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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigurl953

reserved...yay i am first to comment

you don't know the adrenaline rush i am experiencing now....so that i can comment first..it is such an exciting thing to do....okay i know u must be thinking ki ladki sathiya gayi hai...but trust me you should try it

anyways on with my comments

kya ho gaya hai tujhe yaar?
itni jaldi jaldi update karti hai tu?
loved the new father-in-law and son-in-law iterrogation session

maza aa gaya kaise geet's papa asked maan about smoking and drinking

the last part was funny,apni suhagraat enjoy karna...lolz...can't stop laughing

tussi great ho ji,tofa kubool karo šŸ¤—



thanks!

i had a holiday today...so i decided thodi mehnat karoo. šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Awesome update!! Loved it!!
Can't wait for the next part!
Pls cont.soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter Fourteen

The Reception From Hell

After Geet's parents left, a relieved Maan carried her up to the suite reserved for them by Dadimaa. Laying her down carefully on the bed, he sat next to her and started thinking-it suited him better than speaking.

Had anyone stole his shoes?
Had any friends of his teased him?
Had his parents given the couple their aashirwaad?
Had there been any friends of Geet dancing at the sangeet?

No, it really was a sham marriage. And it worried Maan, because he had realized that he was as alone in the world as Geet was. They both had their respective families and colleagues but no one really that close.

He looked down at her and was shocked to see he had been stroking her forehead the entire while. His hands moved away just as her eyes fluttered open.

"Mama and Papaji left?" she asked, though she knew the answer. He nodded his head. They both looked forward, blushing furiously.

Suddenly there was a knock on the door. "Maan! Geet! Come outside darlings, it's time for the reception,"Dadimaa called out. They both immediately headed to the bathroom and stopped-there was only one bathroom.

Dadimaa, how could you?

"I'll wear the same clothes...you change, and wear some light jewellery, you must be tired of all this heavy kaarigari."

She nodded her head and headed inside.

She came out dressed in a resplendent red sari, with a diamond necklace adorning her neck. Maan's jaws dropped for a second then closed again.

They headed downstairs to the ballroom where the mandap had been replaced by a podium and the antique chandeliers with the flashing lights on the photographers. They stood there, giving fake smiles. Suddenly they looked down and saw they had linked their arms without realizing. In order not to startle the guests they continued to smile.

Dev and Naintara came down, Naintara already forming ideas of how Dev must have probably felt sorry for Geet, paid for her expenses in Delhi, and arranged a match for her with Maan.

She was ready to announce why the marriage could not happen when the lightbulb in her head finally switched on-this was the reception! Dev was beaming, obviously pleased by the media attention. Naintara dragged him towards Dadimaa.

"Dadimaa, I have to tell you something," she hissed.

And out came the whole story she had concocted in the comfort of her suite-how Geet tried to seduce Dev in Amritsar, passed off her baby as his, and came to Delhi to trap Maan in the same way.

Dadimaa looked at Naintara for a second.

And then in front of the entire crowd, she slapped her.

Everyone hushed up, except the photographers. They were thrilled-who would not be? Maan and Geet looked towards the source of commotion and Geet's face turned pale.

Dadimaa took the entire family, including the new bride, to a side room.

"If you don't believe me, ask her!" shouted Naintara, pointing towards Geet.

"Geet, are you pregnant?" asked Dadimaa.

Sasha nearly fainted from delight.

She looked at Maan, and then at her belly, and firmly said, "Yes."

"And is it Dev's child?" she asked softly.

"Yes," she said softly.

Maan felt like someone had just hit him on the head with a hammer.

"How could you hide this from me?" said Dadimaa angrily. "I trusted you, and you lived in my house for so much time without even telling me?"

"I didn't know he was Maan's brother!" a teary Geet said. "I thought I had got rid of him!"

"But you should have told Maan at least!" she said.

"That's it!" said Maan. "I don't want to hear any more of this."

"I should have known!" Geet said tearfully. "I should have known my past would never leave me!!"

And saying that she ran away, clutching her stomach, promising her baby that everything would be alright-though she herself did not believe it.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
yay me first

oh no..i hadn't read yet but now i have...what the hell?
yeh sab abhi hona tha...hope maan stands by her side....
Edited by desigurl953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
amazing part.
continue soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Awesome update!! Hope maan will not leave geet alone...can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Phew!!!
Now the truth is out .. what is going to happen!!
Update .. update ... plse ... plse ...
Uzma xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter Fifteen

The atmosphere in the Khurana household was tense.

Naintara was fuming because of the slap, but enjoying the satisfaction of finally having got rid of Geet.

Dev was feeling horrified. He should have personally gone and 'taken care' of Geet. Now his brother was so mad at him that he might as well as kiss freedom goodbye and settle down in some prison in Canada.

Dadimaa was worried about Maan. He had not touched his dinner and had simply wandered off somewhere, probably to some high class lounge to get drunk.

That was precisely the opposite of what Maan was actually doing.

Maan was sitting near the dargah, waiting for the sari-clad figure of Geet to appear.

Just as he had known, she came, running, her carefully done up hair loosened and blowing in the wind, tears in her eyes, her sindoor messed up, tearing her mangalsutra from her neck. And then she came to an abrupt stop when she saw Maan, catapulting her straight into his arms.

She looked up and then got up and straightened her sari,

"What are you doing here?" she asked in a strangled voice.

"Nothing," he said simply.

"What you wished happen, the marriage was broken without you and me having to do anything."

"I didn't wish for you to cry," he said.

She sat down next to him with folded hands and they both contemplated what to do next.

"Listen-" they both said in unison, then fell silent again.

"Look, what ever your sister-in-law said is not true okay? I did not seduce your brother. I just thought I would spend a happy marital life with him. But now...look, the job is very important for me. I'm eating for two now."

"Make it three," he mumbled.

"What?"

"Oh nothing," he said hastily. Then back to Maan mood. "I have no interest in your personal life. You did me a favour, I'm grateful for that. You can come to office tomorrow."

"And what about your brother and sister?"

"I'll send them back to Canada."

"You will disown your own relatives for me?"

"You're my wife now for goodness' sake! Um, what I mean is, I'm not doing it for you. I am doing it just for my peace of mind."

"What about Sasha?"

"I'll shut her up by giving her a promotion."

Her face broke out in a smile and then she started to laugh heartily. He looked at her.

"This isn't funny," he said, trying to keep a straight face.

"Where will I go now?" she asked.

"Back to the outhouse. The driver is waiting...since you have so much sympathy for people of your status, it won't be nice to keep him awake the whole night right?" he said, a hint of humor in his voice.

"Hmph!" she said, rolling her eyes.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Huh? what's going on?
Kya ho raha hai
ab yeh shaadi toot gayi
Kyun
ahi to unkind SR bhi nahi hui...i mean not that kuch hota bhi but still....damn
please fix the story yaar.....Mujhe pehle Yeh batao ki ho Kya raha hai....
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG thats so sad
How can they break their marriage?
pls continue soon

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