch tho bolo.. wats wrong???

SB : Pari mai esha nahi.... shruti bol rahi hoon...

aur mujhe samajh nahi aa rahaa ki mai tumhe kaisey bataao?

Pari gets a bit tensed and is quite for a moment... then she asks...

PARI : Shr.... Shruti bolo... kya baat hai... saaf saaf batao....

Esha kahaan hai? aur tum kis baat ki baat kar rahi ho?

SB : Pari.... wo... Esha tho court gayi hai...

PARI : Kyaaa?? Court kyu???

baat kya hai shruti jaldi bataao....

sab teek tho hai???

SB : nahi pari... yahaan tho kuch bhi teekh nahi....

and she breaks out crying .....

PARI : shruti.......... kya hua ? tum ro kyu rahi ho???

chup hojao... aur baat batao.... plzzz shruti...

mujhe bataao kya hua???

SB : Pari ... S..... Salaam Baalak ab nahi raha......

PARI : Kyaaaaaaaaaaa??????????

SB : Haan Pari... kuch gundey aaye the... aur un logo ne

humaari zameen ke doccuments zabardasti apne naam karvaaye the...

hum sab ne bahut koshish ki par ..... wo ....

Seeing how Pari is getting low by every word she hear....

Vicky turns on the speaker and shruti says....

SB : Wo.... log.... humey salaam balak se bahar nikaal diye...

ab yeh jagey humari nahi hai....

PARI : Shruti kya keh rahi ho tum....? yeh sab... yeh hua kab tha?

SB : tumhare Delhi jaane ke do din baad Pari...

PARI : tum mujhe ab bataa rahi ho???

Phone drops down from her hands .... and she stands still........

Vicky senses her silence and pats her shoulder... now she holds him tight and cries her heart out... Vicky takes her in his arms...and tries to console her .....

Pari speaks in her sobs.... she like a little Kid says how helpless she was when her parents left her alone and travelled to entirely a different world .... How Esha cared for her

like a sister, concerned for her like a mother.... how both of them started to help the

kids from variour parts of the country in the form of SALAAM BALAK........

Then Vicky realised how the organisation is sooooo important for her....

its like her life ..... which has left her alone once again.....but by now he decided

Pari is not alone anymore.... Vicky Khurana is there to help her ....

Vicky spoke to Pari and made many efforts to cheer her.... but none of them worked...

she smiled but not for long.... He finally held her shoulders and made her look

into his eyes .... then he said.......

VICKY : PARI... Tum AKELI nahi ho... naahi Salaam Baalak....

Mai hoon tumhaarey saath....mai tumhaare liye sab se

acha lawyer doondhta hoon.... hum yeh case zaroor jeetengey

tum bilkul chintaa mat karna....

PARI was dumb struck....... she never heard her Name from him... he always

used to call her DP.......the way he said he is always with her gave her immense confidence....

Maan in office was Getting mad ..... he was missing his silly secretary....

and his lovable wife.......😳

He called up to home... and Vicky lifts the call....

VICKY : Hellooo...

MAAN : Oye Apney Bhabi doll ko phone de...

VICKY : YEW.... Brodude....? aap???

Ek minute bulaata hoon....

And when Vicky asks Geet to connect to Maan , she refuses... she is angry....

and when he gives the message to Maan... he is confused....and before he

enquires the reason.... Vicky tells Maan about SALAAM-BAALAK..... and he is shocked

to an extent ............but then both the Khurana brothers decide to support her....

while Vicky is firm in extending a moral support to Pari, Maan decides to help her to a

larger extent.....


But how???

What is the Favour Maan

will extend to Pari ?😕

Keep thinking😉




Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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PART -53



both the Khurana brothers decide to support her....

while Vicky is firm in extending a moral support to Pari, Maan decides to help her to a

larger extent.....


Maan the very next moment gather the staff for an important Meeting.... and is busy the whole

day..... after a tiresome day... Maan reaches Khurana Mansion... and on seeing an empty

living room he asks Nakul where all his lively family members have been dissapeared,

then he gets to know... Vicky is out with Pari to search for a good lawyer, Dadi went to

attend a function at her dear friends place......


MAAN : Aur Geet???????

NAKUL : Geet memsaab tho.... wo....tho...

MAAN : wo tho kya???....Nakul tum wahaa kahaa dekh rahe ho???

NAKUL : jee koi nahi... mera matlab kuch nahi....

mujhe jaane deejiye chote saab... Dadima ne bahut kaam diye hai......


saying this he leaves to work........a confused Maan turnes around...

and thinks who was Nakul looking at... and why he was mumbling at all........?

but in vain ....... on not finding anyone there.... he gets back to his room,

take a quick shower and starts searching for Geet... he called her , left messages...

but none of them did she reply.....and when he was tiered of his trials....

he walked out to the garden...... where he found Geet all alone enjoying the breeze

amidst the flowers and trees....


He knew Geet loved nature .... but it was the very first time , he saw her in garden...

he walked to her, stood right behind her, holding a rose in his hand....

thinking how he would convince his beloved wife...but then Geet started to say,


Geet : Hmmmm........... ? Gulaab.... ? hellooo... ki haal hai?

