Short story :You Belong To Me(Shanak)part22page33 - Page 17

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Posted: 15 years ago
love it dear im loving this side of shaan so much being all possessive abt khanak...pls do update soon love reading it n add some roamnce 2 shanak as u r gr8 in doing so😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Gopi and Yash.. nice pairing...
btw, I was hoping to see some Jealous Shaan..
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Posted: 15 years ago
You Belong To Me - part 17
'Khanak, hurry up! we are already late' Shaan called out loud enough so that the confused Khanak could hear his voice. Khanak bit the tip of her finger and asked 'Shantanu, I'm confused, don't know what to wear'. Ahh! Why does ladies always take so much time to decide what to wear, thought Shaan. He took a black sari embroidered with white beads from the wardrobe 'hmm. this will look beautiful on my lovely wife' and handed it to her. She just nodded and walked into the dressing room. Within few minutes, he saw her standing infront of the mirror, putting on her jewelleries, one by one. She put a silver earrings and held a matching necklace. She tried to put it on, but her hands didn't help her enough to hook it. He moved forward, after seeing this and slowly took her hand away, before reaching the hook. He did it for her and tilted her towards him and caressed her beautiful face as he whispered to her ears 'you look so beautiful, my dear wifey'. He knelt before her and placed a soft kiss on her palm 'shall we dance?' 'Shantanu, are you mad? we are still at home' she giggled.
The restaurant was almost full when they reached. Khanak hid behind Shaan as she felt nervous when people glanced at them. 'Sir? please come and have a seat' a young man greeted them and showed them a table to sit. They enjoyed her favourite food and deserts as she was craving for that. He let her to stick on his side as they walked to his car. He opened the door for her and sat on the driver seat and started their journey back to home. They exchanged glances while in the car as they knew what they wanted afterwards.
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Natasha sat on her seat and waited for the plane to get ready for take off. She was shaken from the young man who sat on the seat next to her. She stared at him angrily. 'wow! so beautiful, when you are angry, miss beautiful' Abhishek flirted with his words. She bit her lower lip in anger and pointed a finger at him, but kept quite. Oh God! This man is really crazy, she thought. She didn't look at him after that as he too didn't say anything. A while later, she saw him flirting with the stewardess as she offered him a drink. 'you wanna drink?' he offered Natasha who was looking at him. 'no, thank you' as she twilted her head towards the window, he felt the scent of her hair. Hmm. What a nice smell, he thought. He touched her hair and closed his eyes to feel it deep in his heart. She pulled back her hair with a single pull and told 'Mr. who ever..' he cut her voice 'Abhi...Abhishek Kundra, and you are miss...' she didn't want to answer him. 'Mr.Abhishek, please behave your self, by the way if you want, you can change your seat, or may I?' He didn't want her to go away from him. He held his ear lobes to say sorry and she smiled. 'I'm sorry, miss.... tell your name so that we can talk to each other to spend the boring time' his grin made her heart beat go faster. 'Natasha, I'm on my way to meet my brother and his wife' she put forward her hand for a handshake. 'I'm on a business trip' he held her hand as they both became friends and talked about Switzerland.
Tammie and her husband Mr. Rohan Aggarwal received Natasha at Zurich International Airport and drove her home. She was very happy to meet them after a long time and talked about everything at home. Tammie and Rohan was told about Shaan and Khanak's marriage so they didn't ask anything about it from her. Instead they had already planned to keep her there as long as possible, so that she could forget her past and start a new life.
So, how do you like my take on Natasha? please share your views😊
Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago
pickachu thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loveeeee the update.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely Part !!
I wish instead of stereotypically turning Natasha negative...
The makers would follow this route too and introduce a alternate lead for her...!
Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for the update.... i agree with togepe regarding natasha's character...hopefully, she will not end up as a negative character
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Posted: 15 years ago
good... atleast here Natasha moves on..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pickachu

Loveeeee the update.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


Fatima

glad you loved this, thank you
@Shalini, what to do dear, I can't help feeling sorry for Natasha, so trying to help but don't know whether she will accept or not😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Lovely Part !!

I wish instead of stereotypically turning Natasha negative...
The makers would follow this route too and introduce a alternate lead for her...!
Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu

Thanx alot dear
How I wish the cv's could use such an idea😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dhrashtee

thanks for the update.... i agree with togepe regarding natasha's character...hopefully, she will not end up as a negative character

It's my pleasure dear
Don't know what we have in store

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