Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87!

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

awesome vrush.... i still have to read all the previous parts so cant figure out the connect...... but gal u sure hv a knack of describing the scenes.... rocking....

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

ow..will you really go and read..the other 49 parts... Gouri?

hats off to you for even thinking about it...good luck...

even i dont know where i started and now..i have 8 people to handle..plus daadi and others...wow..kya...saga..hai..

please do read when you get time...and let me know what you think?

you think i can make this my profession... it is an obsession already...

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

awesome one dear...🤗..

keep posting........

lov,❤️

Tama

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

*woot woot* Faz n Adi happening................ Arjun affected by Nups...n ahem ahem.........Vicky n Nargis..busy EATING ☺️☺️☺️ Thats super freaking hawwtttttttttttttttttttttttt...

Super stuff vru........luv ur updates..just as much we luv u..🤗

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-sann-

@-sann-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

kitna aasan hai na ye teen shabd bolna "i want you'....par kitna muskil hai isse samajhna..... 😛

(bas kar nupur 3dr class film ki dialogue marna....😡🤢.....varna chappal milenge...)

aah loved fazadi😉 by god, adi to chalu nikla.....jhatse puch liya.....faz say u wanna go with him babes....sunehri mouka baar baar nehi aate.....😉

maan & vicky...hats off..aaj control to kiya...😆😆 specially vicky...kyu JD..kahi saalio ko gaalio ki barsat to nehi de rahe the na...

kya arjun dimaag ka screw kholke ghatter mein gir gaya kya....😆😆 nups tera v....😆😆

waah kya baat hai...AJ to ahemm..ahemm...kya batau...😳😳 char kadam agee nikla.....😆😆 sidha point pe utar aaya....😆😆 BTW...he should b srry 4 making nups cry....

upar wale uthale...kya yaar vrus...humesha humhe nehi mujhe latakta hua chor dete ho....aur bang....tum gayeeb.....meri blood-pressure high ho rahi hai yaar.....chedi update nehi ki na toh dekh lena.....😆😆

srry 4 my bakwas...meri brain wire nikaal gaya hai....isiliye....😆😆 ye fever mujhe pagaal kar degi.....😆😆

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

hey nups...

tujhe fever hai? have missed chatting with you girl...what happened?

Ah kahin Arjun ne to fever nahi de diya?

btw about the update hmm mein likhoongi abhi thori der mein..i have some time next couple of days...yes your wish is my command...

catch up with you babes..long time baatein nahi hui...

take care of yourself...

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: AKANargis
Thanks for the update...i loved it!!.....Faz bhi Chuppi Rustum nikhli......lekin kyoon kuch boli nahi when Adi finally asked her out...."Cat got your tongue??"

Abs and Maan are predictable by now....Maan will forever be manaoing Abs...nothing new....but Nupur and Arjun....that's where the real fireworks are!!!! You wrote the update so well....the tension between them was palpable.....so thick it was....and then wow...what a BOMB Arjun shoots...I want You!!!

Looking forward to the next part..................i think that one should be dedicated to Arjun and Nups.......lets see if they can light up my apartment with their fireworks!!!😆

ah tujhse baat karke mazza aa gaya... nups and arjun yeah...they are going to have fun..looks like

and hmm faz and adi are cute...i think they are going to be..unpredictable...

apni baat to baatyee nahin...Vicky ko closet mein jaana tha..aur aap ready bhi thi..

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

@ tama

thank you will do..soon...

@ Armu...thank you so much girl..yeah. i like it that way...loads of fireworks..after all i need let some out else what Maan lights in me will make me burn... and it will be visible from the Moon...

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-sann-

@-sann-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: rushtrip
hey nups...

tujhe fever hai? have missed chatting with you girl...what happened? unfortunately yess.... me too......bas sayed viral fever hai....hope ki malaria na ho😆😆

Ah kahin Arjun ne to fever nahi de diya? its possible...nupsi bimaar hui arjun tere liye😆😆

btw about the update hmm mein likhoongi abhi thori der mein..i have some time next couple of days...yes your wish is my command... thodi der mein...pakka na....pata chala mahiney mein v khabar na aaye..😆😆 hmm...feeling like boss.....😆

catch up with you babes..long time baatein nahi hui... ya...missed everyone...

take care of yourself...