Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87! - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago
Gosh I missed sooo much -- ek din kya miss kar di, kitna conversation miss hua 😭😭😭..
Vrooom, spoiler pe spoiler - Poonam, Maabs under the starry sky and a romantic tte--tte -Abs I loved the idea.. Wah ur description was too good- esp iron fortress just carcked me uo!! Looks like u have sunk into this love story... I could feel ur passion peeping out 😆😆😆... Ek trip and such amazng ideas!! Please go for shopping next weekend too 😆😆...
Nups- Toota foota piece ha ha ha ----> Luckily Dunju is with Arjun's ex Steph now 🤣🤣🤣... But I dont think he will let go of his fav pastime of seeing ur blood ...
So I am thinking Poonam will create problems for Nags!! Maabs are safe for now 😉😉.. But then Abs is creating enuff probs to Maan's self control... I don think he needs any more troubles now !!! And Fazadi troubles---> Let them have some Fazaad moments (aazad-- love moments) before the inevitable headaches land on their heads
@Vroom - Me and ur critique 😆😆-- Good joke!! But yea, I do delve into the matter and give u something nah -->Collar up Rev ..But truthfully its ur writing that does it... Takes me through paths which I would have otherwise never ventured to....
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Rev: Sure I'll go shopping next weekend too...par zara apna credit aur debit card de dena...woh kya hai na maine ek hi trip mein about $400 US kharch kar diye hain! And plus two weeks ago I bought a nice i5 HP laptop. So a little tight on my budget these days! 😆 Mera credit card bill toh sure mujhe heart attack dega!

Iron fortress...hehe I got that from the way Maan always locks his arms around!!! It's difficult to get out unless you quickly slip down and run! Experience I tell you! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmm, Vrushali I had an idea...

Since Maabs will take the roof, we'll probably see Narky headed for the bedroom after Arpur go for a looooooooooooong drive, and Faadi either will stay in the living room or go for a sweet little promenade to get some fresh air!

See I'm doing a favor to Narky by having the couples out of the house! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

@ Rev: Sure I'll go shopping next weekend too...par zara apna credit aur debit card de dena...woh kya hai na maine ek hi trip mein about $400 US kharch kar diye hain! And plus two weeks ago I bought a nice i5 HP laptop. So a little tight on my budget these days! 😆 Mera credit card bill toh sure mujhe heart attack dega!

Iron fortress...hehe I got that from the way Maan always locks his arms around!!! It's difficult to get out unless you quickly slip down and run! Experience I tell you! 😆

Babes - I live in India.. I have to do bonded labor for couple of years to ensure u have an awesome weekend trip and clear ur card dues too ..Just convert ur $400- 20k Rs ....\
Khurana famil's bahu asking me for card 🤣🤣🤣---->Hello stop being such a pinch penny 😆😆😆😆
What happened to u - U just cracking me up today--->The uptight Abs is in an upswing mood 😆😆..
Abt driving others away - I know y --- U dont want others to trouble u and u know that Narky would be in their own world.. The others may become kabab mein haddi or chances or interuppting at the wrong time 😆...U dont want any disturbance when u try to show Maan how much u get lost in his iron arms...
BTW, u will become a flexible athletic person - --- slip quickly and run ?😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

Babes - I live in India.. I have to do bonded labor for couple of years to ensure u have an awesome weekend trip and clear ur card dues too ..Just convert ur $400- 20k Rs ....\
Khurana famil's bahu asking me for card 🤣🤣🤣---->Hello stop being such a pinch penny 😆 Yeah, you're right...MSK's fiancee asking for money...Mujhe toh MSK ki credit card ko fultoo use karna chahiye...Hai na? 😆
What happened to u - U just cracking me up today--->The uptight Abs is in an upswing mood 😆😆.. Wasn't feeling so well in the morning....and had to come to work...but not doing much here either...and had orange juice..And I get hyper on orange juice...so there you go!
Abt driving others away - I know y --- U dont want others to trouble u and u know that Narky would be in their own world.. The others may become kabab mein haddi or chances or interuppting at the wrong time 😆...U dont want any disturbance when u try to show Maan how much u get lost in his iron arms...See as Maabs are considered the conservative, respectful, traditional couple, we can't just showcase our emotions like the rest...And yes, I def don't want disturbance when I spend time with Maan alone..and the feeling is mutual!!!! Agar saath mein kisi aur ka bhi (Narky) bhalaa ho jaata hai, toh sone pe suhaga!😆
BTW, u will become a flexible athletic person - --- slip quickly and run ?😆😆 You should def try it! I don't think it fails if you're agile! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
Babes - I live in India.. I have to do bonded labor for couple of years to ensure u have an awesome weekend trip and clear ur card dues too ..Just convert ur $400- 20k Rs ....\
Khurana famil's bahu asking me for card 🤣🤣🤣---->Hello stop being such a pinch penny 😆 Yeah, you're right...MSK's fiancee asking for money...Mujhe toh MSK ki credit card ko fultoo use karna chahiye...Hai na? 😆
Utilize karo resource ka--->Engineering student!!
What happened to u - U just cracking me up today--->The uptight Abs is in an upswing mood 😆😆.. Wasn't feeling so well in the morning....and had to come to work...but not doing much here either...and had orange juice..And I get hyper on orange juice...so there you go!

