Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: ritz.j
heyy!
i loved ure updates to the core :))

plz add me to ure pm list!

yeah i hav added you as buddy..

thank you for liking my work...

you will get updates on all of my work.. i dont discriminate between my children... you may choose to read what you like.. 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

#292

@ nups haan likh rahi hoon meri amma...
tab tak jaa..wishful thinking padh...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: rushtrip
@ nups haan likh rahi hoon meri amma...
tab tak jaa..wishful thinking padh...

parhli hai beta.....abb iska kya....

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Posted: 14 years ago

#294

likhti hoon...khana khaane ke baad...

aaj tera..din...hai..amma...chilla le mujh pe..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: rushtrip
likhti hoon...khana khaane ke baad...

aaj tera..din...hai..amma...chilla le mujh pe..

nups singing...*kaha ho tum..kaha ho tum...*

dill ki armaan anshu wo mein beh gayee....

hum yaha intezar hi karte reh gayee...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#296

kya yaar vrus,, update hain v ki na v......

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Posted: 14 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: rushtrip
@ nups haan likh rahi hoon meri amma...
tab tak jaa..wishful thinking padh...

avi v kha rahi ho kya beta..???

bhool gayee iss burhi amma ko diya hua vachan...😭

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Posted: 14 years ago

#298

ek paaye nupur amar onno paa khali...(i've only 1 anklet in my 1 feet..the other is left alone)

ek pashe sagoor ek pashe baali...(there is sea in 1 side & sand on otherside)

tomar choto tori bolo, (u hav ur own lil boat, tell)

nebe ki??(will u take me along with u??)

vrus, whr r u to take ours breath away???

p.s: where is abs??i'm missing her....

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#299

hey nups

yeah i noticed Abs missing as well..

going out for a movie rather two movies now..will write tonight..i know i promised i was waylay-ed with the show me heave and undress me..

silly me..aaj raat likhti hoon...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: rushtrip
hey nups

yeah i noticed Abs missing as well.. missing report darz karwana parega....i think cruise pe chali gayii....

going out for a movie rather two movies now..will write tonight..i know i promised i was waylay-ed with the show me heave and undress me.. enjoy....& dont 4get to update as well...cause day & nite we've been waiting....

silly me..aaj raat likhti hoon... u have to....this waiting has awaken the bakwas writter on me....see....main pagaal ho gayee hu....writing this idiotic stuff....silly me...😆😆 by god...aaj to poem ki upar poem...gaana ki upar gaana gungunati phir rahi hu....😆😆