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Posted: 14 years ago
Oye Neeru......U back wid the Bang !!!!!!!!!.....🥳...Truly,fantabulous plot..👏👏👏👏👏👏...I never knew ki u'll use Vicky part with so much mature storyline..😍.....N yes,I can too feel how Geet n Maan felt by freeing those piegons...😳....Hey,Neeru - I have an Idea kya hum tumhare FF ke kuch parts with photos update nahin kar sakte...☺️....I feel ki that will be too close to our heart n will remain forever..😛.....
BTW......Thanx re for the parts..🤗..I was waiting now what next n see u gave such a commendable parts...😛...
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Hey alll

my favvv maaneetians...

i am really really really very

sorry for not updating rapidly...

or even frequently...

i have written few parts and i promise i will update soooner

please dont stop giving a glance to my ff...


LOVE U ALL...

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PART- 54



Maan was mesmerized by what he just experienced now, he never did this before...

he never knew freedom gives such immense pleasure to a soul...

he looked at Geet who was looking at her Love and feeling his happiness...

she walked close to him... and he wrapped her in his arms to express what it felt

like at that very moment...🤗



they stayed close to each other for quite a while speaking to each other and having fun,

and when they came down to the living room, Maan asked Geet to get back to their room,

and that he will be coming soon as he finishes attending the important phone call...

and soon as geet leaves the place he call's Vicky to caution him and Pari not to speak

anything about the SALAAM-BAALAK to Geet as she is very close to them and she could

stress herself...Both Pari and Vicky assure him of not making any conversation regarding

SB to Geet which relieves Maan ...


at the dinner table when Vicky continues with his fun filled conversations for his dear one's

to smile, he succeeds in getting the positive response , and later when Pari stops Geet

to give her the medicines, Geet happily takes the pile of medicines

without any arguments, which surprises Maan very much...


Maan and Vicky speak to Pari , to assure that they will be always there to help her, and

that they all together will definitely get SALAAM-BAALAK back at any cost...

Pari smiles in tears for having such good friends with her... and the trio get bact to their rooms...

Maan asks Geet how did she so easily accept Pari's orders to take the medicines...?

For which Geet cleverly says :

GEET :MAAN... Yeh kaisa sawaal hai???

Pari doctor hai, wo meri itni fikar karti hain

aisey mai mujhe uski baat tho maan ni hi hogi na...


Maan in his usual style twirls her and held her close to himself,

MAAN : achaaa ??? tho wo tumhaari fikar karti hai??? aur main nai???

GEET : Ajeeeb ho Maan aap kabhi kabhi...bhalaa maine aise kab kaha???

ki aap meri fikar nahi kartey hain???


MAAN : tumhe directly kehne ki kya zarurat hain Geet???

yeh tho tumhaari harkaton se saaf pataa chaltaa hain...


GEET now gets anger and moves away from MAAN...


GEET : Kaisi harkatey Maan ???

aap aisey kyu keh rahe hain???


MAAN : Achaaa??? ab tumhe kuch nahi pataa hain naa?//


GEET : Haan Maan nahi pataa hai mujhe kuch... tho aap bataa dijiye naa...


MAAN : ...


GEET : MAAN...😡 Baat kya hai ???


MAAN : Jab maine tumhe itne pyaar se samjhaaya tha tho tum samajhne se rahi...

aur ab ???😡


GEET : Wo tho... pari ne...


and she stops... and While Maan waits for the response she says...


GEET : Maan sach mai ... bahut neend aaa... aaa rahi hai... kal subey

baat kartey hai good night... [ she cannot reveal the reason behind her medicine ]


MAAN angrily walks out of the room with his laptop...

he seriously starts working on it and after a few hours ,

it suddenly reminds him of Geet's Cravings, which makes him

run to his room, as he thinks she can wake up at any time as for now,

...and to surprise him Geet did never sleep till then, she was just wandering

in the room, mumbling to herself about her argument, seeing this Maan

returns back and starts working again, but he is fully attentive to know

if Geet needs his help at any point of time...

Aakhir wo hai tho MAAN SINGH KHURANA na 😉😛😉


the next morning Maan disappears before Geet ia awake, and makes sure

he is angry with her 😆 [ these two never change ] 😆


Geet searches the whole Mansion for Maan and is irritated that she could'nt find him,

and to top his absence there were Pari and the dearest Daadima who will never let

her go out from the Mansion, ... Pari and Vicky went out on their search for a good

lawyer again... and DADI asks if Geet is ready to come with her to a party

in one of the Dadi's friend's place...,but Geet denies

as she is not interested to attend parties at that time,...😕


As it was impotent for DADI to go, she leaves ... and Now as Geet is alone...


she tries tooo???????????????

