Short story :You Belong To Me(Shanak)part22page33 - Page 14

NIce update... but no Shanak😭.....😆......well let see what mandira is is up... hopefully, she will knock some sense into madhvi😉.......as far as yash is concerned, hope he is a good boy and wont try to be all over khanak😛😆😆😆.... plz cont soon

Hi amrita2010,

I just read your FF yesterday night.... WOW.... You have an amazing way of writing the story.....
You have written the emotional, fight, love scenes with the same fervor.....

I am now waiting for the next update.... Do update soon..... New Fan.... of your FF.....

I just read one part and could not stop.... and went back and started reading from the start.......

and *ahem* * ahem*....... You were great....... at describing their intimate scenes

Thankyou, for a wonderful update.... will follow here from hence forth...... If you have a PM list please include me too......

Bunny.

hey amrita., excellent yaar.u havebrought in yashraj

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Great update Amrita!!!

No Shanak romance today......😭!!

It was good to read nonetheless. Also the new entry of Mandhira and Yash seem to be promising...(fingers xed!!)

Keep up the great work, and I look forward to the next update!!!!

Thanx dear, ahhh why should they have to romance always😆, I gave you enough of hot scenes and let take a step forward first and then let the romance begins😆😆😆

@Fatima, thankyou dear, that's like me, even I still think Khushboo, Mangal and Hetal are positive in the serial too😆

Originally posted by: dhrashtee

NIce update... but no Shanak😭.....😆......well let see what mandira is is up... hopefully, she will knock some sense into madhvi😉.......as far as yash is concerned, hope he is a good boy and wont try to be all over khanak😛😆😆😆.... plz cont soon

Thank you...let them stay away for a while, gal😆...let's see who wins, Mndhira or Madhvi?? Yash is a mystery let's unfold it😉

Originally posted by: bunny_fun

Hi amrita2010,

I just read your FF yesterday night.... WOW.... You have an amazing way of writing the story.....
You have written the emotional, fight, love scenes with the same fervor.....

I am now waiting for the next update.... Do update soon..... New Fan.... of your FF.....

I just read one part and could not stop.... and went back and started reading from the start.......

and *ahem* * ahem*....... You were great....... at describing their intimate scenes

Thankyou, for a wonderful update.... will follow here from hence forth...... If you have a PM list please include me too......

Bunny.

Hi Bunny🤗a warm welcome from me,

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

hey amrita., excellent yaar.u havebrought in yashraj

.when there is a natasha for shaan why not yashraj for khanak( i know it owuld all end up with shanak coming closer).Surely shaan would be fuming with jealousy.

and hopefully mandhira makes madhvi better.

well it is so nice of u to write a family scene .too good. keep it up.

ahh, Shriya, you are the only one who thought like me, of ....jealousy... ofcourse let's see how jealous and possessive Shaan becomes😆😆

wow i like this madira character
may be she will change madhvi
all other khandelwal had accepted khanak so no tension except khusboo
do continue
bye sumi

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

wow i like this madira character
may be she will change madhvi
all other khandelwal had accepted khanak so no tension except khusboo
do continue
bye sumi

Thank you so much dear 😊