Socha Na Tha (FF)-update page 35

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Socha Na Tha

Part 1: (Socha Na Tha)



Moonlight streams into a bedroom, the wind gently fluttering the white curtains and canopy bed curtains. Through the open French windows we hear delicate wind chimes and the sound of rain. On the bed lays a couple entwined, completely locked together and at peace.



As the moments pass by, we see the woman slowly open her eyes and realizing where she is, shyly glancing down at the arm pining her to the bed. Taking in her surroundings she sees that the delicate pink rose petals strewn everywhere, and blushes lightly realizing how that happened. Turning her gaze she looks adoringly at the face of the man beside her. Suddenly feeling too shy and completely in awe of her life, she gently pries herself from his arms. Delicately placing her feet on the floor, she gently tugs the sheet around her while looking over her shoulder to make sure her companion was sleeping. Wrapping the sheet around herself sari style, she places her pillow under his arms where he had been holding her.



Quietly she looks walks to the window and gazes out at the beauty of the rain. While she is serenely looking out the window and reminiscing through all the events that they had gone through to get to tonight, he awakens probably missing her presence from the moment she had gotten out of bed. Slowly he rises and looks around, fearing for a brief moment that it had been a dream (as it had been many times before), on seeing her at the window, he faintly smiles and shakes his head at himself as if to say, "pagal, this is now the reality".


Kabhi Dil Ke Kareeb, Tumhe Mere Naseeb
Yun Laayenge Socha Na Tha

Finally, with his senses focused, he takes in the view of his beautiful angel, looking even more radiant now that she was fully and completely his. He swings his legs down from the bed and slowly pads towards his love. On reaching her, he gently wraps his hands around her waist from behind. On feeling his touch and the plains of his chest at her back, she leans back and completely melts into him. Laying one arm on topof his and with the other clutching her mangalsutra, she turns her head to one side and onto his chest, as if to find a way to hide herself in him. Smiling gently at her actions he puts his head into the crook of her neck and kisses her there.


Ek Chahat Ka Pal, Sab Savalon Ka Haal
Yun Paayenge Socha Na Tha
Kabhi Dil Ke Kareeb



Gently he turns her around, so that he can look into her eyes and see himself there. As he slowly tilts her head up, he sees the blush travel up her neck and her eyes flutter close. Feeling playful, he slowly glides his hand around her waist and pulls her suddenly close. She gasps and opens her eyes, she sees him smiling naughtily down at her. In her eyes, he can finally see himself, her love and their happiness.



(Aankhein Joh Ab Meri Aankhon Mein Hain
Dhoond Raha Tha Kayi Salon Se) - 2
Kitni Milti Hain Aankhein Yeh
Khwabon Se Mere Khayalon Se
Ke Haqeqaat Mein Hum, Sapno Ka Sanam
Yun Paayenge Socha Na Tha
Kabhi Dil Ke Kareeb, Tumhe Mere Naseeb



Gazing into his eyes and feeling again overwhelmed by her happiness, a lone tears spills from her shimmering eyes. His gaze follow the track of the tear and he quickly kisses it away. Once again gazing at his angel, he whispers, 'yun aaso mat bahao, khusi mein bhi nahi....agar yeh ghir gata toh mere dil mein tufaan aa gata'. She widens her eyes and breathlessly whispers, " Maan". She looses herself in his gaze and moments pass, maybe minutes maybe hours.



(Kabhi Tanha Bethe Bethe Yunhi
Pal Mein Hi Main Ghum Ho Jaati Thi) - 2
Main Bhi Kahaan Main Rehti Thi
Aksaar Main Tum Ho Jaati Thi



Finally breaking the gaze and feeling shy once again she ducks her head and goes to pull away from him. She is unsuccessful though as she feels a tug around her neck at the backward motion. On looking, she sees that her mangalsutra and his taveez had become entangled, stopping the notion of her away movement. Still unable to meet his gaze and completely flustered, she tries to untangle the two in vain. After a few moments of observing her movements with amusement, he slowly lays his hand over hers pausing her in the midst of her actions. As she stops her movements and once again gazes into his soul, he slowly smiles and lifts her into his arms. She quickly twines her hands around his neck, lays her head on his shoulder and happily allows him to take her back to their bed.



Yeh Ajaab Si Khata, Aur Isski Saza
Yun Paayenge Socha Na Tha
Kabhi Dil Ke Kareeb, Tumhe Mere Naseeb
Yun Laayegne Socha Na Tha
Ek Chahat Ka Pal, Sab Savalon Ka Haal
Yun Paayenge Socha Na Tha


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This wasthe first part in a multi-part series, will continue to post if that is everyones wish. The story will go into flashback after this, the plot continues from the episodes where geet quits the job (July 20).


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Index:

Part 1 (Socha Na Tha) - Page 1
Part 2 (Lehrein, beg.) - Page 2
Teaser Part 3 (Din Dhal Jaye) - Page 3
Part 2 (Lehrein, cont.) - Page 3
Part 2 (Lehrein, final) - Page 5
Part 3 (Na Sahi, beg.) - Page 6
Part 3 (Na Sahi, cont.) - Page 8
Preview Part 4 (Jaane Kya) and author's note - Page 10
Part 3 (Na Sahi, end) - Page 11
Part 4 (Jaane Kya, complete) - Page 13
Part 5 (Behka, complete) - Page 15
Part 6 (Jugnoo, beg.) - Page 17
Part 6 (Jugnoo,end) - Page 19
Part 7 (Chori Chori, beg.) - Page 22
Part 7 (Chori Chori, cont.) - Page 25
Part 7 (Chori chori, cont.) - Page 28
Part 7 (Chori Chori, cont.) - Page 32
Part 7 (Chori Chori, end) - Page 35

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The lyrics used so far are
Part 1 - song: Socha na tha. movie: socha na tha
Part 2 - song: Lehrein. movie Aisha
Part 3 - song: Na sahi (or zindagi). movie: socha na tha
Part 4 - song: Jaane Kya. movie: pyar ke side effects
Part 5 - song: Behka. movie: ghajini
Part 6 - song: Tu Hai Bhatakta Jugnoo. movie: Holiday
Part 7- song: Chori Chori. movie: Kareeb

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Nice beginning, waiting to see what happens in the future for your characters. Please add me to your PM list.
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really sach main itna aacha hoga socha na tha
love it plz cont...
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beautiful start pls add me to pm list
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Nice beginning, would love to read more, continue soon.
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my fav movies socha na tha ............i will for sure read your FF PM me.
excellent start
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The beginning was awesome.......do continue soon and please add me to your PM list.
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nice start...........will be waiting for updates, can u plz add me to ur pm list?
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Wow beautiful beginning.... very excited abt the story...plzz continue soon n do pm me the updates..
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Awesome. I always wanted socha na tha to be pictured at Geet and Maan. You made my wish come true 😊

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