GULAB .. the stem waved a bit and Geet answered....

Geet : Acha sab teekh hai matlab??? [ she was about to pluck one ]

Gulaab tree stood still....

Geet : 😕 kya???? kaantey??? mai nahi darti...

Once again she held out her hand and was about to pluck the flower ,

but then she saw a rose in front of her eyes , ........ a very beautiful and even bigger

than the one on the tree ..she was extremely happy to see that... she was about to hold it

when it disappeared.... She turned back...to see... and when she realised its Maan

she turned away........

Maan tried to make her smile by his acts but she was GEET Handa the STUBBORN

girl ever.....


MAAN : Geet.... meri galathi kya hai???

She turns away....

MAAN : chalo jo bhi ho... ab Maan bhi jao....

She still wont look at him

MAAN : Acha ... tho tum nahi maanogi haan???

She smiles to herself.....unnoticed by Maan

MAAN : Yeh Gulaab tumhaarey liye....

she quickly holds it and turns away again...Now Maan walks forward to face her

MAAN : aur yeh meri Geet ke liye... he holds a cute Teddy....

she snatches it too....

MAAN : Geet main kya karoo ke tum Maan jao???

She is walking away..... Maan desperately follows her and realises

she is sitting in his car.... with a stubborn look on her face... he smiles to himself .

looking at her juvenile behavior and himself will get on to the driving seat...

he looks at his wife , endearingly ... and she directs him indicating where to go....

the whole drive... she does'nt speak, and they finally reach a kids park....

where Geet stops the car, get down and starts walking towards the park when a small cute

kid comes running and bumps into her..... Geet starts playing with Kids , and Maan

is still watching her with all his love.... mean while when Maan comes across a sugar candy

seller... he gets one for his Geet, and store it in his car.... in her play with kids

Geet holds Maan too , to form a circle and play soo many games as such....and finally

when Maan sensed she was tired , he somehow manages to get her back to their car....

but when they almost reach their car.... Geet stops... and stand starring some where....

Maan could see she was looking at the pegions in the cage...

he took her along, to see them.... and Geet wanted to buy all of them... Maan even not

intending to buy , had no other go, as his princess was angry with him, he was all set

to do any stuff to see her smile....😳

They bought all the pegions, and Maan gave her the candy , while she sat in the car....

she happily started to enjoy the sweet candy,.... and at last she offered a part of it to Maan,

of which he just had a bit ... [ he hated sweet , as u knw our Maan is calorie cautious ]😉

they drove back home, and Geet ran towards the terrace with the cage of pegions in her hand....


not knowing where she is about to go... Maan ran behind all scared about her safety,...

and on reaching the terrace Maan walks towards her and yelled at her....

MAAN : GEEET😡 Kyu bhaagey jaa rahi ho??

tumhey kuch hojaata tho???


GEET : ....................


MAAN : aur dekho... yeh sab kabootar tum yahaa kyu layi ho???

ab inhe dekhne ... roj upar aaogi???

Geet mai tumhey kaisey samjhaao ke yeh tumhaara

yu bhaagam daud karnaa bachchey ke liye teekh nahi???


Now Geet slowly steps forward and caress his face, speaks with her eyes....

like she wanted him to open the cage... and when Maan hands her a pegion

she flies it away in the open skies.... one after the other...Now the cage is empty...

while Geet is holding the last pegion....

MAAN : Geet......... yeh tumne kya kiya???

jab saarey khabootar udaaney the tho inhe

khareeda kyu??? yeh aakhri hai... isey tho baksho....

smiling some innocent smiles Geet said

GEET : Mere pyaarey pati dev yeh lijiye, aap udaayiye,...

MAAN : Main...????

GEET : Hmmmm... Maan udaaiye naa...

and when he flies the pegion he senses the reason behind Geet freeing rest of the birds...

he could sense its happiness to be free..., its gratitude for letting it out in the endless skies...its one pleasurable flight with its wings spread all wide.....


Maan was mesmerized by what he just experienced now, he never did this before....

he never knew freedom gives such immense pleasure to a soul.....

he looked at Geet who was looking at her Love and feeling his happiness....

she walked close to him.... and he wrapped her in his arms to express what it felt

like at that very moment....🤗


THATS ALL FOR TODAY DOSTO..............

HOPE YOU ENJOY THE DOULBLE BLAST

SEE YOU ALL SOON.......🤗😛😳

do comment and let me know how you liked the updates...



Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks dear............😛

happy to see a comment on my FF after a long time..........🤗
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wah wah double update...............aur wo bhi itney din baad............loved the update...............loved the way geet makes maan to bend for her anger and then making him realize that freedom is very imp for any being..............loved it.............
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Originally posted by: preethia

wah wah double update...............aur wo bhi itney din baad............loved the update...............loved the way geet makes maan to bend for her anger and then making him realize that freedom is very imp for any being..............loved it.............


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Posted: 14 years ago
awww dat was soo sweet poor pari hope she gets her salaam balaak back
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update.... loved both the parts
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