Short story :You Belong To Me(Shanak)part22page33 - Page 16

Lovely part !!

loved the update...SHaan being jealous!!! good that there is no misunderstanding.... i guess yash and gopi scenes wont be that bad!....plz cont soon.......

Originally posted by: togepe30

Lovely part !!

Oh Nice !!

I'd like that very much !!! Gopi and Yash !!

Where did Natasha go by the way ?

Thanx dear

Originally posted by: dhrashtee

loved the update...SHaan being jealous!!! good that there is no misunderstanding.... i guess yash and gopi scenes wont be that bad!....plz cont soon.......

Glad you loved it,

Originally posted by: amrita2010

Thanx dear

Natasha also will come, don't worry, I'm trying to get a groom for her😆

Hey Amrita!!!

Loveeeeeeee the update.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima

Amrita,

first of all.....Thankyou for the PM.

I just love this FF..... I was thinking after your 15th part which was a high there wouldn't be any story left as now khanak and shantanu are husband and wife and happy about it..... but I was wrong.... the way you are going with the story is wonderful..... I fall in love with the story each time.......

I could imagine the scenes of shan and khanak..... the way he pulls her near to him.... the way he hides his feelings to not express it on his face..... the curiosity in khanak's eyes..... everything is just sweet and cute.......

Would love to see them romance in the house......

Do continue soon....would be waiting for the next part......

Thankyou,
Bunny.

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Hey Amrita!!!

That was a super cute twist.....😆

Yash and Gopi...hmm...not bad at all!!

Thank God there was no misunderstanding between Shanak.....Khanak clarified the matter straight away.....unlike the show at the moment!! It's too upsetting.....😭

Anyways...back to the point......Great work Amrita and as always, I look forward to the update!!!

👍🏼

Hey dear, thanx alot

Originally posted by: bunny_fun

Amrita,

first of all.....Thankyou for the PM.

I just love this FF..... I was thinking after your 15th part which was a high there wouldn't be any story left as now khanak and shantanu are husband and wife and happy about it..... but I was wrong.... the way you are going with the story is wonderful..... I fall in love with the story each time.......

I could imagine the scenes of shan and khanak..... the way he pulls her near to him.... the way he hides his feelings to not express it on his face..... the curiosity in khanak's eyes..... everything is just sweet and cute.......

Would love to see them romance in the house......

Do continue soon....would be waiting for the next part......

Thankyou,
Bunny.

Hi sweetie 🤗