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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#561

Suspense abt the medicine. Seem lyk vicky may soon meet his madhuri aka pari;-)

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whitepearl

@whitepearl

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#562

👏Great update dear....Loved them....👏

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Sheetal

@Coolsheetal

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#563

Hi Neeru.......😛...........A very Gd Mng and wishing U all a Very Happy Makar Sakranti..........................By God,the cold n flue hitted me again with the solid bang and literally the condition became that the doctor told ki U need to be hospitalized 🤢 but thank God,the observation period gave some relief n I was saved from it...😳......but the antibiotics were of so much high dosage I wonder ki I only slept n slept for the whole day n nite n still felt dizzy...🥱......

Joined the office from yesterday only...😊.feeling better,but still needs to be cautious...😔......God Knows what this new year will give to me...😕...

Nyways,coming on ur update - What u r having in ur breakfast,lunch n dinner darling 😉 ????? Each n every time u r coming up with new plots n suspense......😲........Loved the way u handle the dialogues n the twists n turns....👏👏.....Abhi tak toh m trying to unfold the abbreviations of ur earlier part n now again the new suspense how Pari succedded in giving the tablets - well as per my logic 2 possibilities r there - 1st one ki Pari mite have told the essential of medicine linking with the baby health n 2nd one - on the sake of MSK ki how he is worrIed for ur health......🤗.........But we never know ki tum kab new idea ke saath kuch aur logic bhi laa sakti ho........👍🏼......Nice n gr888888 update 👏⭐️ m njoying the BANJO part as me 2 have a naughty puppy - SNOOPY 😉 jo saare din poore ghar mein dhamal machata rehta hai....😈.....

Waiting for the suspense to be disclosed soon.....😍........LUV U 🤗 !!!!!!

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funnymonkey

@funnymonkey

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#564

Omg love ur fqn fic
Plz add me to ur pm list lol

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#565

nice ff............. i just cudnt stop laughing hearing to vicky's story dada dadi aur mc d...............omg very funny..............can u pls pm me when u update thnks

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wiinie_pooh

@wiinie_pooh

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: Maan4EVA
Omg love ur fqn fic
Plz add me to ur pm list lol

Originally posted by: preethia
nice ff............. i just cudnt stop laughing hearing to vicky's story dada dadi aur mc d...............omg very funny..............can u pls pm me when u update thnks

Hey Two of u..........😛

A very Warm Welcome.....to my two new readers.....

definately i will Pm u, but u need to add me in ur

buddy list.... plzzzzz😕

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago

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wiinie_pooh

@wiinie_pooh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#567

Thanks a loads for all the comments.............😛

i am really sorry i am not replying to

any of the comments....😔

but believe me... i am running out of time these days😕

due to my final project stuff,,.....

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#568

nice update...................poor bonjo agar woh outhouse mein rahega toh geet toh sab kuch ser par utha legi.................waiting for the next update..................

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wiinie_pooh

@wiinie_pooh

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#569

PART - 50

He forgot completely that Banjo was with him.... and he reached Geet's room...

While Banjo ran as fast as he could....towards the main Gate......passing by Vicky...

who was startled to see the speed with which Banjo was running.....

so he followed Banjo , once again leaving behind his beloved...DJ...alone...

Dadi fed up of Banjo.....Left to the Mansion....

After a chase for a while... Vicky returned to the outhouse with a pale face.....

murmuring something like this.........

VICKY : PAAGAL.... hai wo............ Nahi... DEVIL....

Maan and Geet were sooo very confused to see why Vicky went pale.......

but Maan made an effort to start the conversation........

MAAN : Vicky kya hua??? kya badbada rahe ho tum???

kahi tum bhi apni bhabi doll ki follower tho nahi bangaye???

apne aap se badbadaane mai???

VICKY : Brodude.....w...

GEET : Kya kahaa aapne??? mai badbadaati hoon???

huh...... appp ko tho....

Both stop their nokh-jhok when they see Vicky even more sad.....

MAAN : Vicky.. kya baat hain?? kuch tho bataao....

VICKY : Brodude.... wo... Banjo....

MAAN : Offoooo.... fir se kya kardiyaa???

VICKY : Kya kardiya????? aap yeh poochiye bro kisne kardiya???

MAAN : Kya???

VICKY : Banjo ko jisne bhi kidnapp kiya hain na... WO THO DEVIL HAIN DEVIL........

GEET : Aur agar ladki hui tho???

VICKY : DYNE hogi.....Bhabi doll.....par filhaal k liye DEVIL.........

MAAN starts to leave the place.... when Vicky blocks...his way.....

VICKY : brodude.... mai kidnapp ki baat kar rahaa hoon,,,, wo bhi BANJO ki...

tho aap sun kyu nahi rahe???

Listening this statement Maan increased his speed even more..... and unable to

Understand his emotion both Vicky and Bhabi doll ran behind him,,,and their chase

led to Banjo's home... his " KENNEL "😉

and Vicky was very much surprised to see his Banjo at the place.........

he took Banjo in his arms.... Pampered in his usual manner...and while

Geet was standing very close to Maan...[ obviously she could not face Banjo ]

GEET : Devarji... aap ka Banjo yahi hain... aap tho kamakhaa

usey Devil keh rahe the naa, ab wo kidnapper ko kya

kahenge?? DEViL???😳

VICKY : Nahi... DEVIL..nahi...babhi doll...wo tho ANGEL hain...

par Brodude.....yeh Banjo Mahashay..... Yahaan kaisey????

