Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87! - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago
i am writing right now...as much i can before i go.. will post it tonight..after i come home and complete it..i am almost half way there..
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Chapter 51
Nupur gaped, "What?" her head was swimming. She almost swayed, and Arjun came up to her. "Are you alright?" he asked worriedly. Nupur chortled, "You are amazing, first he makes an earth shattering statement and then asks if I was alright. You take the cake for being daft." She felt her best defence at this time was sarcasm.
He had not touched her for he knew he was near combusting point, but he stood next to her as he had asked her that silly question. He smirked, "yeah, well!" and added, "What do you have to say?"
Nupur gawked, "About what?" playing dumb and about to turn away. He then held her wrist, "You know what Nupur! How about us going out for a drive? Let's get to know one another. I feel we have something here, something special."
Nupur could not believe, her heart could withstand so many shocks in space of few minutes. Her jaw dropped. Was this guy for real? She wondered. First he drops drink on her, then he ignores her after a dance and now out of the blue, he declares he has the hots for her. What did he think of himself? A stud, that she would fall for his line, the minute he said it. Forget it.
She eyes widened when she heard herself say, "I would like that!" Arjun who had been holding on to her wrist, slid his hand down to hold her hand and bring it to his lips. "Nupur, I don't know how this is done," he said kissing the back of her hand, "But I feel like I want to know you, I have never felt like this for a woman before."
Nupur had been berating herself for her tongue not following her brain's instructions and was even more taken aback when he kissed her hand. She felt all mushy inside. She did not know men did that in today's era. She was stunned, at how chivalrous he was. She realized, he had moved away not because he was rude but he was affected by her as she was by him.
His straight forward and honest statement had a mellowing effect on Nupur. She smiled at him and was about to say something when Nargis and Vicky came out of the room. Arjun let her hand go, but Vicky had seen it. He did not say anything but he gave a look to Nargis.
Faz on the balcony with Adi were standing near each other as if transfixed and Faz asked,"why don't you want a reply? You don't really want to take me out or you know that I am going to say yes?" Adi pressed his specs up his nose in his nervousness, "Er, well Farah I want to take you out but I am not sure whether you would give me a slap or …"
"Or what…? Do this?" Faz quizzed and gave him a peck on his cheek. Adi's hand flew to his cheek, where Faz had placed a quick kiss.
"Farah!" he rumbled and then smiled advancing towards her till she was backed against the railing. He put both his hands besides her trapping her against the railing and him, though not touching her at all. Once, he was satisfied to see her pleasure at out smarting him die away, he leaned close and whispered,"What if I did more than that?" against her lips, his lips mere millimeters away from hers, now confident that his advances were not unwanted. Farah licked he lips and stared at his. He moved a bit more closely almost touching her lips, and whispered "Farah, you are the most beautiful woman I have ever met" and moves away.
Farah was left speechless, oh this man could tease she thought, I will have to be on alert she thought fondly enjoying the feelings he evoked in her. She knew this feeling was almost taboo for her. She knew, if she led him any further, they would have a tumultuous relationship. But she shook all those unhappy thoughts and decided to live a little and let this burgeoning feeling which Aditya was actually reciprocating give her a few moments of happiness. She wanted to catch all she could, in her fist for she knew one day, they may not be together and all she will be left with are memories like tonight.
She smiled at him and rejoined, "Aditya, I think you are the most wonderful man I have met, charming and intelligent. I will always treasure your friendship should you choose to make me your friend."
Aditya laughed, "Faz, May I call you that? I find you the most contradictory person. If I had not seen it myself, I would not believe, you to be a prankster." Saying his he laced his hand with hers and told her may be it was time to go back in.
They went in there to find everyone in the living room. The rest started making cat calls to the late comers. Vicky and Arjun particularly seemed to have lot of fun at the expense of Adi and it was Faz, who became defensive of them teasing Adi that Vicky said, "Faz, Adi apna defence khud kar sakta hai, aap jo itna inki taraf daari kar rahin hai, kahin…hum jo soch rahe hai woh to nahin…giving a reminder to her silently of the linked hands they all had seen when they come into the living room from balcony."
Faz, in her bravado and happiness blurted, "Adi and I are going out on a date, you have any problem?" and then put her hand on her mouth and stared at Maan first and Vicky who winked at her and she winked back.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey I like this one as well,
but will take time to read it completely
hmmm..all the Khurana's are the same with women I guess 😆 😆
will read the rest later 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lil busy 2day...will comment later....varak mat jaana
Edited by -sann- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww nupur wanted to tell him to take a hike but ended up saying yes instead, i love the kiss on the hand so gentleman like
loving Faz and Adi, finally Adi makes a bit of a move but after a lot of encouragement from Faz, i wish he had kissed her tho instead of walking away, but maybe i'm expecting too much after all they can't all be like Vicky lol
I love Faz tho, she's soo different, can't believe she blurted it out like that infront of every1 and then she winks back to top it all off
can't wait for their date now
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Vrushali ...took some time reading them all ....awesome work and as i told u earlier that i'm already ur fan 😃 so u can imagine how much i like ur writing ...hehehehe...keep going ....
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Posted: 14 years ago