SNEAK OUT 😉😛😉

so wait for the next update...

which i will sooon do...😛

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aft long time...
superb part...
loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 more
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago



Thank you sooo much🤗

for your sweet comments my Pyaare MAANEETIANS 😉🤗☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Neeru...🤗...Ur update has come as a relieving medicine for me...😛...sacchi...😳...mere DD ne abhi hum logon ko work machine bana ke rakha hai......wonder - he is inspired by MK or MK character is being written coz of him...😕...but chado...as usual - u have again killed us - now what next ?????? Take a bow,darling...👏👍🏼...
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@ sheetal :

awww...😲

dont worry yaaar tere dd ko bhi koi geet mil jaayegi

and wo bhi office jaaana chod dega apne MSK jaisey...😉

usey bhi balwanth singh ban naaa padegaaa na 😉

bas tab tak tu iss FF ka aglaaa part padle ... 😛

i am gonna update now 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago




PART - 55

As it was impotent for DADI to go, she leaves ... and Now as Geet is alone..

Waattt???????????

as all say... Its an IDEAL MIND WHICH IS GEET's Workshop...

she thinks : Oye Geet ... Ab tu akele ghar mai kya karegi??

Koi ghar mai tho hain nai... ab koi... tumhe rokenge bhi nahi...

chal kahi baahar ghoomte hain

she walks towards the parking, and for her surprise... she fails to find a car

waiting for her...

so she starts walking to and fro,... while its her DHANNO which comes to her rescue...

she gets onto her scooty and slowly plans to sneak out,

Watchman ko maska lagaana tho humaare Geet ka bhaaye haath ka khel hain...

Finally she steps out of Khurana Mansion ans says to herself :

Oye Bacha... dekh yeh apne khuraana Mansion ke baahar duniyaa

kitnaaa badaa aur achaa hain... Tho aaj aapke mamma aapko

delhi ki seir karaaenge Tho chaleee??????

She starts riding her bike at a high speed... and on the other hand

her pyaara sa husband Maan singh khurana keeps calling on her phone

just to know if she's fine and to assure that she had some food on time...

suddenly her bike gives a trouble and stops amidst the way ...but before she gets irritated

she finds her favourite mall across the road ... and a silent smile makes a way on her lips...


Maan on his way to meet his client , comes across Geet , who's busily crossing the roads..

but before he runs after her, Geet gets into the Mall...she starts moving around and taking

a look at the new fashion wear... and she bumps into some one...

she says sorry and starts walking away but the lady stands confused... and after thinking

for few minutes she follows Geet and pats on her shoulder...Geet without turning around says

GEET : ji...?

Lady : suniye...

GEET : ji boliye ...

Lady : ek bar is taraf dekengi aap ???

GEET : oye dekh ke kya karnaa hain??? sorry tho bola tha na aapko...

[ she can slightly see the lady from the corner of her eyes ]

Lady : Geet ... tum kab badlogi ?????????

GEET : GEEET ????????? 😲

ohhh babaji... ab itthe kisey bhej diye ho tussi ??? 😕 [ says to herself ]

she fearfully turns around...and she is very happy to see...???

Lady : Geet... tumney mujhe pehchaana??????????

Geet simply hugs her without saying a word... she is extremely happy

GEET : Buaaa ... kaise ho aap ????????

Bua : Arey Geet puttar mai tho teekh hoon... par tu yaha kaisey???

GEET : badi lambi kahaani hain bua ji... fursat mai bataaungi...

Lady : achaaa??? tho chalo pehle shopping karlete hain... fir mere ghar chalke baat karenge...

FURSAT MAIn ... 😳😉

GEET : Bua ji aap yaha delhi mai ho???

Lady : oye Geet yahi tho mai tujhse poochi thi... main tho kuch saal hue hai yaha rehke...

chal wo sab chod,... aaj na tujhe teri bua shopping karaayegi... chal...

