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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
Forget 111 parts...I want 1111 😃
It's adorable seeing both Maan and Geet accepting each other as husband and wife! šŸ‘
Especially these parts:
"So you do it. Anyway we are getting married," said Maan irritably.

"You look pretty in whatever you wear Geet." he said, frustrated.

Luurrvee makes the world go round. 🤣


And Daadi's reactions are too good.. šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

Thanks for the P.M. and continue asap 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
hi,

i just caught up with all your updates.. and i like the story so far...!!!!!!

i think it is amazing... šŸ‘....can u please add me to your PM list and send me one whenever u update....

thanks...!!!

hey, i'd also appreciate if you could make an index page... with all the page numbers of every update in like the 1st page, so it would be easier to find the update and read it , rather than search every single page.!!! thanks honey...!!!!

looking forward for the next update... šŸ˜›

soumya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Chapter Twelve( Just another one left for the Devil's dozen. 😈 )

Shaadi!!!.

Somewhere in the Bella View Hotel in the heart of Delhi....

Dev and Naintara Khurana stepped inside the hotel like the perfect society couple, handing over their coats to the doorman-it was a cold night-and walking up to the receptionist, arms linked together, asking about the Grand Ballroom preparations.

"You will find Dadimaa doing the preparations in the ballroom," the receptionist said sweetly. As the couple turned their back, she rolled her eyes. Dev and Naintara Khurana were not exactly well-liked by everyone, especially Naintara due to her impulsive and suspicous nature. Dev had not exactly reached the pinnacle of success either. They were just hanger-ons to Maan. And Naintara greatly resented that.

She had flown down to India from Canada on the pretext of attending her brother-in-law's marriage, but in reality, she had come to break up Maan's marriage. Her ambition in life was to see Maan grow old and weary, till he had no choice but to hand over the property to their children. But despite two years of being married, Naintara had failed to get pregnant. And with each miscarriage, her insecurity increased. She did not realise that the reason for the miscarriages was her negative thoughts.

Dev was not interested in Maan's property, as long as he got his weekly pocket money, which was still not enough though to pay off his gambling debts. Therefore he assisted Naintara in her plans, more though out of fear of her wrath than greed for the Khurana fortune.

Dadimaa was busy arranging flower decorations, telling the assistants to put up garlands of roses, on the insistence of Maan. Dadimaa was puzzled-Maan hated roses, because that's what he'd always serenaded Lianna with. But she remembered talking to Maan about the wedding plans, and Geet passing by with a bunch of roses in her hand to give to a flower-seller, whose roses had been dirtied by Maan's car and the puddles on the road. Geet had handed over the flowers to him, along with some money she had, and Maan had spent the entire disucssion staring at her, while Dadimaa blabbered about the plans.

Dil pighalne mein waqt nahin lagta! Bas thoda naram hona chaahiye.

Seeing Dev and Naintara, she hurried to them, and they respectfully touched her feet. Giving them her blessings, she said, "Maan and his fiance will be making their appearance any moment. I've already sent some helpers from the salon to dress up Geet."

The color drained out of Dev and Naintara's faces.

"What happened?" Dadimaa asked. "Oh, Geet? Yes, that's Maan's fiance. Geet Handa. For some strange reason she doesn't use her last name, but who cares, now she's going to be Geet Singh Khurana."

They simply nodded their heads, horrified into silence. That was not possible! She was supposed to have been killed by that maniac brother of hers! At least that's what her family said. "Geet hamaare liye mar chuki hain" when Naintara had gone to their house to enquire whether she had had the abortion or not.

This could not be happening. Geet was already pregnant with the second heir of the Khurana family. On top of that she was marrying Maan. God had given her all the rights to becoming the lady of the Khurana house.

"Maan definitely doesn't know about this," Naintara thought. "If he did, he would have never accepted that stupid girl. She should have just aborted the kid and lived her life normally. But she came to Delhi-and look now, she's practically usurped the fortune that was [i]my[/] right!!

"Maan is marrying Geet?" Dev thought. "Good for both of them. Perhaps Naintara will finally stop suspecting me. But if Geet tells Maan about me then? No she must have told him before only. But if that's the case bro wouldn't have invited me..what's going on?"

"I think the jet lag has got to you," Dadimaa said kindly. The worried couple nodded their heads and went up to their suite, just as a group of women brought in Geet.She was followed by a grumpy Maan looking dashing, but with a strange mix of both frustration and excitement on his face. As they sat down at the mandap, Dadi decided to call Dev and Naintara back, but decided against it. They were too tired. She would call them during the reception.

Dadimaa tied the knot of the couple and did the kanyadaan. Maan looked at Geet when the pandit called out for her parents, and for some strange reason, the sadness in her eyes did not please him at all.