MAAN : Kyun Ab kya hua?????😡 jab yeh yahaa nahi tha tho bhi problem tha....

aur ab jab yeh tumhaare paas hain tho bhi problem???

Tum tho bilkul Geet jaisey ban chuke hain Vicky....

GEET : MAAAAN😡 Aap hamesha mujhe kyu target kartey hain???

Devarji itney pareshaan hain aur aapko mazaak sujraha hain??

MAAN : Geet...tum....

VICKY : offoooo you two.... plzzz... meri baat tho suniye....

Maan and Geet maintain silence after realising what they were about to do....

and Vicky continues...

VICKY : Hmmmm.... Baat yeh hain brodude , ki maine tho issey

Gate ki taraf Bhaagte hue dekha hain......

aur pichaa bhi kiyaa tha...par yeh mere haath nahi ayaa

mujhe lagaa yeh khogayaa, aur ab dekhtaa hoon

ki yeh mere hi aankho ke saamne hain...

wo bhi sahi salaamat....

Vicky's last words made Banjo jump from his arms... and get to Maan's side.......

now this activity raises the detective in Vicky........😉

Vicky looks at Banjo who's cuddled near Maan's legs....

VICKY : Brodude.... yeh Banjo chalaang kyu maraa??

kya yeh kucha chupa rahaa hain??

MAAN : Baat Baat pe pareshaan hona bandh karo Vicky...

usey kuch nahi hua....

GEET : Haan devarji.. aap bhi na... bilkul Maan lagtey hain pareshaan hotey hue...😉

Maan Glares at Geet when Vicky starts saying.......

VICKY : mujhe tho aap par hi shak hain... bataatiye brodude...

aap tho Banjo ko mujhse bhi zyadaa chahte hain naa...

tho uski kidnap jitni badi baat se aapko fark kyu nahi pada??

MAAN : Aisa nahi hain Vic...

GEET : Offo Devarji... ap tho bilkul budhu nikle....

jo wo chaahte the wahe kar rahe hain......

MAAN : GEEEEEEET😡

VICKY : kya???? Woh kaun???

Maan quickly exchange a look from Geet to Vicky...... and he throws an apple towards Vicky..

and when Vicky caught hold of an apple looking questioningly at Maan... Maan replies...

MAAN : Bhook lagi hogi na??? Khaajao... " BHOOKA BHAALU "😉

And this name makes Vicky Chase Maan .... but he turns back to Geet after

Maan takes a turn ,running ahead... and asks....

VICKY : Babhi doll... sach bataayiye .. kya hua???

yeh sab banjo ka kidnap??

GEET looks around... and when she does'nt find MAAN she continues...

GEET : Kidnap nahi devarji.. NAATAK kahiye..... yeh sab naatak hain...

VICKY : Lekin Bro Natak kyu karenge??

GEET : offooo aap abhi bhi nahi samjhe??

Natak Maan ya kisi aur ne nahi...

aap ke khud ke BANJO ne kiya...

VICKY : Nahi .... mai nahi maan saktaa...

Banjo aisey kyu karega???

GEET : haan... wo tho khud se kabhi aisa nahi karta...

par agar karwaya jaaye tho karega naa???😉

VICKY : Kya???

GEET : Naatak aur kya???

VICKY : Babhi doll aap samajh nahi rahi hain...

Banjo se naatak karwana... humaari

bas ki baat nahi hain.... wo tho sirf....

GEET : Hmmmm... wahi.... wahi.... samajh jaayiye...

wo pahunch gaye....

VICKY : Kaun???

GEET : huh.... aap ne uss kidnapper ko pehle kya naam diya???

VICKY : DEVIl????

GEET : Aur doosra???

VICKY : Angel.........

GEET : hm huh... Hindi mai...

VICKY : Angel hindi mai??? PARI ??????????

GEET : dono milaayiye....😉

VICKY : DEVIL PARI?????

GEET : yaad aya kuch????????😉

Geet directs Vicky towards a wall behind which... both the director and actor of the

natak namely " BANJO KI BHAGAAVAT " were hiding...😆

and seeing them Vicky shouted..........

VICKY : Brodude......... DP.......... mai tum logonko chodungaa nahi......

heheheh 😆

the names are revealed

but what about Pari's

success???

well, wait till next update......😆

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#570

rres

Wow.................I loved that update waheyyy..........................

well I think Banjo's gone off with Pari.........lool - jus guessing

ok from that the only idea i can think of is that........when geet said...ladki hui toh......well i think she knows of pari and the BIG secret and perhaps that what pari used to get Geet to have her medication (see i havent forgotten😆)

and then.....looking at maan's reaction - well he dnt seem worried i think lol so im guessing geet has told maan about the BIG secret toooo lool leaving poor Vicky and of course us readers in the dark of the BIG secret (HINT.............that should tell you that i'm hinting you to disclose the secret lool)

hahahah hmmmmmmm

i shall wait for u to update and then i'll analyse more

keep it goin luvly😳

Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago