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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Amrinag

Lovely ff, blueangel...dunno how i didn't chance upon reading it b4!

It's making me bonkers!


Please add me to ur pm list!

-Amrutha


Thank you, thank you and you are welcome.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey, thanks for the PM! I just read all the parts. I love your writing :D
And it's such an interesting story. Love it! Great stuff!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe...how sweet... Really amazing.... Dadi is such a darling...bhagvaan aisi daadi sabko de.... and Maan and Geet and Geet and her lack of attention...kaise dhyan degi daadi ki baaton ka...sara dhyaan to maan pe hi hai....and thanks for ur concern...yes my projects and assignments are completed... continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear i just read d first part nd it was awesome. pls add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
both the updates are good so daadima is fully playing the cupid awaiting for next pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chori Chori (cont.)

Moving back away from her, it is to the sound of Daadimaa's voice calling for Geet. Wait, calling for GEET. I will have to find out about that. Before I can process the question as to why Daadimaa was calling for her, I become most aware of the fact that I was wet and without my shirt. Quickly moving back, I move into the shadows cast by the columns surrounding the pool. I know its not like me to run, but Daadimaa was already teasing me about Geet before the actions of today, if she caught us now, I don't think I could get away from her teasing or her penetrating questions, plus at the moment I don't want to scare Geet with Daadimaa's enthusiasm and most likely her correct assumptions about my feelings. I see her come out looking for Geet, and am taken aback and most pleasantly surprised by the look of relief, concern, affection and love on Daadimaa's face when she spots Geet. I am happy that the two most important women in life get along so well. I am glad she does not see me before facing Geet. On moving my eyes away from Daadimaa's quickly moving figure, I look back at Geet to see her watching me with a very amused, ad somewhat confused, look on her face with a slightly raised eyebrow. Quickly shaking my head, I signal her to keep her my presence quiet. With the quickly dissipating concern, it is to see the amusement growing in her gaze , and though I know she's bound to be wary after what happened tonight, with her personality I know that tomorrow will bring no end to her teasing. I am looking forward to it; these turn of events is bound for an interesting beginning to this new phase. I am broken from my reverie and gazing when Daadimaa steers Geet towards the main house. I keep staring at these bizarre turn of events and decide tomorrow can't come soon enough. Looking at her being lead away I instantly feel the lack of her closeness but she was here, in my house, and with my decisions made I was never going to let her leave me again. As I see her going, she quietly places the towels in her hands on one of the chairs and gives me a lingering look. Quickly glancing at me, she glance at the towel and looks back at me, quietly besieging to use them , before moving inside the house. Seeing them move in and away, I finally come out of my hiding, and move towards the towel to grab one and dry myself before moving to my room. Finally, with my mind, heart, and soul at peace I am content.

Yeh kya hua kaise hua

Yeh kab hua kya pata

Chori chori jab nazarein mili

Chori chori phir neendein udi

Chori chori yeh dil ne kaha

Chori mein bhi hai maza

Moving away from him, I am unable to do more than stare at him when he moves away quickly and seeing Daadimaa, retreats into the shadows of one of the columns. Looking at him the whole time, there is a growing amusement and concern in me. I had never seen him back away from anything, and also I had never the look which he was wearing on his face, as if a young boy afraid of getting caught stealing sweets. To see him back away from Daadimaa, was amusing. I was concerned at to what his intention was, when my view of him was partially hidden by Daadimaa. Daadimaa was speaking to me, and thought I was paying attention to her, it was only with half a mind. I was too busy staring at the frantic head shaking of his and the aborting gestures he was making. It was great effort that I was trying to keep my face neutral, trying my best not to alarm Dadiji of his presence. Nodding quietly, my attention is drawn from his gaze to Dadiji. Finally with more full concise on what Dadiji was saying, I let her steer me into the house. So many question came into my mind again, now that I was going further away from his intoxicating presence. Suddenly aware of the towels in my hand, I know that he needs them since he was wet from rescuing me, and also knowing that he needed the reminder to take care of himself. As I am walking away, I quietly place the towels in a chair and look back at him indicating him to use it. I hope he does take them. Letting Daadimaa take me towards my room, I look back again quietly and seeing him walk towards the towels, I relax. I wanted to know so much, but I knew asking Daadimaa questions now, would lead to more questions on her part. Knowing that he did not want any interference, I decide to wait till morning to find out more and also it will interesting to see how He handles himself tomorrow morning. It will become interesting still as to how I will handle myself, but I know kal ka din kuch alag hi hoga. "Babaji, thank you ke aap ne meri baat unse karva li, pata nahi, unko dekh ke aab thoda zyada theek lag raha hai" sending thanks to her Babaji, she finally relaxes and with her anxiousness gone, she assures Daadimaa of taking her medication and of taking care of her clothes and her rest, and finally after seeing Daadimaa to her room, she moves to her room.

Chori chori jab nazarein mili

Chori chori phir neendein udi

Chori chori yeh dil ne kaha

Chori mein bhi hai maza

Chori chori jab nazarein mili

Edited by blueangel13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update ..thanks for the PM khushi..write soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow thats a lovely update
Loved it
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update Khushi!!
keep it up ..
already waiting for your next update!!
Uzma xx

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