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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#331

that kameena deserves to be punished more... i hate him for what he did to Geet.. as i was writing, i was like.. what more can i do to punish him... fir maine socha.. i dont want to move away from Maaneet... trust me.. agle baar if i get a chance to get him thrashed more...i will do that also... hehehe... and it would be wonderful to watch this on the show ....

Originally posted by: SakshiGarg
wooowwwwwww niha!!!! jst loved d update!!! my intution says this scene will surely be a part of the show!!! how wonderful dat wud b!!! 😊 😊 😊 i loved dat finally dev got his punishment!!! he deserves dat 😡 😡 n the ending was toooooo gud..............maan landing up in the same store room!!! woowww

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#332

jo kasar baaki hai... main jald hi usey bhi poora kar doongi... i am a romantic myself.. dont worry.. i wont mess around too much.. for my own good nights sleep... be rest assured....

Originally posted by: uzmam1
Niha,
Beautiful update!! Congrat!!

Thanks also to Navyanka for the punjabi dialogues!!

I think you handled the 'encounter' really well .. the cv's should use it too!!

My wish you be for Maan and Geet to be together!! but i am a hopeless romantic ..

still i will wait and see what happens in the next update!!

also thanks for making sure Dev got so many jhoothia's from everyone .. geet,. maan, geet's family and even the gaon wallas .. all thats left now is dadima ad NT!! ha ha

Uz xx

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-honeydew-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#333

sure !!! 😊

Originally posted by: pickachu
Mindblowingggg part.
Plzz continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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Sireesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Thats so emotional Dear

pls continue soon

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Alka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#335

oh my gosh...such a sad ending with maan feeling like an outside since he doesnt know how geet and dev know each other!!
Nonetheless, very good storyline although I hope that there is more love scenes between maneet before the other two meet!

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Alka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#336

oH My days....this was a very emotionally draining story...felt so sorry for maneet since they're losing each other just because of their family who had no previous affection for them!! and how dare dev say that he did all of this outta love?? he's such a selfish guy..if he did that outta love,he wouldnt have made geet pregnant...maybe just take the property,sell it and get the hell outta hoshiarpur!!