As they took seven rounds around the holy fire, and as the guests, an assortment of celebrities, businessman and top-notch reporters threw flowers at them, along with Adi, Pinky and a absolutely devastated Sasha and Tasha, Geet's parents watched quietly behind a pillar as they saw their daughter marrying for the second time, and that too to a man they hoped would always love her.

Oh, he would. But not if Naintara had her way.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
reserved....yay i am first
better post it quickly

wow this is cool yaar....loved this
finally married
can't wait for more yaar

please update soon
Edited by desigurl953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
amazing update.loved it.
finally maaneet married .
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Nice, they are married.

Evil lurking close, no 😲

Waiting for the next update.

Polki
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Amazing update!! Woohoo they got married...hmm what's gonna happen next?? Can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
awsum.....

cant wait to read more....pllzlzzlzzzzz pm me!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Chapter Thirteen(This is truly the Devil's dozen for Maan...coz he gets to meet the parents! 🤣 )

As they took seven rounds around the fire, a rush of unpleasant memories came to Geet's mind. Just when she felt she would cry, she looked at the sombre look on Maan's face, she felt like laughing. Maan just peeked behind him and saw Geet smile, and then immediately make a straight face on seeing him.
For some reason he found it cute.

I know you're tired of these some reasons, but hey, who said love was simple?

After the wedding was over, they immediately went to Dadi to touch her feet. Then when Geet looked up she was shocked to see her parents standing there next to Mr. Manchanda and a beaming Pinky and Adi. Gulping down the enormous lump in her throat, she started walking towards them.

Forgetting that the knot tying her and Maan had not been loosened. (Pun intended.)

Maan looked in surprise and irritation as he was dragged towards a homely-looking couple, dressed in simple clothes. As soon as Geet came near her father, she bent to touch his feet-but he lifted her up and made it into a hug.

"What are you doing here?" she asked, tears in her eyes. "Daarji-"

"He has come to Delhi to free Brij...the matter has become very serious. The entire town has boycotted our family."

"Because of me na?" Geet asked sadly.

"Oh no beta, what you did was absolutely right. For twenty years we suffocated in that house. It feels good to be away from Daarji for once."

Geet hugged them, and Maan looked on confused. And then he realised. The couple was Geet's parents!

Oh. My. God.

Maan stuttered, "Hello, Mr and Mrs. Handa." They smiled at him.

"We cannot express our gratitude that you accepted our girl, despite all the troubles she has gone through," said Geet's mother.Maan was puzzled. Brij had been arrested? Due to Geet?

Maan felt like doing a happy jig. Then he stopped himself. It was her family-why should he care??

Hello, Maan sir, you've been married now.

"So young man, want to join me for a couple of drinks?" said Mohinder, beaming. Maan nodded his head. Why was he being so nervous? He was a simple fellow from a small town, not an important business tycoon.

Maan took him to the lounge bar where he ordered two glasses of vodka for both of them.

"So you drink," asked Mohinder. Maan was in two minds. Was there a double meaning to this?

"Yes, but not frequently," he said warily.

"What about smoking?"

"Oh no, not at all, tobacco is injurious for the lungs." Which was true-Maan had never felt the compulsion to take out a cigarette. He regarded this as a symbol of his self-control.

"Are you planning to leave Geet?" Mohinder asked quietly.

"No," Maan said firmly.

He thought twice. Wait, shouldn't be honest, and say it was a sham marriage? Then why had that firm 'no' escaped from his mouth?

Sometimes your heart speaks for you.

Mohinder took off his glasses and wiped his eyes. "You are a true angel. I knew the moment I saw you that you will take care of Geet. Babaji may shower blessings on you."

Maan was moved by the fatherly display of affection.

"I love her," he blurted out, "that's it."

Maan felt that the vodka was getting to him, or else he wouldn't make declarations of love for his secretary.

"But don't tell her that, or else she will control me my entire life," he added hastily, trying to do damage control before Mohinder ran to Geet and waxed the eloquent declarations of Maan's love.

They came back to the reception, where Geet was lying in Rano's lap, sleeping. "I will take her to our suite," he offered.

"Enjoy your suhaag raat," said Rano innocently. Maan almost regurgitated the vodka he had drunk.

The 'rentals were nice enough, but they had evidently freaked out Maan.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
reserved...yay i am first to comment

you don't know the adrenaline rush i am experiencing now....so that i can comment first..it is such an exciting thing to do....okay i know u must be thinking ki ladki sathiya gayi hai...but trust me you should try it

anyways on with my comments

kya ho gaya hai tujhe yaar?
itni jaldi jaldi update karti hai tu?
loved the new father-in-law and son-in-law iterrogation session

maza aa gaya kaise geet's papa asked maan about smoking and drinking

the last part was funny,apni suhagraat enjoy karna...lolz...can't stop laughing

tussi great ho ji,tofa kubool karo šŸ¤—
Edited by desigurl953 - 14 years ago

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