Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87! - Page 32

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey.. Vru.........darling...sorry for a late comment...but me deffo read this FF....plz dun delete my name from th PM list..
N me just luvng.. Arjun n Nups so very much.....❤️ u knw just reading abt them...makes me picturise.. Mayur...n i go all drooling...😳
Luvly update..n my my Adi teasing Faz...😈 me like it....
Gr8 one..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ nups - hmm so you love arjun...good for me..nahi to meri baand baj jaaye..

i try to juggle and keep them different lets see if how long i can keep this up...i hope i do justice with each one of them..they are all lovely...

@Armu...i am not deleting anyone from a pm list because number one i dont have one...i send all my work to by buddies who have the prerogative to read what they like and leave what they dont...so no fear from my side and i am trying to say i have taken all of you off the hook of going thro my work if you really dont want to...

thank you liking my work...i enjoy writing. these character are my other friends..aprt from you all that is...they talk to me...but only i can hear them...sounds strange well i think i m getting stranger and stranger day by day...
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Posted: 14 years ago
vrus ab tumhari band nehi meri mom-dad ki band bajne wale hai...agar unhone future mein apne liye Arjun jaisa damaad nehi dundha to...🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm nupur..ab mein kya karoon....ek kunwar dhoonda parega..na... chalo woh bhi kar lenge...

phir to tera dungu pehle tujhe..one piece mein chorega..uski guarantee de mujhe..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Arre Nags..no comment just reserved...

i the comment reserved or the space?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

hmmm nupur..ab mein kya karoon....ek kunwar dhoonda parega..na... chalo woh bhi kar lenge... dhoondo dhoondo...mill jayee to bata deta....😉

phir to tera dungu pehle tujhe..one piece mein chorega..uski guarantee de mujhe.. mera dunju ab mera nehi raha (thnk u babajii😆)....chalo koi baat nehi main tumhe fevistick ki guarantee deti hu....tuta futa hi sahi....bas one piece hi hu....

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Posted: 14 years ago
hmm theek hai..chalo ek aur naukri..nahi not naukri this will be fun...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok, so I'm back after my (fictional) cruise to Santorini Islands as Nupur pointed out. Kya karti...it was just damn too long...so I went to get to a good touristic view of the place...so that I can later tell about all these places to Maan when we go together, and then we could concentrate on other things while we are seeing the Mediterreanean 😉😆!!!

Ch. 50 & 51: yeh dono couples ki kya baat kahoon...Arjun is an engineer, so he doesn't have the habit of beating around the bush. Like any good engineer, he is to the point! So Nupsie dear, have fun with this banda of yours! Seems like you're the point as well!

FaAdi: Waah waah Adi...I didn't think you were that bold! Chalo Fazo you gave him the encouragement...being bold and beautiful aren't we dear? Adi ko bahut chhedhna hai ab mujhe!!! My best buddy going on a date...Maan and I will have soooooo much fun teasing him...and will help put the spotlight on Adi instead of me!

Nargis...control...even Vicky has shown exemplary control which I am surprised at! BTW, aren't you suppose to keep Vicky at bay during Ramadan? Bad Nargis, very bad!!!

Maabs being predictable....hmmm, you think that right now. Just wait for the future after pandit Vrushali gets our saat pheres done. Abs with her ideas will render Maan speechless, wordless! And about manofying...thank God I don't have to do that right now! Trust me when I will be doing that, it won't be easy!

Vrushali all of yours stories besides Maabs is an inter-religious story...did you notice that?


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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Abs,

good to see you back..missed you...did not know what happened to you or where you went off and if i had read..my sieve brain..sifted that info...somehow..now that i read the name of the island..everything clicks..

hmm yeah the guys are funny...

and hmm about it being interreligious...yeah..

i probably see the most struggle for Adi and Faz somehow.. Arjun is firang..as far as i can see..so i think Nupur is alright...Nargis is going to face some issues with mom in law but Vicky is too strong a guy..

now Adi and Faz..i think that one..will have some heart break around the corner...

so another spoiler for you all
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Posted: 14 years ago
Actually, I was in the US during the weekend, just for getting a change of environment, and some shopping. Aeropostale had this amazing 30 % discount on everything you buy...so I went there, and did shopping (there's no Aeropostale in MTL )...was planning to go to Macy's as well. However, I wasn't able to due to some change in plans. But the trip was fun.

Hopefully I can have another get away soon! I want to go to Macy's this time!

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