GEET is very very excited and walks along her shopping , chatting and cracking jokes

in her usual style... Maan on the otherhand scanning the mall for Geet...

but when he finds her ,he is a lottt more surprised to see Geet with a lady waking ALL THE WAY SMILING...

he was confused... he wanted to know what Geet is doing... he dint know how she managed

to comeout of the home at all ...???😕

Maan quitely follows her without her knowledge and is hit with a blow when Geet

sits in the lady's car and starts going somewhere ...

Maan asks his driver to get the bike repaired and take it home... and he manages driving

his car by just a little distance away from Geet's ...they stuck in a traffic signal...

and Geet's eyes catch up with Maan's ... she is now scared to death as Maan is seriously

looking at her and quickly closes the window by turning off her face ...This act of Geet

irritates Maan to an extent and he stops following her car by changing his direction to clients place...

Geet and bua ji reach to the home and on ringing the door bell , Meera comes to open

the door... she is dumb struck to see Geet at her home...she hugs Geet and each of them

shout the other ones names with a wide smile on their faces...

GEET : Meera di... aap wapis kab aayi canada se????????

MEERA : Geet pehle tum bataao ... itney dino se delhi mein

rehte hue tumne humey kabhi yaad kyu nahi kiyaaa??

mai tho bahut gussa hu tumse...

Geet stays silent after hearing that Meera know about her staying in delhi... .

but she wonders how...as she dint speak about her past even to her second self

anytime...

BUA JI : offo... tum dono ... Meera Geet ko andar bhi bulaaogi yaa nahi???

MEERA : arey haan ... tumse milne ki kushi mai mai tho paglaa gayi...

chalo geet andar chalo...

GEET : Meera... tumhe kaise ... pata ki mai...? yahaa delhi mai rehti hoon...

MEERA : oye meri pyaari behnaaa... mujhe pataa tha tu nahi badlegi...

GEET : di please bataayiye na ... kaisey pata...

BUAJI : arey meera tu ne tho mujhe bhi nahi bataaya...

MEERA : haahahh... tum dono

BUA JI : hasne ki kya baat hai... ab bataa bhi do bachi dar gayi hain meera...

MEERA : hahahha...😆 tum dononko ullu banaana kitnaa asaan hain na maaa...

GEET & bua ji : kyaaa??? MEERAAA😡😡

MEERA : hhaah... cool... cool... mai tum logon ke liye kuch leke aati hoon...

she walks in and while coming out says byeee , haan haan shaam mai miltey hai...

BUA ji : Chalaa gayaa??? fir se naashta chod gayaaa???

aane do usey waapis... aaj uski khoob kabhar loongi main...

GEET : hahaa... Buaji... aap kispe itnaa gussa hori hain???

aur aapke ghar main mard kabse allowed hain???

BUAJI : arey wahi...d...

MEERA : do... dost hain geet... wahi ... paying guest banke rehtaa hain...

BUAJI : huh... ab iskaa dost hai tho mai kya kahu???

GEET : hehehe... Meera di... wo dost hi hain na...? ya ussey ...

BUAJI : Geet bete ... tum hi samjhaao isey... issey chotonki shaadi ho chuki hain...

aur yeh hai... jisey kuwaari bane phirne mai kushi milti hain...

kab se kehti hoon shaadi karlo... ab umar ho gayi... par nai...

MEERA : Mom please aap ab firse shuru mat kijiye...

mai fir canada waapis chali jaaungi...😡

BUAJI : dekhaa Geet... yeh aisey hi mujhe dhamkaate rehti hain...

GEET : Buaji... aap tension mat leejiye... hum dono milkar di ke liye

heere jaisa ladkaa dhoond te hain...

BUAJI : Ladkaa tho usne chun liya hai geet,...

GEET : fir kya problem hain...

MEERA : dekhaaa Mom... Geet bhi wahi poochrahi hai ...ab tho bataayiye

KYA PROBLEM HAIN😡

BUAJI : mujhe ladke se koi problem nahi hain... yeh maine pehle hi

kehdiyaa tha...

GEET & MEERA : tho...???😲

BUAJI : Shaadi kyu nahi karti???????

MEERA : mom... aapko pataa hain na wo busy hain...

usey abhi abhi job mai ek break milaa hain

mushkil se wo teek hua hain...

thoda time deejiye Mom...😕

GEET : waisey di... yeh ladkaa hain kaun????😉



Next update reveals some major twists

and promo is...

a song sequence ...

any guesses??????😉😳😉





Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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hiii awesome update
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cant wait 4 da twist
plz con soon
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