I love the character of Arjun but Adi takes the cake - our teddy bear pyjama bespectacled sweet man who has learnt to tease Faz - the ultimate prankster!! He has understood that he needs to be a step ahead when it comes to his lovely Faz 😆😆😆....

Nups-- sohcthi kuch aur hai and bolti kuch aur 😆😆....
Instead of just saying I ll think about it seedha - i would like that - wah wah kya baat hai !!
Arjun behaving like a gentleman ??? Wow Vroom, each character - be it male of female- soooooo different from each other!! Ur carrying 8 characters ahead and u make it seem sooooooo effortless..
i know u have not given much screen space to others in this epi but still it was perfect. The way u have portrayed both the love stories was awesome--- Different ways of asking for date and different ways of responses too 👏👏...
loved this update- now eagerly waiting for the next one 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
@amrita Hey i read you FF as well and i like the way to describe.. of course even am behind on your story...

@nups take your time...i am not going anywhere

@Param..i am enjoying each character in this saga..they all talk to me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ jes - thank you so much...girl i really must be blessed to have you all not just read my work but also like and as you say become fan of it...
i shall endeavour to create as much as i can...stories that you all would like to read.

@Rev...ah my QA and critique i love the way to delve into each aspect and give you opinion..it helps me understand..the perspective of the reader as well..and a measure of whether i was successful in delivering my thoughts lucidly and convincingly...

again i felt a small evolution in myself to give some chapters to some character and while the other to others...next one will not delve in the date unfortunately...i shall take that up after that..somehow i have Poonam on my mind... since we last talked and i shall devote the next chapter to khurana family...

there you go..spoiler..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -sann-

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lil busy 2day...will comment later....varak mat jaana

aahh....atlast....i'm here with my pitara😆😆
luved it....👏👏👏
i like no love this arjun....😉 how sweet of him...true gentlemen....😉 i like how he came straight to the point...👏 every man should hav this quality.....love u arjun😳
haila nups....sochti kuch hai aur kehti kuch aur😛😆...samhal kuriye....😆 arjun ki simplicity ne badal diya na tujhe....😆
drive...😳 hmmmm.....looking 4ward to it....pata nehi ye do dhakkan kya karenge😆😆
i like adi....he is the best...isse faz ko tease karna janta hai....bravo..👏👏😆
ek ki drive to dusri ki date....double treat...ha pata hai, pata hai...sou saal baad dene wali ho...
vrus kudos to u....u r a superstar....how do u manage all these characters yaar......??? everyone has their own different charm....specially the boys...
thnx 4 the spoiler...ab ussi se sadiya bitani paregi....
Edited by -sann- - 14 years ago

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