Only orage juice or mixed with Vodka 😆😆.. If unwell loosens u up, I should say be unwell for some more time

Abt driving others away - I know y --- U dont want others to trouble u and u know that Narky would be in their own world.. The others may become kabab mein haddi or chances or interuppting at the wrong time 😆...U dont want any disturbance when u try to show Maan how much u get lost in his iron arms...See as Maabs are considered the conservative, respectful, traditional couple, we can't just showcase our emotions like the rest...And yes, I def don't want disturbance when I spend time with Maan alone..and the feeling is mutual!!!! Agar saath mein kisi aur ka bhi (Narky) bhalaa ho jaata hai, toh sone pe suhaga!😆
I know u want no one to know --->thede couple... Currently only Narky would be lost in themselves and want space for themselves.. Smart cookie 😆😆
BTW, u will become a flexible athletic person - --- slip quickly and run ?😆😆 You should def try it! I don't think it fails if you're agile! 😆
I dont want to slip away from my hubby's arms.. Try karoongi toh he wil lwonder whats wrong with me 😕😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

Babes - I live in India.. I have to do bonded labor for couple of years to ensure u have an awesome weekend trip and clear ur card dues too ..Just convert ur $400- 20k Rs ....\
Khurana famil's bahu asking me for card 🤣🤣🤣---->Hello stop being such a pinch penny 😆 Yeah, you're right...MSK's fiancee asking for money...Mujhe toh MSK ki credit card ko fultoo use karna chahiye...Hai na? 😆
Utilize karo resource ka--->Engineering student!! Engineering mein yehin toh seekhayaa jaata hai! 😆
What happened to u - U just cracking me up today--->The uptight Abs is in an upswing mood 😆😆.. Wasn't feeling so well in the morning....and had to come to work...but not doing much here either...and had orange juice..And I get hyper on orange juice...so there you go!

Only orage juice or mixed with Vodka 😆😆.. If unwell loosens u up, I should say be unwell for some more time Arrey vodka mere jaise bacchon ke liye nahin hota hai...Mere liye toh 100% orange juice😛

Abt driving others away - I know y --- U dont want others to trouble u and u know that Narky would be in their own world.. The others may become kabab mein haddi or chances or interuppting at the wrong time 😆...U dont want any disturbance when u try to show Maan how much u get lost in his iron arms...See as Maabs are considered the conservative, respectful, traditional couple, we can't just showcase our emotions like the rest...And yes, I def don't want disturbance when I spend time with Maan alone..and the feeling is mutual!!!! Agar saath mein kisi aur ka bhi (Narky) bhalaa ho jaata hai, toh sone pe suhaga!😆
I know u want no one to know --->thede couple... Currently only Narky would be lost in themselves and want space for themselves.. Smart cookie 😆😆 Exactly...Maabs bhi jalebi ki tarah tedhe hain. Jitne seedhe dikhte hain, utne hain nahin!😉
BTW, u will become a flexible athletic person - --- slip quickly and run ?😆😆 You should def try it! I don't think it fails if you're agile! 😆
I dont want to slip away from my hubby's arms.. Try karoongi toh he wil lwonder whats wrong with me 😕😕 Tel lhim you're in the mood to play games...pakda pakdi! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
abs puttar....kya pata tumhari orange mein hi garbAr ho....ab to mujhe v thoda thoda lag raha hai ki iss trip ne kuch to kiya hai tum par..... 😕 or kahi ye maan se duur rehne ki gham se to nehi hua na.....😆😆
aur ek trip pe jao.....okk....

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